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Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2017 3:16 pm
Username: assassinos Name: soren holt Nickname: 'holt', mostly Race: human Ethnicity: caucasian Gender: male Orientation: he doesn't discriminate Alignment: lawful good Affinity: fire Age: thirty four Birthday: december first Height: 6'3" Weapon:legacy & omega Mage: none
Natural Abilities: ❖ eyes of the wolf ; from his years and years of service, soren has seen just about every fighting technique there is. he can predict direction, speed, and intent just from a shift in weight, and quickly too, as if time has slowed down for him. his understanding in body language has saved him many times over in battle. it's rumored that his eyes are that of a wolf, in that he sizes up opponents with a distinct hunger and intelligence and nothing gets past his level gaze. the downside is that the more he uses the ability, the higher chance of the quality of his vision decreasing and even the chance of blindness, whether temporary or permanent. RANK C+ ❖ energy replacement ; the amethyst that his mother gave him turned out to be infused with magic, giving him the ability to use it if he must. this is his last resort and is not seen often, due to the catastrophic toll it takes on his body. he can draw an amount of energy from the stone, giving him a boost to press on when he would normally fall. once the energy from the stone is depleted and he cannot use it anymore, he will pass out. the amount of pain he is in after using the crystal is greatly enhanced as well, often five times worse than what he would normally feel after a battle. RANK B(?) ❖ enhanced pain threshold ; when you've been a fighter for as long as soren has, things stop surprising you. he has an extremely high tolerance to most forms of pain (the exceptions to this being freezing). this allows him to continue battling even when faced with many or deep wounds, wounds that would incapacitate or kill a normal person. he's proven his tolerance when he took an arrow to the back during a training accident, and set about patching himself up before a healer could get to him. thanks to a bit of coaching from his sister, soren has also learned to stitch or care for his own wounds. RANK C- ❖ reflection ; using his sword legacy, he is able to reflect projectiles and damaging magic. there is a chance of failure and can only be used twice a day. RANK C ❖ protection ; the ability to conjure up a powerful force-field by simply aiming one of his palms at a person while holding legacy in the other (his mother used a spell on the sword that allows use of this ability). he can only use one at a time and they only protect him from one blow, but they are strong enough to block even the heaviest of swings from a weapon and the occasional magic spell. this ability can only be used twice per day. RANK B
Strengths: ✔ strength ; practically speaks for itself. soren is a wall of muscle and he makes sure that he stays that way, for both his health's sake and so that can continuously wield his large swords. he trains often and for excessive amounts of time, often devoting a whole day just to exercise or brushing up on his combat skills. when someone needs some muscle, it's typically him they might turn to, and he's glad to use his strength to help others. ✔ endurance ; soren doesn't tire easily in the first place, and with the energy that his amethyst stores within, he has the potential to fight and run for hours upon end. he can be injured massively in combat and wouldn't bat an eyelash until his body gives out on itself. ✔ close range combat ; while he can use a bow with some finesse, that's typically only reserved for hunting wild animals. soren much prefers to use a sword or knife in combat, or if he must, his fists. he finds that close range combat works much better with the amount of strength he holds, able to deal devastating blows effectively enough with just his upper body strength. he not only relies on his blades, however, but is also well versed in hand to hand combat. . ✔ making connections ; between his looks and his kindness, soren has no small number of friends. he knows people in the strangest places, from rich nobility to shady figures in the back corners of taverns or alleyways, and most of them are willing to repay a favor or two after a bit of persuasion. he is known amongst his friends for carrying out promises dutifully and giving generously to those in need, and for that they are willing to give him favors that most others wouldn't consider, and sometimes they don't even expect things in return as they know they can always go to him when they need help, as long as their solution falls into his code of conduct.
Weaknesses: ✘ speed ; as mentioned earlier, soren is a wall of muscle. due to his weight, he cannot effectively use speed against someone and relies on his strength and stamina alone. he is well aware of this weakness and has techniques to get past it, such as his massive amount of stamina and high tolerance to pain that keeps him on his feet much longer than he should be. ✘ 'minor' alcoholism ; soren doesn't think he has a problem, and refuses to see it as such. so what if he wakes up with a hangover thrice a week? sometimes a man just has to unwind. although, the real reason he drinks is only known to him. he's seen too much villainy in his days to keep his lips off the bottle. ✘ excessively empathetic ; he's the kind of person that sees a starving dog in the streets and frets about it for weeks to come. soren doesn't like the thought of hurting someone innocent or letting someone go without something. he gives money to orphans and feeds stray animals, often taking time out of his schedule or going out of his way to make someone's day a little bit better. he believes in giving people the benefit of the doubt, until he catches something about them that he doesn't like. until then, though, he'll just keep giving. ✘ insomnia ; soren's thoughts often haunt him and it's not uncommon to see him bleary-eyed and miserable looking, but he never lets his exhaustion prevent him from doing what he needs to. that would be irresponsible.
Likes: ✔ meeting new people ; new people means new friends, which opens new connections. besides, people are interesting. ✔ kindness & manners ; soren sees those with bad manners as no more than oversized children. ✔ food ; he has to keep his energy up somehow. he's got a motto that he'll try anything once, no matter how strange it seems. if someone else likes it he'll give it a go. ✔ traveling ; there's something breathtaking about the countryside, especially when you're all alone out there in the morning and the sun floods the earth in that pale orange light. you'll see. ✔ drinking ; a new day means a new bottle. no, he doesn't have a problem...you have a problem ✔ hunting ; it's something different. whenever he gets the time to plan and go on a hunt, it's like a breath of fresh air. especially when he's by himself.
Dislikes: ✘ unnecessary violence ; the earth has enough violence as is. why go around injuring others for no reason? there are a few times a fight is necessary, such as when you must defend yourself or someone else, but getting into a fist fight over a piece of meat is just irrational and childish. ✘ thieves & liars ; there's nothing that will lose his trust faster. thieves are greedy and liars are untrustworthy. if something is stolen from him he will see it returned and will utilize violence if he must. if he catches a lie then he will forever be wary of the one who lied to him, and may avoid them altogether. if he sees thievery or swindling on the streets it's unlikely that he'll a blind eye. ✘ birds ; the exception to this is myrah, his falcon that he raised from the egg. strangely enough, most birds seem to dislike him and he's been attacked by quite a few. in public. how embarrassing. ✘ failure ; sure to be his downfall. soren often pushes himself past his breaking point just to be positive that things will turn out correctly. if he loses a battle then he withdraws into a bottle for a solid few days before he returns to normal. most friends will leave him alone during this time. ✘ boredom ; soren is an active man. he cannot sit still through meetings or boring jobs. it's inevitable that he will have to move at some point, there was enough stillness in his younger years when he had to stand at his post for hours. there's not enough time to be still anymore.
