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Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 8:32 pm
((ok's thank you sosay, and here is my edit.))
Rpc Name: Lana Koyuki Village: Iwagakure Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Mokuton (wood release) What you know about the clan/bl: In the anime and manga mokuton is an extremely rare bloodline that the first hokage had. It was powerfully destructive and creative. It was even said that the first hokage could make an entire forest appear in non wooded areas.The style is in Tenzo or Yamato who uses earth/ water mixed to create wood. A wood type user must use earth and water as main elements. For the most part the hand weaving for wood element greatly resembles earth style utilizing simple signs usually. Of course at lower ranks the wood style would appear less quickly and in less density than that of a higher rank person. It could however under much training become quite a dense and quick to appear type of jutsu (given the persons rank is high enough) In part, the wood element is that of creation, creating anything as small as young little sprouts of trees or giant redwoods with full foliage. Of course fire is wood's weakness; also lightning would be quite effective against wood (as it comprises of water and earth) Rp Sample:
(because of my low level i will be giving my character in sample a chuunin level)
Walking along a beach with white sandy shores Lana looks to the distance with a smile. Her home of Iwa has been rather quiet lately and because of this she has become very comfortable. Kicking up a burst of sand Lana stops for a second to look out into the distance. Unknown to her is that two ninja--rogues of Iwa--hide among the rock walls in the distance. They have known Lana for much time and have seen her powers and how useful they could be. The two ninja together rank about a jounin level together and are masters of mixing elements. Get those two apart and they are mere chuunin levels. Sighing Lana plops down on her butt and supports her arms out behind her. Taking a relaxing moment She stops to close her eyes for a second.
The two rogues hidden in the rocks make their move keeping ever silent. Keeping to the rocks they know where their advantage is and will use it to try to take Lana down. Forming and then throwing a bunch of stone shuriken towards Lana, they whizz through the air which catches her attention just in time. Opening a single eye she sees a barrage of shuriken heading towards her. "Crap." She forms a single handseal and the shuriken all smash into her. Her body exploding in smoke and turning into a log. The two ninja wonder where the hell that wood came from. From under the sand a tree rises quickly twisting and knotting on itself, Standing upon an adjacent branch Lana tracks the ninja using the direction the shuriken were tossed from. Giant boulders begin raining down upon Lana as the earth trembles and shakes. "Seems you are Iwa ninja." She says before quickly jumping from boulder to boulder weaving signs inbetween her jumping She lands on a boulder upside down and smashes her hand into it. Wood pillars form and catch the rock before it falls completely Sinking slowly into sand Lana runs to the other side of the rock and makes a handsign. The wood bursts through the rocks and she crouches atop one of the pillars her hand down forming a wooden weapon from below her.
The two rogue ninja start to panic at this moment. Their position has been found out and Lana is quickly ascending towards them. They weave a string of handsigns and end by clasping their hands together. A rush of mud falls down upon Lana. She shakes her head with a smile. So they are using Earth and water mixed huh? She thinks to herself. This will tire her, but be worth it. Forcing another set of handsigns an earthen dome surrounds her making the mud splash off all around. Still rising above the mud. The two rogue ninja harden the mud around Lana trying to capture her. The two ninja move through the earth and reach the wooden dome of Lana's. Laughing they know full heartidly that they have caught her.
"Don't celebrate too soon you two." Lana pokes them both on the shoulder. She is able to use earth just as well as she can use wood element and the major flaw of these two ninja is that they forgot that simple fact. They forgot to never let someone inbetween them else their combination jutsu are worthless. They both spring away in opposite directions getting out of the now earth pillar reaching to the top of the cave. They stand upside down very far away from each other. Perfect, Lana smiles and finally decides to wear herself out like planned. Slamming her fist into the ground a bunch of roots and trees form out of the ground twisting and turning a whole forest appears upside down on the cave and becomes quite a hassle for the rogues to dodge. One of the rogue ninja gets his whole body caught among a tree that grows around him the other barely avoids being stabbed to death by a branch and is now wounded beyond belief. "How could this have happened to us? When did she learn to do this?"
