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Character: Chōumei Sue Akamichi
Technique Name: Odorikuruu [ Dance In Ecstasy ]
Rank: X-Rank_Trained by retraining two techniques over under this format of Karabo, using only the post requirement of one. (profile reductions do not apply)
Type: Taijutsu/Bukijutsu_Training_
Element: Taijutsu/Bukijutsu
Description: Chōumei as a performer and a devote practitioner of the Shinto faith has come to realize that her performances and prayers created to please the various Kamisama of the world are also a Training method for a unique skill. With her performance arts Chōumei develops her the body, mind, and soul(chakra) to fluidly register rhythm and tempo into her martial-arts. The result of this is that Chōumei can perform what might be considered "physical Karabo", but unlike normal Karabo it's an ability that doesn't require a partner but rather paralleling Taijutsu or Bukijutsu techniques that work to a similar effect, working more along Offensive and Defensive lines as classification and only perform one type or the other at a time. If the movements and actions to perform the Jutsu's are conducted in this rhythm Chōumei can perform them at the same time as if they were a single technique no matter the style(s) as long as they match in motion, and only use one activation for two as the second technique becomes supplementary, though the strain and drain(chakra and/or stamina) from these techniques is also combined.
when the techniques are combined they substantially become much stronger like normal karabo increasing the strength of the attack by two times the descriptive ranks of the two techniques combined, and never exceeding two full ranks in boost.
[ex. Sword slash A ( has moderate[3/6] Strenght) + Sword Slash B (has Mild[2/6] Strength) (5/6x2) = (10/6, or 1 rank 4/6) Resonance Sword Slash C ( has a full 1 rank boost and a "heavily" descriptive edge) ]



Character: Chōumei Sue Akamichi
Technique Name: Kyoushin [ Resonance (or unison) ]
Rank: X-Rank_ Trained at B Rank
Type: Taijutsu/Bukijutsu, Genjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: By the beat of her heart and the rhythm of her steps Chōumei calls out to her Kamisama. In actuality she sends out dispersed shock-waves of chakra trough her feet into the ground and out into the air or any medium that sound or chakra may travel over to correspond with another medium in her environment, by design she uses the bells in "Suzu Senbon no Genkaku" [ Illusion Bell Needles ] (but it can work with other mediums). By doing this Chōumei permeates the area with a lucid physical and meta-physical aura of ying & yang Maruton chakra that allows the genjutsu she cast through performing (dancing) or playing music to be felt and heard as long as one is with in the area of effect of her bells. Which carry 10 yards in diameter per bell, and as long as the wave reaches another bell with in it's range they resonate to extend the sound and range of Chōumei's actions. The effects of the genjutsu's remain the same but the kai cost raises by half, and even without seeing Chōumei perform (dance) her genjutsu can be "felt" through the vibrations and activate trough tactile stimulus.
• This jutsu consumes an activation, but is not considered an active Genjutsu, but rather a primer for others. Where in "Suzu Senbon no Genkaku" with in the scope of this Jutsu also becomes simply a primer.
• This jutsu can permeate and resonate among the bells without further cost for 3 turns before requiring another payment for up keep.
• For each rank above the initial training rank this technique gains 5 yards in range, and makes her genjutsu seem more "real".

Odorikuruu [ Dance In Ecstasy ]

Denied:

This technique would bypass the current resolution on Descriptive Rankings, wherein D.R.s from other styles cannot interact or stack with those from others.

Also, in the case of Self-Korabo, while this is generally possible in the case of Ninjutsu being formed and spent alongside each other, by molding the collaborative chakra forces around each other, the physical nature of Buki and Tai generally limit this a little more. Just because two sword swings or styles of punch/strike share a similar stance or a swing pattern doesn't mean that one can force the muscle pattern or physical form behind it to shift and flow together, increasing the overall force. All are thrown from a base form.

Now, combining Complex or spiritual effects into each other may be a good match, but, also like standard korabo and self-korabo, instead of granting a doubled D.R. increase, I would limit this to the standard Korabo bonus of +1 Rank above the Highest Rank initially applied.

Kyoushin [ Resonance ]

Pending

I like the implications of Kyoushin, but it needs some resolutions. Such as the permeation factor to it. This needs to be stated whether it sets a simple continuing effect, with a matching upkeep, or a singular use, if you enter x-area, you fall into said effect.

Officially, I also want to tie this into the traps system, since it falls into the ability to set up fields, using the bells. But, in the same fell action, I disagree with it gaining an additional 5 yard range from bell to bell per rank above B rank, as, where it stands, you're getting 30 feet base at anything up to B Rank, A would net you 35 foot diameter, etc, but then any chain of bells, makes the fields possible truly catastrophic in range. Take a bit of time to address these and represent this, and I'll be glad to readdress this again.

