Your approved, now just make a new topic in this forum and post your profile in it. Once you do so, your topic will be locked. Also, don't forget to make a new topic for your character profile in the Update Area so that you can make updates.
P.S. I had a little chat with my fellow Vice Captain, ReV. It doesn't matter which perspective your bio comes in, its up to you.
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Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2014 11:51 pm
Ⅰ.XXX▐░ Personal Data ██ █████████████████████████ • Username :: Ryshio Saigari • Name :: Ryshio Kei • Age :: 17 • Height :: 5'10 • Weight :: 165 LBS • Hair Color :: Misty Black • Eye Color :: Dark Gray • Skin Color :: Light Tan • Tattoo / Markings :: A gash on his left cheek • Race :: Human • Personality:: Ryshio is a outgoing, happy-go-lucky guy even though his looks might say otherwise at times. He likes to keep a smirk on his face and can be a master of words all of these traits he learned from observing, but when push comes to shove and the worse happens, he is a relentless, strong-willed fighter that will give it his all to take down his one or many opponents.
• Biography :: Denkou Kei was an S-Class Fire-Make Mage in his guild, along with Ryusi, a A-Class Earth-Make Mage, and Denkou's loving wife. Every mission they did were flawless, gaining jewel from the guild and respect from around town, but they also had a great amount of adversaries, ones that would do anything to remove them from this world, but despite all that, one night it was as if magic happened and nine months later Ryshio was born.
When Ryshio was only five, Denkou and Ryusi saw potential in their son and wanted to teach him Molding Magic. Upon thousands of hours of train, Ryusi showcasing her Earth Magic, and Denkou having Fire they taught him simultaneously, and one day awakened a new form of make magic, in which was steel. Proud of himself, he'd train hard with his mom and dad to strengthen his new ability, and one day decided that he wanted to join the guild along with his mom and dad.
Another 7 years had passed and they'd become a trio on their missions, completing them with ease and Ryshio seeing his parents working their hardest, he wanted to become an A-Rank and live in his their footsteps. But good things don't last forever and one day while traveling back to there village, rouge mages attacked their train, and with no time to brace for the attack Ryusi died to a massive concussion and injured both Ryshio and Denkou. Despite all this Denkou crawl out the wrecked train and fought on but couldn't get far with the health condition he was in, he lost the battle and lost his life. They took Denkou's body away to a place unknown to anybody but the rouges.
Ryshio, had manage to escape the attack by staying in the cart, and letting the attackers pass by. Sadness swelled up into tears, losing his role models and even worse was the fact that he had no one to care for him now, and in the mind of a twelve year old that's a pretty scaring thing, the only other person knew was his dad's best friend Kane a B-Rank Wind Make Mage, but he didn't have anyway of getting to him, unless he were to limp. So he did, he following the tracks back to the village with his limp, Ryshio sought to find Kane and tell him about the incident, and when he did,Kane told Ryshio that there was a bounty on his parents head, and Kane offered to nurse him to full health and asked if he would like for Ryshio to adopt him, Ryshio accepted the first offer and declined the second, Ryshio didn't need anyone else to take the spot of father figure, and told him that he was going to avenge his mother and father along with becoming the best mage out there, A-Rank and going to an even better guild where he can fight with the best. Understanding this, Kane provided him with food and jewel and let Ryshio be on his way and told him to not let the death of his parents get into the way of his happy, outgoing demeanor, and to keep training with his magic. It's a hard thing for Ryshio to do but he took him up on that advice and set out on his adventure, looking for vengeance, companions, and as time wears on with Ryshio's optimistic attitude these things are bound to be fulfilled. Training harder and harder each day, vowing to be the best he can be
Ⅱ. XXX▐░Guild Data ██ █████████████████████████ •Guild Name :: Lamia Scale •Rank Level :: D-Class •Guild Mark Body Location :: On the back of his neck •Color of Mark :: Would be Dark Silver
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Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2014 3:14 am
Ⅰ.XXX▐░ Personal Data ██ █████████████████████████ • Username :: cookieexx • Name :: Naru Everdeen • Age :: 15 • Height :: 4'10" • Weight :: 99 lbs. • Hair Color :: Pink • Eye Color :: Gold • Skin Color :: White • Tattoo / Markings :: Vampire bite on her neck, but she was just faking it and placed some forever pen there. It can be clearly seen if you directly look at her neck. • Race :: Human • Personality:: Naru here, is a playful and energetic person. She loves going out on an adventure and do some outdoor stuffs. She's kind and sweet. She also willing to help anyone who is in deep trouble. She likes to take care of plants as she believed that, people get some energy from it. • Biography :: Naru couldn't remember much on her past because of a terrible accident. But this memory has always been inside her mind: Naru was playing in their house, there was a blackout then, so they light up a candle inside their room. Even at night Naru couldn't stop running around. She was chasing her brother because she was the 'it'. Suddenly, when she was running she, unintentionally pushed the candle down their wood house. It eventually got burned and her mother was really in shocked. Of course all of their family got shocked. Naru, upon staring at the fire, became oblivious of her surrounding and just stared at the fire. The fire was climbing up to their roof and a wood from their ceiling fell and it was on Naru's direction. Her mother instinctively jumped and saved Naru, while she was hit down by a tree and eventually got burned. Naru came back to her senses after then and cried when she saw her mother on the floor, got burned by the fire. "It was my fault." Was the only statement she could say after the fire. Months later, the family recovered but still, motherless. But the memory of her mother dying in front of Naru was still fresh.
