Slim95
Right then! Sweet and sour review it is.
biggrin In regards to the violin, it seems misproportionate to the hand and head; too large. It also seems to bend backwards a little more the farther to the right you travel; not sure whether this is a desired effect or not. On a positive note, it is wonderfully done! >.< I can't draw violins to save me life, and you did a spiffy job catching the patterns in the woodwork and general shape.
In regards to the hat, the shape seems off. The upturned edge on the rim seems too abrupt, when I think it should be a bit more gradual throughout the rim.
On a positive note, the color palette and background is fantastic!
whee Such bright, eye-catchin hues and attention to detail!
In regards to the eye, it seems too wide, like it's extending over the bridge of the nose.
On a positive note, I'd trade all my comic skills (well....if they have value.....
xd ) for your ability to draw hands.
gonk Yeah, I was trying to do super-perspective with the violin... and didn't do very well.
sweatdrop Also, I play the violin, so I should hope I know what they look like!
biggrin Hats, and feet. They are my END.
emo I didn't notice the eye as a problem, actually. Thanks for pointing that out!
Hands are easy, once you get the general shape down. Also, I cheated and ditched the pinky.
xd Thank you for you positive comments, and also your sharp critiquin' eye!
mrgreen
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