So the character as she is below is okay and I can start the rping with people?
Username: xChisaki Full Name:Kaylin Crest Code Name:Aine Secondary Code name:Pyherra Age:Twenty One Race:Fire Elemental / Human Gender:Female Orientation:Heterosexual Personality:Kaylin has always been compared to a mother like figure, taking care of people and helping them throughout tough times. Although she can be seen as a mother like figure, it doesn't mean she is. She's extremely focused and will act diligently in a group or independently. Loyal to the core, Kaylin values morals and trust which makes it so easy for her to complete her tasks given the reward be worth its effort.
Although Kaylin has many decent traits, she can be hard pressed to do things if she isn't motivated or if it seems like it's "too much effort". She'll find the easiest way to do something with the least effort and somehow do it cleanly without leaving a hint of what she had done to achieve it.
Kaylin's most prominent trait would be her ability to lie without even an ounce of doubt or hesitation showing on her face. Skilled in the art of deception she's what you'd love to have but never keep. Gang:Hellfire Syndicate Rank:Covert Agent Bio:- Abilities: Kaylin's flames are the color of what people would call Jolly Red Heat Kiss - The user possesses a kiss that can be used to burn others on contact. This kiss can be used to harm others by burning them. Leaving up 3rd degree burns. Flame Hands - The user is able to generate flames from her hands. The flames are hot enough to burn things but its highly limited. the flames are only able to stay on her hands or on things she throws. Weapon of Choice:Throwing knives attached to a thin wire that's able to pull the knives back to her. Personal Quote(s): "Or we could just, not do that and just relax? Don't you agree?" "That's just... Too much effort... I dun wanna!" "Oh I'm so sorry, I didn't mean too!" "You think you have the right to judge me based on what? I do what I have to do. Just. To. Survive. Don't be so pretentious." Theme Songs: I See Fire - Ed Sheeran | General || Do I Wanna Know - Artic Monkeys | During Conflict / Confrontation
In my opinion she looks good, all she needs is a bio. I would give you the go-ahead but I'll wait for the others to get on and check her out c; I might even be able to rp with you soon ᕕ ( ᐛ ) ᕗ
The Bio will probably take me a while so i'll probably add onto her later if that okay but Yassss I want to rp and have fun times with everyone >.<
Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2016 12:51 pm
xChisaki
xScroomsaw
xChisaki
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So the character as she is below is okay and I can start the rping with people?
Username: xChisaki Full Name:Kaylin Crest Code Name:Aine Secondary Code name:Pyherra Age:Twenty One Race:Fire Elemental / Human Gender:Female Orientation:Heterosexual Personality:Kaylin has always been compared to a mother like figure, taking care of people and helping them throughout tough times. Although she can be seen as a mother like figure, it doesn't mean she is. She's extremely focused and will act diligently in a group or independently. Loyal to the core, Kaylin values morals and trust which makes it so easy for her to complete her tasks given the reward be worth its effort.
Although Kaylin has many decent traits, she can be hard pressed to do things if she isn't motivated or if it seems like it's "too much effort". She'll find the easiest way to do something with the least effort and somehow do it cleanly without leaving a hint of what she had done to achieve it.
Kaylin's most prominent trait would be her ability to lie without even an ounce of doubt or hesitation showing on her face. Skilled in the art of deception she's what you'd love to have but never keep. Gang:Hellfire Syndicate Rank:Covert Agent Bio:- Abilities: Kaylin's flames are the color of what people would call Jolly Red Heat Kiss - The user possesses a kiss that can be used to burn others on contact. This kiss can be used to harm others by burning them. Leaving up 3rd degree burns. Flame Hands - The user is able to generate flames from her hands. The flames are hot enough to burn things but its highly limited. the flames are only able to stay on her hands or on things she throws. Weapon of Choice:Throwing knives attached to a thin wire that's able to pull the knives back to her. Personal Quote(s): "Or we could just, not do that and just relax? Don't you agree?" "That's just... Too much effort... I dun wanna!" "Oh I'm so sorry, I didn't mean too!" "You think you have the right to judge me based on what? I do what I have to do. Just. To. Survive. Don't be so pretentious." Theme Songs: I See Fire - Ed Sheeran | General || Do I Wanna Know - Artic Monkeys | During Conflict / Confrontation
In my opinion she looks good, all she needs is a bio. I would give you the go-ahead but I'll wait for the others to get on and check her out c; I might even be able to rp with you soon ᕕ ( ᐛ ) ᕗ
The Bio will probably take me a while so i'll probably add onto her later if that okay but Yassss I want to rp and have fun times with everyone >.<
No problem, bios usually take us a long time to, and even then I usually go back to add stuff later if I think of something juicy.
