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 Posted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 5:16 pm
Alice stood up imediately and threw the doll forward, it clunked on Demon's head. "when you want to get rid of chakra you never take something to get more chakra, that is negative progress." she noticed his cursed seal had already started to glow from the excess chakra in his body, and the use of chakra. "alright, one thing to learn from use with Cursed seals, they generally add to your chakra consumption. so your techniques will have a little more power behind them, but you will become tired quickly." she said as she would walk over to him and pick up her doll, when she stood back straight up her cursed seal had already started to move across her body. the maze pattern would be visible up her neck and the left side of her face, and the edge of her left fore arm had some showing upon it too. "now then, we can have a little fun, i'll hold back as much as needed for you." she said as she made a handseal and a string of chakra extended to her doll as she threw it into the air. the doll would start to bounce back and forth in the air as it then dropped down to smack Demon on the head.
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Posted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 5:49 pm
Quote: Hyuuga Devoker had looked at the Joker and something about him had made Devoker confused. The clown was something different from the world. He was one of the people who needs to be taken out of the world for balance just like the Joker in most card games get taken out and put to the side in it's own world. Hyuuga Devoker continued to look at the clown with great intent so that he didn't try anything stupid or he would soon begin fighting with this unknown man that he didn't want to have troubles with. Hyuuga Devoker continued looking at the two have a conversation and it looked like Ayami had already but her trust in this man's hands and Devoker felt that the Joker could crush it anytime he wanted it. Hyuuga Devoker was also watching out for the other man just in case he didn't try and come back to try anything stupid that he wouldn't want to try. Hyuuga Devoke then jumped off to another place where he left Ayami. Hyuuga Devoker was tired but he did not feel like making action as he already had enough action in a day. 201 Words | 3026 Total Added 120 Lines from uncounted post here.Multiple Arms Lv. 3: 500 Skill Points Multiple Arms Lv. 4: 500 Skill Points Multiple Arms Lv. 5: 500 Skill Points Reach Training Lv. 3: 500 Skill Points Reach Training Lv. 4: 500 Skill Points Reach Training Lv. 5: 500 Skill Points
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Posted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 5:52 pm
Demon held his held."The hell" quickly jumped back dodging the doll that had already bonked him, on all fours he looked at her. As his power seemd to continue to burst he rushed forward, going into a type of spin move."Let's go then" demon said with a smile.
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Posted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 6:21 pm
Alice threw 9 more dolls out from a scroll in her left hand. they flew out and a chakra string attached to each of them from each ring. she quickly threw the dolls into a position meant to catch Demon mid air. they all began to spin the opposite direction, they were in the pattern of 5 per ring. the larger ring was meant to catch him on the outside, spinning slower to keep them from taking to much damage, the second ring was smaller and focused primarily at his front, to change the spin and force it to stop. if these stopped him they would release and go into a one over the other form.