Personality: ❖ when inquiring about soren, one might receive a variety of words. generous, helpful, hardworking, courageous, intelligent, respectful... the possibilities are endless. any number of people would tell you nothing but positive things about him. they would sagely nod their heads and speak of him as a generous man, always helping those in need or sticking up for the underdog, flipping coins to the ones with their grimy hands stuck out on the corners of the streets and huddled beneath tattered blankets. he is that kind of man, but there is much more to him than just his generosity. he is a man that is married to his work, and will not hesitate to correct someone doing wrong. he is strong in his moral beliefs and intelligent with a certain knowledge beyond his years. there are things he carries on his back that he drowns each night in a bottle just to get three hours of sleep.
soren is a steadfast friend, but would no sooner look at you than throw himself in front of a crossbow to protect you and it is this that will surely get him in more trouble than its worth. despite this, those who know him well might describe him affectionately as a lone wolf. he is surrounded by friends and acquaintances yet isolates himself and hides away in his mind, often emotionally detaching himself from various situations. the few things that can actually get sheer emotion from him are hunting and a good trek across the countryside, where he feels at one with nature.
History: ❖ soren was born on a cold winter morning to a knight father (branton) and mage-turned-healer mother (jenyn), their firstborn child. his father spoke nothing but praise for him from that day, commending his son for being a strong child that he was confident would grow into a strong knight, following in his fathers footsteps. soren and his father grew very close over the first four years of his life, despite the fact that his younger sister almeria was born when he was three and stole the attention from him. every night, his father would return home and share tales from his travels, leaving soren in awe.
soren was four when his father left to travel, his younger sister almeria barely a year old. he doesn't recall much about that time, only that his mother wept with relief and collapsed to her knees on the den floor, her face buried in her hands, tears staining the first crumpled letter that arrived at their door. he remembers her waiting at the door for months and months, watching for a latter, and when that didn't come, she waited for a husband and father that wouldn't return. he remembers her crying quietly at night, trying to hide her red and swollen eyes as she cooked breakfast in the morning. despite her grief, she never let them go hungry.
she raised soren and almeria alone, trying to keep the ill effects of his fathers death away from her care of her son and daughter. soren grew up in admiration of soldiers and knights, but he knew that he would never want to put his mother or future family in the position that the death of his father did. so at age thirteen, he became a squire, and considers it the best decision he's ever made. he immediately began combat training, often pushing himself deep into the night, spinning and striking hay-stuffed dummies until his legs collapsed and his sister had to drag him back into the house.
as the years passed, he and his squire friends began to get more violent with their training, often sparring each other with sharpened hunting knives, broom handles, or any other striking object they could get their hands on. soren took many blades to many different areas of his body, and found himself limping home bloody many a time or sitting on the floor at midnight and clenching a towel between his teeth as his healer-in-training sister stitched him up. he began making friends, wandering the streets and striking up conversations with all who were friendly enough to do so, adding connection after connection to his arsenal. blacksmiths, mercenaries, tavern owners, seamstresses, butchers, thieves. name it, and he knows one.
he was knighted when he was twenty years old, and his mother presented him with legacy, his first sword. it was returned to her after his fathers body was recovered from the battlefield where he fell, and she'd kept it hidden for when one of her children came to need it. he came to own omega three years later when he bought it from a traveling merchant (as well as myrah, whom he hatched from the egg and trained himself), and although legacy remains his main weapon, he is never seen in public without the dark blade somewhere on his person. he built a reputation for himself, gaining the nickname 'the wolf' at twenty-seven, after taking down a gang of thugs that had been terrorizing the streets of his hometown, incapacitating six men by himself. he was admired by many girls, but never took interest in any, and they soon stopped trying to catch his eye. he still has yet to court a lady.
as the years passed, his focus changed from building his reputation on strength, and went to building it on kindness. he took to giving back to the community, spending his coin on helping others...and the rest went to drinks. soren has seen foul things in his lifetime, things that he will never speak of, and the drink helps him forget. despite this he is still an admirable and strong knight, and doesn't have any plans on retiring anytime soon.
as of late, soren has been wandering, searching for his next calling and a mage to accompany him.
Outfits: ❖ normal outfit seen in art
Items: ❖ omega & legacy amethyst gemstone on a leather thong ❖ a sturdy and well made pack which contains ; xxx❖ food & water xxx❖ spare clothing xxx❖ (a) bottle(s) of alcohol xxx❖ a bird whistle xxx❖ a small leather book ; contents unknown xxx❖ small first aid kit ; provided by his sister (consists of needle & thread, healing herbs, bandages, scraps of cloth, and various other supplies)
i talked to johto a bit and made a few changes that they suggested, but if anything looks out of place i'm more than happy to change!
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Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2017 11:10 am
Hello, hello! Thanks for your submission!
I just have a couple questions and/or suggestions I'd like to ask/address.
-Is Eyes of the Wolf an activated ability? It seems like an always-active thing by the description, however, using it to much could cause blindness (which is a cool addition I like). I'm just curious if him just...seeing will have repercussions or if this is an activated ability. -With energy replacement, I was wondering if it had a set amount of uses left. Has he used this before? How much energy is in the amethyst/remains in it. -What is the chance of failure on reflection? Can it reflect all levels of magic? -Reflection/Protection: Is it possible to move protection to omega? If a single weapon has too many magical properties, it gets close to Armament status. It's fine if each is separated to a single weapon. -Rank B is fine for Energy Replacement^^ -Classic knights are almost about as old in Nevermore as they are in our reality, they are from what the current Knight/Mage relationship stemmed. That being said, there aren't currently any kingdoms with a squire->knight->Knight system. If you'd like to make him from Carmillion, they have a very standard-fantasy military, so he could be a soldier from there...? I hate making bio suggestions because I know everyone works really hard on them. TT-TT
Anyway, that's all I see so-far. If you wouldn't mind making edits or clearing things up, that'd be great! Can't wait to hear back.
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Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2017 11:51 pm
Let me just repost this and delete the older post sweatdrop
Username: Supreme Kazuki Name: Kazuki Nickname: Kaz but prefers to be called Kazuki Race: Human Ethnicity: Japanesse Gender: Male Orientation: Hetersexual Alignment: Affinity: Water Age: 21 Birthday: May 10 Height: 5ft 11in Weapon: •Katana with a diamond inner layer, and an Osmium outer layer making it highly unbreakable. Mage: TBD
Natural Abilities: (Name and Rank)
❖ Summon Rain - Rank F: Can summon rain at will. ❖ Control over water - Rank C: Simply can control water at will. ❖ Flow of Water- Rank A: A form of sword art that he formed through his journey which is said to be unbeatable when used on the right situation. Is called unbeatable because of how unpredictable it is on first sight. It has different defensive and offensive stances. It got its name because of it flexibility and most of its offensive stances uses the water attribute. Each stances follow a pattern making it quite predictable when you have a good eye or can easily memorize patterns making him use this in really tight situations. ❖ Presence of Tranquility - Rank S: A mystical blue flame like appearance that can slow down anything. By anything, even light. As powerful at it seems, it drains too much of his stamina. Slowing down light for only 5 seconds can render him unconscious and requires 2 days of sleep to recover. Slowing down time for a total of 30 seconds can give him a nosebleed and migraine. For a total of 1 minute can render him unconscious as well but can still wake up after gaining a bit of strength. Purposely used to support himself and his allies.