Appearing right side up slowly forming out of a wooden branch behind the injured rogue ninja Lana is breathing heavily and almost out of chakra. "Through hardwork and keeping close ties to those i love. To this village was i able to get this strong." She smiles and pulls her scalpel out (medical ninja) Lunging forwards she slices the man underneath his armpit hitting a major artirery he will bleed dry in five minutes, that is if she didn't as well stab him badly in the shoulder. The rogue is already dead. Walking to the other rogue that is encased in wood she has a tough time even walking there as she has to jump from branch to branch. Finally reaching the man after much time she shakes her head. Seeing his bloody iwa headband. "I knew it was you two." she says softly."Why would you do this?"
"You would never understand anyways." The rogue laughs trying to struggle free. "You will never know the pain of living that we have endured." The ninja works himself into a fury and gets nowhere because of it.
"Well I guess I will never understand you, since your anger has consumed you." Lana sighs as she looks down to see a fellow Iwa ninja running up the column of earth to help back her up. The other Iwa ninja is none other than the leader of Anbu.
"Nice catch there Lana.." He says while landing on the same branch as her. His face covered to keep secrecy he looks to Lana. "Will you be alright? It looks like you've used up your chakra." Lana breathing heavily is unable to answer. He just looks back to the rogue ninja captured in wood. "I will keep an eye on him. you get back to the village safely ok?" Lana nods her head and makes her way down to the sandy beach slowly. Plopping down on the soft sand she looks up at the change of scenery. Seeing more Anbu hop up to the leaders position on order to safely move the rogue and get more information out of him.
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Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 7:15 am
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@Eris: Approved, but you wont gain head till your RPC reaches the rank Chuunin.
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Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2011 5:55 pm
Rpc Name: Hitomi Inuzuka ,Dogs name Shiro Village: Kumogakure Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Inuzuka What you know about the clan/bl:Inuzuka Is a canine clan that worships dogs .They fight along side their partners coming up with beast like fighting styles.The typs of jutsu they use are made by spinning in a fast pace like a drill or combing with their partners to form a Gaint two headed wolf dog.They have red fang marks on their cheeks.animalistic eyes, and enlarged canine teeth,their chakra is allowed to mix and is shared between them, adding a feral appearance to the human partners.Members of this clan must be named after a body part while their canine is named after a color(ex Hitomi = eyes ) (Shiro = White).They are a small clan from Konoha.
(Jutsu used in rp Dynamic Marking Shikyaku no Jutsu - Four-Legged Technique Piercing Fang Juujin Bunshin - Beast-Man Clone )
(Shes a Chuunin in this rp) Rp Sample: Hitomi and Shiro were sent out on a family tracking misson to capture a rouge along with her grandmother to make sure things wondent get to out of hands for the pair.Leaping into a midair filp while holding onto Shiro Hitomi tryed her best keeping up with her elder dashing forward not seeming to be getting the atleast tired.It had been 3 days since the group left village and still a small scent of their pray rumoned the air.The young girl stopped taking a secont to catch her breath.Shiro looked up to her then barked loudly telling her to Move.Just as she nodded her eyes drifted downward towards a larger shadow growing by the minute on hers.A loud snap from Hitomi grandmothers fingers echoed with that snap three vishus dogs raced beside the girl pushing her out the way.The large shadow happend to be a very tall ninja landing on a branch above them."Woo hes a gaint Shiro lets try not to wild."She placed him down then held her arms up in a x perparing for a attack."Hitomi ill leave the grunt for you ."She said this not giving Her a chance to say a word.Shiro growled moving forward a bit.The ninja pushed forward throwing a punch straight at her face.The girl rolled underneath him and back on her feet doing a few handsighs."Shiro now." Her canine partner jump into a spin in front of the ninja ."Dynamic Marking".While shiro unleashed his spray on the face of the ninja Hitomi finshed her sighs getting lower to the ground chakra flowing from her body,her nails and teeth grew larger taking on a beast like from."Shikyaku no Jutsu" She slapped the ground hard pushing forward while he was blind by Shiro's urin.Headbutting his gut he fellow back but that wasnt the end of it she dashed into a slid under the ninja placing both hands on the ground her feet kicked of the ground hitting his back with a spin.The ninja hit a tree then fell back down on the ground unable to move.
