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 Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 7:36 am
Sauvie Seaphron Sauvie Seaphron Sauvie being awake for half a week made me advance on work mrgreen but my insomnia was defeated, How has your day been going so far? Hah take that insomnia XD! The day has been pretty great I have a class where all we do is play mariokart so I am looking forward to that and other than that I have been working on my new chapter. (half way done!) Cause I am way too lazy to look do you know which colored orb Godstone and Koosei took? well, I think they stole the one in FS's and Skulls posestion which was green, BC had the red one... I really hope that helped It did thank you 3nodding It is hard to remember intracate details in stories now, I am reading about 6, working on 2 and helping a friend with one rofl I can see why. Ah well here is my little list of the new chapter. (what I think of it)
-It is my favorite
-Longest yet
-The story is going to get really odd
-Almost done!
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Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 7:40 am
Seaphron Sauvie Seaphron Sauvie Seaphron Sauvie being awake for half a week made me advance on work mrgreen but my insomnia was defeated, How has your day been going so far? Hah take that insomnia XD! The day has been pretty great I have a class where all we do is play mariokart so I am looking forward to that and other than that I have been working on my new chapter. (half way done!) Cause I am way too lazy to look do you know which colored orb Godstone and Koosei took? well, I think they stole the one in FS's and Skulls posestion which was green, BC had the red one... I really hope that helped It did thank you 3nodding It is hard to remember intracate details in stories now, I am reading about 6, working on 2 and helping a friend with one rofl I can see why. Ah well here is my little list of the new chapter. (what I think of it)
-It is my favorite
-Longest yet
-The story is going to get really odd
-Almost done! really odd?, well that means that things are going to get interesting. Long is always good. may I also compliment your choices on villains
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Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 7:44 am
-Chapter Nine Added-
@Sauvie - You'll see what I mean, go take a look. And I am glad that you like the villan choices. 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 7:56 am
Seaphron -Chapter Nine Added-
@Sauvie - You'll see what I mean, go take a look. And I am glad that you like the villan choices. 3nodding I thought BC's orb was taken? Very good chapter, the chapter was written very well, I like how it seems that Betman is as meniacle as some would say a few select culties are cough Kooseicough Draken is in another story that questions his sanity that is better, I was worried there that Draken would only be a cameo xd
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Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 7:04 pm
Sauvie Seaphron -Chapter Nine Added-
@Sauvie - You'll see what I mean, go take a look. And I am glad that you like the villan choices. 3nodding I thought BC's orb was taken? Very good chapter, the chapter was written very well, I like how it seems that Betman is as meniacle as some would say a few select culties are cough Kooseicough Draken is in another story that questions his sanity that is better, I was worried there that Draken would only be a cameo xd You posted literally a minute after I left rofl ... Dammit I mistook what I told myself, we are going to just pretend right now that didn't happen and she has the orb at that point... we all know this is story is nowhere near my best work xp Of course Draken is in the story who else is going to have flaming sporks XD Glad that you like how the bad guys are portrayed so far.
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Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 7:06 pm
Seaphron Sauvie Seaphron -Chapter Nine Added-
@Sauvie - You'll see what I mean, go take a look. And I am glad that you like the villan choices. 3nodding I thought BC's orb was taken? Very good chapter, the chapter was written very well, I like how it seems that Betman is as meniacle as some would say a few select culties are cough Kooseicough Draken is in another story that questions his sanity that is better, I was worried there that Draken would only be a cameo xd You posted literally a minute after I left rofl ... Dammit I mistook what I told myself, we are going to just pretend right now that didn't happen and she has the orb at that point... we all know this is story is nowhere near my best work xp Of course Draken is in the story who else is going to have flaming sporks XD Glad that you like how the bad guys are portrayed so far. I am very impressed by the story... even with the occasional plot hole. The villains are well thought out, I have 5 bad guys that bell be in my story, unless I add one more (which I very well might)
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Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 7:07 pm
Sauvie Seaphron Sauvie Seaphron -Chapter Nine Added-
@Sauvie - You'll see what I mean, go take a look. And I am glad that you like the villan choices. 3nodding I thought BC's orb was taken? Very good chapter, the chapter was written very well, I like how it seems that Betman is as meniacle as some would say a few select culties are cough Kooseicough Draken is in another story that questions his sanity that is better, I was worried there that Draken would only be a cameo xd You posted literally a minute after I left rofl ... Dammit I mistook what I told myself, we are going to just pretend right now that didn't happen and she has the orb at that point... we all know this is story is nowhere near my best work xp Of course Draken is in the story who else is going to have flaming sporks XD Glad that you like how the bad guys are portrayed so far. I am very impressed by the story... even with the occasional plot hole. The villains are well thought out, I have 5 bad guys that bell be in my story, unless I add one more (which I very well might) Well thank you, anyways I am out for the night later.