Can also be used for stealth since slowing down anything besides time, and light requires a little touch of of the blue aura.
Magus Abilities: (Name and Rank) ❖ N/A ❖ ❖
Unison Abilities: (Include Description and Rank) ❖ N/A ❖ ❖
Relationships: ❖ [Who your RPC is related to]
Strengths: ✔ Flexible on using any type of light weapons. ✔ Can fight calmly giving him awareness of his surroundings. ✔ Mobility is his key when fighting. ✔Kenjutsu - A general sword art formed on Earth. As basic as it sounds, Kazuki has mastered this art making it difficult to deal with. ✔Kenjutsu: Sheathed Blade form - Rank D: Simply kenjutsu but focusing not having any intent to kill an enemy.
Weaknesses: ✘ His special ability uses too much of his stamina ✘ Heavy weapons and ranged weapons are a no no ✘ Does not wear any armor making him prone to cuts.
Personality: ❖ Kazuki is an ambivert. He enjoys talking to people and engaging into activities and the love of silent places is always with him. Though, he can be talkative at times, he tends to be silent all of a sudden for no reason why. When he starts to do one thing, he can get too dedicated that he wants to focus on it over other things. Is also a closet pervert. He is can also joke about stuff. History: ❖ Kazuki lived in Tokyo, Japan on Earth. He was an 18-year-old Kendo prodigy who was supposed to represent Japan on the world tournament to be held at Seattle, USA. One day, as his family set course for the tournament, the right engine of plane they were on suddenly experienced engine failure. Everyone was told to remain calm for the pilot said it was under control. Moments after the right engine failed, it started to burst into flames and exploded leaving the airplane with one wing and a crash landing announcement was made. The plane violently crashed leaving no survivors.
Despite dying from the landing, Kazuki was able to hear his own breathing. He slowly opens his eyes seeing two blurry figures since his eyes were still adjusting to the light. After his eyes were able to adjust, he saw 2 kids, a boy and a girl, to be exact. The boy introduced himself as Izanagani and the girl as Izanami. Their looks were unlike the books nor other people described they were. Despite being kids, they were able to float at will. Kazuki was informed that there are other worlds needing help from talented people such as himself. Worlds under other Gods. Since these worlds are under other Gods and Goddesses, Izanami and Izanagi are unable to intervene directly so a champion has to do it for them. The champion will be given a weapon of choice and extraordinary powers to be determined by the God/Goddess. Though provided with the power and weapon, what a champion can do is simply to provide support the destined hero or heroin of each world. He has to do this until his body is unable to. Upon agreeing, Izanami who is the Goddess of the underworld, can bring his family back to life but the memory of Kazuki's past self will be lost except the fact that he lived on earth, his name, and knows how to handle the the weapon of his choice. Caring for his family too much, Kazuki selflessly accepted the offer. Being a Kendo prodigy, he chose the Katana. A ring, then appeared on his right finger. It has a water insignia on it. This ring connects him to Izanagi and Izanami giving him the ability to control water and a blue aura that can slow down anything including light.
Upon accepting the contract, the weapon of choice appeared before him. Concerned that blade might break, Kazuki asked if he could get a new one when that happens. Izanagi gladly answered with a big no. The good thing about the weapon is it's most unlikely to break and can even withstand heat.A farewell was done and he was transported to the first world that he needs to help. Meanwhile, or earth, Kazuki's family started gaining consciousness, sitting on their chair with their seat belts on but Kazuki's body is left sou less on earth.
After being transported to the first world, Kazuki has lost most of his memories and his struggle to look for the destined hero/heroin started. Before starting with his main goal, he worked as a mercenary so he could practice his abilities while have food and shelter. Months passed, he finally ready with his main journey. With his goal in mind, he was successfully able to do his part and was transported to the next world without notice and so on. Being able to do this in 3 years, he's gotten used to world jumping, carrying his blade, and even made creative ways on utilizing his powers.
As a human, his skills that uses magic is rather weak so he relies on his physical abilities when fighting.
Outfits: ❖ Black hoodie, black long sleeved shirt, black pants, black shoes, a dog tag that says Kazuki, and a chain connecting his pants to his wallet which for some reason, was brought with him. ❖ When his black clothes will be washed, he has an extra pair of them except for the jacket. Therefore, jacketless Kazuki :3
Items: ❖ Lapis Tranquillum - an Armament from the world of Terra given to Kazuki by Izanagi and Izanami. This ring gives makes him able to perform his Natural abilities ❖ A box type container with a special weapon inside that requires a specific key (to be revealed later)
Other: ❖ Since Kazuki moves from other worlds, he gets to keep some stuff with him (like the box mentioned above). Not to mention fluent in lots of languages. ❖ Being able to get used to using the Presence of Tranquility, he can also see things moving slowly. Therefore, people relying on speed are at a complete disadvantage.
Hi, thanks for the submission! Haha, I was starting to wonder if I'd see this guy finished~
There are just a couple things I'd like to mention, but you should be all set after those, no worries.
-The biggest thing are the abilities granted to him by the spirits upon his death. The ring reaches Armament-level status with how much it grants your character, so I have two suggestions: 1. If you'd like to keep it as a ring, feel free to PM either Rengato or I for the possibility of making it an Armament. 2. The spirits could have granted him these abilities directly, causing a dual-affinity of Water/Spirit, making him capable of these things without the presence of an item. What you decide to do is really up to you, though~ That being said, Summon Rain, Control Over Water, and Presence of Tranquility can all be filed under Natural Abilities rather than Magus Abilities. Those will be added to/created once you form a bound contract with a Mage. -For both mentions of Kenjutsu, I think they'd fit better under strengths (you can just add them, not get rid of your others). They won't need ranks, but you can keep the descriptions -Flow of Water would serve better somewhere between B-A. -It's cool to have secrets, but not from us ;D If you could either PM me or Rengato about whatever animal is in the box, that'd be great. -I think this: "Being able to get used to using the Presence of Tranquility, he can also see things moving slowly. Therefore, people relying on speed are at a complete disadvantage" belongs in in "Other" or "Strengths" rather than "Items"
That's about it! Can't wait to hear back from you!
Supreme Kazuki
Posted: Tue Jan 03, 2017 4:10 pm
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Hi, thanks for the submission! Haha, I was starting to wonder if I'd see this guy finished~
There are just a couple things I'd like to mention, but you should be all set after those, no worries.