Turning to pick up Shiro the ninja turned into a muddish form.A sharp pain struck her stomac as blood dripped from her wound she turned her head only to be punch to the ground by him.Shiro leapped up biteing his arm giving the girl time to get up.Struggling to stand she collapsed holding her wound."Shiro ... over here boy."Told by his master he let go off the ninjas arm and ran over growling even more in anger.Hitomi reached into her bag pulling out a food pill and feed it to Shiro.The dogs furr began turning into a reddish brown digging his claws into the ground.Making a single sigh shiro puched back landing on Hitomi's shoulder."Juujin Bunshin"Her canine companion transformed into a identical copy of herself.The ninja took a step back then turned to run away.Hitomi dashed into a spin letting out a loud howl while shiro was above her doing the same."Tsuuga jutsu!!."The pair combined into a large drill crushing into the Ninjas back.Hitomi and Shiro end the jutsu landing on int oa tree upside down dizzy."We still need work on the landing."She said closing her eyes.Hitomi woke up on her grandmothers back her dogs carrying the two ninja one she defeated and the other they need to capture."Well done young one our missons done."The group head back to Kumogakure saftly.
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Posted: Mon Jan 24, 2011 4:56 pm
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@Muffin: Could you add to your list of what you know. Please. Your rp sample shows your knowledge of the clan.
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Posted: Mon Jan 24, 2011 5:23 pm
Okay Sosay i re edited ^^
Rpc Name: Hitomi Inuzuka ,Dogs name Shiro Village: Kumogakure Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Inuzuka What you know about the clan/bl:Inuzuka Is a canine clan that worships dogs .They fight along side their partners coming up with beast like fighting styles.The typs of jutsu they use are made by spinning in a fast pace like a drill or combing with their partners to form a Gaint two headed wolf dog.They have red fang marks on their cheeks.animalistic eyes, and enlarged canine teeth,their chakra is allowed to mix and is shared between them, adding a feral appearance to the human partners.Members of this clan must be named after a body part while their canine is named after a color(ex Hitomi = eyes ) (Shiro = White).They are a small clan from Konoha.
(Jutsu used in rp Dynamic Marking Shikyaku no Jutsu - Four-Legged Technique Piercing Fang Juujin Bunshin - Beast-Man Clone )
(Shes a Chuunin in this rp) Rp Sample: Hitomi and Shiro were sent out on a family tracking misson to capture a rouge along with her grandmother to make sure things wondent get to out of hands for the pair.Leaping into a midair filp while holding onto Shiro Hitomi tryed her best keeping up with her elder dashing forward not seeming to be getting the atleast tired.It had been 3 days since the group left village and still a small scent of their pray rumoned the air.The young girl stopped taking a secont to catch her breath.Shiro looked up to her then barked loudly telling her to Move.Just as she nodded her eyes drifted downward towards a larger shadow growing by the minute on hers.A loud snap from Hitomi grandmothers fingers echoed with that snap three vishus dogs raced beside the girl pushing her out the way.The large shadow happend to be a very tall ninja landing on a branch above them."Woo hes a gaint Shiro lets try not to wild."She placed him down then held her arms up in a x perparing for a attack."Hitomi ill leave the grunt for you ."She said this not giving Her a chance to say a word.Shiro growled moving forward a bit.The ninja pushed forward throwing a punch straight at her face.The girl rolled underneath him and back on her feet doing a few handsighs."Shiro now." Her canine partner jump into a spin in front of the ninja ."Dynamic Marking".While shiro unleashed his spray on the face of the ninja Hitomi finshed her sighs getting lower to the ground chakra flowing from her body,her nails and teeth grew larger taking on a beast like from."Shikyaku no Jutsu" She slapped the ground hard pushing forward while he was blind by Shiro's urin.Headbutting his gut he fellow back but that wasnt the end of it she dashed into a slid under the ninja placing both hands on the ground her feet kicked of the ground hitting his back with a spin.The ninja hit a tree then fell back down on the ground unable to move.