Also, I would ask that you quantify what you mean by more 'real' in the case of Genjutsu.  

[Wolfe Whitehorn]

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Character: Kaori Raigyo
Technique Name: Daiyamondorōtasu [ Diamond Lotus ]
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raigyo Bloodline
Description: This lotus is permanent, but holds no real emotions within it upon creation. It can be infused with any emotion that the user wishes, and it will hold that emotion until it is used, or replaced, but the flower, even after use, is still there, just can't be used again until it has been infused with more emotion. It takes one post to create the lotus, then it takes another post to infuse it with an emotion. Once used, it takes a two post cool down before it can be infused with another emotion. Takes an S-rank to create, but only a D-rank to activate. Kaori would be immune to the effects, since her chakra created it, but everyone else around her would feel the effects of whatever emotion is used. The effects last 10 posts. Cannot be created in battle, must be prepared before hand, can four at a time. Must be prepared outside of battle. Examples of emotions: Fear, love, lust, depression, hopelessness, hate, anger, calm, sadness, apathy. To combine emotions, Kaori must activate two or more flowers at one time. Example: Anger/Sorrow requires two flowers.

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Denied:

Pending an update of the Custom Bloodlines, I am putting this technique as a denial because of the following conflict of techniques. It conflicts with the Ueru Kihaku no Jutsu [ The Art of Planting the Soul ] technique of the bloodline, and in fact, is a more powerful form of the technique, for a lesser cost. While, Planting the Soul requires Double Casting the technique to create any complex emotions, the Diamond Lotus can store complex emotions for a single creation cost and a D-ranked storage cost. While it requires using multiple uses to apply multiple emotions in a sequence, and cannot be created in combat, the flower itself is a perpetual medium, which itself, seems to bypass a large part of the bloodline itself.

It does well by attempting to limit itself, but, the other techniques of this style that have post limits often have some hazardous effect when used for prolonged times, such as Shimeru Kihaku no Jutsu [ The Art of Strangling the Soul ] which deprives the effected of consciousness, then ultimately makes them suicidal.  

[Wolfe Whitehorn]

Kazuraii

Character: Kaz Mugen
Technique Name: Rasenshogun
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: This technique works much like the wind Rasengan. In fact it is required to learn this technique. By pushing two Rasengans with each hand and reversing the spin of one of them so that they are spinning in opposite directions. This will cause the two to create a large destructive force the closer you push them together. Once the two are touching it will be creating a typhoon like wind that some without high senses of balance can be thrown from the force alone. This attack can be used in a few ways to assault the opponents.
Rasenshogun can be thrown: If this attack is thrown it will cause massive wind waves all around the two Rasengans spinning around eachother as they move forward. After ten yards this attack will explode without the aid of the users chakra. Causing violent wind out in all directions of the blast. This also occurs if the attack would hit a solid object or target.
Rasenshogun can be merged: Doing this is highly dangerous even to the user. This causes the blast to explode in their palms. They are not as effected as those around them but it will cause a blast strong enough to even send the user flying. Used in a last resort fashion.
Rasenshogun can be seperated: By throwing the attack the user can control the rotation of the two techniques and when desired during the path it travels can make a tearing like motion with both of their arms outward causing the two to blast outward. This is used should a target evade the attack. B rank violent wind to erupt outward in the direction the user darted their arms. (Can only do this in up to 2 directions)

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Rasenshogun can be merged: Doing this is highly dangerous even to the user. This causes the blast to explode in their palms. They are not as effected as those around them but it will cause a blast strong enough to even send the user flying. Used in a last resort fashion.

As evidenced by Naruto's use of the Rasengan and the varying times throughout the series where ones own chakra nature has backfired onto them, wind and fire being the most prevalent in doing so, I find this to be largely acceptable. Short range, however, 30 feet and it blows up, high risk, high reward.  

[Wolfe Whitehorn]

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Character: Kaori Raigyo
Technique Name: Chakurarōtasu (Chakra Lotus)
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raigyo Bloodline
Description: This lotus is similar to the diamond lotus that Kaori created, only instead of holding emotion, it holds chakra. Kaori can create up to four of these lotuses at any one time. It takes an S rank amount of chakra to create one lotus, and then it can only hold up to half of her natural chakra within the blossom . This can only be used twice in battle, and must be filled outside of battle. At the point of use, the flower is crushed by the user, and the whole amount of chakra currently stored in the flower at the moment of use is then absorbed into the user. Once used, there is a 5 post cool down before the user can use another lotus.

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