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 Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 1:34 pm
Hoping to have it up today or tomorrow so you can read the full version
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 2:35 pm
Here We Go! Time For Chapter 15. Sorry For Any Spelling Mistakes And All That Junk.
Chapter 15
The next 2 weeks went by smoothly. Wake up, Eat, School, Gerard, Eat, Sleep. That was how the days went, you can probably guess what my favourite time of the day was. But that night something would change.
"Give Me The Remote Ky!" Frankie whinned as I jumped off of the couch to the other end of the living room.
"Never!" I replied. Frankie lunged towards me, catching me by the ankle as he fell from the jump pulling me to the ground too.
"Let go of my foot!" I squealed as I tried to crawl away. Unfortunetly he had a tight hold on my foot and pulled me back towards him.
"I Have You Now!" He called when I was only a few inches away.
"Not so fast!" I said as I kicked his hand and ran away. Frankie Jumped to his feet and ran after me. Soon we were in my bedroom, me standing trapped on the bed and Frankie standing in the doorway.
"Now I really do have you!" He joked as he ran toward the bed and jumped towards me, landing ontop of me as I lay on the bed.
"Get off." I whinned, not meaning a word of it. Frankie just smiled and stared into my eyes. I knew he was leaning forward but didn't stop him. Soon our lips met and we wrapped our arms around each other as we depened the kiss. We didn't even hear the door open, all we heard was a large gasp. I looked up planning to find Mikey there so I could say it was all a mistake again, but this time it was Gerard standing there watching us. I jumped up and immediatly started apologizing.
"I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry. Please forgive me." I pleaded, but Gerard just stood there shocked and Frankie was of no help either for he was doing the same. The two friends stared at each other until Gerard finally spoke.
"Get away from me, you slut." He said as he turned around and ran from the house. I tried to run after him but Mikey grabbed me before I could make it out the door.
"Just leave him alone." Mikey said, I could tell he was mad. "You've hurt him enough already." I pulled myself from Mikey's grip and ran from the house. I wasn't looking for Gerard, I was just trying to get away from everyone. I ran for what seemed like hours before I finally stopped. I looked up at the tall building infront of me and thought of a way that I could finally get away from the world. I quickly climbed up the fire escape and sat at the top of the building. I looked down over the city below me, I could see people going to work and young kids playing on the sidewalks. Suddenly I heard someone yelling, I looked down and saw to guys fighting in the alley way beside the building. I listened carefully trying to hear what they were saying. They sounded framiliar but it was hard to tell, I could just barely make out what they were saying. I suddenly realised it was Gerard and Frankie, they were fighting over me.
"STOP FIGHTING! PLEASE JUST STOP!" I screamed trying to get their attention. It worked and the two boys looked up, their mouths dropped when they saw it was me and they ran to the front of the building for a better look.
"Kyla What Are You Doing Up There?" Gerard yelled.
"Thinking About Things." I replied.
"You Aren't Thinking About Jumping Are You?" Gerard yelled, even from far away I could hear the worry in his voice and see the tears form in his eyes.
"Maybe..... It's Not Like Anyone Would Miss Me." I shouted, tears starting to form in my eyes too.
"Just Stay There, I'm Coming Up!" He yelled as he ran to the side of the building. A minute later he was standing beside me.
"Everyone would miss you." He said looking into my eyes.
"No they wouldn't. Everybody seems to hate me now-a-days." I said, breaking eye contact and looking at the ground.
"Frankie doesn't hate you, Mikey doesn't hate you --" He started.
"You do." I said as the tears started to slip from my eyes. I felt Gerard wrap his arms around me.
"I could never hate you." He whispered. I pulled away.
"I Kissed Frankie! Three Times!" I yelled, taking a few steps back. "How can you forgive me for that?"
"Because, I love you." Gerard said as tears started to fall from his eyes too. "And nothing you could do will ever change that. Now please, just come back down with me."
"No. I hurt you. I don't know if I can live with myself for doing that." I walked over to the edge and looked down at the ground.
"Kyla, please I'm begging you. Don't do something you'll regret." I could hear the tears in voice even more clearly now. I spun around to say something to him but slipped. I let out a cry as fell over the edge.