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Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2016 3:57 pm
xChisaki
xScroomsaw
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So the character as she is below is okay and I can start the rping with people?
Username: xChisaki Full Name:Kaylin Crest Code Name:Aine Secondary Code name:Pyherra Age:Twenty One Race:Fire Elemental / Human Gender:Female Orientation:Heterosexual Personality:Kaylin has always been compared to a mother like figure, taking care of people and helping them throughout tough times. Although she can be seen as a mother like figure, it doesn't mean she is. She's extremely focused and will act diligently in a group or independently. Loyal to the core, Kaylin values morals and trust which makes it so easy for her to complete her tasks given the reward be worth its effort.
Although Kaylin has many decent traits, she can be hard pressed to do things if she isn't motivated or if it seems like it's "too much effort". She'll find the easiest way to do something with the least effort and somehow do it cleanly without leaving a hint of what she had done to achieve it.
Kaylin's most prominent trait would be her ability to lie without even an ounce of doubt or hesitation showing on her face. Skilled in the art of deception she's what you'd love to have but never keep. Gang:Hellfire Syndicate Rank:Covert Agent Bio:- Abilities: Kaylin's flames are the color of what people would call Jolly Red Heat Kiss - The user possesses a kiss that can be used to burn others on contact. This kiss can be used to harm others by burning them. Leaving up 3rd degree burns. Flame Hands - The user is able to generate flames from her hands. The flames are hot enough to burn things but its highly limited. the flames are only able to stay on her hands or on things she throws. Weapon of Choice:Throwing knives attached to a thin wire that's able to pull the knives back to her. Personal Quote(s): "Or we could just, not do that and just relax? Don't you agree?" "That's just... Too much effort... I dun wanna!" "Oh I'm so sorry, I didn't mean too!" "You think you have the right to judge me based on what? I do what I have to do. Just. To. Survive. Don't be so pretentious." Theme Songs: I See Fire - Ed Sheeran | General || Do I Wanna Know - Artic Monkeys | During Conflict / Confrontation
In my opinion she looks good, all she needs is a bio. I would give you the go-ahead but I'll wait for the others to get on and check her out c; I might even be able to rp with you soon ᕕ ( ᐛ ) ᕗ
The Bio will probably take me a while so i'll probably add onto her later if that okay but Yassss I want to rp and have fun times with everyone >.<
It looks good to me! And take your time on the bio hun, mine always take a long time to write as well. lol As long as eventually there will be one, everything is fine. ^^
Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2016 4:01 pm
xChisaki
Divine Entropy
So the character as she is below is okay and I can start the rping with people?
Username: xChisaki Full Name:Kaylin Crest Code Name:Aine Secondary Code name:Pyherra Age:Twenty One Race:Fire Elemental / Human Gender:Female Orientation:Heterosexual Personality:Kaylin has always been compared to a mother like figure, taking care of people and helping them throughout tough times. Although she can be seen as a mother like figure, it doesn't mean she is. She's extremely focused and will act diligently in a group or independently. Loyal to the core, Kaylin values morals and trust which makes it so easy for her to complete her tasks given the reward be worth its effort.
Although Kaylin has many decent traits, she can be hard pressed to do things if she isn't motivated or if it seems like it's "too much effort". She'll find the easiest way to do something with the least effort and somehow do it cleanly without leaving a hint of what she had done to achieve it.
Kaylin's most prominent trait would be her ability to lie without even an ounce of doubt or hesitation showing on her face. Skilled in the art of deception she's what you'd love to have but never keep. Gang:Hellfire Syndicate Rank:Covert Agent Bio:- Abilities: Kaylin's flames are the color of what people would call Jolly Red Heat Kiss - The user possesses a kiss that can be used to burn others on contact. This kiss can be used to harm others by burning them. Leaving up 3rd degree burns. Flame Hands - The user is able to generate flames from her hands. The flames are hot enough to burn things but its highly limited. the flames are only able to stay on her hands or on things she throws. Weapon of Choice:Throwing knives attached to a thin wire that's able to pull the knives back to her. Personal Quote(s): "Or we could just, not do that and just relax? Don't you agree?" "That's just... Too much effort... I dun wanna!" "Oh I'm so sorry, I didn't mean too!" "You think you have the right to judge me based on what? I do what I have to do. Just. To. Survive. Don't be so pretentious." Theme Songs: I See Fire - Ed Sheeran | General || Do I Wanna Know - Artic Monkeys | During Conflict / Confrontation
Everything is looking good! I understand bios take a bit and some time, but if you could put a very brief idea on what you want to do with her bio that would be awesome! Kind of like an outline and nothing fancy ^^ That way there is something still there until the rest is put up.
