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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 3:24 pm
" Hey raiken ive been good doing some recon ." Ayami would state as Shun had picked up her presence . " Raiken what do you get of him ?" She would question Raiken in hopes that his ryuugen could give her any details . She would just look down at the Shinobi with a smile . " Im sorry did i interupt something Uchiha " Ayami would call out at the shinobi .
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 3:33 pm
Saosin Teres Once home, Saosin sits on the couch in the living room and awaits her fate. As she waits she thinks on what happened at the bus stop. Who was the person speaking to her? Was what she was seeing something she made up or did it happen… was it going to happen? No, it was supposed to have happened but something stopped it. She shakes her head and exhales roughly as she hears the front door creep open. She hugs her knees to her chest as she hears footsteps. “From the front door to the corridor. From the corridor to the kitchen opening. Now he stops, probably waving at mom in the kitchen on his left. Now he’s walking again. Not long before he gets to a opening to his right leading here,” she thinks as the footsteps stop again. “Mom forgot to tell him,” she whispers and then a figure stands in the doorway. Her heart pounds as a male enters the room. Unlike her blond haired mother, this man had blazing red hair. The two of them had the same brown eyes though Saosin seemed not to have them; her eyes were blood red. He seems to stop, just as her mother had, as Saosin stares at him. He wore a wrinkled brown button up shirt with the top button unbuttoned to show the collar of a white t-shirt. He wore dark brown slacks and dress shoes. He looked exhausted from work. Saosin stares at him a while when the figure from before appears beside him. “This is who you’re afraid of?” “I’m not afraid.” “You’re shaking.” Saosin looks down at her trembling hands and bite her bottom lip. “Let me out.” “What?” “If you need me then let me out.” “Who are you? Why would I need you? What’s happening to me? People are suddenly stopping, your shadow, my eyes changing and my hair, my voice becoming yours. Answer!” The figure appears to chuckle at Saosin before appearing right beside her. Her eyes bulge as the figure traces her finger along Saosin’s neck. “If only he made me a Nara. The neck is so fragile. You’re open to attack, young one.” She removes her finger and places it under her chin. “Do you wish to know who I am?” Saosin stares blankly across the room but nods slowly. “I am the messenger of death.” “Death?” “No. Not even close. I am a tool that He uses to make fun. I will bring about death and destruction. I will end this world.” Saosin’s eyes dart to her right but the figure was gone. She inhales and then exhales a few times before her heart beating heart settles. “Call on me. Let me out. Free me from within you. I am your Angel… Angel of Death.” Saosin places both hands over her ears and shakes as she stares across the room and the figure disappears from behind her. Her father turns his head and smiles at her then his eyes fly open. Saosin watches in terror as a blade bursts from his chest and his throat is slit from behind with a kunai. As soon as one drop of blood hits her, Saosin lets out a blood hurtling scream. “Saosin,” calls a voice but she keeps screaming as she begins looking at her hands. “Blood,” she cries, “It’s on my hands! My fathers blood! Daddy! Mommy!” Finally, the same light as before fills the room and Saosin sees her father shaking her. She pushes him back and back flips over the back of the couch. She pants heavily as her father stares at her. “What’s the matter, Saosin? Why are you screaming?”She just continues staring at him in disbelief. He was dead. She felt his blood on her. She slowly looks down at her hands to see no traces of blood. She slumps to the floor and places both hands onto the ground. Was she losing her mind? Why now? Why is she losing it now? Who is the figure actually? There’s no way it can actually be the thing it says it is. Saosin’s mother steps over to her and wraps both arms around the stunned child. Saosin does not hug her back and continues staring at the floor.
