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 Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 11:27 am
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Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 11:29 am
sorry bout what?
XD I'm not mad
just gettin the point across
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Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 11:31 am
okay thanks
well here I go XD I gunna write some of my actual A* english descriptive writing for this XD
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Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 11:33 am
im so happy just got 360 back like 2 minutes ago
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Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 11:33 am
thank goodness von been workin on his grammar
but no offense the boy can rp
But his grammar be all ovah da place
I've told him this many times
child I hope he don't talk like that
XD
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Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 11:39 am
lol mis I've written 6 lines on him just stepping into the tunnel he hasn't even read the writing yet XD
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Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 11:41 am
I swear if someone rp's against me with that excess nonsense I will end up hurting someone
>.>
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Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 11:43 am
lol its quite good to read though non of its non-sense here read?
Yoh stepped into the tunnel. A warm breeze graced his cheeks before engulfing his whole body. Yoh silently stepped into the dimly lit vein like tunnel. The torches flickered, creating shadows that danced across both the walls of the tunnel and Yoh's entire being. He could barely make out where he had to walk, and so using his slight inteligence. Yoh blinked, in that breif absence of sight the tunnel had lit un a tremedously high amount. It was because of his clans unique trait for creating electricity. His hands were engulfed in a violent flurry of sparks and crackels. A high pitched sound cut through the sound of the roaring torches, it was the sparks, they were humming at an very high pitched fequency, most people would be covering their ears to this sound, but due to Yoh being accustomed to this infernal sound he merely began to walk. As he took every step, it echoed underneath the frequency of his hand. Tap...Tap...
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Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 11:48 am
Mirrors Reflection lol its quite good to read though non of its non-sense here read? Yoh stepped into the tunnel. A warm breeze graced his cheeks before engulfing his whole body. Yoh silently stepped into the dimly lit vein like tunnel. The torches flickered, creating shadows that danced across both the walls of the tunnel and Yoh's entire being. He could barely make out where he had to walk, and so using his slight inteligence. Yoh blinked, in that breif absence of sight the tunnel had lit un a tremedously high amount. It was because of his clans unique trait for creating electricity. His hands were engulfed in a violent flurry of sparks and crackels. A high pitched sound cut through the sound of the roaring torches, it was the sparks, they were humming at an very high pitched fequency, most people would be covering their ears to this sound, but due to Yoh being accustomed to this infernal sound he merely began to walk. As he took every step, it echoed underneath the frequency of his hand. Tap...Tap...
It would have made sense in a fight but you're walking into a tunnel and it's not even dark
XD
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Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 11:50 am
no I seed it was dimly lit and so I brightened it up, and okay i'm sorry if ya don't like it but that kinda writing gets me A*'s as school XD
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Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 11:52 am
well school is different
that want the sentence structure
The detal
the overexaggerated actions as present in romatic heroes
Giving them a feeling of mystery, love drama and all that jazz
*does twirly moves*
XD
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Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 11:55 am
lol I guess well sorry but it says be deatiled so hell I'll write like that for this but never when I rping I dont anyway XD
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Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 11:58 am
That's whY i tend to target people who don't rp very well
because personally I don't like typing that much
I can...but y'know it's a drag to try to pump out six paragraphs
The only reason to do it is so your opponent misses something and you rape them on that
-has so done it before-
XD
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Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 12:00 pm
lol i cant do crap like that at all
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Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 12:02 pm
You can try to be vague and catch thm on it then
But if you are to vague it can be considered godmodding
8l
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