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Posted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 8:05 pm
Quote: Hyuuga Devoker sat down on the edge of the boat as it slowly drifted up to Konoha. "I'm back home off of that long training. It wasn't as long as I suspected though. I thought it was going to be a lot longer." Hyuuga Devoker now had horns on his head that pokes through the sides of his headband and was visible to everyone. He decided that they looked kind of cool and they weren't the easiest thing to hide and they made him look kind of bad and he needed or a more evil way of looking so people would be intimidated to fight him. Hyuuga Devoker had five arms that could reach five yards out which was fifteen feet and that was a long ways. He would be pretty powerful with these arms and he knew that it was a great sacrifice for the horns and the constant pain that he felt to his body. Hyuuga Devoker then made the hands from around him and then they pushed off the ground as he went on top of the water. He was close enough to walk so he made the arms come back and he began walking on the water. He hadn't walked on the water in a long time which was the main reason that he wanted to walk. He also liked watching the faces that looked at him thinking that he was a total retard for jumping off the side of the boat. Hyuuga Devoker smirked a little and then jumped onto the land of Konoha. He was back where his home was and he was not very happy as he seemed to lose track of where Ayami was and he was already talking to her for a while until randomly people started coming for no reason at all. He hated how that always worked. He knew that he would never be able to talk to a person one on one without killing anyone who interrupted. Ayami was going through a lot right now though as she was taking lots of sacrifices to become more powerful and that's when he thought about how she probably left the village to get more powerful in other jutsus. Hyuuga Devoker still had to get powerful in his clan's jutsus though as he had already achieved a high leveled Byakugan that he had not told anyone about. His Byakugan wasn't so simple anymore and he could see a lot farther and he caught on to things quicker now. "Damn. I forgot where the Hyuuga Clan House lies." Hyuuga Devoker then took out a map of the ancient house and nodded. He put his finger on the map pointing out the Clan House and then he ran off to his Clan House. He got there and he knew that he would have to be more respectful around his elders and other Clan Members. Everyone in the clan already knew that he would always joke around and he wasn't as serious as the other members and many people did not respect him of that. The other guy at the ramen shop had reminded him of that which is a reason that he had came back to pay respect and show that he could be serious about things. Hyuuga Devoker opened the sliding door quietly and walked in quietly with the up most respect. He slid the door shut without a sound and looked at the floor as he walked. He took many turns throughout the huge house that consisted of many people until he passed his own room that he hadn't been in a long time. He thought about staying and cleaning up a little bit and then he stopped and turned around. He opened the sliding door and closed it quietly as he looked at all the dust in the room. He said to himself, "This would be a good time to practice." He got a few brooms from the maintenance room right next to his and he used his arms to clean around. Hyuuga Devoker had hid the horns when he came in though or else everyone would've hated him so much. Hyuuga Devoker finished cleaning up his room and then he walked to the training grounds where he looked had brung a few scrolls that told the many jutsus that he had came to learn. 725 Words | 1130 Total
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Posted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 8:27 pm
Quote: Hyuuga Devoker looked around and saw an advanced tutor of the Hyuuga Clan teaching a set of students his age. The nin that he was training was his age and his rage as they all had headbands, but none of them had vests on identifying that they were Genin. Hyuuga Devoker then walked over as the class was an outside course and everyone was on the grass. Devoker managed to sit in the back without disturbing anyone and close enough so that he could hear the sensei talk. The people that were in the class must have been pretty powerful and probably were the kids who were most highly respected as the were being taught a Chunnin ranked jutsu. Devoker noticed that nin these days were already learning highly ranked jutsus though and a lot of them were pretty powerful too. That meant that Devoker himself was a chip off the block to because everyone that he had been fighting with were mostly around his level and he had great matches with them. Hyuuga Devoker continued to listen to the sensei's words and he was talking about the Palm Dance of Divination. The sensei said, "The user traps the enemy in the zone of eight trigrams before then quickly delivering a devastating and deadly series of palm attacks that is nearly impossible to avoid. The jutsu that the user usually uses with this jutsu is called Divination Field, 64 Strikes or Divination Field, 128 Strikes. Today you will be learning Palm Dance of Divination and Divination Field, 64 Strikes. These moves are very powerful and are taijutsu so they don't use a lot of chakra. This jutsu closes off sixty-four specific chakra points, which you guys already know is called tenketsu, on an opponent's body with the gentle fist, effectively eliminating their ability to use chakra for quite some time and making it quite difficult for them to move. It begins with the closing of two chakra points, followed by four more, then eight, then sixteen, then thirty-two, and