“I don’t know what triggered it. Maybe I was too harsh on her today.” “Don’t blame yourself,” Saosin’s father sighs as the sound of her mothers sorrowful cry comes from outside of a yellow door. Saosin lays in bed sleeping as her parents talk outside her room. Saosin sits on a checkered, black and white, floor with both hands on her lap. She wiggles her feet a bit so they don’t fall asleep under the pressure of her bottom. “What is this place?” Saosin gasps noticing that somehow her thoughts were being said aloud. She tries to speak but no words come out. She grimaces as she sits on the floor. “Look who came to visit,” laughs the voice of the figure as Saosin’s eyes dart around. “What is that supposed to mean? What is this place? Show yourself,” Saosin thinks angrily which makes a laugh echo over the area. “Are you supposed to scare me,” asks the voice in slight surprise, still laughing. “If you aren’t scared then reveal yourself to me.” The figure appears a few feet from Saosin. Her black shape lashing about as a white space shows in the form of a smile. “I am not afraid of you at all. I’m doing this for your own good. Until the time is right, I shall not reveal myself.” “What?” “Here,” the figure flashes in front of Saosin and kneels. Saosin pushes back from the figure only for it to wrap one arm around her waist to keep them both in place. She outstretches her hand that held a small red and black box. “This is a Gift of Death. It is a boost in your powers. Whatever you learn in here will be learned far faster than in the outside world.” Saosin stares at her perplex. “And in the real world?” “In reality, you have the skills you learn and the chakra bestowed here.” “So here I learn faster and the things I learn and my level manifests into reality?” “Of course. Now, take it. Go ahead.” Saosin reaches out to take the box then stops and then reaches for the box once more. As soon as she grips the box she sees a vision. A female with blond hair and starry eyes was staring at her in terror. There was tattered land all around them. Saosin watched her with a smirk on her face but it didn’t seem to be the true of. Her hair was again a blond color while her eyes were a bright blue color. Upon her face was an odd red and black mask. It had blotches of red like spattered blood and was completely black. Reina was hiding something behind her back. Just when Saosin wonders what’s behind her back she sees red eyes peering from behind the blond. Saosin gasps and her eyes fly open. She sits up in her bed and clutches her orange blanket in her hands. She presses it to her chest and tries to catch her breath for a few moments before covering her mouth with the blanket. “That boy,” she murmurs into it then covers her head with the blanket. She stares aimlessly as she remembers the boy that the blond haired woman was protecting. He had red eyes like her and red hair like her fathers. He was pale but healthy looking. He seemed to be slightly afraid of her while a bit sad. Who was that boy?
Time passed and the figure stopped bothering her. Her dreams were normal, things didn’t slow anymore, and she was beginning to believe the whole thing was all in her head. “Today you graduate from the Academy, Saosin,” praises her father as she smiles at him from across the table. She scoops some cereal into her mouth as her mother rubs her hair. “I can’t believe it. So young and already a genin,” her mother sighs. “Oh, mom. Please, no water works.” “I can’t help it. My baby’s growing up and leaving me so soon,” she whimpers and her father pushes away from the table. He stands and stares at her mother who walks over to him and buries her head in his chest. Saosin watches as tears come to her eyes but she does not cry. Her mother was doing the crying for her so she figured her crying was unnecessary. Words = 1,436
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 3:45 pm
Raiken replied,"Here is everything. He knows these techniques:Sharingan LvL 1,Body Flicker.Henge no Jutsu, Bushin no Jutsu, Art of Substitution,Tree Climbing,Water Walking. He mainly uses sharingan and his made up technique infused with his academy techniques. Thats all that is important for now." Raiken said as stood up and leaped down from the tree. "I have a technique I would like to show you Ayami." 64
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 3:52 pm
Shun looked up at the two of them. "If your going to call me something don't call me by my last name" shun said watching the two of them closely, the one on the right was a cloud nin, he had an eye simialir to both of the two of them but his had no offensive cabilities. The other was Ayami uchiha, she had recntly passed the chunin exams and was well on her way to becoming a powerful ninja. He had heard of her also having gotten a new power. One far more stronger than beofre. "Mangekyo" he said in a low tone looking up at the two of them. His own power was nothing compared to the two of them. "Ayami was it, can you at least call me shun" he said to her as he looked up, his own sharingan still active. Quickly he body flickered up to where the two of them were." now then, we can have a normal conversation" shun said, his eyes going back to deep silver.
