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 Posted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 11:49 pm
Kyo softly slips his katana out of its sheath as he begins to infiltrate the target village. Focusing on his chakra, he runs up a nearby tree. He thens stealthily makes his way towards the village, jumping from tree to tree, until he arrives at the village entrance. Kyo notices three shinobi leaving the village. From there, Kyo knows his raid has begun.......
Time To Take Down Some Shinobi!
Kyo says to himself. Then suddenly, kyo jumps out and attacks this first shinobi at the left so he can get and advantage with his right hand and attack another if they come from the right. Kyo stabs the first shinobi in the back as they try to get away. after, he begun to do hand signs.....
Wood Release: Wood Locking Wall
Kyo captures the two shinobi with his wood release.Kyo then opens his hands, after he opened his hands he begun to slowly close them as he crush the shinobi with his chakra. Soon after kyo killed the last two shinobi he walked into the village awaiting his next battle!
OOC:Yea this wouldnt be my rp char,But i wanted to use doton in my rp...So did i pass?
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 11:23 am
Espada Leader Kyoukan Kyo softly slips his katana out of its sheath as he begins to infiltrate the target village. Focusing on his chakra, he runs up a nearby tree. He thens stealthily makes his way towards the village, jumping from tree to tree, until he arrives at the village entrance. Kyo notices three shinobi leaving the village. From there, Kyo knows his raid has begun....... Time To Take Down Some Shinobi! Kyo says to himself. Then suddenly, kyo jumps out and attacks this first shinobi at the left so he can get and advantage with his right hand and attack another if they come from the right. Kyo stabs the first shinobi in the back as they try to get away. after, he begun to do hand signs..... Wood Release: Wood Locking Wall Kyo captures the two shinobi with his wood release.Kyo then opens his hands, after he opened his hands he begun to slowly close them as he crush the shinobi with his chakra. Soon after kyo killed the last two shinobi he walked into the village awaiting his next battle! OOC:Yea this wouldnt be my rp char,But i wanted to use doton in my rp...So did i pass? Statements come with quotes. =d If your character is saying something, put quotes around it... Some people chooses to bold the statements too in addition, but that's all up to them. And here...well...how to put it...you really don't say an attack hits until the next post, when it's confirmed if you overcome the opponent's DB from the previous post's roll(s) or not. It's fine on one case saying something like 'if they get hit, *insert attack here* would do blah blah blah to them'. So try avoiding it. It's very minimal but still minor god-moding in a sense (saying an attack hits before its certain that it did or not). On another note, for future reference...Jutsus take six attack turns (the number of moves you can make per post that derives from your character level). Also keep in mind in the future...if it's an actual battle, stuff like Cp and deductions for using a Jutsu would be requested, as well as attaching the actual Jutsu at the bottom of the post. Fix the first two and I'll pass this. I'll expect of Gig to show you the last part in the Iwa Academy.
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 1:24 pm
Kyo softly slips his katana out of its sheath as he begins to infiltrate the target village. Focusing on his chakra, he runs up a nearby tree. He thens stealthily makes his way towards the village, jumping from tree to tree, until he arrives at the village entrance. Kyo notices three shinobi leaving the village. From there, Kyo knows his raid has begun.......
"Time To Take Down Some Shinobi!"
Kyo says to himself. Then suddenly, kyo jumps out and attacks this first shinobi at the left so he can get and advantage with his right hand and attack another if they come from the right. Kyo stabs the first shinobi in the back as they try to get away. after, he begun to do hand signs.....
"Wood Release: Wood Locking Wall"
Kyo captures the two shinobi with his wood release.Kyo then opens his hands, after he opened his hands he begun to slowly close them as he crush the shinobi with his chakra. Soon after kyo killed the last two shinobi he walked into the village awaiting his next battle!
OOC:Yea this wouldnt be my rp char,But i wanted to use doton in my rp...So did i pass? Also you do know that this was a sample and i know that this is mostly God-Moding.Yea i know that but i wasnt using the system. crying Hmmmmmm
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 1:28 pm
((Rin is back, so this would be her duty now. Since I was only doing the Academy in her absence...and I have no idea what to do because from what I've seen, you're the first to do this. Now, in a guild of 2k+ people...I'm almost certain someone in the past also did this. But from what I did see, I would still say change it, make a different sample that doesn't require god-moding.))
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 1:46 pm
Yes, an exapmle without god modding would be best, if you please. Other than that, you'r RP skills are pretty good.
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 1:55 pm
Kyo walks out of his house getting ready to go to the ramen shop and pick up some food. As kyo walks out of the house he thinks about what kind of ramen hes going to go get. After a while of walking, Kyo gets to the ramen shop and begins to order his ramen. A while later after Kyo is done eating his ramen, Kyo begins to walk back home. One he reached the door he began to dig around his pockets and realised he had lost his key. Good thing he keeps a spare under the mat though. He lifted up the mat and took out the extra key and unlocked the door back into his house. That meal had actually made him a little sleepy.
