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noir_kama

PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 7:28 pm


First Chirp of The Autumnal Cricket
Koujin's signature technique focusing on his unnatural speed. This technique consists of Koujin just standing there for quite some time with his normal bored expression. He seems to be completely off guard, but in reality is watching and waiting for the correct moment to act. Up until the last second Koujin will refuse to move a muscle and then preform a lightning speed quick draw to deflect the incoming attack. This attack happens so fast that's it's not visible to the naked eye and it appears that Koujin hasn't moved at all. The only way for even a perceptive person to realize that an attack has occurred is to listen for the faint chirp as the blade on his hip slides back into it's sheath. Due to the extreme speed this attack can split most metals and stand a good chance of even splitting most elemental attacks.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 7:59 pm


All done Ace. As for the 2nd one you didn't clear, I made it so the needles don't explode so it's a lot more fair.

Shinkantoshita (Silent as a Graveyard)
Ninjutsu/Genjutsu
D Rank
Range: Short (0-5m), Mid (6-10m)
Desc.: Seiko uses this as an extension of the Descending Hell Technique. He creates the illusion that both shinobi are in a graveyard. All the graves have been dug up leaving nothing but dirt in the ground. Time then seems to slow to the effect of the Mizu clan's Demonic Ice Mirrors. Time seems to slow for Seiko, while it seems that Seiko has been granted an extensive amount of speed to the enemy.

Kusa Bushin no Jutsu (Grass Clone)
Ninjutsu
C Rank
Range: Short (0-5m)
Desc.: Seiko creates two Kage Bushin's uses them regularly. If touched by the enemy, the clones explode and spray out grass needles.

Shitsunen (Oblivion)
Ninjutsu
B Rank
Range: Short (0-5m)
Desc.: Seikos katana glows green and extends 5 feet. Similar to the Dragon Hammer, but slightly different. It bashes away the attack and sends it back at 1/2 the original power, but at 2x the speed.

Jadoku Kakuzen (Snake Venom Clear-Cut)
Ninjutsu
B Rank
Range: Short (0-5m)
Desc.: Nakumi bites into Seiko's arm, injecting poison into him. But due to the partnership, Nakumi takes in that venom from Seiko's body into her mouth, then spits it onto Seiko's katana making it extremely dangerous. If the enemy is cut by Seiko's katana (even if it's just a scratch), then they will be paralyzed for their next post.

Midori Kanryuu (Green Needle Fluxation)
Ninjutsu
B Rank
Range: Short (0-5m), Mid (6-10m)
Desc.: Seiko controls the grass on the ground and sends it rocketing upward, attacking the enemy, then down again to attack the enemy again.

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noir_kama

PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 8:20 pm


Dance of The Swaying Willow
Using the hypnotizing eye of the Sharigan a skilled Uchiha can instill the idea that the user is going to dodge a certain direction causing the opponent to attack with a tendency of their attacks veering off to either side of the user making it near impossible to hit them without disabling the Sharingan. This skill can also trick the opponents mind into perceiving that the user is either standing 30 ft. in front or behind their actual location.

Imperial Cleansing Flame
With a simple thought a skilled Uchiha can summon up a wash of golden flames. These flames are unique in that they give off no heat, very little additional light and do no outward damage to any surface. Instead of damaging and consuming cells these flames regenerate cells healing wounds and creating new life. No healing can accomplished without it's costs, though the flames cause no burns and give off no heat so long as anyone is in contact with the flames they will still feel as if they are on fire. If one could stand the pain of the fire they can be healed by the flames.

Fog of The Fire Lake
This skills has it's roots in the land of waves with the hidden mist jutsu. This skill was developed as a way to counter the zero visibility mist of hidden mist ninja. While the opponent won't be able to see anything in the thick layer of fog produced any competent Uchiha will be able to see every move of the opponent with the Sharingans piercing eye. Of course this fog simply isn't normal red fog, since there is no such thing as red fog, this fog is actually poisonous in nature. When inhaled this poisonous mist causes burning in the mouth, throat and lungs which in turns leads to debilitating coughing, to tears in the lungs which of course result in death. This fog doesn't seem to have any negative affect on the user.