then sixty-four strikes. Each set of strikes is done at an increasing pace. This technique is very fast at the end and usually the match would be over at since more than one fifth of the users tenketsus are closed by that time." The class sat there quietly and Devoker wanted to make a noise so bad but he knew that it would be very disrespectful and he didn't want to attract to much attention to him because he didn't want an accident to happen where his horns had accidentally slipped out. The people of the Hyuuga clan would like a really long explanation and Devoker would probably be put on trial because how disrespectful the jutsu was and what Devoker had went through just to get so much power. Hyuuga Devoker wasn't so proud of it himself but he needed it to protect the people that he wanted to and as long as they were safe it didn't matter what they thought of him. Plus, Ayami had killed a person just to get a powerful jutsu. Many people fell into the greed of power like Devoker himself which did not make it okay for Devoker to make the choice that he did. Hyuuga Devoker just hope that someone would deal with it and that someone wouldn't care about them. The teacher then showed the class how to use both the jutsus and he used it on a dummy because he would hurt a student a lot if he would've used it on them. Hyuuga Devoker carefully pictured what his sensei did and then the sensei asked for someone to volunteer to try it themselves. Hyuuga Devoker had thought that he had it down himself so he raised his hand. He probably wouldn't have been picked if no one else had raised their hand. When the sensei said his name the kids began whispering to each other about many things. Hyuuga Devoker walked up to the dummy and successfully made the field. He then hit the dummy two times, then four times, then eight times, then sixteen times, then thirty two times, then 64 times. The dummy had cotton hanging out of it and the kid's mouth had dropped wondering how Devoker himself had became so strong since the last time they had seen him. Even the sensei was standing there in astonishment. Hyuuga Devoker then sat back down and said, "Who's next?" The class stared him down as he sat in the back and they gave him the up most respect after that ordeal. Hyuuga Devoker had managed to keep a straight face. 773 Words | 1903 TotalPalm Dance of Divination: 800 Skill Points Divination Field, 64 Strikes: 1000 Skill Points
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Posted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 8:51 pm
Yuan Turned and walked away from the chaos and destruction of what was left of the Ramen house. He knew that the explosion must have at least injured the shinobi inside the building. There was no way for even a chunin to have been able to get out of that blast. Yuan thought about Ayami, and how she had walked out just before the blast. Yuan wondered if she had really realized what was happening, or if she had just gotten lucky? If she had known, surely she would have warned the others right? It seemed likely to Yuan. Yuan casually made his way through the village He saw some citizens and shinobi running to put out the flames from the explosion, but by now he had traveled far from that location. Yuan started exploring the Hidden Leaf Village. He first made his way over to the shinobi academy located here in the village. Though most shinobi went to the international academy these days, it was true that this academy was the first one created to actually teach ninja on a large scale. This meant that before this academy was established, shinobi had only been trained by their masters in teams. Perhaps that was better in some ways, but in recent years, there had been a noticeable increase in the variety of jutsu that shinobi were able to master, and that was accredited mostly to the wide variety of subjects taught at the academy. Though Yuan was rather unimpressed by the grandeur of the building the academy was housed in, he was still in wonder due to the intense history of the small schoolhouse. Yuan walked away from the academy and made his way to the Hokage's office. Yuan stood outside, gazing up at the massive building. Yuan was slightly impressed by the overall size of the building, but Yuan was more impressed by tall buildings that had fantastic views. Yuan enjoyed the Hidden Rain village for it's massive skyline. Yuan walked around the Hokage's office and back o the face of the mountain behind it, which he immediately started to climb. Yuan didn't actually climb the cliff face of course. He leapt from outcropping to outcropping, quickly making his way up the side of the mountain. Standing atop the head of the first Hokage, Yuan gazed out on the Hidden Leaf Village and the entire Fire Country. He sighed. He was gazing upon the sight of much of the great shinobi wars! The thought filled Yuan's heart with glee. Yuan was a bit of a history freak, and he always liked to see the battlefields of old. After some time appreciating the view, Yuan looked down into the village. What he saw made him even more excited. Yuan leapt off of the great stone head and ran down the side. He skidded to a stop at the base and broke into a full run through the western side of town. Yuan finally arrived where he was trying to get. It was a natural hot springs! Yuan quickly paid his due and strode in to the men's side. After a moment or two, Yuan walked out to the water in nothing but a towel and his blindfold. Yuan didn't strut with the great overconfidence found in many men, but rather carried himself with an ease and grace that would make other's jealous. He seemed untouchable in attitude, as though he didn't let the world get to him. He was what he was, and that was enough. Yuan sat in the hot water and relaxed, leaning his head back and looking up at the stars that were beginning to appear in the night sky.