-The biggest thing are the abilities granted to him by the spirits upon his death. The ring reaches Armament-level status with how much it grants your character, so I have two suggestions: 1. If you'd like to keep it as a ring, feel free to PM either Rengato or I for the possibility of making it an Armament. 2. The spirits could have granted him these abilities directly, causing a dual-affinity of Water/Spirit, making him capable of these things without the presence of an item. What you decide to do is really up to you, though~ That being said, Summon Rain, Control Over Water, and Presence of Tranquility can all be filed under Natural Abilities rather than Magus Abilities. Those will be added to/created once you form a bound contract with a Mage. -For both mentions of Kenjutsu, I think they'd fit better under strengths (you can just add them, not get rid of your others). They won't need ranks, but you can keep the descriptions -Flow of Water would serve better somewhere between B-A. -It's cool to have secrets, but not from us ;D If you could either PM me or Rengato about whatever animal is in the box, that'd be great. -I think this: "Being able to get used to using the Presence of Tranquility, he can also see things moving slowly. Therefore, people relying on speed are at a complete disadvantage" belongs in in "Other" or "Strengths" rather than "Items"
That's about it! Can't wait to hear back from you!
Supreme Kazuki
I do apologize about that. Holiday season pulled our hairs off at work making it impossible to create my oc.
•I would make more sense to place the ring under armaments since the powers Izanagi and Izanami granted can be activated through this ring. Which connects us to my mage. I personally think making Izanami and Izanagi my mages would sound good. Since Presence of tranquility solely relies on my stamina, mana would somewhat be irrelevant.
•Placing kenjutsu in my strengths is not bad at all considering it is a fighting style.
•PMing creature in the box xD
•I don't know why I placed "Being able to get used to using the Presence of Tranquility, he can also see things moving slowly. Therefore, people relying on speed are at a complete disadvantage" under items. I was supposed to place it under Others.
Not an issue with us, but I don't know if you noticed. The link for your photo is broken, I think.
Don't forget about what we talked about with the thing in the case, but aside from that, you're all set. Accepted. Feel free to create your character's thread in the Profiles SubForum and begin posting~
Not an issue with us, but I don't know if you noticed. The link for your photo is broken, I think.
Don't forget about what we talked about with the thing in the case, but aside from that, you're all set. Accepted. Feel free to create your character's thread in the Profiles SubForum and begin posting~
It's photobucket's fault. Their site went down while ago. I am able to see the photo now.
Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2017 4:07 pm
Supreme Kazuki
It's photobucket's fault. Their site went down while ago. I am able to see the photo now.
Yeah, nbd xD I was just curious~ Anyway, as I said, you're all set to make your thread and begin posting! Your profile's accepted
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[Replacing Cael with this guy~]
Username: Holy Hakaishin Hiroto Name: Xai Zhen Nickname: "Dragon's Blood" Race: Dragon Kin Ethnicity: Caucasian Gender: Male Orientation: Heterosexual Alignment: Chaotic Good Affinity: Fire Age: 20 Birthday: November 3rd Height: 6'5" Weapon:Bashemao: Zhen’s Kwan Dao is composed of a number of sections, all attached by a chain. By uncoupling the spear's sections, Zhen can make the spear move in any direction he wants, making it strike almost like a snake. This requires delicate control that few can manage. Mage:
Natural Abilities: (Name and Rank) ❖ Dragon's Heat: Thanks to his dragonic heritage, Zhen wields an ability that is capable of unleashing blistering heat, protection against heat, and coating his body in heat energy. As a result, Dragon's Heat allows Zhen to produce and control heat energy from all areas of the body, being able to use it in melee and ranged forms of offense. The generated heat can be manipulated in a wide array of ways: the most noticeable way being concentrating the heat in one area which allows the Zhen to deal superheated damage.
Outside of the ability to produce heat, Zhen is also able to absorb external sources of heat via skin contact, often resulting in the original source freezing due to it losing its heat. Which in turn, makes him immune to most types of heat, due to the ability to nullify heat-based attacks by absorption. The max heat Zhen can reach and survive is 2,200 °F, any hotter and his body would likely begin to take heavy damage from his own ability. [C Rank]
❖ Dragon Roar: A incredibly powerful physical ability, a technique in which ZHen can instill fear into his opponents by completely and utterly overwhelming their senses and bodies by exuding his dragonic power in massive volumes, slowly crushing their will to battle and crushing their confidence to dust. Normally activated by performing a physically imposing feat (such as displaying his strength or making frightening features), a powerful glare, or a roar, all of which can instill fear into any weaker being and cause them to lose consciousness depending on just how much weaker they are compared to Zhen
Dragon Roar is often used as a means to try to scare the opponent, which can cause them to run away or literally get frozen in place by fear. In this way, intimidation can be used to end a confrontation or situation non-violently, ending a battle without having to throw a single blow. Using intimidation to scare an opponent will only work if the opponent is significantly weaker than Zhen but it can also be used to startle many powerful fighters. Dragon Roar is less effective on those who are of equal or higher strength than Zhen or have a strong enough willpower, thus this ability can also be used to scale someone's power. Though it could be argued that this power can be increased in power if Zhen can strengthen his will and physical concentration, thus broadening the area of effect it has on powerful foes and the number of people it can affect in any given environment. Intimidation may not work with just a visual display as it may require more stimulation toward the target's senses in order to affect them to a much greater extent, such as emitting a violent scream to stimulate their hearing, using violence and a show of force in order intimidated them with feats of strength and power alone, or simply stare at them with the intent to kill, frightening them with thoughts of their death.
Zhen can evoke and increase fear and horror in others through but simple look, causing the target’s brain to completely run amok and put them into a state of hysteria, causing them to lose focus on the task at hand. The victim’s perception may be altered, causing them to see their environment as ominous and Zhen as dark and foreboding, or even make Zhen seem to appear as a monster. Zhen can control his killing intention and use it to intimidate others. It may be induced to all degrees of intensity, from mild to unbearable to full-on physical suffering, destroying the stability of their mind. This power is mostly used as a cosmetic ability, a way to demonstrate to others just how powerful Zhen is without giving away his abilities. The scale of this power can vary from a single person to a multitude of people, the time can also vary from few minutes to hours, leaving a person unconscious for extended periods of time. The power of this ability however depends on the Dragonic Power ability, the higher the percentage of power Zhen is using, the more effective it will be, allowing people as strong as Zhen or even stronger than him to be affected as well depending on the output of Dragonic Power he is using. [Rank A]
❖ Dragonic Power: The dragonic blood which is apart of Cale's body has given him the power to become more dragon-like. This power is ranked in "percentages" in order to keep track of the "safety" limit. When the ability is not employed, it still grants Zhen certain characteristics of a Dragon, the primary trait is enhanced senses, especially his sense of smell, allowing him to easily distinguish the different scents of different people and creatures, as well as having above average physical attributes, strength, speed and even durability. This also applies to certain personality traits, such as being protective over things he claims to belong to him. His metabolism enables him to repair mild to moderate injuries much faster than a normal human. For instance, he can recover from minor ailments, such as a severe cold or fever within a few hours. More severe injuries, like broken bones, used to heal within a few days, whereas normal humans might take many weeks or even months. But still, he cannot regenerate destroyed organs or severed limbs. Sorai possesses enhanced, acute senses that are comparable to those of certain animals, enabling him to see and hear distant objects more clearly than a normal human, and identify and track someone purely by scent. He also possesses cat-like night-vision that also allows him to see even in near-total darkness. Zhen sports retractable, 3" razor sharp claws at the tip of each finger and toe. Their natural edges, coupled with his strength, are sufficient to rend most conventional materials including flesh, wood, stone, and even metal effortlessly and enable him to climb up vertical surfaces by wedging his fingers and toes into the smallest of cracks. He possesses elongated canines that he can use, if he chooses to do so, as effective weapons in close quarter combat situations.