Diamond Dust
Takes the actual substance to be used, but when enough is collected and infused with chakra it becomes one of the most deadly weapons. When cast up into the air it refracts most all natural lights rendering the user invisible and creating countless illusory copies which don't seem to be affected by genjutsu cancelers. It can also be focused into a deadly storm of razor sharp diamond fragments which can rip through just about anything you can bring against it. These clouds can also be harmful to the user if the opponent comes to close. When inhaled Diamond dust tears apart the lungs in a matter of minutes causing the opponent to drown in their own blood.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 3:24 am


noir_kama
First Chirp of The Autumnal Cricket
Koujin's signature technique focusing on his unnatural speed. This technique consists of Koujin just standing there for quite some time with his normal bored expression. He seems to be completely off guard, but in reality is watching and waiting for the correct moment to act. Up until the last second Koujin will refuse to move a muscle and then preform a lightning speed quick draw to deflect the incoming attack. This attack happens so fast that's it's not visible to the naked eye and it appears that Koujin hasn't moved at all. The only way for even a perceptive person to realize that an attack has occurred is to listen for the faint chirp as the blade on his hip slides back into it's sheath. Due to the extreme speed this attack can split most metals and stand a good chance of even splitting most elemental attacks.
I don't feel as I can approve this due to, You clan is not known for having unatural speed, Nor is their anything else that should say you have it.

Ace Zero


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PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 6:39 am


Elemental Fighting style


This taijutsu has two uses for fighting up close, the first are stances.

Water stance: The dodging aspect, the user flows like water to avoid attacks.
or attacks at random, combinding many chains of punches and kicks together like a flowing stream

Fire stance: The user is fast and unforgiving, dodging attacks and returning them with fury and no rest. They attack the same way, fast and hard

Earth stance: The user is solid, and mostly unmoving. They will take punches, and with stand them, unmoving. They also attack by hitting extremely hard, and with bone shattering strength

The second part of this technique is acually incorperating the moves with elements

Water style: The user makes an extention to their arm, a mass of water, which they will strike horizontally at the oppoent which usually ends up with a water slap.

Fire style: The user will punch at the opponent but they're attack will stop short, and let out a burst of flame, to scorch the oppoenet.

Earth style: This is defense, the user will stomp and a block of earth will come up to block attacks
PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 7:21 am


hurdy13
Elemental Fighting style


This taijutsu has two uses for fighting up close, the first are stances.

Water stance: The dodging aspect, the user flows like water to avoid attacks.
or attacks at random, combinding many chains of punches and kicks together like a flowing stream

Fire stance: The user is fast and unforgiving, dodging attacks and returning them with fury and no rest. They attack the same way, fast and hard

Earth stance: The user is solid, and mostly unmoving. They will take punches, and with stand them, unmoving. They also attack by hitting extremely hard, and with bone shattering strength

The second part of this technique is acually incorperating the moves with elements

Water style: The user makes an extention to their arm, a mass of water, which they will strike horizontally at the oppoent which usually ends up with a water slap.

Fire style: The user will punch at the opponent but they're attack will stop short, and let out a burst of flame, to scorch the oppoenet.

Earth style: This is defense, the user will stomp and a block of earth will come up to block attacks
Split them up into different stances, As in 1 stance=1 made up slot, Then I shall approve or deny them.

Ace Zero


Ace Zero

PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 7:22 am


Elite Design
All done Ace. As for the 2nd one you didn't clear, I made it so the needles don't explode so it's a lot more fair.

Shinkantoshita (Silent as a Graveyard)
Ninjutsu/Genjutsu
D Rank
Range: Short (0-5m), Mid (6-10m)
Desc.: Seiko uses this as an extension of the Descending Hell Technique. He creates the illusion that both shinobi are in a graveyard. All the graves have been dug up leaving nothing but dirt in the ground. Time then seems to slow to the effect of the Mizu clan's Demonic Ice Mirrors. Time seems to slow for Seiko, while it seems that Seiko has been granted an extensive amount of speed to the enemy.

Kusa Bushin no Jutsu (Grass Clone)
Ninjutsu
C Rank
Range: Short (0-5m)
Desc.: Seiko creates two Kage Bushin's uses them regularly. If touched by the enemy, the clones explode and spray out grass needles.

Shitsunen (Oblivion)
Ninjutsu
B Rank
Range: Short (0-5m)
Desc.: Seikos katana glows green and extends 5 feet. Similar to the Dragon Hammer, but slightly different. It bashes away the attack and sends it back at 1/2 the original power, but at 2x the speed.