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Posted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 9:04 pm
Quote: Hyuuga Devoker then got up from the class and then walked out of his Clan House and then he finally began running. "I'm free! That place is way to quiet for me! I don't think that I've ever been quiet for that long." Hyuuga Devoker was now happy that he had learned he move that he wanted to. The move that he wanted to learn was one of the Hyuuga clan's main move. Hyuuga Devoker then jumped on top of a building and looked around for any ninja that were around. Hyuuga Devoker thought knew that he was a lot stronger than before from all the training that he had just finished. Hyuuga Devoker was not happy that the ramen shop had blown up and knew that there was another ramen shop down the ways. Hyuuga Devoker then dashed off to the ramen shop that was twice as far as the blown up ramen shop. Hyuuga Devoker was glad that he had already walked away from the blast or else he could have been killed. Hyuuga Devoker still wondered why he did that but it was a great offense to him and if he found that Yuan guy he would surely go on full attack towards him. Hyuuga Devoker was obviously not happy and he finally got to the ramen shop where he ordered ramen. He used the chopsticks to take a bite by bite practicing eating in the 'polite' way like Ayami had suggested. "This is so retarded. I have to run all the way over here for ramen. I guess it will train my speed if I ran as fast as I could here. I think on the bright side to much."284 Words | 490 Total
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Posted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 9:13 pm
Yuan gazed up at the night sky from the hot water. The steam from the springs seemed to curl and frame the stars above as it rose into the night. Yuan was totally at peace here. Yuan always enjoyed company, but he knew how to enjoy being alone. Yuan could never really tell whether he enjoyed being with a group or being alone better. being with a group was slightly annoying because there was always someone who felt that they were in charge or should be the leaders. They always caused trouble for others. Then there were misunderstandings, and mistakes that everyone had to pay for. Yuan thought about it for a second and finally came up with an answer. He needed a partner. Yuan enjoyed company, but not to much company. A partner was good because you could work with them and yet still do your own thing. Yuan, for instance, liked to cause trouble and chaos when he was bored, and he also loved to learn about the history of the places he visited. With a group it would be hard to do all of that when the rest of his members were looking over his shoulder and being affected by his actions. But with a partner, he could separate and do his own thing, meeting up with them again soon thereafter. Also, with a partner, Yuan wouldn't have to worry so much about being teamed up against. In a pair, one could fight by themselves or as a team. If one were to be attacked by a large group of shinobi, it would be more advantageous to work as a team, but if a small group were after them, it would be more fun to deal with battles separately. Yuan wasn't very fond of sharing his love of battle with others.
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Posted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 9:21 pm
Quote: Hyuuga Devoker rubbed his stomach after finishing the nice meal prepared by the chef that he had never seen before. "Thanks, that was tasty." Hyuuga Devoker had personally liked the other ramen shop not because it was closer but because they had better food. That was the first time that Devoker noticed that Yuan had killed many people in there. It was like he just blew them up for no reason at all just because he wanted to see an explosion. Hyuuga Devoker got up from his set and then began walking on the road. He look up at the moon and saw that it wasn't exactly above the road. "The other ramen shop was on Moonlight Row. That road has the moon right above it and I used to go there everyday and now it's gone. That place was my sanctuary it was now blasted into little tiny pieces because of one man." Hyuuga Devoker just couldn't get over it. He couldn't just forget and stop whining about something had already happened and couldn't get fixed. He couldn't just leave it alone because of how stubborn he was. He just really wanted his way on this one and he wanted to do something about it. He knew that it was so important that he must do something about it, even if it meant getting revenge on somebody. Hyuuga Devoker continued walking on the road. 235 Words | 725 Total
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Posted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 10:07 pm
