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 Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 4:51 pm
Chapter Six is up. It's a bit shorter than some of the others, I think. I don't plan on having that trend continue, though. Anyway, please comment and suggestions are appreciated.
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 4:58 pm
You used my title?
Or did you already plan it like that before I thought of it?
Anyways, great chapter.
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 5:02 pm
Lifeless-Fox You used my title?
Or did you already plan it like that before I thought of it?
Anyways, great chapter. No, I used your title. I already told you that I hadn't realized that I was putting Nightmare in Dreamland. I only noticed when people started pointing it out. xd
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 5:04 pm
great chapter Masamune A little short but it feels really epic nicely done
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 5:06 pm
Masamune 5.0 Lifeless-Fox You used my title?
Or did you already plan it like that before I thought of it?
Anyways, great chapter. No, I used your title. I already told you that I hadn't realized that I was putting Nightmare in Dreamland. I only noticed when people started pointing it out. xd Sweet. I thought you intended it at first.
Lifeless has left his mark. >_>
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 5:08 pm
Sauvie great chapter Masamune A little short but it feels really epic nicely done Yeah, the epicness is conpensation for the shortness. But don't worry, the next chapter will be long and epic.
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 5:09 pm
Masamune 5.0 Sauvie great chapter Masamune A little short but it feels really epic nicely done Yeah, the epicness is conpensation for the shortness. But don't worry, the next chapter will be long and epic. Lepic?
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 5:10 pm
Epic, like DragonForce. O:
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 5:11 pm
Sauvie Masamune 5.0 Sauvie great chapter Masamune A little short but it feels really epic nicely done Yeah, the epicness is conpensation for the shortness. But don't worry, the next chapter will be long and epic. Lepic? Or eping. xd
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 8:08 pm
Nice chapter I liked it. Quote: It would be unwise to leave while Meta_Ducky was still in combat with the Azure Knight.
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 8:17 pm
Nice Chapter. A bit on the short and depressing side though....
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 8:52 pm
I just read all of them tonight. Keep up the good work!
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 10:04 pm
Seaphron Nice chapter I liked it. Quote: It would be unwise to leave while Meta_Ducky was still in combat with the Azure Knight. Thanks for the catch. @ Tatsuman: Not every chapter can be happy.
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 11:00 am
I came here to read the story for a reason I cant remember wait subliminal advertising.... crap
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 6:12 pm
Great chapter.
Lol Ducky got pwned.
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