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PostPosted: Wed Jan 12, 2011 3:11 pm


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Demon: Denied: I want you to add more into the what you know spot, because there's more to the bloodline than that! Use more of the clan techniques as well.


Edit the II: Never mind. I've learned it's never worth arguing when it comes to this stuff because I always know the answer. New, editted version of the post to come.
PostPosted: Wed Jan 12, 2011 4:14 pm


Rpc Name: As of yet un-named. Applying first before I make a profile.
Village: Iwagakure
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Smoke Shifting bloodline
What you know about the clan/bl: These users tend to be secretive. When in smoke form they are unharmed by simple physical attacks, like Taijutsu or any weapons. If a shinobi were to take in any of the smoke while the user is in the smoke form, it’s toxic and will harm them. Smoke shifters are weak against water and wind based jutsu’s, as well as very dangerous when used around fire type jutsu, could cause an explosion. Three posts are the limit in smoke form, as well as the ability to use the smoke form up to four times in a fight. Ability to become a black color while in the smoke form and this allows the user to keep their identity out in the open for the ones around to see.
Rp Sample:
"Hey you, stop there!" a voice shouted out. The figure walked on, a hood pulled low over his eyes. It was hard to tell anything about the figure other than it was obviously male. The face was obscured, and the huge trench coat the figure wore obscured the body. One of the guards that yelled at the figure raised his katana. "I said stop!" he shouted. The figure kept walking. Pissed, the guard stepped forward and slashed through the figure. It exploded into a cloud of smoke, The smoke was cloying, and the guard tried to block it out, but he breathed in too much. He coughed and hacked, falling back. The other guard walked over to help and he too breathed in the smoke. Within minutes the two lay dead.

The same figure stepped out from behind a tree, a mischievous smile on his face. A clever one-liner rested upon his lips, but he decided against it. It wasn't the time, nor the place, for such silliness. No, he had a job. And he always had the chance to spout off one after killing his target.
He put his hands together in the form of a few handseals. He mumbled the words to his technique, and disappeared into a puff of smoke. He'd been here many times before, so he knew how to get in. He could use this technique because he knew this hallway intimately. He appeared on the other side in a puff of smoke. The two inner guards turned in surprise but before they could attack the figure that formed in front of them, blades stabbed their neck, a pair of kunai in the figure's hands. He slid them into his belt and kept walking.

The next group, he didn't quite expect. A pair of guards rushed out from a side passage. That was new. The figure barely had time to react, but did pull off a jutsu in time. A cloud of poisonous smoke spread from his body, engulfing the three men. The two guards were distracted, and tried to escape the deadly smoke but ultimately failed, collapsing to the ground as the figure walked away, leaning on a wall for a moment, trying to wonder if there were more unexpected traps...or if the room was still in the same spot.

The figure moved on. In his typical flamboyant style, he had a special way he wanted to defeat the single guard he saw ahead. He did a few hand seals, a dragon made of smoke appearing behind him. The dragon charged at the guard while the figure made noise to attract the guard's attention. The guard was so focused on the dragon that he never saw the throwing knife that arced through the air and embedded itself into the guard's forehead. The smoke dragon disappeared, and the figure went to retrieve his knife, cleaning it on the man's shirt. He turned the next corner, going over the floor plan in his mind.

As he walked, another unexpected addition caught him by surprise. The floor shifted and suddenly gave way. "Son of a-" his curse was cut short by him falling fast toward some spikes below. He whipped out a pair of thick knives and stabbed them into the wall, slowing to a stop just before the spikes. He lowered himself gingerly between the spikes, did a few handseals, and retrieved his knives from the wall as his legs turned to smoke. He concentrated some chakara to his "legs" and used it to drift casually up the side and over the lip, turning his legs back to normal so he could continue his rampage.

This was the last hallway, he knew that for sure. He walked forward to the two final guards that had their backs to him. He made sure he was quiet. Just behind the last guard he did his handseals and mumbled the technique's name, his arms becoming wisps of smoke that he wrapped around the guard's mouth to choke him to death. The second one turned just as the figure's arms returned to normal, and he took a knife to the chest, dropping him quite quickly. He retrieved his knife and stopped to take a chakara pill, just in case. He turned the corner, and started to walk down the final hallway to his target.