When using 10%-20%, the small amount of scales Zhen has begins to spread which become incredibly durable, capable of withstanding the force equivalent of a car and still remain unscathed, becoming essentially bulletproof. His strength and speed also skyrocket, capable of easily crushing rubble to dust, breaking down walls with little effort on his part, and move at a Olympic athelete level speeds.
When using 30%-50% the scales spread even further while Zhen grows tiny horns on his head, a small tail and a small pair of wings. At this percentage his physical abilities only slightly increase compared to 10%-20%. At this point his strength is capable of smashing boulders with his bare fist and he can nearly run at highway speeds.
When using 60%-90%, Zhen's appearance begins to shift further. His skin becomes almost entirely covered in scales. His hair grows longer and even whiter, in additional to growing a long, thick scaly tail, his fingers and toes also turn into sharp 3" claws, and his pupils go from being round to slits, and his teeth replaced by razor sharp fangs. While in this form, Zhen becomes even more powerful, his strength becoming downright monstrous, being able to throw large boulders with ease. The sheer strength of his fists putting dents into metal. His speed also receives an incredible boost, making combat against him incredibly difficult against the standard fighter, requiring incredible reaction time and precision to properly fight him. In terms of other abilities, Zhen's scales becomes even more durable, requiring even more force in order to successfully injure him.
Upon reaching 100%, which is an incredibly rare occurrence, Zhen turns into something akin to a humanoid dragon, allowing his instincts to essentially take over. In this form, Zhen's body is overtaken by his scales, with his head becoming like that of a dragon's, a pair of large wings, and a larger body, longer limbs and claws, as well as sharp teeth. In this form, Zhen is at full power, becoming a force to be reckoned with, his strength alone achieving that, capable of overwhelming most fighters in close combat, crushing and bending humans as if they were nothing, throw boulders as if they were pebbles, and breathe fire hot enough to moderately melt rock. His speed, however, suffers, while still fairly swift in his movement, it is left arguably the same, if not worse, using his newly acquired wings to fly rather than run. While at 100% he loses all control of himself, becoming a berserk beast bent on destroying everything around him.
Among the weaknesses of this ability, Zhen's eyes and chest-to-stomach area remain unprotected much like a dragon and he becomes very vulnerable to items made for dragon slaying. [Rank S]
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Strengths: ✔ Master Spearman: Zhen is well known to be a master of armed combat, which, as the name itself suggests, revolves around the usage of weapons, which users employ against their opponents at close range, being highly competent in the art of sōjutsu (槍術, Spear Arts), which is the Japanese martial art of fighting with a spear. However, he isn't limited to a single type of spear, but rather, thanks to his innate understanding of spearmanship and natural affinity to combat, Zhen treats anything that can be considered a "blade on the stick" as the same, so his mastery of sōjutsu extends to utilizing battleaxes, halberds, a guandao, bardiches, scythes, and many more. Indeed, as hisr primary method of battle, it really shouldn't come as a surprise that his skill level in regards to wielding a spear is almost through the roof, being deemed to be a master of combat with the pole arm, expertly knowing his way around the weapon to the point that he is capable of utilizing a spear like it is an extension of his own body, having surpassed the limit known as "humanity" in regards to his skills and displaying a mastery over it that surpasses all forms of mortality- it could be said that when wielding a spear, Zhen can be considered a demi-god, having stepped into the realms of the divine or perhaps even beyond in regards to his prowess with this weapon. ✔ Resilience: Zhen can remain calm in virtually any situation, allowing him to think with perfect clarity even when under extreme emotional or physical distress. He can endure mental stress, and can be essentially immune to emotional manipulation and highly resistant to torture. He is even able to attack in full rage while retaining control and is able to attack with the relentless strength of a madman, while gaining the speed and precision of a surgeon. ✔ Paranormal Expertise: Zhen possesses great, if not natural, experience and knowledge of how to combat and detect paranormal beings (vampires, aliens, etc.). His knowledge on monsters is encyclopedic, allowing him to identify a monster just by its tracks. ✔ Master Tracker: Zhen can track others down easily via various means, ranging from scents to footprints. He can follow tracks that are days or even weeks old. He is capable enough to reconstruct what has happened by looking around the area they are searching, looking at various clues his prey had left. ✔ Acrobat: He has the agility of a cat combined with the acrobatic prowess of an Olympic level gymnast. He can walk a tightrope or a slack rope as easily as most people can walk on a sidewalk. He can also walk on his hands for many hours, or perform a complicated sequence of gymnastic stunts such as flips, rolls, and springs. He is also shown to be able to fluidly move from one motion to another
Weaknesses: ✘ PTSD: Due to the horrible things that were done to him and his parents, Zhen seems to have post traumatic stress when it comes to humans, finding it incredibly hard to trust them or to be open with them, this leaves him to be poor in combat should be paired with a human as the entire time he will be worried that the human could very well back stab him, literally and figuratively. This also extends to men as they were the ones mostly behind what happened to Zhen and his family. ✘ Rage: Despite his calmness, Zhen at times will give into his rage and instincts, making him more beast than man and thus can lead him to do foolish actions. ✘ Ranged Combat: Zhen evidently has zero experience in ranged combat, this can leave him vulnerable should his enemy wield a strong enough ranged weapon and remains out of his sight. ✘ Children and Nature: Zhen is a lover of both of these things, this can be taken advantage of as he would be fully and willingly remove one of his arms if it meant a child or animal will be unharmed. ✘ Carelessness: Zhen tends to fight in a way that shows he has no care of what might happen to him, this can lead him to willingly take an injury if it means he can give his opponent a injury just as bad or worse. ✘ Senses: Zhen's senses can be taken advantage of. ✘ Possessiveness and Protectiveness: Much like a dragon, Zhen can be very protective over what he owns and what is close to him. This means he will at times attack people that he would otherwise assume is trying to steal or harm what is precious to him.
Likes: ✔ Having time to himself ✔ Reptilians ✔ His Mage ✔ Sleeping ✔ Polishing his spearmanship skills ✔ Nature ✔ Children ✔ Beef ✔ Bathing in hot water
Dislikes: ✘ Those who think of his kind as monsters ✘ The Demonic Arm, Gram ✘ Being toyed with ✘ Cruelty ✘ Unwanted attention ✘ Swimming
Personality: ❖ Even as a Knight, Zhen is a bit of an oddball and goof, with a personality that is much more upbeat and compassionate in comparison to others. Compared to them, Zhen is more humanistic and kinder, appearing to be more feeling towards others than he would traditionally want to, such as trying to understand the enemy's point of view or comprehend their reason behind their actions rather than simply do things out of sheer blindness based on instinct, however if he does not find their reasoning all that interesting or at all agreeable he will attack them without notice. He is often described as being eccentric and unpredictable, viewed as unconventional and slightly strange in terms of behavior and attitude; this is displayed in his tendency to act in a manner that isn't commonly seen in assassins and other highly skilled fighters, such as his habit of running away from fights, offering levity to otherwise serious situations, or simply quit mid-way in a fight out of boredom. It is this personality that makes him extremely difficult to read and anticipate his actions ahead of time. He is very sarcastic, pointing out or giving a sense of irony to everything his opponent does in order to mock or convey contempt against them, normally seen in his sarcastic smile and witty retorts, treating even the severest of complications with a sense of complacency. In terms of fighting methods, Zhen is the type to employ the use of unpredictable tactics as he tries to trick his opponents, often using traps and other forms of deception to put himself on top of his enemies.
