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 Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 6:00 pm
- Rabbits Galore - [[I think I overdid myself, since this is a test. >__>; I don't think future posts may be this long.]]
The sky was blue. There was not a cloud to be seen in the large, wide sky, and one could hear birds chirping if they didn't scare them off. Leo, however, could not hear the birds chirping, since he was too busy climbing trees and driving the poor birds out of them.
"ouch..." Leo murmured as another attempt of climbing the tree failed, resulting in his falling face first on to the ground. Well, Leo was tough. He could endure these things. One would wonder right here, why someone is struggling to climb a tree. All they would have to do is use a limb as a ledge and climb to the top. Any normal kid should have the abilities to do so.
Did Leo mention that he was climbing a tree without using his hands?
'damn it. if I don't get this soon, I'm going to be way behind.' Leo thought, dusting himself off as he walked away from the tree. When he got about four meters away from that tree, he took a deep breath and gave a dash towards the oak tree. He felt his hear give a little skip when he kept on going up the tree, his mind wandering. 'I'm doing it! this is great. by then, I'll be AHEAD of class. Takeru will be so----'
Leo had indeed fallen, his frenzied thoughts distracting him from going any further up the tree. He stayed there on the ground for a few seconds, and when he felt up to it, he woke up, looking up at the evil oak tree. HE huffed, standing up and crossing his arms, gathered his stuff, and walked away.
He gave up---- for now. pass
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 6:03 pm
Hiku Jenki my name is Hiku Jenki, I'm from the village hidden in the rain and heres a small sample of my RPing skills. *Hiku wakes up to a loud explosion 100 yards away from him* What the hell?! * Hiku jumps to his feet and runs over toward the explosion. in the middle of the a huge crater was a boy* oh s**t! * hiku jumps down into the carter to help the boy out* Hey you ok? hey kid! you o....k? * the boy turned out to be just a puppet. Hiku then begins to hear a laughter as a mist surrounds the crater* to bad Hiku, you act nice but in the end your the one who ends up dieing! * the evil laughter stops and hiku looks into the mist with his sharrigan and gets ready for a brutal battle* P.S yes I know the sharrigan is a konoha uchiha trait and if I am unable to use it because I am from the village hidden in the rain I will understand. P.S.S could I be a rouge ninja or is that not allowed on this guild? First off, you don't need * to show an action... just say it. Second you use quotes for speech... not the *. And if you decide to put thoughts in you posts make sure they are italisized
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 6:07 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 6:17 pm
Hiku Jenki my name is Hiku Jenki, I'm from the village hidden in the rain and heres a small sample of my RPing skills. Hiku wakes up to a loud explosion 100 yards away from him "What the hell?!" Hiku jumps to his feet and runs over toward the explosion. in the middle of the a huge crater was a boy " oh s**t!" hiku jumps down into the carter to help the boy out "Hey you ok? hey kid! you o....k?" the boy turned out to be just a puppet. Hiku then begins to hear a laughter as a mist surrounds the crater "to bad Hiku, you act nice but in the end your the one who ends up dieing!" the evil laughter stops and hiku looks into the mist with his sharrigan and gets ready for a brutal battle. P.S yes I know the sharrigan is a konoha uchiha trait and if I am unable to use it because I am from the village hidden in the rain I will understand. P.S.S could I be a rouge ninja or is that not allowed on this guild? is this better?
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 6:27 pm
Perhaps you should work on your capitalization too... but I'll pass you.
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 7:58 pm
This is a post from a previous roleplay I had done a few weeks ago. One of my best ones as of yet. Or so I have been told. If you want something else, let me know and I will be sure to provide. Melech Dawntreader One thing the Abyssal Lord had to his advantage.
Cover.