As the figure walked, he shed his trench coat, wisps of smoke curling off his body as he walked down the hallway. He took a right turn, then a left, standing in front of a huge guard, a massive sword in his hands. "You..." the guard said. "Me." the figure said with a mischievous grin. The sword swung down and sliced through the figure. The figure laughed. "Such violence." the figure said. He formed back to normal and his kunai came out quickly, impaling the guard through the chest. The second one came quickly and speared the guard through the throat.

The figure threw open the doors, watching with delight as his target jumped up in fear from his desk. "Hey! You miss me?" the figure asked. The man took out a knife and threw it at the figure, who dodged it. "Not nice." the figure tutted. He ran forward as the man tried to draw a second knife. The figure vaulted over the desk and the man raised his knife, expecting the figure to land in front of him. Instead the figure landed behind him, picking up a vase from a pedestal. "My employer wants this." he commented. "Who's your employer?" the man asked, having wheeled around to face the figure. The figure suddenly threw the vase at the man, the ceramic shattering in his face. The figure grabbed his fallen knife and stabbed the man through the chest six times. "I am. And I'm over that vase." he said as he left. He hesitated at the door. <********, forgot my clever one liner."

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 12, 2011 4:49 pm


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@Demon: I've gone over the whole thing. You seem to know the bloodline better the before, as for your sample.
Don't think I want to mess with that rp.
I approve of it.

@Jade: I can take over this for you.
I need something to do and I used to do this before our jobs got switched.

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 12, 2011 7:05 pm


((So im not sure if there is a head of the bloodline for Mokuton, the list looks empty to me, but there may be some mistake. Either way i am applying for head of bloodline if it is taken then i will be happy with just regular member of bloodline.))

Rpc Name: Lana Koyuki
Village: Iwagakure
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Mokuton (wood release)
What you know about the clan/bl: In the anime and manga mokuton is an extremely rare bloodline that the first hokage had. It was powerfully destructive and creative. It was even said that the hokage could make an entire forest appear in non wooded areas.The style was reason in Tenzo or Yamato who uses earth/ water mixed to create wood.
Rp Sample:

(because of my low level i will be giving my character in sample a chuunin level)

Walking along a beach with white sandy shores Lana looks to the dsitance with a smile. Her home of Iwa has been rather quiet lately and because of this she has become very comfortable. Kicking up a burst of sand Lana stops for a second to look out into the distance. Unknown to her is that two ninja--rogues of Iwa--hide among the rock walls in the distance. They have known Lana for much time and have seen her powers and how useful they could be. The two ninja together rank about a jounin level together and are masters of mixing elements. Get those two apart and they are mere chuunin levels. Sighing Lana plops down on her butt and supports her arms out behind her. Taking a relaxing moment She stops to close her eyes for a second.

The two rogues hidden in the rocks make their move keeping ever silent. Keeping to the rocks they know where their advantage is and will use it to try to take Lana down. Forming and then throwing a bunch of stone shuriken towards Lana, they whizz through the air which catches her attention just in time. Opening a single eye she sees a barrage of shuriken heading towards her. "Crap." She forms a single handseal and the shuriken all smash into her. Her body exploding in smoke and turning into a log. The two ninja wonder where the hell that wood came from. From under the sand a tree rises quickly twisting and knotting on itself, Standing upon an adjacent branch Lana tracks the ninja using the direction the shuriken were tossed from. Giant boulders begin raining down upon Lana as the earth trembles and shakes. "Seems you are Iwa ninja." She says before quickly jumping from boulder to boulder weaving signs inbetween her jumping She lands on a boulder upside down and smashes her hand into it. Wood pillars form and catch the rock before it falls completely Sinking slowly into sand Lana runs to the other side of the rock and makes a handsign. The wood bursts through the rocks and she crouches atop one of the pillars her hand down forming a wooden weapon from below her.

The two rogue ninja start to panic at this moment. Their position has been found out and Lana is quickly ascending towards them. They weave a string of handsigns and end by clasping their hands together. A rush of mud falls down upon Lana. She shakes her head with a smile. So they are using Earth and water mixed huh? She thinks to herself. This will tire her, but be worth it. Forcing another set of handsigns an earthen dome surrounds her making the mud splash off all around. Still rising above the mud. The two rogue ninja harden the mud around Lana trying to capture her. The two ninja move through the earth and reach the wooden dome of Lana's. Laughing they know full heartidly that they have caught her.

