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Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 4:37 pm
After realizing his plan worked Raiken released the water prison technique. "Its finished." Raiken said as he performed another set of hand seals. "Wood Release: Wood Locking Wall!" As Ayami would fall towards the ground, pillars of stretching wood would rise from the ground and encase Ayami's body except her head.
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Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 4:44 pm
As the wood would encase Ayami a cloud of smoke wold appear as the wood lock wouldn't bind Ayami but it would bind a Wooden log . It seems Ayami used the split moment between Raiken's jutsus to escape by using a subsitution jutsu . Ayami would lean against the trunk of a tree as she went into hiding . As both a way to recover from her torture in the water sphere and give her time to plot her next course of action . Ayami was lucky that Raiken had let go of the jutsu or she would of been a goner . But for now she would lay in hiding while she waited for a opening .
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Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 5:05 pm
"Good," Raiken said as he looked around with his demonic pupils. "There is no use in hiding Ayami." Raiken said as he spotted her behind a tree. "With the Ryuugan Eye Raiken was one with the Earth around him. Meaning he feels everything the Earth feels, which is like eyes all over the place. " The ground was now covered with crystal blue waters, which made it easier to use water nature jutsu, but Raiken would worry about that later. "Kage Bunshin" Raiken thout as a clone appeared next to him and then moved about to strike Ayami. the clone went around the tree to try a head on attack, while Raiken performed a set of hand seals. "Whistling Winds" Raiken said as he began to lightly whistle. If Ayami would hear this then she would be trapped in his genjutsu.
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Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 5:29 pm
( put this on halt it's Sl time )
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Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 10:57 pm
Quote: Hyuuga Devoker jumped off of the boat as he landed on the hardwood of the dock. He used his arms to push him off the ground so that he was levitating in the air. He did not attempt to hide his horns anymore as they were now a part of him and they were slowly making him more bloodthirsty. He wanted the others to feel his pain. He just wanted to share his horror and show how he felt. No one really understood how he felt as everyone always left him in the dust by himself all lonely with nothing to do. Hyuuga Devoker then began walking towards Konoha which was really about five yards away from him at since Konoha was right next to a lake, that was attached to a river, that let to the Shinobi Ocean. Hyuuga Devoker had finally stepped onto the land of Konoha as he continued walking down the streets. He went to the ramen shop that had been blown up a long time ago. He noticed that they were rebuilding it and that they had been dedicated to building it because it was already half way done. Some one must have noticed as the man had killed innocent people for no reason. Hyuuga Devoker would've thought that the man was just drunk and didn't know what to do but he had changed a lot and he had hatred in him. He had regret and pain, agony, harshness, pity, desperateness, and many other painful emotions that he had learned of. Hyuuga Devoker then looked up at the night sky as it was full moon as it was the day he took a walk with Ayami. He looked at the road that had reflected the light from the moon which reflected the sun. "I am to familiar with this place." The truth is he came there every full moon to think about the things that went wrong and to get rid of all the pain and suffering. The road got him relaxed and he had many memories on the road. The memory that he thought of most was when he was walking with Ayami down the road and she noticed the road too. "Hm. Why can't the days be like that." Hyuuga Devoker continued walking as he turned the corner and immediately left his sanctuary of light and fell into the pit of darkness. He had never stayed there for such a short time. He had always gone there to eat ramen while the moon light was on the ground. It wasn't the ramen shop that made him leave so early though. It was the evil inside of him that made him turn as he overtook the good side to finish the battle and continue the war. Hyuuga Devoker had then swiftly jumped to the top of a building as he got a better view of Konoha. He had a long day and the next day would probably be even longer and slower like everyday. Everyday had seemed like it had been a week to him now that he had nothing to do except train by himself. To him, there was no reason to training at since the next Chunnin exams wouldn't be until a few months and he was pretty strong right now. He just wanted someone to talk to like always in the inside. His outside wanted to block himself out of the world though. It wanted loneliness and it was going at a fast pace of success as it ruined Devoker's life bit by bit. Hyuuga Devoker jumped off the building as he fell into the market. People were gathering the leftover items that were unsold and they began heading home. It was getting pretty late anyways and Devoker wasn't tired at all. He felt like he was a night walker and he could stay up twenty four seven and never go to sleep for the rest of the life. "My life is a piece of bull." Hyuuga Devoker continued walking until he passed by the Hyuuga Clan House. He looked at it for a few seconds as he went into a deep trance and then he looked away acting like he had never seen it before. He walked away from the Clan House and never turned around as he kept his back facing the sacred place. 725/300 Body Flicker Skill Learned
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Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 11:17 pm
Quote: Hyuuga Devoker looked once again at the night sky as he finally figured out what he was going to do. I guess I might as well try to earn some respect from my family. That is the least I can do at since I haven't lost my respect yet. I need to gain my honor back or I will go to hell and I do not want that to happen. Hyuuga Devoker then disappeared and reappeared a few yards in front of him. He continuously began doing this while he flickered to the gate yard by yard. "I wonder where everyone is. I heard there was a wedding." Hyuuga Devoker noticed that the sun was already at sun rise and it was later or earlier than he thought. He finally got to the gate as he was ready to learn his new jutsu. Before he could enter about three jounin ranked ninja from the leaf village jumped in front of him. "Halt. What are those horns of yours?" the captain of the squad said. Hyuuga Devoker looked at them and said, "It's just a jutsu that holds chakra," he lied. The jounin let him pass and he continued onto the forest. Hyuuga Devoker jumped onto a tree branch and he looked down at the floor. "I wonder what jutsu I should learn." Hyuuga Devoker then jumped back to open spot of the forest that was perfect for training. The spot wasn't to far from the gates where he won't know his way back and it's not to close where some random person might come and interrupt his training. Interruptions had been the thing lately but maybe because of the wedding things might not happen so suddenly. Hyuuga Devoker then looked at the ground and then he had done a jutsu that he had already knew and the he began spinning wildly as chakra formed around him in the shape of a ball. The ball had stayed for about five seconds until Hyuuga Devoker stopped spinning and the chakra had faded away. "The jutsu I want to learn is similar. It's a lot more powerful though." Hyuuga Devoker then focused chakra into his hands. He the pushed both his hands forward and then a tree in front of him bent a little bit and then it slowly fell down. "Damn it. It wasn't strong enough." Hyuuga Devoker closed his eyes and then began making a humming sound. He was slowly meditating trying to gain more chakra from the living things around him. He was gaining peace and quiet within himself. He then suddenly did some hand seals with his eyes closed and pushed his hands forward and then chakra blasted out from his hand about about trees a quarter of a mile busted in half and fell to the ground. The trail left a cloud of dust that would attract anybody around him or make them leave if the sound was not loud enough. Hyuuga Devoker the shook his hands from the shock of how powerful he had became from all that training that he had done. "Wow. Maybe I train a little bit to much." Hyuuga Devoker smirked a little bit and he didn't even notice that he hadn't smirked as much anymore as power and greed was taking him over. Hyuuga Devoker then cracked his hand and then he fell to the ground on his butt and he looked at the dust as it slowly rose into the air and it faded away. It took one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, and even more seconds to fade away because all of the smoke. There were no signs of any animals in a mile away that weren't burrowed underground or in hollow trees. All the animals had ran away from the ferocious noise that he had made. He noticed that there were actually a few animals that did not make it alive that were crushed by the trees that were blown away from his jutsu. That jutsu was said that it was strong enough to shatter a boulder. Hyuuga Devoker then got back up and then he also hadn't noticed that he hadn't cared about the animals that he had killed. "Oh who cares. They weren't worth anything." He just thought that they were in the world for target practice now and he hadn't realized how he used to love animals and that he would have never accepted anyone who killed animals for fun. His life had changed around the same as his personality. It was like he was back tracing his steps as he became lower and lower every second something wrong happened. 1100/1100 Eight Trigrams Mountain Crusher Learned