That pillar of energy had erected itself around him mere seconds before the spear was plunged toward his neck. Giving him just enough time, and enough cover to move during his transformation. As the spear pierced through the pillar of pure energy, it would stop as if it had struck something solid, had it struck its mark? Only time would tell. The kicks would pierce through the wall of energy, which would be the most unwise of moves, since the energy was more then enough to begin to eat away at the flesh of the Drow's legs. However, they would not strike home. Instead, the calf would be caught within something that would easily make the strongest of warriors blood run cold.
A clawed hand.
With a resonating shock wave, a powerful roar thundered through the clearing. Suddenly, what the spear had struck, and what grasped the Drows leg, separated in opposite directions, with more then enough strength to tear the spear from the Drow's grasp, while tossing the Drow himself off to the side.
Following another thundering roar, a pair of black, appendages slashed through the pillar of energy, causing it to dissipate with a powerful gust of wind.
And there he was.
The Abyssal Lord.
Hovering a good four feet above the ground, the creature hovered. That bone like tail lashed about violently behind him, its once spade tip had shifted to two long, curved blades, and the sections had gained spine like extensions. Those black tattoos literally spewed forth purple energy, which consumed his body like one large, raging flame. His body was actually smaller then it had been before, muscles more compact then they had been in his previous aggressive stance, but by no means held less power, but much, much more. His forearms and hands had altered into a vicious sight. Black, slate like plates covered the entirety of each forearm, extending off of each elbow into a sickening spike, easily able to pierce through flesh and bone, while his hands suffered the same fate. Having shifted and contorted into vicious, clawed appendages, they still kept the maneuverability of a human hand, able to grasp and manipulate objects with ease. His clothing had not changed, for the rattling of chains echoed through the clearing as they clanged together. Long, silver hair whipped around his shoulders and face violently, having grown with his transformation, those once short silver horns had also grown, now extending quite a distance upward from his scalp. His face, was no longer visible. Covered completely by a white, porcelain like mask, narrowed triangular eye holes were cut into the material. However, no eyes were visible. Just black. An endless blackness.
The Abyss itself.
One final trait topped off his transformation. What looked to be the spines of wings, extended forth into the air from each shoulder blade, pointed at the tips like another appendage, they remained spread like the wings they intended to be, even though they lacked the webs.
Slowly, the Abyssal Lord curled his left arm in front of himself, eying the black spear that was now clutched in his grasp.
It was of Abyssal origin.
"Mortal man was not meant to gaze upon this weapon..."
His voice did not resonate from his vocal chords however, but from everywhere at once, thundering through the clearing. [Edit] I hate coding @.@
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 8:28 pm
@ Melech - Excellent bit of rp. I enjoyed your style greatly, the descriptive writing is vividly done and serves to paint quite picturesque imagery. I'll pass you but please keep in mind... In the future when rping in a battle or spar, try to keep the wording of the result of attacks semi-indefinite 'e.g. if the punch/kick hits'. Because there's a chance that it might not and it wouldn't be certain until the post after your opponent responds. It's very minor but could still be considered a certain bit of intruding god-moding. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 8:33 pm
Oh of course. That was a story line where in my character Melech was supposed to kick the crap out of the opponent at the time. We were getting tired, so I decided to wrap it up XD
I completely understand what you mean, and practice such frequently.
Thanks for the pass ^.^
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 8:43 pm
The night was dark and cold, the wind nipped at his face. He sat there at the top of a tree, calming himself down. He closed his eyes and took a deep breath. The scent of nature never smelled so good... The crickets were chirping, the rustle of the leaves as the wind blew through them, and the hooting of an owl. He moved his hand slowly along his pant leg, grasping the handle of a weapon.
The hiss of an object cut through the air behind him. He tried to move away, but the object cut into the side of his arm. Exodus jumped from the tree and hid inside a bush. He closed his eyes and calmed himself. The wind blew through the trees. He could picture the layout by the sound of the wind. He could sense something moving... a large object. He carefully gripped the end of a kunai, his eyes still closed. In a swift movement he jumped from the bush and threw it at the object. He hit his mark...but it went up in a puff of smoke revealing a log. A substitution?! He looked around seeing two men fleeing...