Jadoku Kakuzen (Snake Venom Clear-Cut)
Ninjutsu
B Rank
Range: Short (0-5m)
Desc.: Nakumi bites into Seiko's arm, injecting poison into him. But due to the partnership, Nakumi takes in that venom from Seiko's body into her mouth, then spits it onto Seiko's katana making it extremely dangerous. If the enemy is cut by Seiko's katana (even if it's just a scratch), then they will be paralyzed for their next post.

Midori Kanryuu (Green Needle Fluxation)
Ninjutsu
B Rank
Range: Short (0-5m), Mid (6-10m)
Desc.: Seiko controls the grass on the ground and sends it rocketing upward, attacking the enemy, then down again to attack the enemy again.
They are all approved. Keep in mind these all require handseals, Except that sword one.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 7:25 am


noir_kama
Dance of The Swaying Willow
Using the hypnotizing eye of the Sharigan a skilled Uchiha can instill the idea that the user is going to dodge a certain direction causing the opponent to attack with a tendency of their attacks veering off to either side of the user making it near impossible to hit them without disabling the Sharingan. This skill can also trick the opponents mind into perceiving that the user is either standing 30 ft. in front or behind their actual location.

Imperial Cleansing Flame
With a simple thought a skilled Uchiha can summon up a wash of golden flames. These flames are unique in that they give off no heat, very little additional light and do no outward damage to any surface. Instead of damaging and consuming cells these flames regenerate cells healing wounds and creating new life. No healing can accomplished without it's costs, though the flames cause no burns and give off no heat so long as anyone is in contact with the flames they will still feel as if they are on fire. If one could stand the pain of the fire they can be healed by the flames.

Fog of The Fire Lake
This skills has it's roots in the land of waves with the hidden mist jutsu. This skill was developed as a way to counter the zero visibility mist of hidden mist ninja. While the opponent won't be able to see anything in the thick layer of fog produced any competent Uchiha will be able to see every move of the opponent with the Sharingans piercing eye. Of course this fog simply isn't normal red fog, since there is no such thing as red fog, this fog is actually poisonous in nature. When inhaled this poisonous mist causes burning in the mouth, throat and lungs which in turns leads to debilitating coughing, to tears in the lungs which of course result in death. This fog doesn't seem to have any negative affect on the user.

Diamond Dust
Takes the actual substance to be used, but when enough is collected and infused with chakra it becomes one of the most deadly weapons. When cast up into the air it refracts most all natural lights rendering the user invisible and creating countless illusory copies which don't seem to be affected by genjutsu cancelers. It can also be focused into a deadly storm of razor sharp diamond fragments which can rip through just about anything you can bring against it. These clouds can also be harmful to the user if the opponent comes to close. When inhaled Diamond dust tears apart the lungs in a matter of minutes causing the opponent to drown in their own blood.
I am sorry I will have to deny these all, They seem a bit too powerful, Get mangekyo, Rework these skills, Then resubmit them. Or you could just think of some other ones.

Ace Zero


noir_kama

PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 7:39 am


Ace Zero
noir_kama
Dance of The Swaying Willow
Using the hypnotizing eye of the Sharigan a skilled Uchiha can instill the idea that the user is going to dodge a certain direction causing the opponent to attack with a tendency of their attacks veering off to either side of the user making it near impossible to hit them without disabling the Sharingan. This skill can also trick the opponents mind into perceiving that the user is either standing 30 ft. in front or behind their actual location.

Imperial Cleansing Flame
With a simple thought a skilled Uchiha can summon up a wash of golden flames. These flames are unique in that they give off no heat, very little additional light and do no outward damage to any surface. Instead of damaging and consuming cells these flames regenerate cells healing wounds and creating new life. No healing can accomplished without it's costs, though the flames cause no burns and give off no heat so long as anyone is in contact with the flames they will still feel as if they are on fire. If one could stand the pain of the fire they can be healed by the flames.

Fog of The Fire Lake
This skills has it's roots in the land of waves with the hidden mist jutsu. This skill was developed as a way to counter the zero visibility mist of hidden mist ninja. While the opponent won't be able to see anything in the thick layer of fog produced any competent Uchiha will be able to see every move of the opponent with the Sharingans piercing eye. Of course this fog simply isn't normal red fog, since there is no such thing as red fog, this fog is actually poisonous in nature. When inhaled this poisonous mist causes burning in the mouth, throat and lungs which in turns leads to debilitating coughing, to tears in the lungs which of course result in death. This fog doesn't seem to have any negative affect on the user.

