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 Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 11:41 am
Cattra Nightblade Snake311 Cattra Nightblade Snake311 Cattra Nightblade Kitten120 um, okay how about this? "Ug...who could be at the door at this time?" she said before stumbling out of her large bed. Checking the clock one the wall she saw that it was almost 1:00. thats quite well. Umm Id say you already learned the basics to RPing, its almost like story writing I find. To learn more I would suggest you find a RP that looks like fun to you and join it, (make sure its in the beginners area because if you jump in to deep, well not a good thing) for the way I like to learn (or learned, long time ago) was I took part in small ones. After a good month you will sort of get the idea. When you want to become advance you learn to write longer posts which have more description's for example. As John left the store he looks back and sighs "I wish I had enough to buy that cake..." Higher level: As John picked up the bag from the Superstore he looks back and sighs slightly. "If I only had..." he looks at his wallet "five bucks more... I could buy that cake for Sora...." he sighs once more "Man.. I need to get a better job..." and with that he walks off. ((Sorry, I am every where today. Great evaluation! As for the student, I would of liked to know what door it was, or if there is a plant in the room, those types of things help the reader make a mental picture of the room.)) (( Lol its oke, I know the feeling, if it wasnt for firefox I couldnt be everywhere either, also yes, what snake said, it helps paint the image into a person's head... I cant believe I forgot that)) ((I forget it most of the time. Thats going to be the next lesson in my journal.)) ((sounds good, im going to be away fro a bit think u can take over for me, thanks)) ((Sure.))
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 12:51 pm
Hey, could you teach me how to roleplay? I'm not sure I'm going about it the right way.
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 12:54 pm
Taywen Hey, could you teach me how to roleplay? I'm not sure I'm going about it the right way. Sure lets start with an exercise. It is one in the morning and you hear a knocking at your door. ((I am throwing you into a situation, just role play through it so I can see at what level you are at.))
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 12:59 pm
Bob frowned and raised his head. His digital clock read 1:02. Who could be knocking at this time? Somewhat annoyed, he got up, pulling on a pair of sweat pants lying on the floor beside his bed, because he slept nude.
Bob walked down the hall, tripping over various objects that littered his less-than-clean apartment. Cursing under his breath, he somehow made it to the door in one piece and answered the door, ready to tell whoever the heck was there that they needed to learn a few things about proper calling hours and the like!
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 1:02 pm
Taywen Bob frowned and raised his head. His digital clock read 1:02. Who could be knocking at this time? Somewhat annoyed, he got up, pulling on a pair of sweat pants lying on the floor beside his bed, because he slept nude. Bob walked down the hall, tripping over various objects that littered his less-than-clean apartment. Cursing under his breath, he somehow made it to the door in one piece and answered the door, ready to tell whoever the heck was there that they needed to learn a few things about proper calling hours and the like! ((Sorry it took so long to reply. That was pretty good. Let me just think of something to tell you. Other than to use the appropriate characters for dialog and action I think your alright.))
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 1:04 pm
Snake311 Taywen Bob frowned and raised his head. His digital clock read 1:02. Who could be knocking at this time? Somewhat annoyed, he got up, pulling on a pair of sweat pants lying on the floor beside his bed, because he slept nude. Bob walked down the hall, tripping over various objects that littered his less-than-clean apartment. Cursing under his breath, he somehow made it to the door in one piece and answered the door, ready to tell whoever the heck was there that they needed to learn a few things about proper calling hours and the like! ((Sorry it took so long to reply. That was pretty good. Let me just think of something to tell you. Other than to use the appropriate characters for dialog and action I think your alright.)) ((I will message the other teachers and get back to you. I want to see what they think.))