Ⅱ. XXX▐░Guild Data ██ █████████████████████████ •Guild Name :: Sabertooth •Rank Level :: D-Class •Guild Mark Body Location :: Tongue •Color of Mark :: Pink
Ryshio Kei: Denied. Aside from the taken slayers, none of the other slayers have been released to the public. The rolling won't be out until the 'back to school cleaning' is over as well. Your profile can remain in wait, but until then I can't accept it.
cookieexx
Naru Everdeen: Denied. If I'm not mistaken your magic is a custom, which isn't a particular problem yet, just remember it will have to go through custom approval soon. I can't accept the profile til the custom magic is approved. Additionally your mana amount is equal to all of your stats multiplied by 25. So in this case, it would be 750.
Just keep in mind the guild will be going into some work soon so if you can't access some of the guides, or can't view the spell area that would be why. It'll be fixed, and regardless if you can't access the information no one would have a problem if you roleplayed in the temporary event that will be going on as the mods do clean up.
Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2014 7:33 am
xXRedemption_VengeanceXx
Ryshio Saigari
Ryshio Kei: Denied. Aside from the taken slayers, none of the other slayers have been released to the public. The rolling won't be out until the 'back to school cleaning' is over as well. Your profile can remain in wait, but until then I can't accept it.
cookieexx
Naru Everdeen: Denied. If I'm not mistaken your magic is a custom, which isn't a particular problem yet, just remember it will have to go through custom approval soon. I can't accept the profile til the custom magic is approved. Additionally your mana amount is equal to all of your stats multiplied by 25. So in this case, it would be 750.
Just keep in mind the guild will be going into some work soon so if you can't access some of the guides, or can't view the spell area that would be why. It'll be fixed, and regardless if you can't access the information no one would have a problem if you roleplayed in the temporary event that will be going on as the mods do clean up.
Yes, I figured out that there has to be rollings, and I'm going to be changing it from Shadow Dragons Slayer to a custom magic that I'm going to make so that my character can be accepted
PS. I fixed it
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Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2014 10:02 am
I.XXX¦¦ Personal Data ¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ • Username :: Luminous Tenebrae • Name :: Axel Levinart • Age :: 19 • Height :: 6'0" • Weight :: 146 lbs. • Hair Color :: Light Crimson • Eye Color :: Pale-green • Skin Color :: Light Tan • Tattoo / Markings :: Lamia Scale Guild Mark • Race :: Human • Personality:: Axel was once a loving person. During that time of his life, he had many friends and people who depended on him. After the incident, hatred and pain was all he felt, yet he clouded that pain and put on a facade of a calm person. • Personal Weakness :: His sympathetic nature and his nature of analyzing everything. • Personal Strengths :: Calmness, honesty, and analyzing everything. • Biography :: Flames burned everything in sight as walls of thick ice rose up around the town. Axel had nowhere to run as maybe 20 or so men close in on the town during Axel's 9th birthday. All the men stood up to defend their families, but that didnt last to long. Once some of the men were killed, his parents got back down. Axel jumped up an ran as fast as he could after witnessing the death of his friends parents. Not out of fright, but because he still wanted to hold onto his promises. He always said he'd protect the town. All of the invading men noticed him and began to chase after him. This gave the rest of the townsfolk time to escape. After Axel managed to escape the town, he kept running. Though being that it was during the winter, the cold snow and dirt made it more difficult to stay alive. It had seemed that the group was after him for some odd reason. Maybe they didn't want the be found out. As long as Axel ran, they wizards would keep chasing him and the town would be safe. For 5 years, he was in and out of shelters, stealing food, and struggling to stay alive.