Diamond Dust
Takes the actual substance to be used, but when enough is collected and infused with chakra it becomes one of the most deadly weapons. When cast up into the air it refracts most all natural lights rendering the user invisible and creating countless illusory copies which don't seem to be affected by genjutsu cancelers. It can also be focused into a deadly storm of razor sharp diamond fragments which can rip through just about anything you can bring against it. These clouds can also be harmful to the user if the opponent comes to close. When inhaled Diamond dust tears apart the lungs in a matter of minutes causing the opponent to drown in their own blood.
I am sorry I will have to deny these all, They seem a bit too powerful, Get mangekyo, Rework these skills, Then resubmit them. Or you could just think of some other ones.
I could see these being to powerful for a genin or chunin, but I'm pretty confident that he's about a to be promoted to jounin right now.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 7:49 am


Ace Zero
noir_kama
First Chirp of The Autumnal Cricket
Koujin's signature technique focusing on his unnatural speed. This technique consists of Koujin just standing there for quite some time with his normal bored expression. He seems to be completely off guard, but in reality is watching and waiting for the correct moment to act. Up until the last second Koujin will refuse to move a muscle and then preform a lightning speed quick draw to deflect the incoming attack. This attack happens so fast that's it's not visible to the naked eye and it appears that Koujin hasn't moved at all. The only way for even a perceptive person to realize that an attack has occurred is to listen for the faint chirp as the blade on his hip slides back into it's sheath. Due to the extreme speed this attack can split most metals and stand a good chance of even splitting most elemental attacks.
I don't feel as I can approve this due to, You clan is not known for having unatural speed, Nor is their anything else that should say you have it.
>.> when did I ever mention anything about his family, its him that's quick. And if you think into it the gekkou would be quicker then the average nin, they're sick so they can't fight for long periods and if you can't fight for extended periods of time you either have to be quick or powerful. The gekkou can't be to powerful either since if you put to much strain on the body it will give out leaving speed. Speed is something that can be regulated, but still raised with proper training meaning they had to be quick enough to take out their opponents before their bodies gave out. Plus they were formerly the best swordsmen...well ever meaning some of them would specialize in speed attacks. But yeah I wasn't talking about his clan I was talking about Koujin and his unique disposition. Being lazy he doesn't move and lets the opponent come to him allowing him to conserve his chakra and then much like Sakura's advanced taijutsu strikes he releases all the chakra he could have used moving into one quick strike and instead of increasing the strength he has made the attack faster.

noir_kama


Ace Zero

PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 7:59 am


noir_kama
Ace Zero
noir_kama
First Chirp of The Autumnal Cricket
Koujin's signature technique focusing on his unnatural speed. This technique consists of Koujin just standing there for quite some time with his normal bored expression. He seems to be completely off guard, but in reality is watching and waiting for the correct moment to act. Up until the last second Koujin will refuse to move a muscle and then preform a lightning speed quick draw to deflect the incoming attack. This attack happens so fast that's it's not visible to the naked eye and it appears that Koujin hasn't moved at all. The only way for even a perceptive person to realize that an attack has occurred is to listen for the faint chirp as the blade on his hip slides back into it's sheath. Due to the extreme speed this attack can split most metals and stand a good chance of even splitting most elemental attacks.
I don't feel as I can approve this due to, You clan is not known for having unatural speed, Nor is their anything else that should say you have it.
>.> when did I ever mention anything about his family, its him that's quick. And if you think into it the gekkou would be quicker then the average nin, they're sick so they can't fight for long periods and if you can't fight for extended periods of time you either have to be quick or powerful. The gekkou can't be to powerful either since if you put to much strain on the body it will give out leaving speed. Speed is something that can be regulated, but still raised with proper training meaning they had to be quick enough to take out their opponents before their bodies gave out. Plus they were formerly the best swordsmen...well ever meaning some of them would specialize in speed attacks. But yeah I wasn't talking about his clan I was talking about Koujin and his unique disposition. Being lazy he doesn't move and lets the opponent come to him allowing him to conserve his chakra and then much like Sakura's advanced taijutsu strikes he releases all the chakra he could have used moving into one quick strike and instead of increasing the strength he has made the attack faster.
I see this as a ultimate defense. Like as if random strike from behind, his would take effect. Make this have a draw back or some sort before I approve this.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 8:02 am