By his own admission, he is not good at dealing with meticulous details, such as jobs and activities that require showing a great attention to detail and very careful precise when doing so; and would rather finish things quickly without delay, using the less complicated method to complete the task at hand. Zhen, for lack of a better word, is incredibly laid back and relaxed, having a picnic in the middle of a battlefield and using binoculars to watch his others fight, although he dislikes getting caught in the mess of others, refusing to allow himself to be drawn in the conflict of others. Zhen is incredibly fashion oriented and likes to use stylish and flashy moves, being reflected in his choice of attire and hair style, refusing to use anything short of fabulous. However, this mentality is also reflected when he fights with others, as Zhen firmly believes in killing his opponents "elegantly" with his Machina Soul, often being disappointed if his opponent dies before he can use it as a killing blow. As a suave smooth talker, Zhen does try to romanticize with other women and females that catch his eye, flirting with them without a moment's notice; with his charming good looks, and level of charisma, Zhen is seen as a type of womanizer for trying to hit on every cute girl he meets. Although he is very flirtatious with attractive women, he does not take kindly to those who abuse or take advantage of women, making it a rule of his to never lay a hand on a woman unless she wants him to. He also defines a woman's value not by superficial attributes such as physical appearance, but instead by her style and presentation.
Zhen's actions are often influenced by his curiosity, as his only drive for following the path of evolution is to simply see how far he can go before someone kills him and just how many lives he can take when he reaches the pinnacle of his evolution. This leaves him prone to observing his target rather uncomfortably close and even asks them questions, no matter how personal. Yet if they fall under some "cliche" or something he has seen too much of then he will attack them without showing any signs of curiosity. This is reflected in his tendency to judges others based on character rather than appearance, rarely does he underestimate others solely on looks alone, always choosing to fight cautiously without running the risk of risking his life in the process. Even when he fights seriously, Zhen doesn't truly display a serious expression when doing so, simply brushing off his seriousness through casual talk and simple facial expressions, never allowing himself to take the battle seriously enough to change who he is to the point of making him lose focus, always maintaining his carefree composure even in the face of death.
To Zhen however, looks and speeches are meaningless to him, the only thing that does matter is if someone has the power to back up what they're saying through action rather than words. Even to a person as eccentric as him, he's still a Knight, he more than anyone recognizes the value of power when it is needed and when it needs to serve its purpose. People that talk a big game or simply boast about how much power they have, are the type of individuals that Zhen can't stand to be around, much less bothering himself to humor or play into their game. As a Knight, Zhen has never had or felt the need to express his superiority to others, having nothing to gain by doing so as he has no need to prove to anyone of how strong he really is, as he, better than anyone, knows what he's capable of. Intimidation tactics in the form of boasting about one's own power interests him to no extent, not worth warranting his attention, much less his respect; the only thing that he does respects is someone who has the honesty and gall to say it how it is. uncommonly, most opponents often belittle or insult their opponents in the heat of battle, a nasty habit he tends to stray far away from. Those that try to make themselves feel big while demeaning others, Zhen finds that to be a disgusting trait any person can have, as it is unelegant and undignified thing to do, choosing to rise above such lowly behavior. Zhen is a man of action, he backs up everything he does and says, wanting to pass off as completely competent and able rather than being a simple good looking guy.
When the situation calls for it, Zhen can be deadly serious when he recognizes a threat on those around him and himself, completely changing his personality into a completely different person in an instance. As charming and free-spirited that he is, Zhen isn't stupid or careless by any means, always keeping an eye out for anything that intrigues him or draws his attention out to him. Even as he does so, he blocks out insignificant details that don't pertain to anything he's doing, such as conversations, communication, etc. However, Zhen doesn't take to kindly to insults aimed at his strength; people that normally try to throw a couple of blows below the waist are typically the kind that are trying to feel "bigger" than the other guy, compensating for something as Zhen believes. A calm, tranquil person, it's nearly impossible to see him sweat much less show any signs of worry or distress when under pressure, with all sense of fear being absent during this time; it has been stated that Zhen might be devoid of all feelings pertaining to fear or agitation, as never once at any point in his life has he ever truly felt threatened or sensed that his existence is ever threatened.
History: ❖ Born along with his twin to a very poor and wandering couple, the twins lives from the moment they were born had already destined to be hell. The couple had traveled for very long and to all sorts of different places, yet no matter what place they tried to settle in, they would always be chased out because of their appearance, because of the fact of their dragon heritage. Eventually they had settled into a village. In this village of hunters, Wei had his family hide their scales as best they could, mostly with bandages and their excuse for it was that they had been horribly scared before they came here and did not want to be reminded of the incident. Wei was a man who loved his sons, calling them his greatest treasure. Despite his love for them, he had subjected his sons to harsh training, making them have notable spearsmanship skills as he knew very well that this village would one day betray them just like all the others and this time he would not let his sons be injured by the bigot and closed mind of humans. The sons like their father had inherited the ability to call upon their dragonic strength. At the age of eleven something awful had happened, while playing with some of the other village kids, one of Yuhan's bandages had been torn off by a branch, revealing his scales and before he could even hide them the other kids saw it. Yet the children were smart, they acted as though they didn't see his scales at all and merely continued to play. When they got home they had told each of their fathers about what they saw and with this information those fathers had planned something. When Wei and the other fathers were hunting, they had suddenly shot him with arrows, the ones aiming for his vital spots broke due to the fact that his hard scales were over them. After they noticed that they failed to kill him in one go, they began to cower and prepared to fire more arrows, yet Wei had reached a breaking point. Tired of his family being seen as monsters, Wei had decided that he would be exactly that and allowed 100% of his power to overcome him, turning him into a humanoid dragon that had mercilessly killed the other hunters and burnt down their forest and village. Sadly in his rage had had also killed his beloved wife and made his children deeply afraid of him who would flee from the village. For a few days they had wondered by their lonesome but were eventually captured by slavers.