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Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 6:35 am
There was a powerful cloud of dust thrown up as the man who could only be Adonis slammed down a smallish box. He gingerly flipped it over making sure the lid closed properly. "He over extended his time limit," the box was the famous Pandora's box and right now it was acting as a prison for Koujin. "We'll come back for you, not right now, maybe not later, but you'll also end up in this box just like the rest of them. I only allowed him this foolish plan to show him that this fight would drag on too long and the Kyuubi's chakra would lend you the upper hand. Be glad you only had to fight him, things would have turned out much worse otherwise. We've got a wedding to attend now. Good bye Kyoshou-kun, it's really too bad that..." Adonis trailed off deciding against finishing his sentence. He bent down for a second picking up the slowly rocking box and placing it within his coat. The man turned and vanished into the air to prepare for what would come next. That left Shisui and Kyoshou alone in the canyon. She began to turn around slowly her feet dragging in the dust, she turned slightly trying to bring herself to look at Kyoshou, but her gaze refused to leave the ground. Her hand clenched in pain as she turned away and began to walk forward her form also disappearing into nonexistence.
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Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 11:20 am
Naniyori sighed as he looked at Konoha, deciding that the town wouldn't be that bad a place to live; maybe another place, another time, and it all would have been fine. But, this Konoha was certainly one he wouldn't ask to be from, as he looked at the large city built in the midst of the trees, filled with the everyday lives of the average shinobi that dwelled in the city of those who had founded the great first village. It was all filled with holes after all, and he could see dead people all throughout the streets whose bodies needed to be cleaned up, but the shinobi of the village were already too preoccupied with the fighting in order to clean up the mess, and everywhere newly formed orphans were being informed the truth; their fathers and mothers were weak, and because of that not only would their village be torn asunder, but their families had already been and...Naniyori paused, suddenly realizing that this was just his whimsical thoughts. But, the Arrancar thought for a moment and with a grin, it was simply a prelude to what was about to happen; the consequences of his coming and what was about to transpire were much worse...and the graveyard would soon be filled with the marks of the deceased as the consequences of what was to come. The Arrancar adjusted his bag, reaching into it and pulling forth something useful as he looked at the buildings that stood around him, the great gates on either side. He was literally standing on the doorstep of Konoha and they were too ignorant and blinded to realize the fate that awaited them, literally now within their own home; but that was what made it such an ironic and tearfully wonderful thing for them all. Naniyori knew that there was a reason they could live such in such a carefree and frivolous manner, but it was something that was denied to all other villages, regardless of how far they had progressed in the world of the shinobi since that day. No, there were more than a few reasons, and it was another one of the things that teased the people who lived in the world, not just those who were members of the Hidden Cloud like Naniyori; there was plenty of resentment and animosity in the world reserved just for the village of leaves, and Naniyori knew that they were a group that would eventually reap what they had sown whether they liked it or not; to simply cast off the world would not do, and that was their own mistake to have chosen in the end. It wasn't just a matter of their economic prowess either, but that was definitely an undeniable factor in what it had all come to. They were the village at the center of the shinobi world, quite literally in the middle of all of the five nations and the great shinobi villages that were built in the nations. They were able to gather not only the most missions from all other lords and all other villages, but also the commoners, those who traveled frequently, even people who had no relation to the land of fire or the great leaf village; and their reputation spread far wider than any other village, proving that they were in essence stealing the thunder of all others. Certainly the expanse of land they had, a country far larger than some others would stand as proof that they were able to move outwards, expanding and growing in a much livelier community than all the other shinobi villages built around it; and they had far more free reign than others for the expanse, allowing them to naturally have a larger lifestyle. There were more than a few resentful tears shed on their behalf simply because they could collect the fees that supported the lives of all sorts of other shinobi from all other villages, and it cause more than a little hardship to fall on others, hence the hate that spilled towards them. But that was only a small group, and certainly not one that would lead to a travesty like what was about to transpire, a doing that was in fact completely unrelated to any matter of the wallet, at least without searching out some incredibly incidental roots, and ones which Naniyori himself wasn't aware of; no, he could actually care less about just how well the village hidden amongst the leaves was doing in terms of money and fame around the world, and the fact that they collected hundreds more shinobi than some other villages was no doubt due to these reasons, making them simply a far more prosperous nation in terms of battle power, fame, economy, and all of the aspects that correlated to that portion of a nation and it's rising. Naniyori would be more interested in the aspects of the boiling hatred of past wars that some still carried more than he would care for such incidental reasons. After all, the third great shinobi war had spread animosity about the world like a plague, and it was such a recent past that those who had sacrificed their lives, most for nothing now that the Leaf stood dominant over the world, were still alive and kicking, even able to fight if it was necessary in order to secure their dream world. Naniyori didn't care about their resentment quite so much, but it spread to every single fringe village that had never gotten a chance at liberation, or empowerment and that had instead been slaughter by the Leaf Village during that time, all because of their need to maintain all of the abundance that they already had. Although they were more than willing to give away small portions in trades and deals nowadays, and even then very slim due to their greedy hands, it was still an easy thing to say that all the villages had simply wanted to become a little stronger; there were dozens, maybe even hundreds of root villages that wanted to claim part of the world as their territory and become a great shinobi village like konoha and the village hidden in the clouds, and they had been denied by the leaf village during that time, most even left strewn in their own blood, a past that the village hidden amongst leaves would not tell you about. /They had wiped out whole villages before so that they would no longer be opposed, and all of it was over such a futile thing such as land and prowess, and all of it was something so ignoble that Naniyori couldn't even consider it a real reason for the actions they had taken. And even then, the village hidden amongst the clouds and the others had done the same thing, and he couldn't condone them for such acts simply because they were one that happened to oppose him; it was merely a reason that people would hate such a village, not the reason he had chosen to act forth with his life on such an occasion. Instead, that just happened to be why the embers of hatred would be easily stirred in this new generation, which had grown up with a mask that said all was well while at home they were told of the atrocities committed during those wars, and it was part of the reason that he felt that the village hidden in the clouds was robbed by the village hidden in the leaves during that war. Even now the Hyuugas held it in their family as a sign of honor, that they had so foolishly committed one of their own to death in order of repentance to avoid a war; they were cowards, and had done such a thing so as simply to stave off the reigniting of the war that every member of the hidden cloud had wanted. Even if it was true that the village hidden in the clouds had been a bit cold blooded with such a tactic, one that Naniyori had been told all about, he could see where it's practicality fit in with the strong willed village, and he knew that had they taken the bait then the world would be a far different; and far better place because of the strength of the hidden cloud, which would have crushed the leaf into dust. But that was all about the past, and he had no ties to such a battle or such a fate, nor could he begrudge them being willing to make such a sacrifice to avoid war; cowards were prone to sacrifice their own in order to protect their own lives, and it wasn't a matter for him to deal with, the wars of the past