noir_kama
Ace Zero
noir_kama
Dance of The Swaying Willow
Using the hypnotizing eye of the Sharigan a skilled Uchiha can instill the idea that the user is going to dodge a certain direction causing the opponent to attack with a tendency of their attacks veering off to either side of the user making it near impossible to hit them without disabling the Sharingan. This skill can also trick the opponents mind into perceiving that the user is either standing 30 ft. in front or behind their actual location.

Imperial Cleansing Flame
With a simple thought a skilled Uchiha can summon up a wash of golden flames. These flames are unique in that they give off no heat, very little additional light and do no outward damage to any surface. Instead of damaging and consuming cells these flames regenerate cells healing wounds and creating new life. No healing can accomplished without it's costs, though the flames cause no burns and give off no heat so long as anyone is in contact with the flames they will still feel as if they are on fire. If one could stand the pain of the fire they can be healed by the flames.

Fog of The Fire Lake
This skills has it's roots in the land of waves with the hidden mist jutsu. This skill was developed as a way to counter the zero visibility mist of hidden mist ninja. While the opponent won't be able to see anything in the thick layer of fog produced any competent Uchiha will be able to see every move of the opponent with the Sharingans piercing eye. Of course this fog simply isn't normal red fog, since there is no such thing as red fog, this fog is actually poisonous in nature. When inhaled this poisonous mist causes burning in the mouth, throat and lungs which in turns leads to debilitating coughing, to tears in the lungs which of course result in death. This fog doesn't seem to have any negative affect on the user.

Diamond Dust
Takes the actual substance to be used, but when enough is collected and infused with chakra it becomes one of the most deadly weapons. When cast up into the air it refracts most all natural lights rendering the user invisible and creating countless illusory copies which don't seem to be affected by genjutsu cancelers. It can also be focused into a deadly storm of razor sharp diamond fragments which can rip through just about anything you can bring against it. These clouds can also be harmful to the user if the opponent comes to close. When inhaled Diamond dust tears apart the lungs in a matter of minutes causing the opponent to drown in their own blood.
I am sorry I will have to deny these all, They seem a bit too powerful, Get mangekyo, Rework these skills, Then resubmit them. Or you could just think of some other ones.
I could see these being to powerful for a genin or chunin, but I'm pretty confident that he's about a to be promoted to jounin right now.
The first one is more of a mind trick, As for the next one I don't see why a Uchiha would have this, Maybe if they were a healing ninja or something and they devoted their time to it. As for the next one. Poision mist? I assume this would take affect on you also? As for the last one seeming all too powerful.

Ace Zero


noir_kama

PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 8:07 am


Ace Zero
noir_kama
Ace Zero
noir_kama
First Chirp of The Autumnal Cricket
Koujin's signature technique focusing on his unnatural speed. This technique consists of Koujin just standing there for quite some time with his normal bored expression. He seems to be completely off guard, but in reality is watching and waiting for the correct moment to act. Up until the last second Koujin will refuse to move a muscle and then preform a lightning speed quick draw to deflect the incoming attack. This attack happens so fast that's it's not visible to the naked eye and it appears that Koujin hasn't moved at all. The only way for even a perceptive person to realize that an attack has occurred is to listen for the faint chirp as the blade on his hip slides back into it's sheath. Due to the extreme speed this attack can split most metals and stand a good chance of even splitting most elemental attacks.
I don't feel as I can approve this due to, You clan is not known for having unatural speed, Nor is their anything else that should say you have it.
>.> when did I ever mention anything about his family, its him that's quick. And if you think into it the gekkou would be quicker then the average nin, they're sick so they can't fight for long periods and if you can't fight for extended periods of time you either have to be quick or powerful. The gekkou can't be to powerful either since if you put to much strain on the body it will give out leaving speed. Speed is something that can be regulated, but still raised with proper training meaning they had to be quick enough to take out their opponents before their bodies gave out. Plus they were formerly the best swordsmen...well ever meaning some of them would specialize in speed attacks. But yeah I wasn't talking about his clan I was talking about Koujin and his unique disposition. Being lazy he doesn't move and lets the opponent come to him allowing him to conserve his chakra and then much like Sakura's advanced taijutsu strikes he releases all the chakra he could have used moving into one quick strike and instead of increasing the strength he has made the attack faster.
I see this as a ultimate defense. Like as if random strike from behind, his would take effect. Make this have a draw back or some sort before I approve this.
nope it would only work on someone attacking in his visible range. Plus it's taijutsu, taijutsu doesn't really have any super disadvantages to it besides making you tired after repeated uses and having openings if your quick enough too see them. Everyone has their own way of making an ultimate defense, the greeks for example can turn their skin to a substance harder then metal with a single thought nullifying almost all physical blows. Plus his speed would only seem faster then normal to those on his level. To chunin and jounin it would appear to be nothing special.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 8:16 am