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 3:58 pm
Ayami would watch as Raiken jumped down from the tree . He explained he had something that he wanted Ayami to see. At the same time the Uchiha Shun would appear on the same branch as Ayami . She quickly notice that he deactivated his Sharingan .But she didn't she let her three pupil eye look at the shinobi's every movement . " Go ahead Raiken show me what it is you want me to see. " Ayami would shout down to the cloud Shinobi. While still glancing down Ayami would answer Shun's question . " Sure Shun i wont brand you with the Uchiha name . " She said with a slight chuckle and smile .
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 4:13 pm
"Fine, you watch too Uchiha." Raiken said as he began to perform a series of hand seals. "Watch this!" Raiken yelled as he performed one final hand seal. " 100 Clay Minions- Release #1-Kasai" Raiken exclaimed as a humanoid form began to rise from the ground stand. "This is the first of the 100 Clay Minions. Each of them have a unique ability that separates them from the others. They also cover each style: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, and genjutsu. Most of them are fatal, and if not fatal they will give the user the utmost advantage in battle." Raiken said to the two shinobi. "One more thing, I have reached the final stage of the Ryuugan Eye. My soul has become one with the world around me, I can also see into the past, present, and sometimes future. I also have the ability of 'Astro Projection'. meaning I can place my image any where in time and space. Like this." Raiken said as he widened his eyes and a copy of him instantly formed behind the two ninja on the tree branch. "So Ayami, have you learned anything new since last time we met?" Raiken asked as he dismissed the clay minion using a single hand seal. 206
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 4:20 pm
Shun watched and litsened to the man speak. "Interesting" he said aloud as he watched, he could tell he was a strong nin but how strong was he compared to other ninja of higher rank. Feeling sort of angered by the uchiha comment he let out a sigh. "Shun....please call me shun sir" he said to the man who called him by his last name. Not that he wasn't happy he was alive and well and part of a very powerfu; clan he didn't like being called a simple uchiha. He layed his back against the branch, his two blades at his side. "You two must be apart of the same team" he said looking at the two of them. He then shifted his eyes to Ayami when the man aske dif she had asked about any new power she had gotten. For some reason shun had been curious of her since he first saw her. "That power that man used, does she have t as well" he said in his mind, right now he was letting his uchiha ability get the best of him. His sharingan came back on, almost instantly without him uttering a word. He wanted to see how she did it, how she achieved that power he knew she had.
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 4:29 pm
" My eyes as well have advance but i still haven't mastered everything that came with it . Ayami stated as she turned around to look at the astro protection that raiken had created . " His eyes as so advanced to be able to project himself like that is something else..A very reliable skill at the least." Ayami stated to herself as she turned back to Raiken . " But my ability of genjutsu has increase to a decent level still in the works but its moving along as planned . " Ayami stated as her crimson red eyes watched as Shun stared at her willing to learn her secerts of the sharingan . " Im glad your aboard the team Raiken " Ayami would state as the wind would blow through the trees and ruffle her hair .
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 4:57 pm
"Team?" Raiken questioned. He still didn't let down his Ryuugan eye. "And might who all be on this so called team?" The image of Raiken placed his hand on Ayami's shoulder and smiled with curiosity. "There is one more that is destined to be on this team. that is, if he lives long enough." Raiken stated to Ayami," I apologize Shun and please do not call me sir, you make me feel kinda old." Raiken said without showing any emotion at all. 82
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 5:07 pm
Shun simply watched the two of them"This team, is it looking for memebrs" Shun said asking in a sort of bored tone, quite frankly all he wanted was to know more about his clan and in order for him to do that he'd have to hang around with Ayami for a while. "Oh, sorry but you haven't exactly given me an introduction of who you are" he said looking over to the man, his eyes still crimson red. As the gust of wind blew his hair went back a bit showing a sort of scar on shuns left eye, it looked more like a burn mark. Looking over to Ayami shun smirked. "You seem quite upbeat, are you always like this" he said, he wasn't trying to be a smart a** or anything but that was what he did, asset the situation and come up with an assumption off the information he has been presented with. Many of his proctors back at the academy told him to become a specialist in analizing battle tactics, he never really had much interest in it though
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 5:18 pm
