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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 6:29 am
@Kuusho: That isn't really an RP post, that is more like a back story... Some minor spelling errors but we understand what word you meant so it's all good. Could you do another one perhaps with Sho as the main feature like training or something?
@Oddistic: Pass :3
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Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 11:21 am
kouri-chan_xx @Kuusho: That isn't really an RP post, that is more like a back story... Some minor spelling errors but we understand what word you meant so it's all good. Could you do another one perhaps with Sho as the main feature like training or something?
@Oddistic: Pass :3 I could have gotten it... whee *glomps!*
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Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2008 8:34 pm
I was wondering if you guys could help me... I posted an Rp example a while back and I can't find it and I was wondering if you could tell me if I passed or not. Please don't joke, I don't want to accidentally do something wrong.
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Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 2:30 pm
Kenjo walks into the dojo and says to tsukasa
"So u training huh, what about a quick spar i havent been in a fight for a while. Heh a spar should help u swing your sword faster, of course i understand if u dont want to its ok if your intimidated."
*Kenjo grabs a sword* and says"Hurry up and decide."
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Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 5:44 pm
Rin, do pardon me. But I insist on doing this one's. @Shadowwalker7 - If you have passed, you would've been listed on the graduated thread (probably...unless updates to that was really forgotten...). Big J THUG Kenjo walks into the dojo and says to tsukasa "So u training huh, what about a quick spar i havent been in a fight for a while. Heh a spar should help u swing your sword faster, of course i understand if u dont want to its ok if your intimidated." *Kenjo grabs a sword* and says"Hurry up and decide." Add more detail. If you are gonna live in Konoha with me, this would certainly not get past the line censor. Oh, which I forgot...that would only be technically speaking...if you had read the village rules. -_- And the grammar, such foully childish errors. Learn to use capitalization and punctuation correctly...or you will be suffering Exp penalties when I grade your training... And those run on sentences... - right eye twitches - One more thing - we NEVER use chatspeak in rp! It's third person story form at all times (except in the Chatterboxes around).
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 9:47 pm
Proto... you have been pardoned... as I could have not said either better myself.. -_-" Thank you... dearly...
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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 7:44 am
[Well here I go I'll just use a random name for this]
Rice laid in what was probably going to be his death bed...a couple blades of grass just thrown into a pile by his teammates. He could feel his body heating up from the foreign poison in his bloodstream making his veins foster an irritating and painful sting. If that wasn't enough torture enough his mind was constantly lingering back to that moment on the battlefield where his young chest was slashed with an enemy katana drenched in poison from there respective village to advance the damage done. This poison was going to kill him, all because his team had no medical ninja. As his body was taking its last breathes he attempted to think about all the things he could've done to avoid this and maybe even survive.
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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 9:53 am
((I know I don't need to, I just want to make sure my Roleplaying is up to snuf))
The chimes of a church bell could be heard echoing through the city of Jerusalum, people of the town had gathered to witness a public exicution. Some cheered some booed, but one stood quite, head bowed hands clasped to gether as one might see in prayer. He made his way to the middle of the gathered mass. Gently pushing people aside taking no head to there rants or ill words. A white robe was all this praying man wore. The robe of a scholar. The mans eyes where upcast, watching the stage with such intent, that one could look over and see the gears turning in his brain. He turned his head slowly as to not draw attention to himself, there where many escape routes, and if he timed it just right, he may have been able to dart up the roofs into a mass of scholars, and vanish.
A fat man walked onto the stage, which came with a crash of cheers and jeers from the croud. He wore the robes of a nobal man, and looked as if he ate as one to. His voice was loud and deep. Gruff, and tough and worn. "I have gathered you today to whitness this." the man fliped his hand beconing to the three people standing in wait to be hung, to have there lifes cut short. "The exicution of the most lowly and disorderly things that has spewn out of this citys gully hole. They wish you to commit sin, they wish you... To creat disorder. But we shall no have this in my city!" The man raised his fist which came with a loud cheer from the crowd. "A whore.... A gambler... A hiratic." The man spit in each of the citizans faces respectivaly.
