| Turtle Necks or Sweater Vests? |
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| 17.5 divided by 2 |
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 Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 7:51 pm
That's not what I was getting at hehe. Do you remember the page?
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Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 7:54 pm
Oh jeez, it's way back there. I'll help look for it.
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Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 7:55 pm
Hah I know right! xD
One of my friend's wanted to read it LOL
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Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 8:15 pm
I wish a Tier 1 would show up. I wanna evolve my pokemons... razz . In the meantime, I'm doing Aqua and homework. Ugh, I hate these short-term projects.
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Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 8:23 pm
I know what you mean, I have a Sneasel I need to evolve, T^T I have to wait until nighttime to ask and guess what! It's nighttime! And where are the Tier 1s!? crying
EDIT: And I wasn't calling you an idiot either Mems.
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Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 8:42 pm
Ice_Wolf_Demon I know what you mean, I have a Sneasel I need to evolve, T^T I have to wait until nighttime to ask and guess what! It's nighttime! And where are the Tier 1s!? crying EDIT: And I wasn't calling you an idiot either Mems. I think that would be me... maybe... XD Tommy's suffering a mini-concussion... he's a-looooopyyyy wink
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Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 1:36 pm
Wow, Tommy, I must say, I'm impressed with your appeal. It was dynamic but catastrophic at the same time. Most of the time I say to really look at the pokemon to determine what kind of show it should put on.
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Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 5:46 pm
Ice_Wolf_Demon Wow, Tommy, I must say, I'm impressed with your appeal. It was dynamic but catastrophic at the same time. Most of the time I say to really look at the pokemon to determine what kind of show it should put on. Thanks, Arreku! I was hoping for a good rating for this. Howeveer... -_-; that's the only one I could think of... XD
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Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 9:15 pm
Oh, it got a good rating, and for a first appeal it's pretty good. But don't just concentrate on the pokemon, set the mood and the scene. Tell what's going on around the pokemon as well. Tell your reader how to feel without the emotion in your wording. If that makes any sense.
I'm sorry, I shouldn't tell you how to direct your character. ><
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Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 10:24 pm
Ice_Wolf_Demon Oh, it got a good rating, and for a first appeal it's pretty good. But don't just concentrate on the pokemon, set the mood and the scene. Tell what's going on around the pokemon as well. Tell your reader how to feel without the emotion in your wording. If that makes any sense. I'm sorry, I shouldn't tell you how to direct your character. >< -_-; I'm not to good at the mood and scene setting parts... 1) "Tell your reader how to feel without the emotion in your wording." What does that mean?? XD you're right to say 'if that makes any sense'. 2) I don't get how your telling me how to direct my chara in anyways... smile
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Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 8:32 am
~Sanctus Espiritus... Aaaaaaaaaaaand I'm here.
Been caught up in school and MH3 >3<... Redeem us from our solemn hour~
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Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 2:58 pm
1) An example would be setting a sad scene without actually saying things like sad and depress(ed/ing).
2) Well, I'm telling you how to do your appeal. Heh I have no right in telling other people to do something.
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Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 7:03 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 7:23 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 7:28 pm
(:
How are you today Arreku?
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