Turning to pick up Shiro the ninja turned into a muddish form.A sharp pain struck her stomac as blood dripped from her wound she turned her head only to be punch to the ground by him.Shiro leapped up biteing his arm giving the girl time to get up.Struggling to stand she collapsed holding her wound."Shiro ... over here boy."Told by his master he let go off the ninjas arm and ran over growling even more in anger.Hitomi reached into her bag pulling out a food pill and feed it to Shiro.The dogs furr began turning into a reddish brown digging his claws into the ground.Making a single sigh shiro puched back landing on Hitomi's shoulder."Juujin Bunshin"Her canine companion transformed into a identical copy of herself.The ninja took a step back then turned to run away.Hitomi dashed into a spin letting out a loud howl while shiro was above her doing the same."Tsuuga jutsu!!."The pair combined into a large drill crushing into the Ninjas back.Hitomi and Shiro end the jutsu landing on int oa tree upside down dizzy."We still need work on the landing."She said closing her eyes.Hitomi woke up on her grandmothers back her dogs carrying the two ninja one she defeated and the other they need to capture."Well done young one our missons done."The group head back to Kumogakure saftly.
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Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2011 7:02 am
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@Muffin: Accepted.
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Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2011 9:42 am
Rpc Name: Chiroku, Chisame
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Autorank Jounin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Chiroku Clan's Anigan
What you know about the clan/bl: The anigan is a kekkai genkai which allows the user to copy one trait of an animal. 10 animals at first release with the limits of using one trait that does not change the body of the user (i.e Hawks eyesight, but can't have hawks wings). 2nd release allows the user to actually call forth the physical traits of an animal. They can have things such as reflexes and hearing of a cat at the same time. Third release allows the user to completely transform into an animal and gain all it's traits. This includes being able to hide their chakra making it the ideal move for spies. Finally, fourth release allows the user to mix and match different physical traits. They can have the claws of a fox, wings of a hawk, and tail of a lizard all at the same time. This also includes things such as hearing, eyesight, etc.
Of course like all bloodlines and clans many disadvantages are accompanied with it. Anigan takes a drain on the users chakra, though this drain cannot be eliminated it can decrease as your character ranks up. While using different traits of animals the user is greatly weakened by raiton attacks. If it by one they can lose their physical transformation for up to 2 posts. Users can only use one animal trait at a time until they reach forth stage. And finally, the user does not only gain the good traits of the animal they choose. The bad traits are present as well.
Rp Sample: Chisame darted through the forest in hot pursuit of her target. He had already proved to be a worthy opponent after spotting her so easily, or perhaps she'd made a careless mistake. Either way it was time to take him out. Before leaving the village to go on this mission the girl had observed a cat with her Anigan. It was time to put that into good use. Chi closed her eyes for a moment, and when she opened them they were no longer green. Her pupil had narrowed down to a slit, and the color of her eyes was now yellow. She grinned and called forth the speed of the creature. Then almost in an instant, Chisame could feel the sudden rush of power to her limbs. Her speed increased as her legs were able to move faster. The gap between her and her target seemed to get smaller with each passing second. Soon she was in range, and it was then that Chi decided she had to stop him and fight him head on. The girl swiftly grabbed a kunai from her pouch and tossed it at her opponent with ease. He turned and threw his own kunai to intercept hers, but then instead of running the man came to a stop. Chi landed neatly across from him and deactivated her Anigan. No need to waste more chakra than needed after all.
He grinned smugly at her. "Well well well, what do we have here? A little girl was sent after me? How absurd!" he began chuckling to himself, but Chi wasn't fazed by his words. She simply kept her eyes locked on to him for any sudden movements he may make. "Oh my my, perhaps I should introduce myself. I'm Takeshita, a pleasure to meet you." the man named Takeshita bowed formally. What was he scheming? At the very moment Chi asked that question, the man practically teleported in front of her. His speed was clearly his strong point. But Chi was also fast, not to mention stronger than most. After all she was an expert at acrobats. So as the man attempted to stab her stomach with a kunai, she jumped into the air with her cat like reflexes activated yet again. "Oh ho! Looks like the kitties got some talent!" he was getting on her nerves. Before landing Chisame tossed a kunai with a paper bomb attached to it at the man. He dodged easily, but apparently didn't see the bomb. It exploded quickly and Takeshita was seen leaping out of the explosion with his cape slightly scorched. He didn't make any comments this time. After all, he was too busy preparing a counter attack.