Yuan stretched and slowly (and reluctantly) got up out of the hot spring. He didn't want to get over-heated, no matter how good it felt. Yuan made his way into the hut and changed into his normal clothes once again. The kind elderly lady that ran the hot springs had had the clothes laundered for Yuan and they felt fantastic. It really had been some time since Yuan had treated himself so well. He decided that he needed to do some shopping. Yuan made his way over to the market area of town, not knowing what to expect. Yuan was surprised to find that the Hidden Leaf Village had a rather vigorous night life. The streets were filled with vendors, crying their wares for the many citizens to come and examine and purchase. Yuan was happy to see such a thing. Yuan's home village had a wonderful night life. In fact, in many ways, Yuan's home village was more alive at night than during the day. Yuan quickly became another one of the customers making their way slowly through the crowded location, inspecting this, handling that. Yuan had several things in mind that he was looking for, but sometimes it was fun to window shop in open markets such as these. Yuan made his way through the carts and shops until he came upon one that was selling wide brimmed straw hats. Yuan walked over and tried several on, finally choosing one that fit right and would do an excellent job of keeping the sun out of his eyes. As Yuan moved on down the street, he came upon another vendor who seemed to be selling fabric. After a closer look, Yuan saw that it was actually cloaks that the man was selling. Yuan bought one, dark brown cloak that covered him from shoulders to feet, and blew out behind him slightly in the breeze. Yuan put one arm through the sleeve and left the other out, allowing the shoulder to fall behind his back. This was a style favored by samurai to keep their drawing arms free from obstruction, but Yuan rather enjoyed the look. He rested his open arm in the other side of the cloak and looked ahead smiling. He already saw the next location that he was looking for. Yuan quickly made his way down the street to a liquor vendor. Yuan walked up to the man in a good mood and inquired to the cost of a certain something. The man's answer did not please Yuan. In fact, one might go so far as to say that it displeased Yuan, greatly. Yuan then spent the next ten minutes arguing with the man about the price of his liquor and whether or not he could be charged with extortion or not. After ten minutes or so had passed. Yuan walked away from the vendor with four small gourds of sake on his belt. Yuan had only paid three quarters of the price for the four. You just had to know how to haggle these days if you wanted a good price for goods and services. Yuan now made his way to a cute-looking restaraunt along the boulevard he was traveling. Normally, Yuan would have looked for a more shady place to dine and drink, but right now, it was alright. Yuan tended to enjoy the shady sides of town and the shady organizations and locations the best. They were always filled with the most interesting people. If someone wanted information on anything, they could find it in the town's shadow. Every town had a dark side. Bars, Gambling halls, restaraunts, all were places where badguys could gather and avoid detection by law enforcement. Yuan wondered where he would find such places here in Konoha. Yuan noticed that the young lady who was waitressing the restaraunt was standing next to him and was ready to take his order. He ordered three orders of dumplings and a cup of green tea. Yuan sat, gazing at the stars again as he enjoyed his dumplings and tea. The moon sure was bright tonight. It was a good night to be out and about. Yuan fingered the four bottles hanging from his hip. He had a plan for these... A plan that would call for some training soon. Yuan finished his meal and paid. He then set off down the road, seeming to look for something, or someone. Before an hour had passed, yuan had found one of the things he had been looking for. Yuan walked up the steps of the library, making his way to the records area. Yuan walked around the virtually abandoned building, pulling literary and historical works from the shelfs. Yuan sat down and leaned back in a chair as he usually did and started reading immediately. Yuan read about the fourth hokage. It was a rather strange subject for a foreign shinobi to be so interested in. However, one would think that Yuan, being so interested in history, and especially historical battles, might have a special interest in the hokage due to his many battles with the Kyuubi demon fox. Yuan read each and every page on the hokage intently, studying every word. Yuan then closed the book he was reading and opened yet another book. This time he was doing research on Jyria, the toad sage. Yuan seemed to be studying the information intently once again. It took his several hours to complete. Yuan then closed the book from which he was learning about Jyria and picked up yet another book. Yuan flipped the pages opened and turned to Naruto Uzumaki. Once again, Yuan began reading the information intently, and took everything in with great enthusiasm. There was a point to everything he was doing here. It wasn't just some sort of