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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 9:11 pm
Pass. ^^
Of course, you would have to roll, and stuff for throwing the kunai, but this is a good one ^^
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 10:10 am
The enemy all around him not even aware of his presence Shade,Tired and weakened from a previous battle, shade silently made his way around all the scouts but lightly bumping one he took cover but the person didn't seem to notice..whats going on...? Just then Shade realized they were all puppets! He had fallen into a trap...
Not my best piece of work...or any were near it but its all I got at this point....if I need better I can try.
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Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 11:40 pm
cjfidler The enemy all around him not even aware of his presence Shade,Tired and weakened from a previous battle, shade silently made his way around all the scouts but lightly bumping one he took cover but the person didn't seem to notice.. whats going on...? Just then Shade realized they were all puppets! He had fallen into a trap... Not my best piece of work...or any were near it but its all I got at this point....if I need better I can try. You need better... try to make it longer and it basically looks like one huge scentence with one mini scentence at the end... put in some periods...
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 6:37 am
Rin Kairiu You need better... try to make it longer and it basically looks like one huge scentence with one mini scentence at the end... put in some periods... Ya..sorry about that. That was probably one of the worst things I've ever wrote. hope this is better... Note: I know theres no power playing and such in here but this is only for the grad post. Observing the enemy's movements from the shadows ,Shade stood weary. the fighting never seeming to end...the chaos never ceasing...a never ending war had begun. all of a sudden a shuriken hits beside his head nicking his cheek he was found. Leaping from the bushes jumping from tree top to tree top shade tried to make his escape. Unable to fight all seemed hopeless as the three ninjas closed in... as one tall and muscular ninja came in for the finishing blow with his massive broad sword shade closed his eyes waiting for the impending doom...then a sound rang out. It was the sound of metal on metal. "sensei!" "I thought I told you to wait for back up!" "You know me better than that" Shade reached into his bag and pulled out a envelope as the other two squad members arrived,"I got the documents" Shades sensei ,Torvin, couldn't help but smile even though he was still mad. They had been searching for those particular documents for a month now.
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 7:35 pm
Time to pass.
RP Sample: "Daisuke get the hell down here now!", "Hell looks like I'm caught already." The Resturant Manager darted up the stairs to his loft. "There has to be a window here or something." Daisuke glanced left and then to the right to see that there was a little hole in the wall that looked like it was leading downstairs into the dinner hall of the Japanese resturant. "There you are you little son of a b**th!" The man graisped for Daisuke and Daisuke immediately reacted with a kick to the Manager's family jewels. He fell to the ground screaming out wierd things. "Oh sweet monkey balls! Yo mama!", "What a wierdo." Daisuke stared at him and walked back down the stairs.
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Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2008 7:19 pm
cjfidler Rin Kairiu You need better... try to make it longer and it basically looks like one huge scentence with one mini scentence at the end... put in some periods... Ya..sorry about that. That was probably one of the worst things I've ever wrote. hope this is better... Note: I know theres no power playing and such in here but this is only for the grad post. Observing the enemy's movements from the shadows ,Shade stood weary. the fighting never seeming to end...the chaos never ceasing...a never ending war had begun. all of a sudden a shuriken hits beside his head nicking his cheek he was found. Leaping from the bushes jumping from tree top to tree top shade tried to make his escape. Unable to fight all seemed hopeless as the three ninjas closed in... as one tall and muscular ninja came in for the finishing blow with his massive broad sword shade closed his eyes waiting for the impending doom...then a sound rang out. It was the sound of metal on metal. "sensei!" "I thought I told you to wait for back up!" "You know me better than that" Shade reached into his bag and pulled out a envelope as the other two squad members arrived,"I got the documents" Shades sensei ,Torvin, couldn't help but smile even though he was still mad. They had been searching for those particular documents for a month now. That's fine... pass.....
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