Ace Zero
noir_kama
Ace Zero
noir_kama
Dance of The Swaying Willow
Using the hypnotizing eye of the Sharigan a skilled Uchiha can instill the idea that the user is going to dodge a certain direction causing the opponent to attack with a tendency of their attacks veering off to either side of the user making it near impossible to hit them without disabling the Sharingan. This skill can also trick the opponents mind into perceiving that the user is either standing 30 ft. in front or behind their actual location.

Imperial Cleansing Flame
With a simple thought a skilled Uchiha can summon up a wash of golden flames. These flames are unique in that they give off no heat, very little additional light and do no outward damage to any surface. Instead of damaging and consuming cells these flames regenerate cells healing wounds and creating new life. No healing can accomplished without it's costs, though the flames cause no burns and give off no heat so long as anyone is in contact with the flames they will still feel as if they are on fire. If one could stand the pain of the fire they can be healed by the flames.

Fog of The Fire Lake
This skills has it's roots in the land of waves with the hidden mist jutsu. This skill was developed as a way to counter the zero visibility mist of hidden mist ninja. While the opponent won't be able to see anything in the thick layer of fog produced any competent Uchiha will be able to see every move of the opponent with the Sharingans piercing eye. Of course this fog simply isn't normal red fog, since there is no such thing as red fog, this fog is actually poisonous in nature. When inhaled this poisonous mist causes burning in the mouth, throat and lungs which in turns leads to debilitating coughing, to tears in the lungs which of course result in death. This fog doesn't seem to have any negative affect on the user.

Diamond Dust
Takes the actual substance to be used, but when enough is collected and infused with chakra it becomes one of the most deadly weapons. When cast up into the air it refracts most all natural lights rendering the user invisible and creating countless illusory copies which don't seem to be affected by genjutsu cancelers. It can also be focused into a deadly storm of razor sharp diamond fragments which can rip through just about anything you can bring against it. These clouds can also be harmful to the user if the opponent comes to close. When inhaled Diamond dust tears apart the lungs in a matter of minutes causing the opponent to drown in their own blood.
I am sorry I will have to deny these all, They seem a bit too powerful, Get mangekyo, Rework these skills, Then resubmit them. Or you could just think of some other ones.
I could see these being to powerful for a genin or chunin, but I'm pretty confident that he's about a to be promoted to jounin right now.
The first one is more of a mind trick, As for the next one I don't see why a Uchiha would have this, Maybe if they were a healing ninja or something and they devoted their time to it. As for the next one. Poision mist? I assume this would take affect on you also? As for the last one seeming all too powerful.
yep Uchiha use mind tricks better then most. It's a fire based skill and Uchiha like to use fire, it can be used as a offensive attack as well as healing one. it's supposed to be like the lesser opposite form of amaresteru and yes I plan on him being a medical nin. On the third most people who use poisons with enough frequency tend to be immune to their own poisons or at least have antidotes formulated, so I suppose yes it could also damage the user. The 4th is no more deadly then denji genmu, in the fact that they can both be countered using wind skills to blow the substance away or back at the user.

noir_kama


Ace Zero

PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 9:35 am


Sharingan is not useually good at genjutsu till mangekyo, So I approve of them, But you can't acess them untill you have mangekyou. As for the 3rd one make it have preperation to it, So you can't perform it instantly and give the effected person a bit more time to live so they can at least try to cure themself. I will think the 3rd one over now.

EDIT:As for the last one, It's approved after reading it over. I didn't read the substance part. Just to be clear it's not a genjutsu but it seems so?
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