The white robed man made his move. Making his way at a swifter pace towards the front. He was no longer gentel and was pushing people with much force out of the way. When he eached the base of the stage he was at a dead sprint, and whit a jump he leaped into the air, a concealed blade in his hand. With one swift move he tackeld the nobal man piercing his brain and putting him to rest. He then jumped from the stage sprinting away from a scared and histarical crowd of people. The jangel of metal could be heard from the gaurds persuing him, but he was to swift, he had made his way onto a rooftop, where he croutched and watched his persuers go by. He smiled just as an arrow skimed his back causing him to fall from the rooftop and creat enough noise that the gaurd once more took after him. The chime of a church bell could be heard, and thats when the man knew what he must do. He sprinted though the city throwing civillains in the way of the gaurd to by him time. A mass of white robed people, much like the ones he wore himself, could be seen exiting from a church, he turned around smiling backing into the croud and becomeing just another scholar, undesernable from one another, he had become just a blade in a crowd.
((Save for a few spelling errors how was it?))
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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 12:30 pm
I might as well,even if I am a little confused.So here is my RP example.
My character is Nayumi Kagami.I am going to hopefully be in a village if i pass.It will also be a somewhat random RP example.
RP example
Nayumi sat by a white ash tree.She watched the children play ninja as memories flooded back to her.She sighed and knew she couldn't stay in this village.She stood and took one last look at the joyful children before turning and walking away.She left the village without a word and walked on as the wind blew sakura petals around her,she looked up and saw a rather large sakura tree standing in a forest of oak trees.'One stands alone.Though one day there shall be growth,and there will no longer be just one.'She thought as she then went on her way and disappeared as the sakura petals danced,being the only witnesses to her departure.
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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 1:52 pm
((hello, my name is Lost and Confused...it was like 3 in the morning when I first looked over everything, so I'm pretty much lost...I should post here and then apply to a village right? I put my character up in the Game System thingy, so all I have to do after this is apply and start in a village, right?))
RP sample
Tatsu walked to the entrance of Sunagakure, in awe of it's massive stone walls surrounding it. It...It's incredible! I never thought Sunagakure would look like this! Tatsu kept walking towards the village, his mouth hanging open as he looked around at everything. I, I never could've imagined something this amazing, I should've ran away to get here earlier, Tatsu thought.
He got to the opening of what looked to be the only entrance into the fortress-like village. A man wearing a Sunagakure headband stopped him before he could enter.
"What's your business here?" The man demanded, barely looking at Tatsu.
Tatsu swallowed hard. This guy must be at least Chunin or higher, this is unreal! The man looked down at him, a frown crossing his face.
"You mute or somethin' kid? Spill it out!"
"I-I'm Nigawa Tatsu. I'm here t-to join the academy..." Tatsu shrunk slightly before the intimidating ninja. The shinobi took another, closer look at Tatsu.
"Go ahead and go in. Someone'll be waitin' for ya. Go on, get!" The man shooed Tatsu down the path.
Tatsu turned at looked out to the horizon, in the direction of the village he'd left to become a shinobi. I will become a ninja! I'll prove to them I'm worth more than simple farm labor! Smiling, Tatsu turned back towards Sunagakure and continued walking, turning his back on his past and embracing a whole new world.
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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 6:47 pm
Vuckzuck [Well here I go I'll just use a random name for this] Rice laid in what was probably going to be his death bed...a couple blades of grass just thrown into a pile by his teammates. He could feel his body heating up from the foreign poison in his bloodstream making his veins foster an irritating and painful sting. If that wasn't enough torture enough his mind was constantly lingering back to that moment on the battlefield where his young chest was slashed with an enemy katana drenched in poison from there respective village to advance the damage done. This poison was going to kill him, all because his team had no medical ninja. As his body was taking its last breathes he attempted to think about all the things he could've done to avoid this and maybe even survive.Pass
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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 6:49 pm
night_wraith ((I know I don't need to, I just want to make sure my Roleplaying is up to snuf))
The chimes of a church bell could be heard echoing through the city of Jerusalum, people of the town had gathered to witness a public exicution. Some cheered some booed, but one stood quite, head bowed hands clasped to gether as one might see in prayer. He made his way to the middle of the gathered mass. Gently pushing people aside taking no head to there rants or ill words. A white robe was all this praying man wore. The robe of a scholar. The mans eyes where upcast, watching the stage with such intent, that one could look over and see the gears turning in his brain. He turned his head slowly as to not draw attention to himself, there where many escape routes, and if he timed it just right, he may have been able to dart up the roofs into a mass of scholars, and vanish.