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 1:06 pm
Snake311 Snake311 Taywen Bob frowned and raised his head. His digital clock read 1:02. Who could be knocking at this time? Somewhat annoyed, he got up, pulling on a pair of sweat pants lying on the floor beside his bed, because he slept nude. Bob walked down the hall, tripping over various objects that littered his less-than-clean apartment. Cursing under his breath, he somehow made it to the door in one piece and answered the door, ready to tell whoever the heck was there that they needed to learn a few things about proper calling hours and the like! ((Sorry it took so long to reply. That was pretty good. Let me just think of something to tell you. Other than to use the appropriate characters for dialog and action I think your alright.)) ((I will message the other teachers and get back to you. I want to see what they think.)) All right, thanks for your time biggrin
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 1:08 pm
Taywen Snake311 Snake311 Taywen Bob frowned and raised his head. His digital clock read 1:02. Who could be knocking at this time? Somewhat annoyed, he got up, pulling on a pair of sweat pants lying on the floor beside his bed, because he slept nude. Bob walked down the hall, tripping over various objects that littered his less-than-clean apartment. Cursing under his breath, he somehow made it to the door in one piece and answered the door, ready to tell whoever the heck was there that they needed to learn a few things about proper calling hours and the like! ((Sorry it took so long to reply. That was pretty good. Let me just think of something to tell you. Other than to use the appropriate characters for dialog and action I think your alright.)) ((I will message the other teachers and get back to you. I want to see what they think.)) All right, thanks for your time biggrin ((My pleasure.))
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 1:14 pm
Taywen Snake311 Snake311 Taywen Bob frowned and raised his head. His digital clock read 1:02. Who could be knocking at this time? Somewhat annoyed, he got up, pulling on a pair of sweat pants lying on the floor beside his bed, because he slept nude. Bob walked down the hall, tripping over various objects that littered his less-than-clean apartment. Cursing under his breath, he somehow made it to the door in one piece and answered the door, ready to tell whoever the heck was there that they needed to learn a few things about proper calling hours and the like! ((Sorry it took so long to reply. That was pretty good. Let me just think of something to tell you. Other than to use the appropriate characters for dialog and action I think your alright.)) ((I will message the other teachers and get back to you. I want to see what they think.)) All right, thanks for your time biggrin Alright, first thing is first, Yes, You are going about it the right way, that was very nice piece of work you wrote, you could, if you wish, fir in with the level two roleplayer's if you felt like it, that was very good.
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 3:04 pm
((Wow, that is very good, very literate, and good for some one who doesn't know how to role play.
Oh, and what happened to the other guy that we where tutoring?))
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 3:12 pm
veinkiller ((Wow, that is very good, very literate, and good for some one who doesn't know how to role play. Oh, and what happened to the other guy that we where tutoring?)) ((He is not here right now..))
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 3:13 pm
veinkiller ((Wow, that is very good, very literate, and good for some one who doesn't know how to role play. Oh, and what happened to the other guy that we where tutoring?)) Dono, and isnt it now... man... they will make a good Rper tho.))
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 3:14 pm
Cattra Nightblade veinkiller ((Wow, that is very good, very literate, and good for some one who doesn't know how to role play. Oh, and what happened to the other guy that we where tutoring?)) Dono, and isnt it now... man... they will make a good Rper tho.)) ((I am sure we can turn them into semi decent role players, it will take time though.))
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 3:17 pm
Snake311 Cattra Nightblade veinkiller ((Wow, that is very good, very literate, and good for some one who doesn't know how to role play. Oh, and what happened to the other guy that we where tutoring?)) Dono, and isnt it now... man... they will make a good Rper tho.)) ((I am sure we can turn them into semi decent role players, it will take time though.)) ((Yea, but everything takes time though.))
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 3:26 pm
veinkiller Snake311 Cattra Nightblade veinkiller ((Wow, that is very good, very literate, and good for some one who doesn't know how to role play. Oh, and what happened to the other guy that we where tutoring?)) Dono, and isnt it now... man... they will make a good Rper tho.)) ((I am sure we can turn them into semi decent role players, it will take time though.)) ((Yea, but everything takes time though.)) ((bah, so true... sometimes wish it wasnt but it is))
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