and the hatreds that the Leaf had spread. Instead, he felt that he would simply let the past stay in that way, and he would move on into the future...although it just happened to be a future that he could eagerly await now that he was moving forward into the next generation. After all, softness was as poor a thing as brutality, and this world definitely seemed to be getting a little pudgy; the recent war that had sparked up in the Hidden villages was only a small conflict, part of a much larger wish of the world that it longed to have fulfilled. Naniyori could respect such a steely resolve, and it was in his power to give them what they had wanted; the gluttony of the Leaf would cease, and the world would be put through trials once more until it's fat little form was reshaped into an iron body, one made from struggle that would be able to crush its surroundings with muscles made of hate and the brains that were crafted from war's great tragedies. That was the future that they were moving towards with such an ignorant peace covering the entire area, and the Leaf, as he stood amongst their great buildings and homes, their people, civilians citizens AND their shinobi, were the ones who would have to endure what they had brought upon themselves with their inability to grasp just how far the veins of hatred spread into the lifeforce of the shinobi, an empowering poison that tainted all those who hadn't had their fair share of bloodshed yet, from the hidden cloud to the hidden blood, Hidden Magic to the Hidden Rain...all the villages whose peace were stolen away, not of body but of mind. And now they would regain it, because that was what the world of the shinobi was trained for, not for chasing cats or escorting old men, but for bringing about the dreams of those who put their faith in the shinobi of their homeland.
in reality, it wasn't any of those things that caused this incident, this fateful end to be brought down onto the village of the Leaf, the one that had stood at the top for so long. Instead it was simply that; they were the first village that had entered into the world, and thus they had their time at the top, standing as a pillar that was unchecked by the clans of shinobi who warred at that time. But then, instead of falling into the second ranks like they should have, the shinobi of the Leaf village chose to fight on in the war, and they were able to take the majority of the lands the shinobi had fought over, thereby claiming the Fire Nation as their home turf and limiting all other villages to the outer rims of the world where they would have to constantly fight over the scraps they were thrown. It was because of the Leaf had once again taken the top where another village was destined to stand, the hidden cloud or any other, that they were able to tell others to simply fight to the death while they sat on their throne, pompous and egotistical as they awaited the end of the others so that they could establish their empire. It was the right of the other villages to claim glory for once, and Naniyori knew that if it wasn't for those who were willing to sacrifice their own friends to maintain their position like the Leaf, the Hidden Cloud would have definitely rose above other villages in the times of war that followed. And then, even though they were at the top, they continued to build on the wounds of the other villages, claiming rank and nobility, wealth and fame, and then claiming to have the strongest shinobi in the world; such people as the Sainin and the Hokages who were legendary for having done such great things in the shinobi world, not just for their village, and the rumors of the yellow and white fangs spread far and wide as signs that anyone who crossed the leaf village would quickly meet their end. It was because of their absolute fear and their darker side that they were in the world as such a figure, and it was that which Naniyori would bring to an end here and now, all beginning with the first step. Anyone could have seen it coming if it weren't for the belief that no one would challenge the power of the Leaf, and Naniyori was now standing in the heart of the village hidden in th Leaf simply because they were a village that thought that no one would pass their gates with malicious intent. The malignant hatred that he bore was a tool in and of itself, and he would crush them using that tool so that the Leaf never rose again out of the ashes, even the phoenix of the Uchihas and the miracles of the Hyuugas becoming naught but the burned ends of a broken world. Naniyori intended to burn Konoha, leaving a scar on the flesh of the nation, so that it's own wrath boiled and so that it soon began to move in opposition to the one who had wounded it, and as a member of the Hidden Cloud that meant that Naniyori would be perfect. All he had to do was attract that hatred towards his own village, not because he wished to make the people of the Hidden Cloud suffer but because he wished to make them strong, and by forcing this war upon his own nation he would be able to create the strength in their muscles that would allow them to break the number one Leaf Village as if it was nothing more than a child's toy made of rock and dust...that was the goal of the one who always intended to become a beast to the world. He was already hated by those who he had sworn himself to, yet just by proving that he was able to use ninjutsu and genjutsu like other shinobi they accepted him as someone they would put their life in; although he could easily hear the breaking tone in their voices when they said so and thus he knew that they were lieing, waiting for him to go off to battle and die because they never intended to trust him, simply because he was himself. And if they were so weak that they would accept the aid of he, who they thought was as worthless as a member of the damnable Hidden Leaf, then he wouldn't let such an ignorant pestilence such as them to continue to wear away at his village. He would bring war with the hidden leaf to his village, and many people would die in a war that they had no part in choosing; but those who remained would be strong, and they would triumph. Of course, such ideals carried a heavy burden in the end, and he was already prepared for the consequences. The person who started the war, before he was accepted as a hero for allowing the Hidden Cloud to show their might, would be scorned as a rash individual who was so foolhardy that he couldn't tell "how much better this peace was than the depths of war". Caesar was chastised a villain for waging war and causing young men to die for years when he march north, but when he returned to Rome he was praised as a god by the citizens and they begged him to becoming a king to them because of his actions, he who their government had deemed a criminal to the empire and who they had tried to execute. Naniyori could accepted such a fate himself because he was a man who loved his village more than he loved the ignorant praise they continued to give him now to make sure that he continued to protect their fragile lives using the farce of a treaty of peace, and he would do them a far more valuable service whether they understood his motivation for years to come or not. In the world that would be made anew, they would understand what it was he was trying to accomplish, and he would not die a man whose life had been in a vain pursuit; that was simply how this would end. Naniyori was willing to bring about an end to his own comfort in order to bring an end to the oppression of those men who were truly valuable in this world. That was his nina way, and that was why the shinobi smirked, pulling forth a paper tag that he read as he smirked. Looking up at the faces above him, he was reminded of the stories people constantly told of the symbol that the Hokage faces stood for, and how they were valuable to the people's spirit beyond all reason. It was a funny thing, how easily crushing a little bit of carved stone might spark what was an international war, a battle that would likely wage far longer than any that would be started with the simple murder of an official of their village or something of the sort. Instead, he could make the ones who ruled the village look a little ugly, maybe with a large hole in their cheek made from a tiny little exploding paper, and in turn they would decide to make his own people ugly...blood ugly, with their lives spilled all over the earth. It was truly an act that only humans would perform, and the audacity of the race knew no bounds he supposed; something that again those people who he was about to embark on crushing always chastised as ignorance and 'what would lead to the destruction'. But as far as Naniyori was concerned, it was the human audacity to do such things, the human belief that just by killing for your beliefs you would be right, that allowed them to progress above the world and continue to evolved; there was no living creature otherwise that would fight for just an idea, and it was a mark of true strangeness on the planet. Naniyori was willing to touch into that strangeness and amplify it, and amplify the effects of evolution on the greatest creature in teh universe. Even though god was watching high in his heavenly throne, he was allowing man to progress down the path that he wished to follow, and the paths of destruction and salvation were hand in hand, only a sparse crack in between to decide which people would take. Naniyori would simply push them along the path of salvation, and in turn he would take the other so as to steer the greater evil away from people whom he cared about...it was a pain he was willing to bear so long as he could do that thing which he couldn't when he was young. It was enough that he could change something and, in doing so, save the lives of the most precious people to him.
