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 Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2011 3:15 am
Yay. ;D Thank you. <3 heart
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2011 4:41 pm
Rpc Name:Kaji Shunshi
Village:Leaf
Rank:Jounin
Bloodline or Clan applied for:Iron Sand
What you know about the clan/bl:Iron Sand was developed by the Third Kazekage in order to learn more about sand manipulation. I would only be allowed Earth and Lightning and my sand is weak against fire. I would have the ability to manipulate small metal objects, such as kunai and turn them into metal dust for my usage. Unless carrying around a large amount of Iron Sand, Iron Dust must be sent down into the Earth and given time to process in order for it to become usable.
Rp Sample:
Kaji was tending to his melon farm on the outskrits of the Leaf Village, sweat gleaming on his brow from a hard day's work. "Oh man, what a productive day!" Kaji set down, taking a drink of crisp, cool water. It was day's like this Kaji truly enjoyed, however his peaceful moment was about you be ruined. Three men, all wearing cloaks approached him, "Are you Kaji, the 'Deadly Flash' of Leaf?" One of the cloaked men asked Kanji in a menacing tone. Kaji sighed, as he wiped his forehead," That's right! The one and only! What can I do for you lovely fellows!" Kaji stood up and gave them all a grin. The man in the front stepped forward and planted a kunai against Kanji's neck, "We are here to eliminate you...."
Kaji chuckled slightly as he placed his hand on the kunai, it deteriorated into iron dust, the man stepped back astounded, "So it's true what they say about you....." Kaji took the iron dust in his hand and added it to a pouch. "That's right...." Kaji took the pouch and poured out its content, iron dust. With a slam of his hand onto the ground, the iron dust was sucked into the earth. "Well...it'll take a few moments for the dust to process...if you want to run..I recommend you do it now." Kaji stated calmly as he drew his two katana's and dropped into a defensive position. "We aren't afraid of you!!!" The lead man stated as they all drew katana's and charged at Kaji. Kaji reacted quickly, his years of training showing as he easily parried the first strike with his main hand katana before side stepping the next one and finally blocking the third. He turned to face them all again, "Now now, you are going to have to do better than that if you even want to touch me!" he chuckled. Angered, the three attack once again, this time Kaji was not merciful. As the first strike was descending upon him, he vanished and appeared behind the third man. Before he could even react, Kaji slashed him with his katana, resulting in man being severed neatly in half.
The other two turned around, a look of pure horror on their faces. "Well...they don't call me Deadly Flash for nothing...." Kaji laughed as he sheathed his katanas. "Well now.....looks like my sand is done..." Iron sand began to gather and flux around Kaji. "And with this....your time in up..." Kaji's tone was deathly serious as he glared at the two, no longer the carefree man he was moments before. The two charged him, hoping to kill him before he had a chance to do anything but too late.
"Iron Sand, World Method!" Kaji shouted as he slammed his hands together. The Iron Sand fluxed around Kaji and then formed into lattices that then rushed towards the two, spike forming and soaring forth from the main lattices. Both tried to dodge, one was successful however the other was not so lucky...the spikes from the lattices pierced the man multiple times, leaving him behind as a bloody corpse. The lattices dissolved as the Iron Sand now fluxed around Kaji, it now reeked of the stench of blood...of Iron...
"Still not giving up...." Kaji chuckled as the sand dispersed from around him, and began to take form next to him. A clone emerged , two identical swords in it's hands. "I think I'll toy with you for abit..." the clone laughed as it charged at the only remaining foe, attacking him in a style similar to Kaji's only at a much slower rate. Kaji just laughed as he watched the poor man struggle against his clone. "Well then, time to end this...." he popped his fingers as the sand fluxed around him once again, two large javelin shaped objected formed beside him,"Iron Sand, Joint Attack!!" Kaji bellowed as the objects flews towards the opponent and his clone at high speed. His foe was so engaged with the clone, however he managed to react and jumped out of the way. Kaji was waiting for him this time though, he had formed small, bullets at the tips of his fingers and shot them out his foe, they all pierced him as he let out a howl of pain, but continued to stand none the less.
