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 Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 7:16 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 4:33 am
Brera Stern Um, I haven't been accepted to any village yet, I'm still kinda looking for one. Since I'm not part of a village, the character name I'm using is only one off the top of my head. Quote: Hikaru Ukitake had never exactly been one for school or studying, often taking his chances with sheer luck and raw talent. But recently there was rumor of a teacher who'd decided that they were going to try and bring the young ninja in. It was funny, there had been plenty of others that had attempted to bring him in, although the results had been the same every time, they'd catch him and he'd play along and then as soon as he was out of their sight he'd escape using either the subsitiution jutsu or the clone jutsu. "So, you're Hikari Ukitake hunh? You'll be coming with me." said a female voice from behind Hiraku. The young boy turned and swept his dark blonde hair out of his face. "Did I do something wrong? Or are you that new teacher everybody's been talking about? If so then I guess we should play." he said standing up on the tree branch and smiling. The teacher didn't seem like she was in the mood to play, which suited Hikaru just fine because the more serious they were the funnier it would be when he finally escaped.
Pass heart heart
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 7:39 am
Mizrahi Shinrah
Academy Student
[level goes here]
Shinrah awakens to the sun beaming down on his forehead. The heat causes him to shift so that it focused on another part of his head. He swung his legs over the side of the bed and sat up. As he yawned and scratched his side he stood up and began to slowly walk towards where his everyday uniform was.
He looked at it without picking it up. It needed to be washed from what he could tell but he wasn't in the mood. He grabbed the pants and put them on then did the same with the shirt. As he slipped on his shoes he could hear someone coming up the steps. He shifted his head to the doorway to make sure that he would see the person which would most likely be his older brother Shiori. He grabs his pillow and waits for the door to open. As soon as the door knob turns and the door is about to open Shinra throws the pillow.
'Poof' is the sound it makes as it strike the person in the face. As the pillow falls Shinrah frozed with a frightened look on his face. Of all people he could hit he just had to hit his mother. "SHIIIINNNRRAAAHHH!!" she roared. Without a second though he jumped out of the window. His mom runs to the window just as he runs off. "Your so in trouble when you get home," he tells him as he waves to here with a smile. She slams the shutters and then leaves the room with her arms crossed and mumbling all of the stuff she wanted to do to him.
Shinrah, having escaped his mother's wrath, makes his way to the academy. The one place where he felt most comfortable. He would learn his ninja skills and be gone from the village hopefully for a week or two. Why? Cause he didn't like being at home and his brother always leaving him to deal with their mother. She was 'evil' to Shinrah. What mother makes her son do all of his chores and then beats them if they don't finish? He tried to do all of them but there were so many. Washing dishes, taking out the trash, cleaning up after himself, watering the plants, and putting the toilet seat down when he finish peeing. He beat him more when he didn't do the last one. For some reason she did not like the prospect of falling into cold toilet water.
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Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 3:44 pm
The clan elders had told him that attempting to learn restricted jutsu was not only a felony to the village, but a act punishable by death as long as he carried his clan name.Even so he had these techniques at his reach with no obstacles ;he could almost feel their power radiating from the tarnished old scroll.
He looked at it with eyes seduced by the possibilities of what could be done with this type of power.With his mind filled with sinful thoughts he grasped the scroll .Lifting it with utter pride as he lifted it he could feel his ties with his clan slipping away into oblivion.
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Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 5:40 pm
Mentsker The clan elders had told him that attempting to learn restricted jutsu was not only a felony to the village, but a act punishable by death as long as he carried his clan name.Even so he had these techniques at his reach with no obstacles ;he could almost feel their power radiating from the tarnished old scroll.
He looked at it with eyes seduced by the possibilities of what could be done with this type of power.With his mind filled with sinful thoughts he grasped the scroll .Lifting it with utter pride as he lifted it he could feel his ties with his clan slipping away into oblivion. A well-earned pass. I enjoyed your rp style. heart
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Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 6:37 pm
Hademaru Mizrahi Shinrah
Academy Student
[level goes here]
Shinrah awakens to the sun beaming down on his forehead. The heat causes him to shift so that it focused on another part of his head. He swung his legs over the side of the bed and sat up. As he yawned and scratched his side he stood up and began to slowly walk towards where his everyday uniform was.
He looked at it without picking it up. It needed to be washed from what he could tell but he wasn't in the mood. He grabbed the pants and put them on then did the same with the shirt. As he slipped on his shoes he could hear someone coming up the steps. He shifted his head to the doorway to make sure that he would see the person which would most likely be his older brother Shiori. He grabs his pillow and waits for the door to open. As soon as the door knob turns and the door is about to open Shinra throws the pillow.