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Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 1:47 pm
Naniyori sighed as he looked around, seeing that there were many people gathered around, since it was after all one of the greatest national monuments. Even Naniyori would have quite a bit of trouble if he just decided to throw an explosive tag and blow up the Hokage faces right now, and it wasn't necessarily something he wanted to do; regardless of the fact that the ANBU would probably be on him faster than the shinobi cared for. After all, it was no intelligent shinobi tactic to just perform acts of war out in the open, and the arts were always meant for surprises and assassinations. Perhaps he would have considered destroying the Hokage's faces, but this wasn't the time or the place to intelligently choose such an option, especially with the legendary Saanin about. He had a feeling that he wouldn't find any supportive allies in the area just because he wished they were there, and that meant that he would have to choose a path that was helpful when combined with his own wits and cunning; two things that easily meant that he could deal with most shinobi without even a proper amount of pointed talent. It was then though that he thought of a most useful ability, knowing that it was one that he would easily be able to use to his advantage, as no one had seen the shinobi's true arts before and thus would not be able to identify them. It was easy to say such a thing as 'I won't get caught', but actually performing to that degree required a lot more delicacy than many people were able and willing to put into a simple operation. He could already imagine an annoying fox faced boy running around claiming to be a legendary shinobi, and then doing ignorant things like leaping right into the fray without a single fore-thought only to get owned and then unleash some cheat-like power at the last moment to strike the opponent once and magically crush them like that. Naniyori wasn't so stupid as think he could do anything with such little intellectual base, and that's why he decided he would think out the next move before he proceeded with his plans; a useful endeavor since he had to keep on his own schedule, one that required him to stay in this place for only a short amount of time, whereas some action like this might normally require a year or more of planning by a shinobi, and possibly multiple acquaintances. however the fact that it was him taking care of this action instead of a shinobi team meant that he could have to cut the time short since he would not push back his own schedule for someone else, and that meant that he would simply have to bring about a war; a lot quicker than anyone else could fathom. Beyond that it required more thinking because although he could simply use is unique powers in order to easily eradicate the sculptures in the rock face, or assassinate a person, or do any of the above, it still didn't help if he reveaed his powers since he might have to use them in the future. If he used them now and people saw, and then he went to another village on a certain mission and was forced to use his true powers to eliminate a target, then it would reveal that he was the person assigned to such a dangerous mission; even if this was an order issued by his village that would then make him a target of great animosity amongst the other villages and it would only increase the call for his head, which he knew would soon end up being extremely valuable to those who wanted to slay the best. So it was that he would have to work around it, using common tactics if he wanted to cause a commotion, and that meant that he would simply have to outthink his opponents using the same wiles he always had; wiles that were unmatchable by those who didn't understand the true shinobi's heart, and those who didn't happen to possess the genius-like intellect of the rare warrior of the HIdden Cloud, who had already overcome enough adversity to pursue great power with little inhibitions even by nature itself, which had cursed him more than a long time ago. it was simply that he would bring about an end to a failed era, one that had deemed those who did not possess unique talents as worthless. He would break that mold, and prove that there was more in the world than simply another genetic trait or two which made one so far above the rest.
Naniyori sighed as he moved into a nearby shop, noting that it just happened to be a ramen shop like many of those that were spread amongst konoha, a town that was also (for reasons unknown to most of mankind) well known for all of the ramen shops that were spread amongst the city, the most impressive of which being Ichiraku Ramen. Of course Naniyori wasn't surprised to hear that something terrible had happened to that place, but it was just another bit of justification for the city that knew what it was doing to the world and refused to take accountability for it's ignorance. That was why Konoha would be the ones to eat the hatred of all the world whole, and why it was that it would be the one forced to acquiesce to the pain that it had inflicted on others in the end. Naniyori sighed as he sat down, one of the staff quickly approaching to ask what he wanted. Naniyori smiled, figuring that at least a genuine meal would be a good thing to kill time as he thought, and it was still close enough to his destination that he wouldn't have to worry about any long walking while he thought about what would be next. There was never a trap that was set without being prepared for those who wouldn't be ensnared, and Naniyori expected that this would have to apply to his own when he went into motion; the same would of course apply to his enemies, who likely wouldn't let such things go without any repercussions. "Surprise me." Naniyori said as she approached, giving them the order as quickly as she could hear and thus sending her back the way she came when she started to approach the shinobi. He would sit here and think for now while they were busy with their daily routines, and now that he thought about it it would be best to act carefully, taking into account the light and dark when he did make his move. Attacking at night carried the highest chance of success, but it also meant that it was the time when they would expect it the most, and even though they were at the center of the world they were likely not off their guard completely, since they had made so many enemies. Even if that was true though, they likely didn't expect any enemies to come at them now of all times, and that meant that he would have that much easier of a job; a country that wasn't prepared for a war at a moment's notice had no chance of success at all. naniyori knew this and planned for the Hidden Cloud, already militarily heavy, to prove that it was ready to bring the world to the order that it required, no matter what it took to do so. That was of course what he was doing with this mission, so there was no reason to rehash his beliefs now, while he was enjoying his food. The girl returned a few moments later, placing the food in front of him as Naniyori continued to think, and the shinobi smirked as he took the chopsticks and the ramen, nodding a falsified thanks to the girl before she walked off smiling. Pathetic imbreds, ignorant of the world around them and what was to come. "Itadakimasu." He said, before biting the ramen and beginning to eat the meal he'd been given as he thought about what exactly he'd do to finish off the plan he'd already started through with.