"Don't celebrate too soon you two." Lana pokes them both on the shoulder. She is able to use earth just as well as she can use wood element and the major flaw of these two ninja is that they forgot that simple fact. They forgot to never let someone inbetween them else their combination jutsu are worthless. They both spring away in opposite directions getting out of the now earth pillar reaching to the top of the cave. They stand upside down very far away from each other. Perfect, Lana smiles and finally decides to wear herself out like planned. Slamming her fist into the ground a bunch of roots and trees form out of the ground twisting and turning a whole forest appears upside down on the cave and becomes quite a hassle for the rogues to dodge. One of the rogue ninja gets his whole body caught among a tree that grows around him the other barely avoids being stabbed to death by a branch and is now wounded beyond belief. "How could this have happened to us? When did she learn to do this?"

Appearing right side up slowly forming out of a wooden branch behind the injured rogue ninja Lana is breathing heavily and almost out of chakra. "Through hardwork and keeping close ties to those i love. To this village was i able to get this strong." She smiles and pulls her scalpel out (medical ninja) Lunging forwards she slices the man underneath his armpit hitting a major artirery he will bleed dry in five minutes, that is if she didn't as well stab him badly in the shoulder. The rogue is already dead. Walking to the other rogue that is encased in wood she has a tough time even walking there as she has to jump from branch to branch. Finally reaching the man after much time she shakes her head. Seeing his bloody iwa headband. "I knew it was you two." she says softly."Why would you do this?"

"You would never understand anyways." The rogue laughs trying to struggle free. "You will never know the pain of living that we have endured." The ninja works himself into a fury and gets nowhere because of it.

"Well I guess I will never understand you, since your anger has consumed you." Lana sighs as she looks down to see a fellow Iwa ninja running up the column of earth to help back her up. The other Iwa ninja is none other than the leader of Anbu.

"Nice catch there Lana.." He says while landing on the same branch as her. His face covered to keep secrecy he looks to Lana. "Will you be alright? It looks like you've used up your chakra." Lana breathing heavily is unable to answer. He just looks back to the rogue ninja captured in wood. "I will keep an eye on him. you get back to the village safely ok?" Lana nods her head and makes her way down to the sandy beach slowly. Plopping down on the soft sand she looks up at the change of scenery. Seeing more Anbu hop up to the leaders position on order to safely move the rogue and get more information out of him.

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Laram Myusai

PostPosted: Wed Jan 12, 2011 7:07 pm


Rpc Name: Laram Myusai
Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Crystal Element (Kurisutaru: Crystal)
What you know about the clan/bl: By combining earth and lightning elements together the user can create dense crystals to use. The color of the crystal depends on the user's chakra color.
Rp Sample:

Ketsue ducked his head as he heard a shuriken whiz past his ear. He spun around to face his new attacker. In front of him stood yet another mercenary after the bounty on his head. "Not another one, why can't you leave me in peace?" His question went unanswered as his attacker threw three kunai knives towards him and began to sprint around him. Ketsue followed the man with his eyes as he formed three crystal shuriken from the air and threw them towards the oncoming kunai knives. After Ketsue heard the sound of three seperate clangs of metal hitting crystal, he formed the proper hand signs for his crystal prison jutsu. Three identical crystal spikes sprang up from the ground around the mercenary, trapping him quite effectively. Ketsue leaped in to the air and began furiously making hand signs. After he finished he was directly over his attacker, who was looking up at him with a mortified look on his face. For good reason, Ketsue was now glowing a radiant blue color as an aura surrounded his entire body. Ketsue folded his arms across his chest and opened them, raining down a barrage of hundreds of crystal shuriken on his helpless opponent.

Landing on the other side of the crystal formation he created around the mercenary, Ketsue stood up and surveyed his handiwork. A satisfied look adorned his face as he confirmed that his attacker was dead. Another one dead, many more to come. As the light around Ketsue faded he visualized his camp in his mind. He had picked the spot the night before because it was only half a mile away from the town. He performed a single handsign and disappeared from the spot, leaving many tiny crystals in his place. They shone a deep blue as they reflected the light of the sun. Eventually the sparkles faded as the pieces fell to the ground.
PostPosted: Wed Jan 12, 2011 7:13 pm


@Eris: Just so you know, you cannot take the clan head position until you reach Chuunin. Until then, you would just be a member of the clan.