'Poof' is the sound it makes as it strike the person in the face. As the pillow falls Shinrah frozed with a frightened look on his face. Of all people he could hit he just had to hit his mother. "SHIIIINNNRRAAAHHH!!" she roared. Without a second though he jumped out of the window. His mom runs to the window just as he runs off. "Your so in trouble when you get home," he tells him as he waves to here with a smile. She slams the shutters and then leaves the room with her arms crossed and mumbling all of the stuff she wanted to do to him.
Shinrah, having escaped his mother's wrath, makes his way to the academy. The one place where he felt most comfortable. He would learn his ninja skills and be gone from the village hopefully for a week or two. Why? Cause he didn't like being at home and his brother always leaving him to deal with their mother. She was 'evil' to Shinrah. What mother makes her son do all of his chores and then beats them if they don't finish? He tried to do all of them but there were so many. Washing dishes, taking out the trash, cleaning up after himself, watering the plants, and putting the toilet seat down when he finish peeing. He beat him more when he didn't do the last one. For some reason she did not like the prospect of falling into cold toilet water. Pass. Your placed in admirable effort to length and description. 4laugh
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Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 8:52 pm
Kaito raced through the trees, dodging the incoming shuriken from the rival nin. He didn't know why they had targeted him or who sent them, all he knew was that he had to survive. Kaito grabbed on to the tree branch ahead of him and spun forward around it. He flipped off of the branch and drew his own shuriken. "Now it's my turn to retaliate!!", he thought as he threw 6 shuriken. 3 of them hit their intended targets while two of the others were deflected. Just as the last shuriken was close to hitting it's target Kaito's finger twitched, causing the wire around the shuriken to glint in the sunlight. With a swift yank he pulled in the two deflected kunai and ensnared the 3 nin. Quickly making hand seals he bit down on the wire and screamed, "Raiton: Dai raiden(Lightning Element: Great Lightning)!!" Suddenly from his mouth rushed thousands of volts of electricity that quickly zipped down the wire and hit the nin, causing them to collapse. He dropped the wire, adjusted himself and turned around, leaping away to flee the scene.
He stopped at at a nearby tree, catching his breath and checking his wounds. "Damn it!!", he said as he collapsed onto the tree. He'd been hit by one of the shuriken unknowingly and it had hit him deep. He reached back into his bag, pulling out a kunai. He placed the handle of the kunai in his mouth biting down as he made handsealls and placed his palm, now coursing with lightning element chakra, onto the open cut. He held onto it, cauterizing the wound and biting the kunai as the pain increased. He knew what to expect from this, having done it a few times on missions when he didn't have enough chakra to heal, but no matter what the pain was always the same. The pain was always the same...always to real. This was no child's game, he knew this yet he always tried to play off his mission as nothing more than child's play. This time, he was wrong, more than ever before. He hitched up his pouch as he pulled from it his ANBU mask.
He placed the mask on his face, knowing all to well that things were about to get intense. He knew that whenever he wore this mask someone had to die. No matter what he was an ANBU and it was his job. "Three more days...", he said as he stood up, placing his right palm on the tree as he looked ahead of himself, the moonlight sky looming over him as it shone through the branches of the tree he stood on. He leaped from the tree, heading in the direction he was going all the while thinking, "I've got three days to deliver this message to the Kage, if I don't get there...all is lost for the village." Kaito began to sprint as he disappeared from view into the brush.
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Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 2:47 pm
kisuke0sama Kaito raced through the trees, dodging the incoming shuriken from the rival nin. He didn't know why they had targeted him or who sent them, all he knew was that he had to survive. Kaito grabbed on to the tree branch ahead of him and spun forward around it. He flipped off of the branch and drew his own shuriken. "Now it's my turn to retaliate!!", he thought as he threw 6 shuriken. 3 of them hit their intended targets while two of the others were deflected. Just as the last shuriken was close to hitting it's target Kaito's finger twitched, causing the wire around the shuriken to glint in the sunlight. With a swift yank he pulled in the two deflected kunai and ensnared the 3 nin. Quickly making hand seals he bit down on the wire and screamed, "Raiton: Dai raiden(Lightning Element: Great Lightning)!!" Suddenly from his mouth rushed thousands of volts of electricity that quickly zipped down the wire and hit the nin, causing them to collapse. He dropped the wire, adjusted himself and turned around, leaping away to flee the scene. He stopped at at a nearby tree, catching his breath and checking his wounds. "Damn it!!", he said as he collapsed onto the tree. He'd been hit by one of the shuriken unknowingly and it had hit him deep. He reached back into his bag, pulling out a kunai. He placed the handle of the kunai in his mouth biting down as he made handsealls and placed his palm, now coursing with lightning element chakra, onto the open cut. He held onto it, cauterizing the wound and biting the kunai as the pain increased. He knew what to expect from this, having done it a few times on missions when he didn't have enough chakra to heal, but no matter what the pain was always the same. The pain was always the same...always to real. This was no child's game, he knew this yet he always tried to play off his mission as nothing more than child's play. This time, he was wrong, more than ever before. He hitched up his pouch as he pulled from it his ANBU mask. He placed the mask on his face, knowing all to well that things were about to get intense. He knew that whenever he wore this mask someone had to die. No matter what he was an ANBU and it was his job. "Three more days...", he said as he stood up, placing his right palm on the tree as he looked ahead of himself, the moonlight sky looming over him as it shone through the branches of the tree he stood on. He leaped from the tree, heading in the direction he was going all the while thinking, "I've got three days to deliver this message to the Kage, if I don't get there...all is lost for the village." Kaito began to sprint as he disappeared from view into the brush. Great job. Pass. Though a note on the battle system... Just keep in mind in the actual rp, keep the results of your attacks somewhat open-ended. Because you might not definitely hit your enemy. So in one post, you attack. Based on your roll/stats, the opponent will supply a responding post, noting whether he/she was hit and their retaliation. And in your next post, you would then briefly outline the result of your previous attack before continuing the battle (defending from the counter-attack, attacking, or doing skill checks and etc.). You don't have to keep strictly to this format, there are variations, but for the most part this is how battles advance.