"My my, aren't we..."the clone started but dissipated before it could finish, Kaji picking up where it left off, "A feisty one..." Kaji jumped into the air, the Iron sand coming behind him, "Sorry kid, wish I didn't have to end it so painfully." He slammed his hands together, "Iron Sand! Autumn Shower! " The sand fluxed wildly behind Kaji as it formed a large block infront of him. With a swift punch is shattered, sending thousands of pieces of jagged, piercing, clumps of iron shrapnel at the battered foe. He did all he could to block the attack, not realizing what a hopeless endeavor it really was. His body was ripped to shreds as he collapsed,a bleeding mess. "My my....what a pain..." Kaji stated a he finally landed on the ground, manipulating the sand into his pouch and walking back to tend to his watermelons.
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2011 4:55 pm
@SayonaraBang: Denied!A decent rp sample though I feel that the knowledge section is lacking something. Try rereading the bloodline and see if there's anything else you could add into it. A good first attempt but I need to see more bloodline abilities incorporated in it before I can give you the okay. Since you're applying as a Jounin, I definiately need to see more abilities and that you're capable of using them. Good luck on your application.
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2011 5:11 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2011 5:22 pm
@SayonaraBang: Denied! Better on the info section but once again, I need to see some more techniques used in the rp sample. From what I've read, I've only see you use 4 techiniques out of 9 stage 1 techniques and one of them was gather iron sand (doesn't really count but I gave it to you). Sorry to be so picky but I really, really need to see some more techniques in if I'm to approve of this. Your rpc's going to be jounin so he should have access to almost all of stage 1's techinques. Add a few more and it'll be fine. You're almost there. Keep trying.
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2011 5:37 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2011 5:41 pm
@SayonaraBang:Alright, I can see that you have a feel for how this bloodline works so Approved! Have fun rping!
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Posted: Sat Apr 30, 2011 2:13 am
Rpc Name: Perses
Village: Kumo
Rank:Genin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Dragonil Clan
What you know about the clan/bl: The members of the Dragonil clan are said to be raised by Dragons and such. They are users of Katon and only Katon as their element. Even though they can't use other elements, their ability with flames allowed them to increase the power of that element (Katon is 1 rank stronger). On the other hand, as their natural opposite, Suiton techniques have an increased effect (1 Rank stronger) on them. They have better senses of smell, hearing and sight than others and are also able to eat flames (Of techniques that are of the same rank or lower than the user's rank).
Rp Sample:
Through the forest of the Land of Fire, a group of shinobi from Kumo chased a rogue that had betrayed their village and killed several villagers. In that group, the one who took the lead and guided them to the enemy was a shinobi known as Perses. A man who is said to hold the same power of a dragon, or something close to that.
One of Perses' special characteristics, was that he had really good senses. And he used that in his favor. With the wind on their side, it was easy for the man to keep track of the rogue shinobi using his heightened sense of smell. They decided to go towards different directions, surrouding the enemy slowly while Perses headed straight to him. But what they didn't know, was that there were several traps hidden between the bushes and trees. Some deadly, some that would just delay the shinobi, but enough to prevent them from reaching the rogue as they planned. Being the only one against the rogue, Perses decided it would be better if he gave his best instead of running away.
The rogue didn't have much information about the shinobi who were sent after him, he just knew that there would be people after him. Unaware of the abilities Perses had, the enemy dug his grave. He started performing handseals as soon as he noticed the one who would be his executioner. Looking at the handseals, Perses laughed and moments later a large stream of flames, with the shape of a dragon was shot at him. "Katon, Karyuu Endan!" exclaimed the villain. Perses did not move an inch, he did just one thing, he opened his mouth and waited for the flames.