As he left the flames Takeshita was already doing handsigns. Chi decided in that moment that while he was doing that, she would get the traits of another animal. What better move could be used to scout out animals than animal sense? So she activated the jutsu, and in her mind a radar like image appeared. Many red dots were scattered across the board, but one seemed to be closest to her. Her head turned as she spotted the animal stalking about in the nearby underbrush. A wolf, perfect. She reactivated her anigan and jumped towards the direction of the wolf. Takeshita launched his attack, a fire ball jutsu, at the same direction she went. Chi knew that saving only herself wouldn't be right. If the wolf was left there, it would most likely get burned and die. So the girl grabbed the wolf and using all her strength heaved it out of the way. She landed clumsily with the animal on top of her, but it quickly got off and seemed to observe her. Chisame stood and wasted no time. Her anigan observed the animal deeply. It got startled and took off, but not because of her. Takeshita was already leaping towards her with another kunai in hand. He expected to end her life.
What he got was exactly the opposite. Chi had obtained the killer instinct of the wolf. Wasting no time, she rolled out of the way. Of course Takeshita wasn't stupid. He quickly rebounded towards her again but by now the girl was ready. He missed her by an inch, and instead of sending the knife straight through her skull the man had only grazed her face. He seemed taken aback for a moment which proved to be fatal. Chisame used her kunai and drove it deep into his chest. Takeshita muttered something, looked down at his stomach, and cussed at the girl before collapsing on top of her. "Disgusting..." she muttered and pushed him off. "And look at that, he got my clothes bloody too...how annoying...." Chi stood and looked down at him with her normal eyes. Her mission was complete.
[And although the answers probably going to be no, I was wondering if perhaps I could get at least second stage Anigan to begin with. It'd seem a bit odd to have a jounin who only has first rank of her kekkai genkai in my opinion.]
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Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2011 2:53 pm
Martin Spiralwave Rpc Name: Tensaiji Ushio Village: Kirigakure Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Ushio Clan What you know about the clan/bl: The Ushio Clan originated within the Land Waves are are loyal and dedicated shinobi. Ushio clanmembers are almost always intelligent and usually specialize in at least one branch of shinobi arts. THey have a very traditional method of passing on clan secrets, voiced by the clan head to younger shinobi. The clan once had trouble breeding male shinobi and young unsurpers often banded together to slay the Clan head, losing precious clan techniques in the process. The Ushio Clan are renown for their Great chakra and intelligence. In addition they possess a higher level of perception similar to that granted by the Sharingan but relying more on instinct and channeling chakra into their nervous system. Their water techniques are also very potent but the Ushio clan greatest skill lies in their ability to utilize jutsu without handseals or words, though at the cost of an increased chakra drian. Rp Sample: Jutsu used: Mizu Mira-tsukekae no-jutsu (Water mirror replacement jutsu) Mizu Hebi-Kengotsu (Water snake fist jutsu) Tsunami Tama no-jutsu (Tsunami Sphere Jutsu Mizu-Seishi (Water Control Jutsu)Mid-summer near the outskirts of the Land of Fire. The dense clusters of foliage and vegetation sparkled as morning dew caught the faint rays of sunlight through a dense canopy. Woodland animals audibly scurried along the forest floor, chattering, buzzing, or growling to their neighbhors. It was a pleasant feeling to be surrounded by such harmonic creatures, but the full implications of their activities had no effect on the somber individual standing erect within a small clearing. He was well aware he was being followed by a shinobi and their apparent familiarity with the landscape lead him to believe that they were native to the country. Tensai's back was against an old tree when the Uchiha landed ten meters away from him but he made no move to acknowledge the enemies presence. He had no need to because the Uchiha's eyes burned with crimson light as her infamous dojutsu activated. Normally shinobi would flee from the sight of the Sharingan but Tensai was confident in his skill. He smirked behind the porcelain mask and folded both arms across his chest in defiance as the Uchiha clanswoman executed multiple handseals in a small timeframe. Tensai was actually familiar with the technique, a compact projectile of fire primed to explode on contact with an enemy. Fire had a natural edge over water so the Ushio clansmen took time in learning the seals associated with fire