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Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 2:56 pm
Thanks, yeah i've been in this guild before. I just wanted to make my story flashy ^_^''
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Posted: Mon Nov 24, 2008 3:00 pm
Student Name: Juni Sirah
Village: Konahagakure
Juni ran through the forest as quick as he could. He was worried. He thought "What if someone gets hurt by the sound ninja." He quickly ran through the village gates and jumped onto the roof of a villagers house. He jumped from rooftop to rooftop so he could get to the hokages mansion. Then he heard an explosion. " Darn I'm too late." He continued running into the hokages mansion until he got to the door of his office. " Hokage Sama the sound village are raidng!" But then to Juni's suprise he saw Orochimaru sitting in the hokages chair.
Hope thats good.......
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Posted: Mon Nov 24, 2008 4:25 pm
Well i haven't signed up for a village yet but here's my sample:
Kenji was silently walking through the woods when a look of concern fell on his face. He stared at the pink and orange sky as black smoke clouds inched their way to space. Kenji became worried and started to run.
He ran faster and faster, transferring more and more chakra to his feet. The small branches of trees slapped his face. He finally broke the tree line to find a disturbing sight. His house was on fire and it was surrounded by raiders. His heart felt heavy and sank in his chest, and a cold shiver ran down his spine like the tears on his face. He cried in pain knowing that his family was inside.
i hope this is sufficient, thank you.
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 11:49 am
Did I pass...................................... eek
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 4:46 am
JuniBlue Student Name: Juni Sirah Village: Konahagakure Juni ran through the forest as quick as he could. He was worried. He thought "What if someone gets hurt by the sound ninja." He quickly ran through the village gates and jumped onto the roof of a villagers house. He jumped from rooftop to rooftop so he could get to the hokages mansion. Then he heard an explosion. " Darn I'm too late." He continued running into the hokages mansion until he got to the door of his office. " Hokage Sama the sound village are raidng!" But then to Juni's suprise he saw Orochimaru sitting in the hokages chair. Hope thats good.......
Ah, please don't use too many 'he's... sorry, it gets kind of annoying after a while. Hmmm usually in RP you RP staying in one place and you don't move around a lot (only when travelling and even then the pace would be slower than your sample). Could you do another one say of training? Academy training?
But I really like the end, it's so dramatic eek
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Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 5:41 am
polaking Well i haven't signed up for a village yet but here's my sample: Kenji was silently walking through the woods when a look of concern fell on his face. He stared at the pink and orange sky as black smoke clouds inched their way to space. Kenji became worried and started to run. He ran faster and faster, transferring more and more chakra to his feet. The small branches of trees slapped his face. He finally broke the tree line to find a disturbing sight. His house was on fire and it was surrounded by raiders. His heart felt heavy and sank in his chest, and a cold shiver ran down his spine like the tears on his face. He cried in pain knowing that his family was inside. i hope this is sufficient, thank you. Actually I really like this... and since you put in description (tree branches and whatever) I will pass you! <3
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 1:04 pm
i havn't chosen a villiage yet but here i go:
Haseo was getting ready to go outside on the nice sunny day when he heard people yelling. He ran quickly to his window and saw everybody running around outside.Haseo yelled for his mom to come up stairs but she didn't answer. He walked down the nervously down the stairs in his dark quite house to find his mom. When he got down the dark stairs he went into the kitchen to see if she was there but she wasn't.
Haseo was then scared because he couldn't find his mom. Haseo then looked out the door to see what was going on. Haseo then saw that everybody was laughing because someone was just scaring them. Haseo was then getting scared because he still couldn't find his mom. Haseo then saw that there was a closet door open he went to check if anything was in there when his mom popped out and scared him.
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