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Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 10:42 pm
Quote: Hyuuga Devoker finished learning his new move and he yawned. "How boring is this man? I only have learned half of my clan's techniques. After I learn my clan's techniques I will try to achieve my goal of learning all my leaf village techniques. Everyone would have to respect me if I did that." Hyuuga Devoker knew that his second goal was going to be a bit harder than his first goal at since there were probably sixty different jutsus in his village. Hyuuga Devoker wasn't planning on giving up though because he knew that he would have to earn more respect if he wanted people to know that he was present and he existed in the world. Hyuuga Devoker then began walking toward the city because he had nothing to do and he wasn't going to be some training freak where everyone trained everyday twenty four seven until he passed out. Hyuuga Devoker was planning on making this evened out and then he went to the lake. The blazing fires roared throughout the night sky shining on everyone’s dazed and content stare. Hyuuga Devoker there sat glazing at the great fire before his eyes. The crowd of people that sat on their portable chairs also looked at this fire not knowing what to do. It was a very long tension between everyone that needed to be cut so that everyone would burst out laughing and talking except that hadn’t happened. Everyone finished eating and the younger kids immediately darted off towards the water. They jumped in and everyone watched them wondering why they weren’t like that. More people began showing up and then someone came and immediately yelled, “Let’s play some ball!” The teens of the crowd got up as they were relieved they had something to do and everyone got into their groups and then the game of ball began. People were dashing right and left trying to get a point and then the game was over when they were tired. The kid then wanted to talk because he was so tired and he was the loud one that always got something to happen. The kids came back and now that they were back Hyuuga Devoker looked at the others and said, “Anyone up for swimming.” Everyone got up and they all raced to the water and then immediately stopped when they felt how icy cold the water was. This liquid sent chills leading up and down their spines and nobody wanted to get in. Hyuuga Devoker looked at everyone around me making eye contact and I smirked at them. Hyuuga Devoker finally decided to run in. He dived into the first wave that came to him and then everyone followed behind him. After that they all went back to the sand and they dug a hole so deep that a kid could actually fit in it and put sand back in it so it looked like the kid's neck was the only body part present. Once when the wind blew and the night sky revealed itself, then Hyuuga Devoker went back to the bomb fire. It was all lit up when he got there and we wasn’t happy that they started without him but he realized that he had a better time than them when he left. Everyone sat around the fire and everyone was all quiet like before. By then, Hyuuga Devoker was all hyper and had to question, “Why are you all so quiet? It is supposed to be happy and cheerful right?” This made everyone smile and someone had to bring out their guitar and people sung. Also someone brought Smores and they satisfied my hunger throughout the day. That whole day people were quiet, but someone broke the silence, ending the tension, and creating a bond. Hyuuga Devoker then left the beach and then headed towards the park. When he got to the park some people were there and they were talking. Hyuuga Devoker looked at them closely and then noticed that they were the same kids from his academy. Hyuuga Devoker went over to them and said, "Hey guys, haven't seen you guys in a while." Hyuga Devoker smirked a little bit and waited for their response. "There's a reason for that retard," the guy who looked like he was the strongest of them and was his arch enemy in the academy. Some other kid managed to laugh out, "Ooh. You just going to take that?" Hyuuga Devoker smirked again and then looked at the other ninja and said, "Is that a challenge because I think I'm better than you." Hyuuga Devoker began cracking his knuckles and he was going to disable the man's body and then heal him after to show how pitiful his opponent was. He had noticed that some people had been whispering because of the horns on his head. Hyuuga Devoker was able to ignore the pain and agony that he felt at since he had been used to it. It had just made him stronger anyways and Hyuuga Devoker was planning on growing strong so it benefited him. The kid stopped smiling and he looked serious and said, "I think it is a challenge. Brace yourself." He got into a fighting pose for about a second and then immediately began rushing towards Hyuuga Devoker. Hyuuga Devoker shook his head and said, "You still fight like a student." Hyuuga Devoker use his arms and then he grabbed the Genin from every side. All seven of his arms held the man and then the arms began to bring him closer. Hyuuga Devoker did a few signs and said, "Eight Divination Fields." A few of the other Hyuuga Clan students opened their mouth when Devoker used this jutsu as they knew what his next jutsu was going to be. Hyuuga Devoker activated his Byakugan and then he immediately began hitting his opponent until he hit him sixty four times in total and he let go of him. He fell to the ground and he was almost dead and he only had internal bleeding. Hyuuga Devoker smirked and then he got to his knees and put his hand over the man's body and moved his hand down his body healing the parts of his body. The boy coughed out blood and slowly got back up and Hyuuga Devoker said, "You will be okay by tomorrow. This match is over." Hyuuga Devoker turned around with an emotionless face and walked away leaving the other kids in fear and he felt like laughing and he kept it inside trying to act serious in front of the others. 1104/1000 Eight Trigrams Empty Palm Learned
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Posted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 5:21 pm
 Hyuuga Devoker began walking away from the park as he looked around. "Gah! I know why everyone is gone. They went to the wedding." Hyuuga Devoker then looked around how from the park and then he looked around and noticed that he did not know where he was. Hyuuga Devoker then jumped onto the top of a building and began looking over the village of Konoha. It looked like he was in the middle of the city and he had no vision of where the dock was. He sighed and then he randomly began flickering to the dock and he was lucky that he was going the right way. He looked around and saw that there was a crowd at the docks and then Devoker smirked. "What losers." Hyuuga Devoker quickly body flickered onto the boat and then he looked at the people at the front trying to buy tickets that were already sold out and laughed. Hyuuga Devoker sat down on the boat not even noticing the amount of people that had watched him randomly appear on the boat. Hyuuga Devoker stopped his smirking and then he slowly backed away until he bursted out into a run and went to a different part of the boat where the people didn't see him run. 214 Lines | 318 Lines
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Posted: Fri Oct 31, 2008 7:45 am
Stepping off the docks and walking into the Leaf Village. A man, and a woman stop and each turn their gaze to the area around them. "Where are we headed?" The woman asks, as she turns her head to look at the male emotionlessly. "We're just going to look around, wouldn't want to start anything uneeded..." He says as he begins walking, the female trailing behind him. "But what are we going to do, Crius?" The female whines, as Crius frowns slightly and responds. "Just look around, see if we can learn anything... What we usually do, alright, Maeva?" He responds, glancing at Maeva silently, as he continues to walk forwards, his gray eyes glancing around past his white hair, and under the brim of his hat. His arms slipping into the pockets of his pants, as he slowly moves along the streets. Maeva silently at his side, almost like his shadow, though she seemed real enough. They both suddenly chuckle, as they look around each way equally. Though the odd chuckling dies away, as they continue walking through. [187 - Cashed 2000 total]
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Posted: Sat Nov 01, 2008 2:04 am