techniques in order to counteract their effects at a faster pace. A crimson sphere erupted from the enemies small lips, easly the size of a medicine ball and crackling obnoxiously as it flew across the distance between the two. Due to her genetic endowment the Uchiha would be able to see Tensai's chakra levels fluctuate but she was unable to predict the sudden eruption of water directly in front of the fire ball. Fragments of earth were launched into the air as the wall of water surged from underground. "Mizu Mira-tsukekae no-jutsu (Water mirror replacement jutsu)" muttered Tensai as a sudden shift in their spatial coordinates left the Uchiha directly in the path of her own jutsu. The wall of water was gone and Tensai with it, but the enemies enhanced perception skills told her the water shinobi wwas now airborne and to her right. With the fire ball so close she kew she wouldn't be able to dodge it very easily so he lashed out with her fist, a heavy coating of chakra materializing over her gloves before it erupted outward in a large blast. The ensuing explosion launched her several meters back, trailing smoke as the fireball detonated on contact with her fist. For the most part she was unharmed but her vision was still swimming. Tensai took advantage of this situation, arms still folded across his chest but four liquid appendages reaching out as large hands to ensnare the Uchiha. The Mizu Hebi-Kengotsu (Water snake fist jutsu) allowed him to create watery limbs and at his level, they were rather large in size. She managed to narrowly avoid two large palms but she was caught between the remaining two. Tensai used these two limbs to pull himself directly towards her body, lashing out multiple times with his feet. To her credit the Uchiha managed to raise both arms against the rain of blows but Tensai pushed off her upraised limbs and span in mid-air, whipping the fists of water aroud his body in order to create another jutsu. The large quantity of water crashed together into a small compact ball that Tensai kicked with all his might towards the Uchiha, spiraling directly into her arms and releasing a torrential flow of water directly against her skin. The highly pressurized torrent of water instantly reduced the bones in her arms into large splinters and left deep gashes on her skin. Against an opponent like Tensai, the young Uchiha had no chance but the Ushio was able to see she still had life in her. He landed softly behind her and stared down at her crumpled form without mercy. Blood dripped down her chin and stained the soft grass she lay on, mingling with the large puddles of water around them. Her lips moved and Tensai imagined she begged for mercy but against the very enemy he was sworn to defeat, the Ushio had no spare mercy to give. "Mizu-Seishi (Water Control Jutsu," He watched the alarm in her eyes as the fluids in her body was forcibly injected with large amounts of his chakra. She shook violently, her crimson hues fading into their usual black as her flesh rippled under heavy stress. He was surprised to see she was still drawing in ragged breaths but this image was quickly erased as a geyser of blood erupted from her body, flesh torn apart as the fluids in her body were forcibly extracted. The horrid pulpy mass at his feet twitched as fluids leaked onto the blood-stained floor, pooling at his sandals. Emotionlessly, the Ushio touched a streak of blood that splashed onto his mask before bringing it to his keen eye. He was still for some time, deciding if this kill would please him for the season. As blood drained down from the overhead branches and scraps of flesh littered the floor Tensai decided that her death meant nothing to him, as the deaths of many ninja had before her. His gloved hands pried the mask from his face, revealing a tired old shinobi's face. Wrinkles sprouted at the corners of his eyes and his sickly white flesh stood out against a mane of silken black hair. Small amber hues peered from within deep-set sockets, observing the gruesome scene with obvious distaste. "My final kill and yet I feel nothing...." His voice was calm and easily at peace with his actions. It was easy to see the shinoi held no remorse for his actions. He closed his eyes and held his arms to the side as the sun peeked through the net of branches to observe the scene. Th warmth of the canopy was fleeting as the sun, as if horrified by the scene, fled beneath the cover of a wandering cloud. "Such is the way of the fallen, I suppose," he finished and allowed his arms to fall at his side. He placed a finger on the spot where the a small burn had been searing his vocal cords for months. "It's time to pick a new heir," he mused and just like that, the sixty year old Ushio vanished without warning.
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Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2011 3:17 pm
@Inu: No. Second stages are rarely, if ever, simply handed out.