During the last 5 years, he had come across a Maker Magic user. A younger woman, who might have been in her 20's. Throughout the years, he learned how to use Molding Magic. It was the same as her own, Ice, but obviously the form of the ice was different. He completely understood what Maker Magic was and how it was used. Even how anyone can use it. But he always hid his talents with this magic. Even though the woman was very close to him, she gave him his space. Even so, he was quite skilled with what he already had. Axel never stopped practicing when he was alone. The woman who taught him went by the name Ellie. She was like a mother to him, so they often had arguments, leaving Ellie the victor. Yet no matter what happened, they always helped each other out.
Finally, knowing that the people who were tracking him were gone, Axel felt a little bit safer. A few months after contemplating on whether he would leave, Ellie told him she was the one who got rid of his enemies. Axel was happy and promised to always protect her. Though she laughed at this promise, she knew it was true. He then set out to go back to his home town, where his escape had prevented a massacre. Many of the citizens who were once close friends to him were now distant teenagers. The wandered around aimlessly on dates and hang-outs. When he entered the town, a memorial site had many people surrounding it. He walked up to it and read the words. "In memory of the young savior, Axel Levinart." That was the first time in years that he had cried. He didn't want to disrupt the peace so he left the village, not letting a single soul know of his return.
Since the day Axel left, he had thought about returning and showing his true identity to all of his old friends. For months, this thought passed through his mind, only to be cut off whenever he came across a guild. He never really checked out the guilds. Eventually, Axel went back to his home, with Ellie. As he approached the campsite, it was eerily quiet. He ran through the center and into the tent and he saw pink snow. Inside the tent was Ellie's body, strung up on the wall. On her stomach, was a mark. It was the same as those who stormed his village. On the other side of the tent was two dozen bodies of the enemy. He got down on one knee and clasped her right hand. He cried and vowed he would avenge her. Before he got up, he felt a hand on his head. He looked up to see Ellie's last smile. At least she died happy.
Axel had left the camp immediately after placing Ellie in a beautiful ice coffin he made. Afterwards, he submerged the ice coffin and covered it up. She deserved a proper burial, but he might join her in he resting place if he stayed around too long. Saddened, he left the camp for good, knowing full that there was nothing left for him at the campsite. He journeyed for quite a while and eventually he wound up at the Lamia Scale guild. Frankly, it seemed that he was accepted without question. He now resides at the guild of Lamia Scale.
II. XXX¦¦Guild Data ¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ •Guild Name :: Lamia Scale •Rank Level :: D-Class •Guild Mark Body Location :: Right bicep •Color of Mark :: Maroon
•Resistance :: Fire - 1 Water - 1 Wind - 1 Light - 1 Darkness - 1
IV.XXX¦¦ Wizard Data ¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ •Primary Magic Name :: Ice Make •Primary Magic Type :: Caster Magic •Mana Amount :: 750
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(If my custom spells are accepted.)
Spell Name: Ice Make: Sword Description: The user creates a sword made of ice for melee combat. The sword is strong enough to be use against normal swords but shatters after 10 attacks. [+20 Strength] Mana Cost: 150 STRIVE: Starter Spell
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Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2014 6:40 am
?.XXX¦¦ Personal Data ¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ • Username ::Dragongirl26 • Name ::Rin • Age ::10 • Height ::4'3" • Weight ::70lbs • Hair Color ::Light Brown • Eye Color ::Brown • Skin Color ::White • Tattoo / Markings ::None • Race ::Half Human and half unknown • Personality::Rin is pretty easy going and cheerful for the most part though when she gets angry it's not pretty • Personal Weakness ::Sweets, Hand to hand combat, and controlling majic when scared or angry • Personal Strengths ::agility, imagination, and teamwork skills • Biography :: Rin never knew her real parents due to how she was left at an orphanage at a young age, though this never really bothered her. She was adopted a few times but everytime they brought her back to the orphange after they found out about her magic. Eventually Rin left the orphanage and started to live on her own. About a year after that a dark guild found out about her lost magic and tried to force her to join. She managed to get away but now tried to hide her powers from wizards with markings.
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Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2014 10:43 am
Dragongirl26
Denied, Arc Of Embodiement is taken. Please choose another magic excluding that. Lost Magic is limited to one person only. (Dragon and God Slayers are an exception to that rule.)
If you are to make a custom magic, please get that approved first before you get your profile approved.
Luminous Tenebrae
Approved, go and make a new topic in this subforum and post your profile in it so we can lock it. Also, make a new topic in update land and post your profile in it for your character updates.
Ryshio Saigari
Approved, Make a new topic in the subforum and post your profile in it. Make a new topic in the Update Land and post your profile in it as well for your character updates.
Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2014 2:47 pm
Souchi The 2nd
Also, I would like to note that I'm not authorized to enter the Update Land
Also, I would like to note that I'm not authorized to enter the Update Land
Updating is being worked on! I'll be announced when people can post their updating area.
Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2014 4:49 pm
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Luminous Tenebrae
Souchi The 2nd
Also, I would like to note that I'm not authorized to enter the Update Land
Updating is being worked on! I'll be announced when people can post their updating area.
Thanks you.
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Posted: Fri Sep 05, 2014 9:42 pm
?.XXX¦¦ Personal Data ¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ • Username :: Denkou Tentei • Name :: Jason Grim • Age :: 15 • Height :: 5'4 • Weight :: 105 pounds • Hair Color ::Blonde • Eye Color :: Blue • Skin Color :: Tan • Tattoo / Markings :: Scars on his back from foster parents. • Race :: Human • Personality:: He is very cocky, headstrong and fearless. • Biography :: Jason was a very happy baby. His parents would take him to the park, sing songs, and read books to him every day. He had a wonderful life. His parents were middle class. They often say to Jason that "Money isn't everything in life." They taught him about truthfulness and many other virtues even though they knew he was too young to understand. Then one night, when Jason was 3 years old, his parents went out on a S-class mission together while he was asleep. Jason's mom was an S-class Ice-Molding wizard, and his father was an A-class Crash Magic wizard. They were sent to capture a criminal S-Class wizard. But they never returned from the mission. When people found there bodies both of Jason's parents were dead along with the criminal they were sent after.
From there Jason was stuck in a orphanage until he was 5. He was adopted by a very poor family. His foster mother was a C-rank Lightning wizard, and his foster father was a B-rank Requip wizard. Since the day Jason was adopted he was trained by his foster parents to be a good wizard. But they were very angry at him because he had neither of their magic types. Jason had Fire Magic. They abused him and beat, and barely fed him because he didn't have Lightning or Requip. Jason had many bruises on his back and stomach for being punished and he was too weak to defend himself. He would often run into the village yelling about how he is treated and nobody would listen or try to help. He would cry himself to sleep at night.
When Jason turned 8 he decided that since nobody would help him then he would have to help himself, so he ran away. He sprinted as fast as he could and left the village. He ran for miles and miles not knowing where he would end up, but he didn't care. He ran until he saw another village. He climbed up a tree and he went to sleep making a vow that he would never trust or love anyone. He would continue training his fire magic so that he could become stronger so that he could get vengeance. He hated that he couldn't protect himself from the foster parents. He hated that nobody ever believed him. He hated that he was fed a small bowl of rice a day. He hated the world.
For many years Jason would train day and night in the woods to become more powerful and stronger to get vengeance. When he was hungry he would run into the village and steal food from stores. But when he was 10, and he was stealing food he was caught in the store by the owner. But a wizard from a guild told the man to let him go. The man payed for the stolen goods. The man said that if Jason joined a guild he could go on missions and earn money to pay for food, and it could make him stronger. That caught Jason's attention. But Jason decided he would keep his routine. When Jason turned 13 he decided that he should join a guild. But he didn't know what to join. He heard a man talking about a dark guild named Raven Tail. The man described them as evil and terrible people. Jason thought it would be great to join the dark guild because they were people like him. He could get money and get better with his magic. But the best thing about joining the dark guild was Revenge.
?. XXX¦¦Guild Data ¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ •Guild Name :: Raven Tail •Rank Level :: D-Class •Guild Mark Body Location :: Palm of Right Hand •Color of Mark :: Red
•Resistance :: Fire - 1 Water - 1 Wind - 1 Light - 1 Darkness - 1
?.XXX¦¦ Wizard Data ¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ •Primary Magic Name ::Fire Magic •Primary Magic Type ::Caster •Mana Amount ::750
? (Insert Magic Name Here)xx
? (Fire Fist) :: The caster sends a small wave of flames to a hand and attempts to punch the opponent leaving a small burn. Spell disappears after 8 uses. [+10 attack] ? Mana Cost:100
? (Name of Spell) :: (Description of Spell here) ? Mana Cost: ???
? (Name of Spell) :: (Description of Spell here) ? Mana Cost: ???
? (Name of Spell) :: (Description of Spell here) ? Mana Cost: ???
? (Name of Spell) :: (Description of Spell here) ? Mana Cost: ???
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Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2014 7:05 pm
Time for judgin'...,
Dragongirl26
Still denied. I cannot approve this profile until your "Alpha & Omega" custom magic is approved. Your mana amount is wrong. Its suppose to be "750", not "1,000".
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