Once again looking around, Crius slowly shrugs and leaps upwards, almost soaring through the air until he landed on a roof top, wiith Maeva following close behind him. "We're going to go train... We could use some new techniques..." He smiles faintly, loving such an idea, as he begins moving across the roof tops, still Maeva followed behind, though she was oddly silent. Without even caring to look back, Crius picked up his pace, instantly turning on his heel and leaping forward, flipping and using his chakra to let him land on the cliff face easily. With a light chuckle, he begins running up the rock, until he reached the top. As soon as he was there, Maeva simply dropped from no where, to land beside him. He chuckles and then spins around, tossing a kunai in Maeva's direction. "Training time.." He says, as he grins almost wickedly and begins moving towards Maeva. Though she moves backwards, her long black hair trailing over her face, as she opens her mouth and a series of needles shoot out, knocking into, and shooting the kunai to the ground, along with sending them towards Crius as well. He simply chuckles, leaping to the side, as he throws another kunai in her direction, though with the same dangerous effect. Frowning slightly, and seeing this was going no where. He leaped backwards and away, before spinning around and charging from the side. With a sweep of his hand, he tried to strike her, but she managed to dodge just before he was able, causing him to stagger and fall. His black hat flying off, only for Maeva to catch it easily. Now it was her turn to chuckle, as Maeva dropped the hat on the ground before him. Though Crius did not say a word, he simply slowly rose to his feet. [308 cashed]
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Posted: Sat Nov 01, 2008 7:44 am
Ayami would open her eyes slowly as she stared at the ceiling of her one bedroom apartment . She was still in her ripped blood stained dress she had worn to the wedding . She would soon rise from her bed and rub her eyes and stretch . " What a wedding " Ayami stated as she motioned over toward the closet . With her right hand she would slide the door open and take her Chuunin vest off of a hanger and place it on the bed . She would then move toward the wind and open it . She would notice that it was fairly chilly out today and knew that it would only get colder. With a heavy sigh Ayami would close the window and move to her next destination of her dress . Which was also in the closet on the opposite end of where she hung her vest and cloaks . Opening the draw Ayami would grab a pair of black pants and a black long shelve turtle neck . She would also grab her under garments and place them on the bed along with her vest , her long shelve and pants . She would then grab a towel and make make her way toward the shower to get clean and ready for the day ahead of her . [ 211 words , 3492 ]
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Posted: Sat Nov 01, 2008 8:06 am
Raiken sat under a waterfall and sat in a indian stance. He began to focus his chakra around his body causing him to slightly levitate and the water that would fall on him to rebound away. Raiken closed his eyes and then began to train alone in his head.{"Good good. You are progressing quickly. That is very good indeed. I will now begin to teach you the other techniques from my clan. Up next is the Minor Electric Current. This technique will allow you to send out a small wave to electricity that will surround an enemy and shock them for a few moments before it fades away. The stronger the user, the stronger the effect of the technique." His sensei then began to take out his two hands and revealed them to hold nothing. Then he began to charge them by concentrating Raiken his chakra to gather static electricity from the surrounding.After a few short moments his sensei's hands began to crackle with small amounts of static electricity as they coursed around his fingers. He then demonstrated by having already prepared two dummies for them to use as practice. "See those dummies? We will be using them instead of real life targets since with the body being seventy-five percent water, we would not want to shock ourselves when using this technique or on each other. Now watch carefully." He said as he then began to take his hands and point them at the dummies while extending his fingers out.As he extended his fingers, it seemed that the electricity that had gathered at the palm of his hands began to travel out to the dummies in an attack. The electrical discharge was slightly loud, but it was more subtle since there was not much of a reaction from the dummies. The electricity did as it was intended to, shock and keep on shocking the enemy until it slowly faded away. The attack did not last long, so Raiken could only assume that his sensei had not released too much at once on the dummies and was more than capable of unleashing a bigger attack than the one just witnessed.His sensei then turned back to Raiken and said, "Well now it is your turn. All you must do for most of these techniques is concentrate your chakra into a physical form that will then become electricity. Once that is accomplished you will basically have the basics down for half of these techniques. For this one you will need to concentrate and then unleash the attack creating a paralyzing effect that will keep your enemy at bay while you have ample or a small amount of time to do as you please within that time frame." He then began to watch Raiken practice in silence, keeping close watch.Raiken breathed in slowly and then began to practice gathering chakra with one hand. This would be easy since he was used to molding chakra, but had not really ever manifested it into a physical form for use yet besides creating a chakra-based weapon. Once he began to gather the chakra, he could feel a warm sensation that was beginning to change as the chakra became electricity. Once the electricity course freely around his hand he then pointed it out at the dummies and unleashed his attack. At first it seemed to fizzle, but then charged out of his hand and out at the dummies..As the attack came out of Raiken's hands and hit the dummies, the electricity keep on sparking as it then continued to circle around the enemy causing sparks to flare up as they continued and then faded away. Raiken then looked up at this sensei for approval and saw a nod. He then lowered his right arm and then waited for further instructions. "That was marvelous. Now this next technique will be more of a taijutsu based technique, but will still require some concentration since it does require you to create something using the elements." He said and then waited.,After the momentary pause he resumed his speech and said, "This next technique is called Hands of Thunder Technique. It will allow the one that uses the technique to create gloves that will encase the user's hands in electricity that will give them and extra edge when attacking with their hands. These gloves will allow the user to give shocks to the enemy if the attacks connect correctly." He then began to give a small demonstration of the technique in use. First he concentrated his chakra focusing it into electricity as it began to crackle while it formed in his hand.As the electricity crackled about his sensei's hands, it began to become dense as it took on the shape of gloves that wrapped around his arms. Once the gloves had hardened to a degree the flow of electricity began to flow around the gloves, giving them a bright yellow hue. He then began to jab the air to get a feel for the gloves before returning his gaze back at his student. This is what Hands of Thunder will allow you to do. You will be able to manipulate lighRaikeng to your liking in the form of gloves. Now let me show you what they can do when used properly in combat."He then sprinted to one of the dummies and then punched it in the chest cavity. The electrical gloves discharged a spark of voltage that sizzled out of the electrified gloves and into the dummy. The dummy, though made of mostly wood, began to have sparks buzzing about it as it was knocked backward and bounced back. Raiken's sensei then continued Raiken to jab at the dummy until it was beginning to show signs of wear and he was slightly fatigued, but not too much, only his breathing had changed slightly. He then motioned for Raiken to come closer to begin his own practices.Raiken then began to rub his hands together and then saw sparks coming from them. It was a sign that that he was beginning to be able to summon forth lightning without having the need to heavily concentrate on focusing his chakra into lightning. As he continued to rub them together, more sparks came out of his hands and slowly began to circle around his fingers and the palm of his hand until it encased his hand completely. Once the lightning had completely encased his hand it hardened and then became denser. As soon as it was dense, Raiken punched the dummy with his fist.As Raiken punched the dummy, there was an electrical discharge from the glove that connected with the dummy and sparks flew out. The sparks circled around the dummy and then sent a small shockwave that pulsated throughout the dummy's body. It seemed to twitch as it was shocked and went into a somewhat paralyzed looking