*picks up microphone* I came here to say something...and that is "Hello!" *drops mic and exits stage left*
Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2016 6:52 pm
Coheart
Most of the time, when I make my characters I have them in mind first, and then go find pictures. I don't usually know who they are or where they come from. But for this one I worked backwards, and I don't feel completely on my game to be honest. I re wrote the personalty and bio about 5 times each. I was thinking about giving it another re write, but I was feeling like I was obsessing over the details too much, and your post said "Go for it" so I was kinda like, what the hell, I'll throw it out there.
The bio is a far departure from undertale, and I think when I get to writing for him, his personalty will really come into it's own. He's a chill guy like sans, but he's more rude, reserved, and romantic. Under it he is super princely romantic too.
I gave him a sax, because I am a very musical person, and I have always wanted to play the saxophone. My parents wouldn't let me when I was a kid cause they said I was too stupid to handle all the buttons. I can kill it if you think it's too close to San's trombone.
I felt like I needed to pick megalovania for the theme song, but I think heartache is better. I don't know if that matters to you, but it's something I was really torn on.
The only things I am really attached to, is that he's a skeleton that fights with bones. If you are okay with that, I could gut it and write it again. I kinda like his bio too, since I spent a lot of time on it.
Basically, this is my first time writing a character like this, and I understand and agree with your concerns. Just let me know what you want. Like I said, I am still not completely happy with it myself.
(I don't think I can change the way his eyes work without it becoming gross)
Ugh. I'm sorry. The more time I think about it, the more stupid and gross I feel.
We can trash the whole thing. I'm sorry. I just wanted to be more involved.
*Bangs head against wall* I didn't want to let you down, captain QnQ
Hey, hey, hey, no! *waves her hands frantically*
Don't beat yourself up over it. We just take pretty high precautions when it comes to profiles. I, personally, have no idea what Undertale is like, but the picture struck me as an immediate recognition. (Since he is pretty popular. 3nodding ) But whenever we question something like that, don't ever think that we think you're taking the easy way out. Obviously, the biography was much different. But it was the picture and the personality associated with it that made me a slight bit nervous. So I had to ask a few Undertale folk what Sans was like (since he was the only one I really recognize).
But! Because of the fact that you took the time and explained it out to us, which we really appreciate, we're going to go ahead and move forward with your profile. n v n But yeah! Don't ever beat yourself up over something so little. Now if you had straight up wrote the same likes, dislikes, biography, all that, then we'd be having a different conversation.
You get my point. So don't worry, you're definitely far from my list of disliked people. *wink*
Hi, could I ask a couple of questions before I get started on my first post?
1) What is the current time of day? 2) Can my character start off with a bicycle? If not, then how much should I deduct from the starting $1000 to have one?
It is currently - "technically" - late night! n v n The day change will take place tomorrow.
And nah, you can start off with a bike if you like. 3nodding
Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2016 7:27 pm
Kirenai Yuki
That is a freaky image XD
Coheart
I like your character Cain. Then again, Sans is my second favorite character from Undertale. I say second favorite because his boss battle is painful and Temmie wins my heart more than he does XD Anyways, looking forward to meeting him with one of my characters. biggrin
I am not going to post him in until the day change, but I am not dead set on a spot to send him yet.
All my characters are stuck anyways so I gotta wait for the day change too, which was something I was going to do anyways lol Hmm...I kinda want him to meet Yang since she is more of joker than Kristen is. I guess we can figure out where they can bump into each other biggrin
Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2016 7:35 pm
Yuri_Misawa
I had Integra go to her job immediately since she's a hard worker, but since Cain is his own person, he could take his first day off to move in.
It's cold so I don't know if we want to meet on the beach or somewhere else.
I had Integra go to her job immediately since she's a hard worker, but since Cain is his own person, he could take his first day off to move in.
It's cold so I don't know if we want to meet on the beach or somewhere else.
Yang looks at cold weather and goes "Pfft!" so she can go just about anywhere and since Cain is a skeleton, cold doesn't affect him at all so it is possible for them to meet at the beach, but if there somewhere else you like to put him in, I'm cool with that...hehehe, I did a pun XD
Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2016 7:44 pm
Yuri_Misawa
Cain is a heavy smoker, but I am sure he would react in a princely manor if he noticed it bothering her. The beach is fine, you are right, he is a skeleton lol.
At some point she should meet Integra too, since her like is horse back riding and Integra's dislike is being ridden. Hilarity could insure.
Aaah I almost forgot about it too, I thought it was next week OTL I was looking forward to more interactions too.
Well, Sahar will probably worry over Integra and Tsukasa for a bit given what's going on. Then once they finish with their meal Sahar will insist on paying, since Tsukasa helped him and all.
Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2016 7:54 pm
Coheart
Yuri_Misawa
Cain is a heavy smoker, but I am sure he would react in a princely manor if he noticed it bothering her. The beach is fine, you are right, he is a skeleton lol.
At some point she should meet Integra too, since her like is horse back riding and Integra's dislike is being ridden. Hilarity could insure.
As long as Cain doesn't bring her around a cat, Yang will be fine...oh my goodness I will totally make Yang jump on Integra and have her try to horseback ride her LOL
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