@Origami: There are many grammatical and spelling errors, making it hard to read. Please fix those.

Support ninja is not a Hatake requirement or bonus, so I'm not sure why it is there.

Please, dont use the substitution jutsu. Its for Noobs.

Shiro Chakra Kouyou is not a jutsu, but a jutsu amplifier. It adds range and cutting power to a weapon strike or weapon based jutsu, it does not require handseals or a spoken word.

You never made mention to the speed of a Hatake in the sample.

The story itself isnt very clear.

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Martin Spiralwave
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 1:36 pm


Rpc Name: Still working on it
Village: Kirigakure or Otogakure
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Hyouton
What you know about the clan/bl: Members with this bloodline are born with the ability to manipulate water and wind at a young age, a skill that manifests into an ability to combine these two chakra natures to create low temperature techniques involving snow and ice. Quite simply they are able to manipulate ice/snow and are able to perform one handed handseals.
Rp Sample:

Mid-summer near the outskirts of the Land of Fire. The dense clusters of foliage and vegetation sparkled as morning dew caught the faint rays of sunlight through a dense canopy. Woodland animals audibly scurried along the forest floor, chattering, buzzing, or growling to their neighbhors. It was a pleasant feeling to be surrounded by such harmonic creatures, but the full implications of their activities had no effect on the somber individual standing erect within a small clearing.

He was well aware he was being followed by a team of three shinobi and their apparent familiarity with the landscape lead him to believe that they were Konoha shinobi. Tensai widened his stance and closed his eyes as three shadows passed over head, landng five meters in front of him. As they landed the temperature plummeted without warning, frost creeping down from the canopy while snow gently rained from the sky. The Konoha ninja responded admirably but Tensai was far too intelligent for them. He was well prepared for the three kunai that were fired toward his stationary body.

His left hand formed a single Tiger Seal and by extending btoh hands forward the air instantly crackled and became a transparent shield. The kunai wer easily deflected but Tensai wasn't done with his attack. He slammed his palm against the Ice Shield and it instantly shattered into a dozen large shards that were fired at high velocities as the middle Shinobi. The suddness of the attack left the young man a ruined and bloody mess on the floor and his friends screamed out his name in vain.

In the meantime the temperature was still plummeting and the snow was beggining to build up. Tensai leapt backwards while forming two different handseals with each hand, simultaneously creating a violent blizzard that instantly erased visibility while creating a large mirrior of ice that his body effortlessly entered. During the blizzard the two remaining shinobi were speaking into their radios to alert the rest of their village. In retrospect, when facing an enemy who could exhibit so much control over the enviroment, remaining in said enviroment was usually a bad idea.

The once serence forest exploded in giant spires of ice, crossing each other and reach several dozen meters in height. These spikes could be seen from the village but Tensai never came to the village for infiltration. It was a simple warning from Kirigakure regarding Konoha's investigation in a series of deaths linked to the Seven Swordsmen.

When ANBU from Konoha arrived they would find severly lacerated and mutilated corpses encased in large sards of ice. Their eyes were filled with small blades of ice and missing parts were replaced with artful transparent replicas. The message to Konoha was written on a simple scroll left at the feet of one of the larg shards. The massive spikes of ice would begin splintering once the scroll was removed, droppig heavy chunks of snow and sharp spears of ice onto any unsuspecting shinobi.
PostPosted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 12:24 pm


Rpc Name: Laram Myusai
Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Crystal Element (Kurisutaru: Crystal)
What you know about the clan/bl: By combining earth and lightning elements together the user can create dense crystals to use. The color of the crystal depends on the user's chakra color.
Rp Sample:

Ketsue ducked his head as he heard a shuriken whiz past his ear. He spun around to face his new attacker. In front of him stood yet another mercenary after the bounty on his head. "Not another one, why can't you leave me in peace?" His question went unanswered as his attacker threw three kunai knives towards him and began to sprint around him. Ketsue followed the man with his eyes as he formed three crystal shuriken from the air and threw them towards the oncoming kunai knives. After Ketsue heard the sound of three seperate clangs of metal hitting crystal, he formed the proper hand signs for his crystal prison jutsu. Three identical crystal spikes sprang up from the ground around the mercenary, trapping him quite effectively. Ketsue leaped in to the air and began furiously making hand signs. After he finished he was directly over his attacker, who was looking up at him with a mortified look on his face. For good reason, Ketsue was now glowing a radiant blue color as an aura surrounded his entire body. Ketsue folded his arms across his chest and opened them, raining down a barrage of hundreds of crystal shuriken on his helpless opponent.