state as it was motionless with sparks that jumped around its body. "Well done. It seems you have a knack for learning the element of lightning then. This next technique is a little fun since it will basically electrify your opponent's body.The Static Electricity Aura Technique is a technique that will inevitably paralyze and shock your opponent's body causing them to be shocked since their body becomes a giant electrical magnet to all things that they touch which will in turn shock them back with painful jolts of electricity. This technique requires you to electrify your opponent and to do this you must transfer your chakra that has been converted to electricity into them. For it to work properly I suggest using a medium of sorts to make it easier like the gloves from Hands of Thunder." He said as he continued.He then walked around toward the dummy and then pointed to it and said to Raiken, "Look here. Once you charge up your attack and hit your opponent their body will be full of electricity that they will upon touch be electrified instead of the opposite where they would be shocking those that they touch." He then began to gather chakra in his palm and then focused it into a dense material until it was in the form of lightning. Once the lightning was flowing freely he then took his entire hand and jabbed it into the dummy. The dummy then began to twitch a little.As it twitched there were sparks of electricity that flowed through the dummy and coursed out while causing a static noise to occur. "See this? This is the effect that will happen once you fully get the effect of the technique to work properly. The user's electrical chakra will surge from the gather portion in the user's body into the target and cause them to become a walking fuse box that will be electrified. Now I want you to go practice on this technique after seeing me demonstrate it for you. Is this too hard of a request for you to accomplish?” He asked.Raiken shook his head and began to practice the technique with as much concentration as he had given his other instructors. First Raiken began to concentrate his chakra into the palm of his hand and then it began to flow like electricity as it made a buzzing noise. It was the correct sound because the electrical impulses began to become more stable. Raiken then focused the now potent chakra into a moldable form. As the chakra began to take shape it grew brighter and brighter until it was almost close to pure energy that was flowing out of his palm. Raiken then slowly took his hand and made a fist out of it.As soon as he made his hand into the shape of a fist, the electricity formed around his hand and then transformed into the one of the gloves of the technique Hands of Thunder. Once Raiken was ready, he then took the glove and charged it up with his chakra. The glove took the charged up chakra and converted it into pure electricity within a matter of seconds. Raiken was amazed at the way the glove instantly took the chakra and changed it to electricity within moments of it being formed. The glove was now charged up and ready for use as he slowly pulled his arm back for a punch.The glove screeched with the sound of electricity as it was ready to connect with the dummy. Raiken then swung his arm forward and the glove connected with the dummy unleashing a large electrical discharge that caused the dummy to recoil to the amount of force that was being pushed against it. The dummy then began to mimic pain as if it was able to animate itself without any strings or a puppeteer controlling it. The dummy seemed to twitch its arms and legs in what seemed to be agony as it seemed to try and escape the pain that it was receiving with each object that it touched.Raiken sighed as he was a little exhausted from having to gather his chakra and then having to concentrate it into a more potent form of static electricity. His body was slightly shaken since he was also absorbing the static electrical impulses that were escaping from the gloves. It seemed that he would need to learn to master the ability to endure the pain from electricity or at least try to come up with a way to repel it from hurting him as well as the enemy. He lifted his right arm that still had the glove from Hand of Thunder and then released his concentration that held the glove together.As he rested a little to regain some lost stamina his instructor told him that he had done an excellent job at attempting his first try and that he would have to practice it a little more before he could freely use the technique without the need of assistance from other techniques to channel the electricity to empower it. Raiken nodded and then got back up from where he was sitRaikeng and resumed his practice of Static Electricity Aura Technique. He tried it this time without the glove and found that it was rather difficult without the aid of the glove to guide the electricity into the right place.Raiken then stopped his session when his sensei said that was enough for the day. He then told Raiken to go inside and get something to eat before the continued again. Raiken bowed to his sensei and then began to walk inside. Once inside Raiken greeted his parents and scrounged through the cupboards and found some ingredients for a sandwich. As Raiken prepared the sandwich his parents came in and asked him how it was going with the training. “So how is the training been going?” His father asked him as he was puting his sandwich together and then began to eat.“It’s going well. I’ve already learned all of the techniques from the instructor from the Dattoumaru Clan. I am taking a small break before continuing with the instructor from the Sinobi Clan.” Raiken said and then munched on a part of his sandwich. “Ah I see. Well whenever you are finished with the training with my friend from the Sinobi Clan please thank him for me and then see me about further training. “ His father said and then got up and left Raiken to finish his sandwich in peace. As he left he silently smiled and hoped that his son would do well and surpass all expectations.As Raiken finished his snack in peace, he wondered what was in store for him once he resumed his training. He knew that there was only so much that he could learn and that he could not possibly learned it all at once. Even with this in mind Raiken did not care. He knew that from the beginning that he was destined to become a shinobi. How great of a shinobi was a different matter. All that mattered to him was that he accomplished his first goal in becoming a great shinobi and that is to master all of the techniques that were known to his village as soon as possible before moving on.He had an idea of what his father wanted from him and it was for him to travel to distant villages and to learn the ways and customs of other villages to get a better understanding of their ways and to learn their techniques. His father was not as an ambitious man as most other parents that wanted their children to become the best of the best and that meant overcoming obstacles that were next to impossible at all costs only to receive little or no recognition from their own parents. Raiken finished his sandwich and then stepped back outside into the training grounds ready for another session of training.“I take it that you are rested up and ready to move onto the next half of the training then?” His instructor said as he gulped down water to refresh himself before continnuing. Raiken nodded that he was ready for more of the training. “Good. Let us begin then. Now these next techniques are not going to require a dummy, but you will be the target instead. As you did with the taijutsu training with the instructor from the Dattoumaru Clan, you will be with me, but instead we will be working with jutsu that uses chakra to cause lethal attacks to strike the enemy.I cannot use lethal force against you for you are my student, but instead I will only use a small fraction of my overall chakra. Now prepare yourself because these techniques will be fully of electricity and will require much mastery to be able to fully use them to their full potential. Now this next technique is called Electrical Discharge. It will enable you to stun your opponent with an electrical discharge that is emitted from your body. It will only temporarily stun them, but that is all the time you need to get away or to execute an attack in succession after performing this technique.Now first you will need to concentrate your chakra and form it into a pure concentrated form that will be used to create your electrical attack. It will be the same chakra that has been used for all of the other techniques so far. Once you have your electricity you are then able to touch your opponent and they will be paralyzed.” He said and then showed Raiken, the gathered up chakra that was barely noticeable in the palm of his hands. “Now watch carefully since I will be demonstrating on you first and you will be practicing using me when we spar.” He said.He then began to move the gathered chakra toward Raiken and upon touch Raiken felt a tinngling sensation that left him numb. He felt all of his ligaments and tendons give way and then become stiff and rigid. Raiken could not control his body for it was being sent electrical impulses that were stopping the normal flow of electricity throughout his body causing him to freeze up. He could not move a single part of his body and when he did try to move it, he only managed to topple over and hit the ground hard. He was stunned with the technique, but within a few seconds he was free.