When the flames reached Perses, they were sucked by his mouth as he devoured them. "Not that tasty, but...well food is food." he said. The rogue didn't believe at what his eyes saw and before he had time to react, Perses had already started his assault. "Karyuu no...Tekken!" the man said as flames surrounded his right hand and he punched the rogue. The flames burned the clothes and the skin around the area of his enemy's chest, where the punch connected.
In pain, and confused, the enemy attempted to run away in order to create some distance between them, while poorly performing handseals. "Give up if you're still a man. Perses taunted the enemy. The rogue, managed to finish the handseals and reached a small and calm river nearby. 'Suiton, Mizu Ryuu no Jutsu!" the rogue shouted while standing on the water of the river. "Suiton?!" Perses was surprised as they weren't told that the rogue could use water jutsu. He had followed the rogue close to the river, and wouldn't have enough time to get out of that jutsu's range. It could have been luck, but the rogue used a technique that could not be countered nor avoided by Perses, at least not with his current speed. 'Speed?' he remembered. There was a technique he could use right away, that would help him to get more distant from the rogue and avoid the technique, or at least part of it. "Dragonforce!" Perses exclaimed as flames of a lighter tone than he had used before danced around his body as if the air itself around him burned. Those flames meant no harm to anyone, but they weren't meaningless, they were the proof that Perses' technique was active, he became two times faster and stronger physically. He ran at full speed, from the water dragon that went towards him, and managed to avoid most of the impact by throwing himself farther at the last moment, but it what he didn't avoid was enough to hurt him. The technique used on him felt as if it was one rank stronger, because of his natural weakness to suiton, but he was still able to fight.
Back on his feet, with the rogue shinobi performing more seals, Perses decided he would end it with the next move. He had no jutsu of other elements, and he had poor skills with genjutsu. Anything other than katon was out of question at that time, even if the enemy used suiton. That's when the terms of the mission came into his mind, he did not need to bring the enemy back alive, his death would be accepted. With that in mind, Perses noticed he had no reason to hold back, he could go all out. "It is over for you man." he said to the rogue who was about to finish the handseals. "Guren Hōō Ken!" Perses shouted and ran towards his enemy. With the sight of Perses' left arm being engulfed in flames, the rogue made a mistake and failed to perform the last handseal required for the jutsu he was going to use. That mistake, would cost his life, the intense flames of Perses' technique could easily scorch and burn the enemy, and if the punch landed it could easily break bones around the area it hits. Perses had aimed at the man's torso, but as the enemy did not seem like he would react, he slightly changed the course of his punch and it langed closer to the enemy's neck.
The flames burned the skin around the neck and part of the chest of the enemy, that had already been hit by flames before. A small part of the enemy's face was also caught by the flames. The bones close to where the punch connected were broken by the impact, causing internal bleeding, loss of consciousness due to the pain and eventually, the rogue's death. Even though it was his victory, Perses felt the drawbacks of using Dragonforce for too long, he broke some bones of his arms, but fortunately, he stopped using it before more internal damage was made.
Two of the shinobi who were with Perses since the beginning of the mission, managed to avoid lethal wounds from the traps, but the other one was reckless and got caught by an explosive trap. With the death of a comrade, and their mission complete. Perses and the two shinobi headed back to their village. Taking the corpse of their target, and what they could find of their comrade's corpse with them.
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Posted: Sun May 01, 2011 1:35 pm
@Scorpio Lucis: Denied! Amazing job for a first take. You filled out the information section with a lot of detailed information and your rp sample held alot of strengths and weaknesses. Something to keep in mind when typing up an rp sample is to put more space between your paragraphs. It was good that you had multiple paragraphs but they were all bunched together making it hard to read. Basically, it was a solid rp sample, only problem was a lack in techniques used. There are alot of techniques in this clan and it would be great if you could show more than 3. This will just help to show me that you have a understanding of how the techniques work. Thanks and good luck.