" Just me , you and Hido as of now ." Ayami stated aa she looked at Shun . " At this point Shun your not strong enough yet . " Ayami would say with a serious face as she looked downward to Raiken . " What do you mean if he lives ?" AYami questioned regaurding the last thing Raiken had said . [ Shortie , sorry sweatdrop ]
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 5:20 pm
Quote: Hyuuga Devoker stood there at the ramen shop and then he jumped on the roof of the ramen shop. He looked around at the people of Konoha and saw that nothing important was happening so he began walking on the buildings. He stuck his hands in his pockets and closed his eyes. He used his Byukagan to see through his eyes and see the places where there were gaps in between. I wonder where everyone is. I haven't been doing anything that much, lately. I really need to be getting more active because I want to get stronger. Hyuuga Devoker then opened his eyes and looked around not knowing what to do. He began walking into the forest and then he stood on a branch. He then sat down on a branch and leaned against the main trunk. He then closed his eyes and began thinking. His mind raced back to a few years ago. [Flashback Start] Hyuuga Devoker began walking through the hallways as everyone was staring at him as he was walking. They all shook their heads in pity as he walked down the hall. They were all quiet as they watched him walk trying to show him the slightest respect. Hyuuga Devoker had accidentally sent another student to the hospital. He was walking to the medical section of the Hyuuga house until he got to the other boy's room. He was about to go in when his parents came out and they asked him where he was going. Hyuuga Devoker replied, "I was going to wish him good luck and get well." They told him that they would make sure they would tell him for him even though he doubted they would live up to their word. Hyuuga Devoker then turned around and walked back. The parents stared him down the whole way as he walked out of the hospital room. Nobody had even tried to stare at him anymore. They just all ignored him and acted like he was just a worthless ghost of some sort. Hyuuga Devoker then went to his class and then everyone was ignoring him. He tried to get attention by making a joke and he got what he wanted. Everyone stared at him and began laughing and Devoker had found a good way to get attention by everyone so he began messing around a little bit so he got some attention. [Flashback End] Hyuuga Devoker opened his eyes and looked at the sky. There was a perfect view of the sky and usually you couldn't see the sky in the dense forest that surrounded Konoha. It was rare to find a good spot to see the sky. Hyuuga Devoker then ran back to the docks. 454 Words | 1179 Words
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 5:33 pm
"Well he is alive, but he tends to get in alot of trouble." Raiken replied to her. He then released his clone and sat on the ground. {got to go} 27
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 5:39 pm
Since she told him he wasn't strong enough shun decided it was time for him to get strong enough."In that case Ayami I'll get stronger, so if you'll kindly excuse me" shun said hopping all the way down to the forest floor with a thud."Next time we meet I hope it'll be as equals" he said to her, his eyes going back to deep silver once more. Walking on he decided it was time for him to learn some more jutsu, a lot more jutsu. Shun began to walk off with his hand in his pockets. The breeze of the forest swayed his black and silver streaked hair. He neared the docks, he needed to train in other villages to become more powerful, as he got on he looked back to konoha."This village holds a large sum of power....that I soon wish to control" he said with a smirk on his faxe, he had just decided that he would become the hokage of this village, no one was going to stop him.
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 6:35 pm
Naniyori lifted his hand, readjusting the cord around his shoulder as he lightened his bag for a moment, having come from the land hidden in the clouds. now that he was free of the watch of those idiots from his own village for a while, he felt like he could get in a bit more practice. After all, he wasn't one for casting away loyalty as easily as others seemed to be, but when they chose to put multiple agents on you to ensure that you were the one who wouldn't be betraying them, it definitely cut the cloth of loyalty a bit thin. Even now the shinobi couldn't help but feel that there was something at work in his own village that made trust run thin, and he wasn't going to be made a fool of if there was something more at work in his own homeland than that which was noble and strong. But then, if what he was thinking was true then there was only one way to easily smoke out those who were intent on keeping the village divided, and there was just one way through which he might bring union to that which was broken. Of course, there was a time when only those who were willing to put forth their will would be able to save that which was in need of saving, and that meant that he'd have to ignore those who weren't ready to approval of his drastic measures...but then, that's why the little people were the ones who shouldn't think.
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