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 3:09 pm
Espada Leader Kyoukan Kyo walks out of his house getting ready to go to the ramen shop and pick up some food. As kyo walks out of the house he thinks about what kind of ramen hes going to go get. After a while of walking, Kyo gets to the ramen shop and begins to order his ramen. A while later after Kyo is done eating his ramen, Kyo begins to walk back home. One he reached the door he began to dig around his pockets and realised he had lost his key. Good thing he keeps a spare under the mat though. He lifted up the mat and took out the extra key and unlocked the door back into his house. That meal had actually made him a little sleepy. Pass
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 3:14 pm
Rin Kairiu Espada Leader Kyoukan Kyo walks out of his house getting ready to go to the ramen shop and pick up some food. As kyo walks out of the house he thinks about what kind of ramen hes going to go get. After a while of walking, Kyo gets to the ramen shop and begins to order his ramen. A while later after Kyo is done eating his ramen, Kyo begins to walk back home. One he reached the door he began to dig around his pockets and realised he had lost his key. Good thing he keeps a spare under the mat though. He lifted up the mat and took out the extra key and unlocked the door back into his house. That meal had actually made him a little sleepy. Pass ^^
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Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 6:49 pm
Cnank picked his head up for two minutes, which to any normal person would seem as so he was just staring into nothing, spacing out. He had actually been staring at a smiling fox spirit. His head shot down back at the the scroll focusing on getting the face down. Getting the subject was enough, he then switch to his brush too and work on writing the kanji's for sly, quick, and fun perfectly. Cnank stood and looked down at the scroll, then over at the spirit with he still couldn't understand. but a smile was enough of a sign. He would let it dry before rolling the parchment up and add it to the others. He patted his kimono down before he went to get some reading in, mostly likely with his new book "Journey to The West"
The divine root conceives and the spring breaks forth as the heart's nature is cultivated...
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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 5:45 pm
Kumori walked into the library. "Ahhh...a place of learning, what wonders will great me today" she thought as she walked through the shelves stacked high, full of wonderful instruments of learning. Then she asked herself, "What should I read today? A ninja scroll on training, a ninja scroll on healing, a ninja scrool on gathering intelligence?". Then she said aloud to herself, "I believe the intelligence gathering scroll will fill my learning needs for today." Though in fact she had alreadly read that scroll, and almost all of the others in the library, and had everything she had ever read available to her as information stored in her brain.
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Posted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 1:13 am
Xeithx Cnank picked his head up for two minutes, which to any normal person would seem as so he was just staring into nothing, spacing out. He had actually been staring at a smiling fox spirit. His head shot down back at the the scroll focusing on getting the face down. Getting the subject was enough, he then switch to his brush too and work on writing the kanji's for sly, quick, and fun perfectly. Cnank stood and looked down at the scroll, then over at the spirit with he still couldn't understand. but a smile was enough of a sign. He would let it dry before rolling the parchment up and add it to the others. He patted his kimono down before he went to get some reading in, mostly likely with his new book "Journey to The West" The divine root conceives and the spring breaks forth as the heart's nature is cultivated...Pass
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Posted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 1:14 am
Inu-Yasha_Kitten Kumori walked into the library. "Ahhh...a place of learning, what wonders will great me today" she thought as she walked through the shelves stacked high, full of wonderful instruments of learning. Then she asked herself, "What should I read today? A ninja scroll on training, a ninja scroll on healing, a ninja scrool on gathering intelligence?". Then she said aloud to herself, "I believe the intelligence gathering scroll will fill my learning needs for today." Though in fact she had alreadly read that scroll, and almost all of the others in the library, and had everything she had ever read available to her as information stored in her brain. Thoughts should be italisized... like this Putting quotes on your thoughts make them look like you're speaking.
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 9:06 am
[[I think I overdid myself, since this is a test. >__>; I don't think future posts may be this long.]]
The sky was blue. There was not a cloud to be seen in the large, wide sky, and one could hear birds chirping if they didn't scare them off. Leo, however, could not hear the birds chirping, since he was too busy climbing trees and driving the poor birds out of them.
"ouch..." Leo murmured as another attempt of climbing the tree failed, resulting in his falling face first on to the ground. Well, Leo was tough. He could endure these things. One would wonder right here, why someone is struggling to climb a tree. All they would have to do is use a limb as a ledge and climb to the top. Any normal kid should have the abilities to do so.
Did Leo mention that he was climbing a tree without using his hands?
'damn it. if I don't get this soon, I'm going to be way behind.' Leo thought, dusting himself off as he walked away from the tree. When he got about four meters away from that tree, he took a deep breath and gave a dash towards the oak tree. He felt his hear give a little skip when he kept on going up the tree, his mind wandering. 'I'm doing it! this is great. by then, I'll be AHEAD of class. Takeru will be so----'
Leo had indeed fallen, his frenzied thoughts distracting him from going any further up the tree. He stayed there on the ground for a few seconds, and when he felt up to it, he woke up, looking up at the evil oak tree. HE huffed, standing up and crossing his arms, gathered his stuff, and walked away.
He gave up---- for now.
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 6:44 pm
Nice nice ^^
Just one capitalisation thingy but that is super minor really XD
Pass.
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 1:31 pm
my name is Hiku Jenki, I'm from the village hidden in the rain and heres a small sample of my RPing skills.
Hiku wakes up to a loud explosion 100 yards away from him "What the hell?!" Hiku jumps to his feet and runs over toward the explosion. in the middle of the a huge crater was a boy "oh s**t!" hiku jumps down into the carter to help the boy out "Hey you ok? hey kid! you o....k?" the boy turned out to be just a puppet. Hiku then begins to hear a laughter as a mist surrounds the crater "to bad Hiku, you act nice but in the end your the one who ends up dieing!" the evil laughter stops and hiku looks into the mist with his sharrigan and gets ready for a brutal battle.
P.S yes I know the sharrigan is a konoha uchiha trait and if I am unable to use it because I am from the village hidden in the rain I will understand.
P.S.S could I be a rouge ninja or is that not allowed on this guild?
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