A fat man walked onto the stage, which came with a crash of cheers and jeers from the croud. He wore the robes of a nobal man, and looked as if he ate as one to. His voice was loud and deep. Gruff, and tough and worn. "I have gathered you today to whitness this." the man fliped his hand beconing to the three people standing in wait to be hung, to have there lifes cut short. "The exicution of the most lowly and disorderly things that has spewn out of this citys gully hole. They wish you to commit sin, they wish you... To creat disorder. But we shall no have this in my city!" The man raised his fist which came with a loud cheer from the crowd. "A whore.... A gambler... A hiratic." The man spit in each of the citizans faces respectivaly.
The white robed man made his move. Making his way at a swifter pace towards the front. He was no longer gentel and was pushing people with much force out of the way. When he eached the base of the stage he was at a dead sprint, and whit a jump he leaped into the air, a concealed blade in his hand. With one swift move he tackeld the nobal man piercing his brain and putting him to rest. He then jumped from the stage sprinting away from a scared and histarical crowd of people. The jangel of metal could be heard from the gaurds persuing him, but he was to swift, he had made his way onto a rooftop, where he croutched and watched his persuers go by. He smiled just as an arrow skimed his back causing him to fall from the rooftop and creat enough noise that the gaurd once more took after him. The chime of a church bell could be heard, and thats when the man knew what he must do. He sprinted though the city throwing civillains in the way of the gaurd to by him time. A mass of white robed people, much like the ones he wore himself, could be seen exiting from a church, he turned around smiling backing into the croud and becomeing just another scholar, undesernable from one another, he had become just a blade in a crowd.
((Save for a few spelling errors how was it?)) Very good. wink
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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 6:51 pm
lily9433flower I might as well,even if I am a little confused.So here is my RP example. My character is Nayumi Kagami.I am going to hopefully be in a village if i pass.It will also be a somewhat random RP example. RP exampleNayumi sat by a white ash tree.She watched the children play ninja as memories flooded back to her.She sighed and knew she couldn't stay in this village.She stood and took one last look at the joyful children before turning and walking away.She left the village without a word and walked on as the wind blew sakura petals around her,she looked up and saw a rather large sakura tree standing in a forest of oak trees. 'One stands alone.Though one day there shall be growth,and there will no longer be just one.'She thought as she then went on her way and disappeared as the sakura petals danced,being the only witnesses to her departure. Pretty good... you should put spaces betweet your periods/commas and the next scentence. Pass
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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 6:53 pm
3 passes in a row it must be a new record lol
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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 6:54 pm
phoenix112390 ((hello, my name is Lost and Confused...it was like 3 in the morning when I first looked over everything, so I'm pretty much lost...I should post here and then apply to a village right? I put my character up in the Game System thingy, so all I have to do after this is apply and start in a village, right?)) RP sampleTatsu walked to the entrance of Sunagakure, in awe of it's massive stone walls surrounding it. It...It's incredible! I never thought Sunagakure would look like this! Tatsu kept walking towards the village, his mouth hanging open as he looked around at everything. I, I never could've imagined something this amazing, I should've ran away to get here earlier, Tatsu thought. He got to the opening of what looked to be the only entrance into the fortress-like village. A man wearing a Sunagakure headband stopped him before he could enter. (Yup 3nodding ) Pass "What's your business here?" The man demanded, barely looking at Tatsu. Tatsu swallowed hard. This guy must be at least Chunin or higher, this is unreal! The man looked down at him, a frown crossing his face. "You mute or somethin' kid? Spill it out!" "I-I'm Nigawa Tatsu. I'm here t-to join the academy..." Tatsu shrunk slightly before the intimidating ninja. The shinobi took another, closer look at Tatsu. "Go ahead and go in. Someone'll be waitin' for ya. Go on, get!" The man shooed Tatsu down the path. Tatsu turned at looked out to the horizon, in the direction of the village he'd left to become a shinobi. I will become a ninja! I'll prove to them I'm worth more than simple farm labor! Smiling, Tatsu turned back towards Sunagakure and continued walking, turning his back on his past and embracing a whole new world.
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