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Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2011 6:10 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2011 6:31 pm
Rpc Name:Shin Naga Village:Sound Rank:A/S Bloodline or Clan applied for:Naga Clan What you know about the clan/bl: I have gone over the clan several times and made sure I understood each jutsu to the best of my ability. I understand I must kill a enemy in cold blood to attain the "True form" jutsu for the guild. Lastly I understand that I must Rp my character to be a power driven man who cares very little for the contention his squad is left in, so long he comes out alive and more powerful. Rp Sample:
"Your team is dead, your mission is failed, and soon, very soon you will be dead as well." The voice echoed from the darkness that surrounded Taki, her dead squad sprawled out in the small opening she was trapped in. "Come out coward!" She screamed the terror in her chest shaking her words. "Fight me like a real man. "Hahahahaha a real man? What would a lowly women like yourself know about real men? Did your partners fight like real men, are you acting like a real man right now? The voice surrounded Taki, frightened and worried for her life she squeezed her eyes close and screamed "If you're going to kill me hurry up and do it already!"
Stepping from the shadows slowly Shin face was illuminated in the moon light his slanted eyes glowed bright green, his nose small and pointed, "Why would I kill you? he said as his fangs shined in the moonlight, altho they were not animalistic fangs, they we more reptile meant more for injecting poisons deep into the body instead of just causing deep jagged wounds like most Shin has come across in his years. Taki looked at Shin as he stepped out of the shadow, she stepped back when she noticed it was him "You! Why, why did you do this? We did nothing to you or your village, we simple denied the treaty you offered because your village is new and we don't know to trust you yet. why!" Shin let out another laugh and he stepped out of the Shadows completely "Thats right, I am going to kill you because your village is technically a enemy and I can get away with it in self defense, or just say it was some bandits and I came across the body's on my way home. There are really several ways I can cover this up, this must suck for you, knowing right before you die that no one will come after me or punish me for what I am about to do to you, what i already did to your friends. Shin let out a laugh before finishing his little rant with "To bad'
In a fit of rage Taki lunged after Shin kunai drawn, Shin reacted by un hinging his jaw letting a large amount of snakes fall out onto the in front of him. Blinded by rage Taki continued her charge threw the pile of snake taking several bites. She reached Shin swinging her weapon widely but to no avail, every swing was dodge with ease by Shin a smile on his face the whole time, he had managed to drive this trained ninja in to such a fit of fear and rage she was reduced to less than a mere child throwing a tantrum. Taki took a swing for Shin's neck, he ducked and turned his body 360 degrees to deliver a powerful kick to Taki's diaphragm. It sent her flying into a tree across the feild. While she was flew toward the tree a another small set of seals was used by Shin as he used his Nan no Kazo focusing the justu to his neck and following Taki's body to the tree, before she had a chance to stand a bite was delivered to a vain on her neck. One Shin delivered this poison he retracted his neck in a long slow arching motion and slowly walked toward Taki, the poison his snakes and himself had injected into Taki would be taking control of her body and rendering her even less of a threat than she was to begin with.
"What... what did you do to me b*****d!" Taki said her words strained, the poison making it hard for her to speak. "Well I have killed you, well close, I told you it was going to happen, I will even give you the pleasure of being my pets food." As Shin said this a large 6 foot snake came from behind the tree Taki was laying against and slowly moved its way up her body. As she tried to scream the poison full effect had set in bringing her to a complete loss of muscle function. All she could do was move her eyes around to see the carnage that was her squad and the even of the pale snake like man who killed her, terror filled her eyes as the snake started swallowing her body from the feet, slowly moving the rest of her body into it's stomach. As it got to Takie's neck it bite down with its powerful jaw severing it and letting her head fall to the ground and roll toward one of her dead squad mates. " Aww, to big of a meal for you scale?" Shin said to his beloved and most powerful snake companion, the snake almost looked as if it nodded at him as he moved to Shin's side, they both walked toward the darkness of the forest heading back to his home before his absence raised any suspicion.
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Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2011 6:32 pm
@Inu: I dont do bloodline applications. I'm simply correcting problems where I see them.
@Havik: Please, post the rest of the application.
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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 2:35 pm
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Hate to sound like a pain in the a** but could you guys please list the jutsu used in your rp sample. This just makes it easier for me when looking over.
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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 3:45 pm
I will keep that in mind when doing any other apps in the future but Panther has to look over mine, and seeing as he made all the jutsu it shouldn't be a problem.
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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 3:50 pm
Please, when a bloodline applications moderators says something needs to be added, add it.
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