“That is the beauty of this technique and also the true power of it. You charge up your chakra and infuse electricity into it for an attack that will cause your opponent to be stunned. While they are stunned for the short time that the technique is in effect you have time to flee or continue to assault your opponent with a barrage of shuriken to other high level jutsus with more precise aim since they will be paralyzed and unable to move. Now I want you to come at me with the technique while we spar. This will be like any other sparring, just with a twist.” He said as he prepared for an attack.Raiken prepared for the sparring match by holding his palm out in front of him and then began to concentrate on it to create the chakra that was going to be used to stun his instructor, but before he could finish his instructor rushed up to him and said, “Too slow! You’ll need to be faster if you want to be able to use that at any given moment on the fly against an enemy that is far superior to you in speed and agility.” His instructor said as he then began to dodge all of Raiken’s attacks while beginning to counter with his own attacks that were already charged up.His instructor then struck Raiken about a dozen times in his chest cavity. With each strike, Raiken felt a discharge of electricity that flowed throughout his body. Each burst of electricity coursed through his body and then it made contact with his nerves and muscles, causing them to become stiff. Crap! Raiken thought as he tried to push his body’s limbs to move against their already stiffened state. It was pointless since his body had become immobilized and he was now being struck several times within a minute on top of already being stunned.Raiken tried to move, but it was futile and his instructor then said to him, “You are going to need quicker reaction time if you want to dodge my strikes.” He then stopped his assault to let Raiken become less paralyzed as the effect wore off. Raiken rubbed his limbs since they became sore from being stuck in one position for more than a minute. “I guess that I still have much to learn in the agility of a shinobi before I pursue a career in the ranks of Anbu Black Ops.” Raiken said as he was helped up to his feet by his instructor. “Yes you will have some difficulty, but for now practice.Only through intense practice of the same routine over and over will you be able to fully achieve the required speed and agility that you need. Now once more and this time try to dodge.” Raiken’s instructor then began to take up his stance again and let Raiken make the first move. Raiken got into his fighting stance and held up both of his hands as he began to focus his chakra once more into the finger tips of his hands. Once the chakra flowed to the tips, it began to change into electricity that gave small sparks that flared out. Raiken had become slightly more proficient and was progressing rather quickly.He made the first move and lunged out at his sensei, but it only proved that the speed behind his attacks were lacking since his sensei dodge the attack and began to counter. Raiken’s sensei countered with his own form of attacks by fusing the electric chakra into his fingertips as well and jabbed Raiken’s arms aside. The jab was felt by Raiken as he slightly winced and felt the electrical discharge flow into his arm only paralyzing him for a short amount of time. Raiken then decided that it would have been wise to use taijutsu or any form of non-ninjustu to get out of the way to find an opening.He kicked out his leg to try and knock away his sensei’s arm that was trying to retract for another strike, but instead of striking again, his instructor moved to the side and dodge the kick completely. This was what Raiken needed as an opening to prepare his next attack. Raiken spun around in mid-kick and while in the air, he performed a half summersault as he then pounded his sensei with four quick taps to the shoulders in rapid succession. Once the taps were applied, Raiken then used the momentum from his half summersault to give speed and power to his kick that he landed on his sensei’s right shoulder.The kick knocked his instructor off balance and caused him to be forced to kneel down on one leg before collapsing to the ground. Raiken then landed on his feet as he turned around to see that his sensei was getting up and then it startled Raiken at the astounding speed that he saw his sensei move since he could barely keep up with the movements of his hands and could only feel the taps of the fingertips that were jabbing them into his chest. Raiken the keeled over as his body was rendered useless to him through paralysis. After a few moments on the ground, Raiken’s body began to free up from the paralysis.As soon as Raiken was down on the ground his sensei pinned him and said, “That’s enough of this for now. We will now move onto the next part of your training. The next technique will not take you long too to learn, since you already know who to summon forth electricity through chakra. You will now be learning how to thrust out the electrical chakra in short bursts that will create a lightning bolt of electricity that will be used against the enemy.” His sensei then helped him up from the ground and made sure that he was not too damaged and tired before moving on.“Now, first of all you need to be able to form electricity out of chakra. We have already done that which is the basic of all the techniques I have taught you so far. Next you will then expel that electrical chakra as in a small discharge, but instead of small sparks, you will get bolts of lightning that will come out of the palm of your hand or the tips of your fingers. If used correctly and in rapid succession, it could be a deadly technique as all techniques if used by a master.” He said as he turned his attention from Raiken to a dummy to demonstrate the technique.His instructor then shot his hand out with his palms outward at the dummies and instantly within that movement, lightning bolts shot out of each of his palms. The lightning bolts shot out at the dummies and instantly scorched them upon contact as they left his sensei’s outward faced palms. Once the lightning bolts had dissipated, the scorch marks sizzled as smoke appeared from them. Raiken watched in awe as he looked at his master who turned his attention back to Raiken and motioned for his pupil to begin his practice of the jutsu. “Alright then Raiken, it is time for you to try.”Raiken nodded at his instructor and began to focus the chakra into the palm of his hands. He gathered at a slow rate to ensure that he would get the right about. The chakra moved from within his chakra network toward the palms of his hands. Raiken then turned toward the dummies with his palms filled with chakra that had been gathered. He then converted it into lightning and soon had sparks flying out of his hands as he tried to control the power of the raw lightning. Raiken winced a little when one of the sparks strayed away from his palm and singed a part of his cheek, but he continued.Raiken then concentrated his mind on getRaikeng the chakra out of his palms in a blast that would be shot out at the dummies. He raised his palm slowly up into the air and as he did this the lightning sparks trailed behind his hand as he continued to raise it. Once the hand was raised to shoulder level height, Raiken placed his left hand over his right arm to steady it since he was shaking from the raw power of the lightning that was gathered into his palm. As he continued to shake, Raiken tried to aim the blast at a dummy, but it seemed that he was shaking far too hard to properly aim his hand.Raiken tried his best and fired the blast of lightning when he steadied his arm after several minutes of trying to get it to straighten out in the direction of the target that he had chosen. Raiken then closed his eyes and fired the blast outward. He felt his hand recoil from the power that was unleashed since his hand was pushed back and so was his body as he slid back a few meters from where he previously stood. Raiken looked up and saw the attack fly out at the target. It was on track until it was slightly deterred from its target since it seemed that Raiken had not properly steadied his arm.....[next]
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