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Posted: Sun May 01, 2011 3:44 pm
@White Water Lilly: My bad, seems like I was mistaken when I thought that just those techniques would be enough. I'll work on the RP sample and edit it according to what you said. Oh and sorry about the paragraphs being bunched together, the Enter in this keyboard is not working correctly and most of the time I have to press it during some time to get a single paragraph space, but I'll try to fix that. I'll repost it in this same post as soon as it is done. Edited and reposted. I've added more techniques to the RP sample, I hope it is enough now, 7 out of 11 offensive techniques and the flame eating technique. Quote: Rpc Name: Perses Village: Kumo Rank:Genin Bloodline or Clan applied for: Dragonil Clan What you know about the clan/bl: The members of the Dragonil clan are said to be raised by Dragons and such. They are users of Katon and only Katon as their element. Even though they can't use other elements, their ability with flames allowed them to increase the power of that element (Katon is 1 rank stronger). On the other hand, as their natural opposite, Suiton techniques have an increased effect (1 Rank stronger) on them. They have better senses of smell, hearing and sight than others and are also able to eat flames (Of techniques that are of the same rank or lower than the user's rank). Rp Sample:
Through the forest of the Land of Fire, a group of shinobi from Kumo chased a rogue that had betrayed their village and killed several villagers. In that group, the one who took the lead and guided them to the enemy was a shinobi known as Perses. A man who is said to hold the same power of a dragon, or something close to that.
One of Perses' special characteristics, was that he had really good senses. And he used that in his favor. With the wind on their side, it was easy for the man to keep track of the rogue shinobi using his heightened sense of smell. They decided to go towards different directions, surrouding the enemy slowly while Perses headed straight to him. But what they didn't know, was that there were several traps hidden between the bushes and trees. Some deadly and some that would just delay the shinobi, but enough to prevent them from reaching the rogue as they planned.
Being the only one against the rogue, Perses decided it would be better if he gave his best instead of running away. The rogue didn't have much information about the shinobi who were sent after him, he just knew that there would be people after him. Unaware of the abilities Perses had, the enemy dug his grave. He started performing handseals as soon as he noticed the one who would be his executioner. Looking at the handseals, Perses laughed and moments later a large stream of flames, with the shape of a dragon was shot at him. "Katon, Karyuu Endan!" exclaimed the villain. Perses did not move an inch, he did just one thing, he opened his mouth and waited for the flames.
When the flames reached Perses, they were sucked by his mouth as he devoured them. "Not that tasty, but...well food is food." he said. The rogue didn't believe at what his eyes saw and before he had time to react, Perses had already started his assault. "Karyuu no...Tekken!" the man said as flames surrounded his right hand and he punched the rogue. The flames burned the part of the clothes and the skin around the area of his enemy's chest, where the punch connected.
In pain, and confused, the enemy attempted to run away in order to create some distance between them, while poorly performing handseals. "Give up if you're still a man. Perses taunted the enemy and chased after him. The rogue, managed to finish the handseals and reached a small and calm river nearby. 'Suiton, Mizu Ryuu no Jutsu!" the rogue shouted while standing on the water of the river and a dragon made of water rose beside him. "Suiton?!" Perses was surprised as they weren't told that the rogue could use water jutsu.
He had followed the rogue close to the river, and wouldn't have enough time to get out of that jutsu's range. It could have been luck, but the rogue used a technique that could not be countered nor avoided by Perses, at least not with his current speed. 'Speed?' he remembered. There was a technique he could use right away, that would help him to get more distant from the rogue and avoid the technique, or at least part of it. "Dragonforce!" Perses exclaimed as flames of a lighter tone than he had used before danced around his body as if the air itself around him was being lit on fire.
Those flames meant no harm to anyone, but they weren't meaningless, they were the proof that Perses' technique was active, he became two times faster and stronger physically. He ran at full speed, from the water dragon that went towards him, and managed to avoid most of the impact by throwing himself farther at the last moment, but it what he didn't avoid was enough to hurt him. The technique used on him felt as if it was one rank stronger, because of his natural weakness to suiton, but he was still able to fight.