Landing on the other side of the crystal formation he created around the mercenary, Ketsue stood up and surveyed his handiwork. A satisfied look adorned his face as he confirmed that his attacker was dead. Another one dead, many more to come. As the light around Ketsue faded he visualized his camp in his mind. He had picked the spot the night before because it was only half a mile away from the town. He performed a single handsign and disappeared from the spot, leaving many tiny crystals in his place. They shone a deep blue as they reflected the light of the sun. Eventually the sparkles faded as the pieces fell to the ground.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 4:15 pm


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@Martin: Could you add a few more Jutsu to your sample.

@j3sus: Add some more to the knowledge as well as to your rp sample.

@Eris: I'm pretty sure Greg accepted you...
Well from what I read I got that.
He was just pointing out that you cannot get Head of the Mokuton until you reached the rank Chuunin.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 4:17 pm


Actually, no. I was simply pointing out a misconception, I did not give an approval or a denial.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 4:22 pm


Crimsondot
Crimsondot
Rpc Name: Tsubasa Deido
Village: Otogakure
Rank: Academy student.
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Suigetsu
What you know about the clan/bl: This ninja can change their bodies into water. They are weak to Raiton and Hyoton, taking large amounts of damage from Raiton and being frozen by Hyoton. And must constantly drink water. They are more skilled in Suiton than others. They can change their bodies to make their limbs more muscular, allowing them to carry heavy objects. They can also meld with bodies of water, Allowing for quick and easy travel. They can even use this ability to go as far as healing themselves when merged with water.
Rp Sample: Tsubasa was by one of his favorite places. It was a large freshwater lake, and he sat against a rock, with one leg bent back. He was drinking a bottle of water, sighing. He had to drink the water, a rather depressing limitation of his condition. He was just staring off into the distance, not really focusing on anything, when he heard a shocking battle cry from above. A ninja in a cloud headband jumped over the rock, katana at ready, he took Tsubasa completely by surprise, and if he didn’t do something right away, he would be split, completely in half. Tsubasa quickly spat out, “Hydration technique!” He then sunk into a puddle, avoiding the attack, and a cruel death. He stood up in his human form again, and his foe had moved back, sheathed his sword, and began to make handseals for an unknown jutsu. Well Tsubasa could not let that happen. He charged forward, attempting to clock the cloud ninja right in the face with his fist. Tsubasa then heard his target shout out, “Heki no Jutsu!” And his body began to flow with electrical sparks. As Tsubasa touched his foe, he flew backwards, his fist burned. “AHHH” Tsubasa cried out, as he took a huge amount of damage from that attack, being made completely out of water. As he steadied himself, the Kumo ninja punched him right into the water, sending him sprawling. He then quickly used another technique, Great Water Arm. He reformed out of the water, and charged at his opponent, punching him with a much more muscular arm, and sent him flying into the rock, despite the ninja’s attempt to block. Tsubasa picked up the injured ninja, and was about to clobber him again, when the ninja kicked him again, into the water once more. When the cloud ninja pulled out his sword again; Tsubasa used his Hydration Technique, and performed another jutsu, Water arms. 4 arms shot out of the water at his foe, and they snaked towards him. The Kumo swordsman slashed one, and another, but his arm was grabbed by the third, which picked him up, and the fourth grabbed his neck, preventing his scream as he was strangled to death.


Didn't see this accepted, so repost


Okay, to anybody who misinterprets this, I am not being pushy. I'm okay with waiting, but this keeps getting buried.
Yeah, its the updated version, if anybody is asking.
PostPosted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 4:22 pm


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Okay thanks for the clarification Greg!
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 4:28 pm


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@Crimson: Seems to be alright.
Approved.

@Eris: Just add some more to your knowledge and you should be good to go.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 4:30 pm


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IMPORTANT!
Recently I have found most of you just doing the jutsu's in your rp sample and it leaves the acceptor to search for the jutsu used.
So could you please list the jutsu your using for your rpc's (future) clan or bloodline.

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