They would be sent to a mining site where them and other races that were not human were forced to mine out diamonds and if they could not they would not be given any food what so ever. While not having parents allowed the twins to have more food, it didn't make getting it any easier as the brothers had a harder time doing jobs. It was because of the failures they often had during these assignments that the two brothers now have scars on their back from the whips the thugs had used on them. Soon other low lives and vile mages would come to where this mine was in order to purchase some of the miners to be used as slaves for their own selfish uses. With this becoming rather common, Zhen had made a promise to Yuhan that if they were to be sold off, Zhen would free them both and they would live together somewhere far away from civilization so that no one could take advantage of them again. It was not long before that Zhen would unfortunately lose this promise; on a hot day the brothers could barely do any work because they were deprived of food and because of this they were whipped more than usual and out of retaliation, Yuhan had attempted to try to stop the whipper, only to meet his demise by the cruel human. Seeing his brother killed before him had activated Zhen's latent dragonic strength, causing him to blow away his brother's killer. Sadly Zhen was later apprehended and was brutally punished, being tortured and beaten to the point where he was nearly broken, the now lone child was left crucified, deprived of nourishment and sleep for several days. Yet again Zhen would be saved from further pain as a band of fellow slaves had decided to rebel after Yuhani's and Zhen's actions; a majority of slaves was supporting this group, helping in their escape and even helping them fight their enslavers.
However believing that they would absolutely fail, Zhen had escaped by himself, sneaking into a crate that would be shipped away from his home country. For many days the ship had voyaged across the ocean until it finally reached its destination, the demon country. Once out of the crate and off the ship he made his way as far away as he could from any civilization, fearful that his enslavers would send agents to capture him and take him back and that he would be treated cruely once again. It was not until he had collapsed on a mountain trail, only to be saved by a merchant who as on his way down the peak of the mountain. After several hours of being unconscious, Zhen had woken back up and found himself in some cabin and in front of a fireplace. Confused and afraid, Zhen had attempted to break out but it was to no avail, making it apparent his captor foresaw Zhen would try to escape. Eventually his captor, or rather his rescuer had eventually returned, informing the Dragon-Kin that he found him passed out on one of the mountain's various trails. After making a soup dinner with some bread for him and Zhen, the merchant had told Zhen about a sect of Monks that lived at the peak of the mountain and he often brought them food and other necessities for free out of the kindness of his heart. Evidently the merchant was going to bring some supplies to them tomorrow and had offered to introduce Zhen to them. Accepting the offer, Zhen had slept in that small cabin on the merchant's bed who had slept on the floor that night.
The morning that came was bothersome for the Dragon-Kin, there was a snow storm and he had to help carry the supplies while the merchant had to push some of the heavier stuff on a sled, both doing this while scaling a mountain trail. Zhen was astonished that this man could do this on a daily basis with a unfit body as well, yet he was doing this as though there was no issue. Eventually the pair had made their way to the monastery where they were welcomed with kindness by the 40 Monks that lived there, all with hair which had somewhat surprised Zhen. They had soon told Zhen that they believed that calmness was of the utmost importance, so much so that one should remain calm even if their family died. Known as the Tranquil State, those who have mastered are known to be able to take on everything with a almost terrifying calmness. With all of the rage flowing inside of him, Zhen had thought it best that he should learn how to do this, his hatred for the humans who caused him all of this pain was too much. Every moment since Yuhan died his thoughts had been filled with killing every human he met, yet if he did that there was no way his family would forgive him. Seeing his conviction, his desire for to control his rage and the justice that had been denied to him, the monks accepted and thus Zhen's training began. Due to the amount of rage in him, Zhen had to learn how to properly control it and use it in battle. This involved Zhen having to meditate for many hours and days until he could feel a control over his massive amounts of rage.
It was not long after his training was completed, in the course of 6 years, Zhen had masted the art completely and along the way awakened the ability to manipulate and how to use his own Dragonic power fully. After having a banquet in Zhen's honor, the Grandmaster had informed Zhen of a prophecy that one day a dragon shall learn from the Monks so that he could achieve serenity and would ultimately free the monks from their own rage that had lingered within themselves for so long. Although the pain was great, Zhen had accepted the prophecy, killing each Monk in single hand-to-hand combat and with their deaths, Zhen had become stronger. For the next few years Zhen had made a name for himself, taking on Assassination Contracts, and keeping true to the Monks' teachings. His life as an assassin was bloody as one would suspect, yet he was not ruthless. He would only take on contracts for cruel humans and only if the outcome didn't involve innocent lives being ruined. He had kept his life as an Assassin well, he had earned a lot of money which he always gave the most of to the people who needed it more than him. Eventually Zhen had learned how to hide the pain he still had over the deaths over his family and Masters, putting on a mask that suggested a kind man who did things elegantly in a sense.
Username: Noizless Nightingale Name: Suzuki Hayashi Nickname: N/A Race: Half-Giant Ethnicity: Japanese Gender: Female Orientation: Demisexual Alignment: Lawful Good Occupation: Potter Age: 42 Birthday: July 11 Height: 7' 3"
Relationships: ❖ Hakuka Alte (Son, deceased) ❖ Apprentice (open for RP [NPC otherwise]) ❖ Kiku Hayashi (Father, NPC) ❖ Mio Hayashi (Mother, NPC) ❖ Rorak Alte (Hakuka's Father, NPC, location unknown)
Strengths: ✔ Heightened sense of hearing, smelling, and touch (because of being blind) ✔ Keeping a cool head in heated situations ✔ Identifying people based on their step and even scent ✔ Kindness (sees good in everybody and treats everyone equally)
Weaknesses: ✘ No sight (blind) ✘ Dependent on others in new settings ✘ Still blames self for Hakuka's death ✘ Kindness (too trusting and won't fight back if provoked)
Likes: ✔ Art (especially those with texture) ✔ Plants (especially leafy ones) ✔ Places where all you hear is nature ✔ Teaching her apprentice her trade ✔ The comforting warmth of her kiln ✔ Savory foods (like cheese and bread) ✔ Salty foods (nuts, pretzels, crackers)
Dislikes: ✘ Violence/War/Bloodshed ✘ When her apprentice doesn't put tools back in place ✘ When people rearrange furniture ✘ Sweet foods ✘ Sour foods ✘ Low hanging lights
Personality: ❖ Quiet, calm, collected. Being blind has made Suzuki more prone to "stop and smell the roses". She appreciates the beauty in everything, even when she can't see it. She never raises her voice or hand in anger (but if she does, you better run like hell). She's usually jovial, but certain situations (like violence and/or threats of violence) will anger her (this is when you should run). On the same day every spring, she will disappear for an entire day, leaving before her apprentice (the only person she's in contact with the most) wakes and is back before her apprentice wakes the next morning.