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Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 7:08 pm
Seaphron Sauvie Seaphron Sauvie Seaphron -Chapter Nine Added-
@Sauvie - You'll see what I mean, go take a look. And I am glad that you like the villan choices. 3nodding I thought BC's orb was taken? Very good chapter, the chapter was written very well, I like how it seems that Betman is as meniacle as some would say a few select culties are cough Kooseicough Draken is in another story that questions his sanity that is better, I was worried there that Draken would only be a cameo xd You posted literally a minute after I left rofl ... Dammit I mistook what I told myself, we are going to just pretend right now that didn't happen and she has the orb at that point... we all know this is story is nowhere near my best work xp Of course Draken is in the story who else is going to have flaming sporks XD Glad that you like how the bad guys are portrayed so far. I am very impressed by the story... even with the occasional plot hole. The villains are well thought out, I have 5 bad guys that bell be in my story, unless I add one more (which I very well might) Well thank you, anyways I am out for the night later. yup, see you later
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Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 8:18 pm
Sauvie I like how it seems that Betman is as meniacle as some would say a few select culties are cough Kooseicough *innocently* I have no idea what you're talking about, Sauvie. who could POSSIBLY be that maniacal? :3 also, yay! Seaphron doesn't mind the random spamming! whee biggrin also, surprised Betman is uber-evil, and almost at a Raui-level of crazy. 4laugh AWESOME!! ninja my only request is that I be able to give the newest entry to the dark side a good 'scare' biggrin
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Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 8:19 pm
Koosei Sauvie Seaphron I like how it seems that Betman is as meniacle as some would say a few select culties are cough Kooseicough *innocently* I have no idea what you're talking about, Sauvie. who could POSSIBLY be that maniacal? :3 also, yay! Seaphron doesn't mind the random spamming! whee biggrin also, surprised Betman is uber-evil, and almost at a Raui-level of crazy. 4laugh AWESOME!! ninja my only request is that I be able to give the newest entry to the dark side a good 'scare' biggrin Raui For Prime Minister (Paid for buy the followers of an absolutely insane dictator)
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Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 9:05 pm
Sauvie Koosei Sauvie I like how it seems that Betman is as meniacle as some would say a few select culties are cough Kooseicough *innocently* I have no idea what you're talking about, Sauvie. who could POSSIBLY be that maniacal? :3 also, yay! Seaphron doesn't mind the random spamming! whee biggrin also, surprised Betman is uber-evil, and almost at a Raui-level of crazy. 4laugh AWESOME!! ninja my only request is that I be able to give the newest entry to the dark side a good 'scare' biggrin Raui For Prime Minister (Paid for buy the followers of an absolutely insane dictator)not the maniacal homocidal Feral? sad
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 4:07 am
Yes apart from the little mistake with the orb, i like it so far (and could I help Koosei scare the new darkling as well twisted )It is just differently written,Seaphron. You are trying something different that's all.I know others will see that too, you have too try different things to improve your writing even more , though you are a good writer at the moment. whee
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 4:10 am
I know, I could trust Koosei... I think and Godstone seems less than eager to kill the chef, but Draken or Romyion... I might need a knife at all times xd
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 4:14 am
Sauvie I know, I could trust Koosei... I think and Godstone seems less thaneager to kill the chef, but Draken or Romyion... I might need a knife at all times xd I will try not to kill the chef, though if you burn my food , who knows twisted I would keep your knife out at all times if I were you with your track record rofl
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 4:14 am
Diana Godstone Sauvie I know, I could trust Koosei... I think and Godstone seems less thaneager to kill the chef, but Draken or Romyion... I might need a knife at all times xd I will try not to kill the chef, though if you burn my food , who knows twisted I would keep your knife out at all times if I were you with your track record rofl Exactly my point
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