So go ahead and put this in your profile forum with that and i'll pm you a run down on what you missed and some ideas on how to join in because hellfire is actually in a middle of a meeting and some other stuff happened before hand that is needed to know ^^
You dont have to change it, but I noticed her code name still has resemblance to her real name which is probably still not a good idea for a spy like position. If anything move the secondary codename to her actual code name and under secondary just put -flexible- because it probably wont ever be the same one from a previous mission ^^;;
Calmly awaiting PumPkinPiro1994 to either approve or disapprove of the backstory involving Elaine before I post it here. Don't worry, I kept it simple and not overly dramatic or unfitting.
Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2016 5:58 pm
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Calmly awaiting PumPkinPiro1994 to either approve or disapprove of the backstory involving Elaine before I post it here. Don't worry, I kept it simple and not overly dramatic or unfitting.
You may want to quote them or they may not realize you are trying to get their attention. Just to let you know lol
I need your permission to use Elaine Argall in my character bio. Just that they both worked at Angela Merici Community Center together.
Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2016 6:20 pm
xChisaki
Oh by the way to you have any other pictures that you might want to use for Kaylin so I can put it on the Hellfire page? Or do you just want to use the same one on her profile ^^?
Oh by the way to you have any other pictures that you might want to use for Kaylin so I can put it on the Hellfire page? Or do you just want to use the same one on her profile ^^?
I honestly wish I could find more pictures that made me squee 3nodding as much as her profile picture did but I can't so please, use her profile picture haha sweatdrop
Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2016 6:25 pm
xChisaki
Divine Entropy
xChisaki
Oh by the way to you have any other pictures that you might want to use for Kaylin so I can put it on the Hellfire page? Or do you just want to use the same one on her profile ^^?
I honestly wish I could find more pictures that made me squee 3nodding as much as her profile picture did but I can't so please, use her profile picture haha sweatdrop
Lol thats fine, I wanted to ask just in case ^^
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Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2016 7:19 pm
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What do you guys think?
Bio: Akito started off life as an orphan, living on the streets. Not even he knows if his real parents are alive or dead. He began to make a living for himself running unpleasant jobs that most people would be unwilling to take. He would scrub and clean buildings and take care of the sick and elderly. He never complained and was grateful for the food and/or money his employers gave him to do this work. He was willing to do whatever kept him fed and sheltered.
Odd jobs:(in order)
Merchant (ages 6-10) In order to keep himself fed, Akito would craft ornaments from twine and bottle caps. He would sell these ornaments to wandering travelers who took pity on him. During this time, Akito learned Mindlink from a wandering traveler. The traveler believed that the young boy could use such a skill later in his life.
Sanitation worker (ages 10-16) Akito worked for minimum wage cleaning up garbage around the streets of Hinas. It was long and tedious work most days, but it put bread on the table.
Saint Lilithiu Nursing Home (ages 16-20) First employed as a janitor, Akito moved onto the Saint Lilithiu Nursing Home for the better pay and more desirable work. The primary caretaker of the place, Rosaline Sabriyya, cared for Akito. She herself had been homeless from the age of 14, and felt sympathy for his situation. She made sure he was educated, fed, and sheltered. Akito worked extra hard to show his gratitude for Sabriyya's kindness. His efforts did not go unnoticed, and he was soon granted the job of caring for the elders. He wasn't well educated in the medical field, but he could clean bed pans and give sponge baths. The nursing home shut down when Akito was newly 20, and Rosaline recommended Akito apply for a job at Angela Merici Community Center.
Angela Merici Community Center (ages 20-24) Akito worked under Elaine Argall as an intern. Here, he learned the power of healing.
Now: Akito has since quit his job at Angela Merici Community Center, in hopes of finding a better life for himself. He hopes to find a life with purpose and meaning.