sick desire to know everything he could about a place before taking action. Yuan had gathered all of the information he needed. Yuan walked out of the library with a smile on his face. He now had something new to add to his arsenal. Yuan walked behind the library, to an abandoned alleyway and held out his hand. Yuan slowly began feeding chakra into he hand and giving it a bit of a swirl. Yuan's chakra began to become concentrated, and it showed as blue all around him. Yuan focused carefully, he knew that to not pay attention was to do the jutsu wrong. Yuan had read, that if the user didn't remain focused and careful to maintain the rotation, then the technique would backfire and the entire area in question would likely be hit by forces from a cat. 3 hurricane. Yuan slowly added more and more chakra to the mix while maintaining control of the sphere forming in his hand. he was getting it... The technique was his. Yuan now only needed to make it his own. Yuan tapped the containers hanging from his belt and smiled. He knew exactly how to go about that task. Yuan walked back out from behind the library and made his way down the street once more. Yuan knew that there was a reason why he had come to the Hidden Leaf Village. Yosh!
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Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 3:44 pm
As the boat slowly pulled into the docks near the hidden leaf village . Ayami would look over the side and watch the ship slowly dock . As the sea wind would blow through the Uchiha's hair . She would soon walk off the boat and continue er way toward her home . Ayami would have a excellent time training in the hidden cloud village with Raiken and hoped that he would take her invitation to come to the Hidden leaf so that she could explain a pressing issue with him and several other shinobi . Walking toward the village Ayami would feel the n** of the wind on her thighs,arms and toes . It wouldn't take Ayami long to reach the the village gate but the challenge would be finding the Nara that she had ran into a while back . She had a question that she would like to ask him . She could tell he was a exceptional shinobi by the way he would present himself . So Once Ayami entered the village her search for the Nara would begin .
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Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 4:04 pm
Haven taken Ayami's invitation to the hidden Leaf, Raiken leaped off of the ship before it boarded to test his physical abilities. And without suprise he made it. It was only about a twenty foot leap after all. Raiken walked around for a bit and then thought," I wonder where Ayami is?" But he kept on wandering around the village as if he was lost. After about half an hour Raiken decided he would just wait it out under a nearby tree in a park garden. He began to relax under the shade of the tree's leaves; the Leaf Village had no trees that actually towered so it was rare to find natural shade. He placed his hands behind his head and leaned against the tree. "I guess I will just wait here." He said as he closed his eyes and began to nap standing up.
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Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 4:11 pm
Hido watched the boat dock and grinned when the female Uchiha he had captured before stepped off. He grinned dropping down from the tree he was sitting in and stepped body flickering behind a tree nearby her. He placed his hands together shooting his shadow as a thin line, hidden by the shadows of trees, into hers capturing her again. He stepped out from behind the tree as the two arms shot up around her binding her in place again. "Hello there Ayami-Chan, how are you today." He said smiling as he walked up to her again. He pulled both of his legs up crossing them and holding his body up with his two newest vectors... he had to break them in. He got somewhat close to her still smiling reaching behind him and tying his hair back up into its somewhat short pony-tail. "So come here often." He said jokingly resting his elbows on his knees, and his chin in his palms. He turned his head slightly looking at her with his crystal green eyes smiling, waiting for a response.
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Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 4:17 pm
" Ahh just the Nara i was looking for how are you today Hido ." Ayami would say with a smile . " I Have a offer for you but first we need to find my friend Raiken he is somewhere in the village proably bored out his mind . So lets find him and i'll treat you to some sake as i explain more into this offer. " Ayami would state as she tried to break the bonds of the shadows but it was no use so she gave up . She knew that she was in no danger not by Hido a fellow villager . She would look into his green eyes they still remained the nicest eyes she had seen thus far . " So shall we " Ayami said as she remained captured by the nara's shadow .
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