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 Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 1:42 pm
Anagove Blonde Haired Kid Anagove  {{Her dreams went out the door, when she turned twentyfour--}}Bah, Humbug! stare lawlz~
{{She was gonna be an actress, she was gonna be a star...}}
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I haven't got to read gthb's yet. :<
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 1:59 pm
Bullet Rift Anagove Blonde Haired Kid Anagove {{Her dreams went out the door, when she turned twentyfour--}} Bah, Humbug! stare lawlz~
{{She was gonna be an actress, she was gonna be a star...}}
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I haven't got to read gthb's yet. :< {{Her dreams went out the door, when she turned twentyfour--}} Thanks-- I know we all like the funny, but I wanted to maybe do a story of intrigue, something with a plot, maybe... hmmm... *sniffle* Everyone wants the funny!
{{She was gonna be an actress, she was gonna be a star...}}
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 2:20 pm
I honestly don't know if I'll get it or not, because I've only been here for one game, but it was still fun writing the application piece! ^_^
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 2:23 pm
Read mine so far! :O It's half done.
Oh, and if you don't get it after the first sentence, it's a hotel.
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 3:01 pm
Aine just applied. However, she has her doubts that it would be good. Feel free to comment on the entry!
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 3:10 pm
Oh, crud! I just realized that I'm not actually a official member of the guild! Better take care of that. sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 3:16 pm
Yeah...I'm not gonna be the GM.
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 3:19 pm
Okay, I requested. I can't believe I forgot that! O_o
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 3:19 pm
Druki: I'm a reference whore. Hee. :D
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 3:23 pm
HirunHikari Read mine so far! :O It's half done. Oh, and if you don't get it after the first sentence, it's a hotel.
IM FAMOUS! 8D
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 3:33 pm
@.@; Owww. -reading applications- These are hard to read. Most of these lack proper structure (paragraphs make the world go 'round), and reuse overplayed references. Surely there's something more of hilarity worth mentioning?
Another lacking thing I'm noticing is description. PEOPLE TALK. People think, people feel, embrace... emotions. They make the story far more interesting!
I haven't read all of the apps; just my $0.02 for any hopefuls here. sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 3:38 pm
Shigaiko @.@; Owww. -reading applications- These are hard to read. Most of these lack proper structure (paragraphs make the world go 'round), and reuse overplayed references. Surely there's something more of hilarity worth mentioning?
Another lacking thing I'm noticing is description. PEOPLE TALK. People think, people feel, embrace... emotions. They make the story far more interesting!
I haven't read all of the apps; just my $0.02 for any hopefuls here. sweatdrop
Isn't it the norm that the paragraph lines are to split the Sniper, CK, and Jailbird? If you had six paragraphs, all evenly spaced apart, it might be difficult to quickly find one section in particular.
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 3:39 pm
`Aine Chievious Okay, I requested. I can't believe I forgot that! O_o
I actually thought yours was quite good. 3nodding The biggest thing I noticed was that during your death scene, I didn't realize you had been killed until reading through it twice.
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 3:47 pm
Taka: But that's exactly how Zae and IHD do it. o.O
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 3:51 pm
Shigaiko @.@; Owww. -reading applications- These are hard to read. Most of these lack proper structure (paragraphs make the world go 'round), and reuse overplayed references. Surely there's something more of hilarity worth mentioning?
Another lacking thing I'm noticing is description. PEOPLE TALK. People think, people feel, embrace... emotions. They make the story far more interesting!
I haven't read all of the apps; just my $0.02 for any hopefuls here. sweatdrop
I know! That made me mad, and I tryed that with mine, adding in emotion, but it failed in the end in my opinion. but check it out anyways! On another note, I finished updating my Game Seven Archive in the Archives forum, if any of you want to check it out.
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