Back on his feet, with the rogue shinobi performing more seals, Perses decided to deactivate the Dragonforce for the time being. If he kept using it during the whole fight, it could lead to his loss as the drawbacks of the technique aren't small. He had no jutsu of other elements, and he had poor skills with genjutsu. Anything other than katon was out of question at that time, even if the enemy used suiton. That's when the terms of the mission came into his mind, he did not need to bring the enemy back alive, his death would be accepted. With that in mind, Perses noticed he had no reason to hold back, he could go all out. "It'll be over soon. I told you to give up." he said to the rogue who was about to finish the handseals.
"Karyuu no...Hōkō!" Perses exclaimed. With the use of his chakra to prepare for the technique, a ring with fire runes was formed in front of him. With the sight of Perses' technique being prepared, the unusual looking technique made the rogue commit a mistake and fail to perform the last handseal required for the jutsu he was going to use.
That mistake, could cost his life. Right after the runes appeared, Perses put both of his hands in front of his mouth, and exhaled a large sphere of flames towards the stunned enemy. All the rogue could do at that moment was attempt to run away, and so he did. By running to his left, the rogue managed to avoid a direct hit and was barely touched by the flames. But as it was an almost desperate movement, the loss of his balance ended up making him hurry to move out of the river, or else he would fall underwater.
As the enemy lost his balance, Perses took that opportunity to continue his assault. Preparing for a punch as he rushed towards the enemy, Perses had his arm bent and his fist was ready. "Karyuu no Enchuu!" he said as his fist was propelled by flames that were created at the back of his elbow.
Upon reaching the enemy, Perses' fist succesfully hit the rogue's chin, but he did not stop there and continued with his attacks. He reached for the enemy with both arms and held him by his shirt, for a brief moment, just so he would not be send backwards after the punch. "Karyuu no Kagitsume!" he said as flames engulfed his left food right before he performed a spin kick, aiming at the left side of the enemy's head and sending him towards an old tree.
With the rogue barely conscious, the shinobi from Kumo was already getting bored of that fight. He thought that as a suiton user, the rogue would put up a better fight, but he was mistaken. "It's time to finish you. Dragonforce!" he said with an arrogant tone, as lighter colored flames surrounded him once more.
Perses ran towards the rogue, and as he didn't need to take him alive to the village he was willing to kill the enemy with his next moves. He lifted the rogue agaisnt the tree. "You should have given up, you wouldn't have to die...Good bye! Guren, Karyuu Ken!" he said and with his both hands on fire, he started to punch the rogue continously. With each punch a small explosion was produced and caused great damage to his body.
Perses finished his assault, but his enemy seemed really resistant. "It seems that you're really tough. Haha, I'll take you back to Kumo alive then." he said and was about to let go of the enemy when something that would really mean the end for the rogue happened. "...Ugh...you're one of those freaks my comrades killed...aren't you...?" the rogue spoke, taunting Perses. Enraged, because the "freaks" that he mentioned, were Perses' siblings, he held the rogue by his neck as his other arm was engulfed in flames. "Guren...Hōō Ken! he shouted with anger flowing in his words and punched straight at the man's face.
The intense flames of Perses' technique could easily scorch and burn the enemy, and as the punch hit directly, probably he wouldn't survive the trip back to Kumo. Even though it was his victory, Perses felt the drawbacks of using Dragonforce for too long, he broke some bones of his arms, but fortunately, he stopped using it before more internal damage was made.
Two of the shinobi who were with Perses since the beginning of the mission, managed to avoid lethal wounds from the traps, but the other one was reckless and got caught by an explosive trap. With the death of a comrade, and their mission complete. Perses and the two shinobi headed back to their village. Taking the nearly killed target, and what they could find of their comrade's corpse with them.