Everything looks good in my opinion, just curious as to why your character quit his job at the clinic? Two of the others think it's pretty good so you can make your own topic in the profiles forum and post it!
Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2016 7:19 pm
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So, how does this look? (full profile)
Username: Death and Cookies
Full Name: Akito Daitaro
Age: 24
Race: Half human, half demon
Gender: Male
Orientation: Demisexual
Personality: Akito is professional and calm most days. He's witty, hardworking, and ambitious. He's always optimistic that his life will get better, and recognizes that it gets better bit by bit each day. He believes that friendship is a partnership; you give him what he wants, and he'll give you what you want. The friendship dies when one person stops giving. He won't cause trouble and does his best to avoid it whenever possible.
Gain his trust, and he will act more kind and gentle.
City: Hinas
Bio: Akito started off life as an orphan, living on the streets. Not even he knows if his real parents are alive or dead. He began to make a living for himself running unpleasant jobs that most people would be unwilling to take. He would scrub and clean buildings and take care of the sick and elderly. He never complained and was grateful for the food and/or money his employers gave him to do this work. He was willing to do whatever kept him fed and sheltered.
Odd jobs:(in order)
Merchant (ages 6-10) In order to keep himself fed, Akito would craft ornaments from twine and bottle caps. He would sell these ornaments to wandering travelers who took pity on him. During this time, Akito learned Mindlink from a wandering traveler. The traveler believed that the young boy could use such a skill later in his life.
Sanitation worker (ages 10-16) Akito worked for minimum wage cleaning up garbage around the streets of Hinas. It was long and tedious work most days, but it put bread on the table.
Saint Lilithiu Nursing Home (ages 16-20) First employed as a janitor, Akito moved onto the Saint Lilithiu Nursing Home for the better pay and more desirable work. The primary caretaker of the place, Rosaline Sabriyya, cared for Akito. She herself had been homeless from the age of 14, and felt sympathy for his situation. She made sure he was educated, fed, and sheltered. Akito worked extra hard to show his gratitude for Sabriyya's kindness. His efforts did not go unnoticed, and he was soon granted the job of caring for the elders. He wasn't well educated in the medical field, but he could clean bed pans and give sponge baths. The nursing home shut down when Akito was newly 20, and Rosaline recommended Akito apply for a job at Angela Merici Community Center.
Angela Merici Community Center (ages 20-24) Akito worked under Elaine Argall as an intern. Here, he learned the power of healing.
Now: Akito has since quit his job at Angela Merici Community Center, in hopes of finding a better life for himself. He hopes to find a life with purpose and meaning.
Abilities: All abilities are used through lip-skin contact or "kisses".
(*)Mindlink: He is able to link his mind with another persons in order to swiftly communicate a large amount of complex information near instantaneously. He can choose what the person learns, and the information has to be an amount that could normally be communicated within 10 minutes. The information comes in a series of visual images and emotional senses. Please note that this ability does not allow him to read another persons mind, it only allows him to share information both visual and emotionally. Mindlink requires lip-lip contact instead of just lip-skin. (*)Healing: He can heal minor wounds and illnesses instantaneously, and larger non-fatal wound in a day. Major diseases (like plagues), fatal poisons, and grave wounds remain unaffected. Healing will not prevent scars nor can it heal them. Illnesses and poisons, even if contagious, will not pass to Akito during healing process. Requires lip-skin contact to be effective.
Personal Quote(s): "Friendship doesn't exist to me. I only believe in partnerships. You give me what I want, and I'll give back." "I don't take kindly to liars and traitors. The world is better off without them, and I don't think anyone would mind if one of them just happened to disappear." "I don't know everything, but I certainly know more than you do." "The world is cruel and cold, but not all of it. If everything was cruel and cold, there wouldn't be any world left for us to stand in. If you want to destroy the world, destroy that last light."
Notes:
He likes earl grey tea He reads to calm down He is not shy about using his abilities, even though they require for him to kiss the target. He's gotten used to it. He's not stiff. He has a sense of humor. He's afraid of being trapped in a large crowd. Think tightly-packed concert crowd with people constantly elbowing each other in the side, not busy restaurant. He loves chilly weather and rain. Partners can be gained through more than just money. So long as you provide him with something useful, he'll give you something in return. He's not very physically strong, and provided he doesn't outwit you he can be easily overpowered.
Appearance: Hair: Dark brown-near black Eyes: Brown Height: 6"2 Weight: 142 lbs.