Okay so this chapter is a tricky one to follow. It could either end the whole story or it could lead to more chapters. Keep in mind that if I end the story I'll be able to write a new one which I have a lot of ideas for [I hate writing more than one story at a time]. So you guys get to have a say in this, would you rather this be the end or do you want more chapters? Vote and Comment Please! heart
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 3:02 pm
Oooh, I can't wait for more!
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 4:16 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 5:51 pm
more por favor! haha, that rhymed. but, yeah. more chapters!!! (please) heart
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 6:35 am
Okay so.... I have thought it over and I have come to my conclusion:
The next chapter shall be the end of TeEnAgErS. I have chosen to end it because , I feel, the story shall only get boring and uneventful. So the next chapter shall be the end. So keep your eyes open for a new story by me.
Sorry to disappoint anyone. sad
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 7:18 am
You did well, I can't wait to see how this ends!
With a death, I presume.
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 11:44 am
*Soap Opera announcer's voice* Who will live? Who will die? The answer on the next (and last) final chapter of: TEENAGERS.
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 12:21 pm
* creepy organ music * DUN DUN DUNNNNNNN!
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 1:35 pm
This should be good...
I must go research The Aristocats, so stay tuned for more on me! heart
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 5:04 pm
*Sigh* Here it is the final chapter to my first fanfic. I loved writing this and I hope not to disappoint with this, the end....
Chapter 16 --- The End.
I looked down at the ground that was rushing towards me and in an instant I hit it. I blacked out and soon found myself walking down a dark, cold, empty pathway. I could feel an emptiness in the pit of my stomach yet I didn't know what I was missing. So I just kept walking, that is until I heard a faint noise coming from behind me. I looked back only to see nothing but black, I turned to look up the path but it was gone. The noise got louder and louder until I thought it was right beside me. It was a framiliar voice although I couldn't make it out, and it was calling my name.
"WHAT DO YOU WANT!" I screamed after I thought my eardrums were going to pop from how loud the voice had gotten. Suddenly the noise stopped and a giant bright light shined into my eyes. I squinted and tried to block the light but it was too bright and I thought I would go blind. Then the voice came back only this time it was screaming "Don't Go Into The Light!" I covered my ears and closed my eyes, nothing helped.
"PLEASE JUST STOP! PLEASE!" I screamed again, but this time nothing happened. The light stayed and the noise just kept getting louder and louder. I broke down crying, where ever I was no one was going to help me.
I screamed as I shot up in my hospital bed, an all too framiliar place. I looked around, no one was there. I stood up only to find my leg was badly injured, I didn't care though. I had to find someone, Frankie, Mikey, Gerard, a nurse, anyone. I walked along the hall until I finally collapsed from the pain in my leg and the stinging that had started in my chest. I sat in the hall gasping for breath expecting a nurse or a doctor to come rushing to my aid, but no one came. The only thing that came was that dammed bright light from earlier. I tried to scream and get someones attention but I couldn't, the pain in my chest was too great. I couldn't cry, I couldn't yell, I could barely even brathe all I could do was sit there and wait for death to finally come. Infact I prayed for death to come so the pain would stop. Suddenly I saw a blurry figure come running towards me, I could tell it was Gerard.
"Ky! Please hold on, please don't leave me." He cried, wrapping his arms around me. He didn't bother to take me back to my room, we both knew that this was it.
"I love you Gerard." I said as I let out my last breath, closed my eyes and welcomed death. And even though I did love Gerard with all of my heart the last thing I thought of before I died was the last kiss I had with Frankie.
THE END.
I'll be starting my next story soon so keep an eye out for it. Hope you liked this final part and can't wait to start a new. heart
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 5:10 pm
O.O
she...she died. omg. i think I'm gonna go cry in a corner now...
jk. good ending! can't wait to read your other stories!
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 5:21 pm
Dang...that was sad.
Can't wait for more from you! heart
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 5:23 pm
I was going for a sad ending. I Accomplished My Goal!
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 5:25 pm
Wow. cry I think I need to cry in a corner now..
That was really good!! I can't wait till your next one is up.
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