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Posted: Sun May 01, 2011 8:33 pm
@Scorpio Lucis: Hey, no problem, it happens and I admit, I do tend to be more picky on the use of techniques just because I want to be sure that the user knows how to correctly explain them. This helps to hopefully lessen complications later down the road. As for the keyboard, I can relate, my friend has this annoying keyboard with a strange space bar and it drives me nuts whenever I'm using it so don't worry to much about it, as long as you fixed it. Well, enough of me blabbering. Great rp sample and good job with the descriptions of the techniques Approved! Have fun rping!
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Posted: Sun May 01, 2011 8:56 pm
@White Water Lilly: You're just doing your job, I understand that so even if you asked me to use all the techniques of the clan in that sample, I'd do that without complaining. Thanks and without doubt I'll have fun rping smile
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Posted: Tue May 03, 2011 7:51 am
Rpc Name: Karasu Akimichi
Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Gennin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Akimichi
What you know about the clan/bl: They can expand their body's size throw various jutsu that also burn up calories as well as chakra, and have a set of 3 secret pills that are like instant super steroids, which convert any free calories in the body as well as excess fat to produce huge spikes in power. The pills aren't without consciousnesses, using them results in grave personal injury or with the last on, death.
Rp Sample:
Karasu stretched as he entered from his side of the testing area. Chuunin exams are such a drag He thought as he waited for his opponent to enter. He started stretching as his opponent entered, a boy who held a massive sword that rested on his shoulder. He probably uses that Zanbatō style. Karasu thought as he made an attempt to gauge his opponent's abilities. "Right, Let's do this!" The boy called out to Karasu, as he brandished his massive weapon, and started to move slowly towards him.
"Jeez, this is gonna be such a pain." Karasu said as he raised his arms and slid his starting foot forward. Within an instant, Karasu rushed forward, nearly catching the other boy by surprise with a sudden straight aimed at his solar plexus, which was just narrowly avoided. Sword-boy tried to swat away Karasu with the flat of his sword, but Karasu was to fast and vaulted over the sword at the same time he kicked Sword-boy in the head. Sword-boy was sent reeling by Karasu's kick, and then was sent flying by Karasu, via a super sized punch courtesy of the Partial Multi-Size Technique.
Using the still enlarged arm, Karasu pushed himself flying forward and landed with a stomp on top of Sword-boy. Blood spurted out of the boy's mouth after impact, which caught Karasu by surprise, he'd forgotten he could hit so hard and backed off. Even if it was the chuunin exams, he didn't want to kill anyone. Sword-boy managed to right himself as Karasu's arm returned to normal. Karasu began to regret his decision because the after affects of using Partial Multi-Size seemed to sort of temporarily disconnect him from his chakra reserves. After a few hand seals, Sword-Boy seemed to move forward with no effort as he prepared to swing, which lead Karasu to guess he was of Doton affinity. The attack's aim was true and heavy blade crashed into Karasu's arm, cutting in and breaking bone.
With the pain being nearly unbearable, Karasu needed to somehow end the fight fast. He dodged another attack from Sword-Boy and tried to kick the weapon out of the boy's grasp. There was a sickening crunching sound as Karasu's foot connected at an odd angle with Sword-Boy's main hand, some of his fingers had been broken from the impact. Using the opening he'd just created, Karasu performed the Multi-Size technique and back-handed Sword-Boy to send him flying again. Then to end with a bang, Karasu went into Human Bullet Tank and cam crashing down onto Sword-Boy. He'd tried to block the giant spiraling ball of flesh with his sword but it broke in half and he took a softened blow that knocked him unconscious but didn't do to much major damage besides that. The fight ended with that blow, and soon the medics came for them both, leaving Karasu wondering if he'd have to continue participating.
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Posted: Tue May 03, 2011 8:55 am
@Mayvine: Denied! Not a bad first take but I'll need to see more techniques incorporated into the rp sample. Know that you're not limited to your rank. Since you are just applying for the bloodline you are free to rp as any rank, just be sure to make note of it at the start of the rp sample. Good luck.
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Posted: Tue May 03, 2011 9:10 am
gonk Most of the Akimichi techniques stop the use of jutsu for a period of time, so using a large amount of techniques isn't really possible.
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