History: ❖ Suzuki was birthed to half-giants in the lovely kingdom of Carmillion. She wasn't born blind, but instead had beautiful violet eyes and a vast vision of imagination. Her favourite recreation growing up was watching her parents work and dreaming of what she could create once she was old enough to use the forge. She often drew on the rock floor with burnt scraps of wood her ideas for daggers and candle holders. She didn't become blind until the age of 12, when she had a near fatal run in with the wrong crowd. Her parents were blacksmiths, and even if Carmillion was a peaceful kingdom, it still held awful people. Some people tried to jip her parents of pay for what they created and mended, most using the excuse of "I'll pay you later" and never returning, and a few resorting to threatening with a lethal weapon. On one occasion, little Suzuki tried standing up for her parents' hard work to one one of these miscreants. The miscreant thought the situation was hilarious at that point, and proceeded to dump hot ash on Suzuki. It got everywhere on the poor girl: hair, arms, mouth, nose, eyes, and even got into her lungs. She managed to survive the suffocating ash, but her eye-sight was sacrificed in return. Her violet eyes soon faded to a pale almost-white pink. With everyday tasks suddenly much more complicated, Suzuki started to become frustrated easily and gave up doing things she used to enjoy doing. Days turned to weeks and weeks to months, until one day, nearly 2 years after Suzuki's life-flipping moment, a young cat-folk man showed up to the shop. Of course they always got customers who were male (that was their highest demography, in fact) But this man was different. He had an air of something Suzuki had never seen or felt before. She became entranced, and he took interest in her as well. ❖ Suzuki had learned his name was Rorak Alte, a doctor from Eldrin and one of the youngest in the practice at 19 years old. He was visiting from his home kingdom, on an 'adventure' to discover new medicines and procedures for curing people. He said he heard of Suzuki's blindness while gathering some intel for leads at a pub, and he wanted to help Suzuki, see if he could restore her eyes. He was suddenly her reason for life. ❖ As Suzuki grew, so did their fondness for one another. Once Suzuki was of age 18, Rorak whisked her away. And Suzuki at 19 and Rorak at 24, they were blessed with a baby boy they named Hakuka. They raised the child at the edges of Lusia, Carmillion's capital, in a small two story house with one half of the bottom floor being a small clinic run by Rorak and the other being a workshop for Suzuki to cultivate a newfound passion: pottery. Life was peaceful, normal, fulfilling for the family. Until one day, Rorak never returned home from a house visit. Thinking that maybe he had gotten caught up in an emergency visit or the one he had left for took a turn for the worst and made him unable to contact her, Suzuki decided to wait for him. Morning came and no word. The day progressed as Suzuki's world slowly stopped, and still no word. Suzuki hid her worry with Hakuka around, but she wondered if the child still picked up some of it. When he asked about his father, she would answer that he got called away for an extra long visit. Days of waiting turned to weeks, weeks to months...and months to years. ❖ Hakuka passed away at the young age of 15. He was swimming in a lake with his friends when got caught up in a fishing net so carelessly left and drowned. His friends returned to Suzuki with his body, apologizing in quiet voices before Suzuki broke down in tears. First Rorak and now Hakuka, both of the lights in her world were gone. She had never really given up hope of Rorak being alive, but on this day, she mourned the loss of them both. ❖ 8 years later, present day, Suzuki had survived the grief, and was successful in her art now, making a small living selling her handcrafted pots, vases, and other clay knick-knacks. She thought of her lost husband and son everyday, but no longer shed tears. She had taken on an apprentice a little over a year ago, teaching them what she knew about the craft. She often thought it must be interesting to learn pottery from a blind woman
Outfits: ❖ Potter's (off-white canvas shirt, stained brown smock, brown pants, simple brown shoes) ❖ Outting (floor length sky blue dress, simple white sandals)
Items: ❖ Small but ornate clay amulet (from Hakuka) ❖ Intricately carved iron ring (from Rorak) ❖ Potter's tools (dull knives, shapers, and brushes mostly)
Other: ❖ colors: navy, lightblue ❖ Suzuki's parents are from Yuki no Okoku but moved to Camillion when Suzuki's mom was pregnant, that's why their names are Japanese. ❖ Suzuki wishes to someday visit the other kingdoms, but worries about leaving her workshop.
Hey! I see that you only made a few edits, so there's really not much to talk about. However, I'm wondering about one of his abilities now... What allows him to use Phantasm Swordsmen? I'd make sense if he had a spirit affinity or something along those lines, though I wouldn't suggest changing the fire. It'd work as a good Magus Ability if he could find a Mage with a Spirit Affinity, but aside from that, I'm not quite sure... I'm not saying that you must get rid of it entirely especially since we accepted it in the first place *coughs*, but I'd suggest either changing it or giving it some reasoning.
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Username: Anikielen Name: Kanec Silna Nickname: Kansil Race: Human Ethnicity: Caucasian Gender: Male Orientation: Straight Alignment: Neutral Occupation: Tailor Age: 26 Birthday: January 7th Height: 5'11'' / 71in
Relationships: ❖ Father (Deceased) ❖ Mother (Deceased) ❖ No known other relations.
Weaknesses: ✘ Short Tempered ✘ Greedy ✘ Blennophobia: Fear of Slime ✘ OCD
Likes: ✔ Cleanliness ✔ Books ✔ Art ✔ Money
Dislikes: ✘ Dirty Things ✘ Cheap People ✘ Beggars ✘ Sweating
Personality: ❖ Kansil is a rather clean person and highly dislikes dirt. His attention to details is remarkable especially to find flaws in someones cleanliness. Growing up he has been known to flip from a calm demeanor to an angry one when he finds something not up too his standards in his establishment. Though he is rather a perfectionist when it comes to his trade, he does enjoy leisurely talks with adventures especially to find out his next supply goals. He does have an irrational fear to slime, which trails back to his youth which is probably why he hates dirt so much.
Aside from his OCD nature, Kansil is rather the tycoon of his trade. In constant war with other tailors, he strives to be the best. Those that challenge his art soon have found themselves at a loss of their estate. His tongue is his most deadly asset and his words can steal the gold from your pockets.
History: ❖ Kansil grew up out side of the city in a small cottage with his parents. He lives a rather calm and leisurely life with his mother whom taught him the trades of tailoring since he lacked the ferocity for his fathers trade, farming. His skills slowly grew to rather talk-able status as he helped repair bags, boots, cloths, and more in a quick and fashionable speed. This only fueled his desire to be better than the others in the city as he raced for the top.
After years of training under his mom he was soon enlisted into the merchants guild of the city to train with even better skills. He refused at first which was fairly unheard of due to his family being such a low status. His heart was set on making his family the best they could be with his own hands. This did not go over well with the guild since a prodigy they had chosen had refused to join them willing.
A few months after refusing the off, Kansil was on his way back to the cottage when he heard his mothers screams echo through the night. As he came closer the sounds seemed to dim to a soft gurgle. His body rammed the door and opened it rapidly only to view what appeared to be a large slime like thing and the remains of what only he could assume was his parents. This devastated Kansil as he rushed in, but soon found himself falling after a quick attack to the back of the head.
After that day Kansil can't get the memory out of his head, and can't remember who or what had knocked him out. He soon joined the Merchants guild, though, which seemed eagerly awaiting for his membership. This has never left his mind and he still has the goal in life to figure out what had happened that night.
Outfits: ❖ He wears a simple feathers Coat made of beautiful blue Silk and dark pants. ❖ Many outfits too Come.
Items: ❖ Sewing tools he keeps on his person ❖ A Mimic, Box like monster, that follows him around and carries supplies.
Other: ❖ [any other information not covered by the stuff above]
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