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Sleigh Bells Fan

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 5:41 pm


MAIN INFORMATION
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Name: Kyo Wutai
Nickname/Famous Name: 'Bewitching Sensory Ninja Kyo'

Age: Eighteen
Birthdate: March 17th

Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Ethnicity: White

Height: 5'5
Weight: 119 Pounds

Personality: Kyo is a cheerful and optimistic young lady, often times spending her life wishing she could just get up and go. She's spent most of her life around the ninja in the great country of Yukigakure but was reluctant to become a ninja because her mother had abandon her family when she was only five and her father was terminally ill.
Kyo tends to think more of others than herself on rare occassions. She often treats herself to an equal value when it comes to who is worth more in a situation but she can't stand people who hold themselves with higher regards or lower regards. In her mind, everyone is an equal under most circumstances.
Family: Her mother is quite unknown to her other than she was a blonde just like her but she had the urge to go and be with some man she'd only just met two months before her walking out. Her father developed a terminal illness but managed to stay alive six more years after being diagnosed, dying when Kyo was sixteen. Her brother left with her mother, having just been a newborn, Kyo's mother didn't have the heart to leave him behind. As a result, the both he and Kyo's mother walked out the door when she was only five.

Theme Song: Interrupted by Fireworks
Nindo: Seek success through passion!
Background: Kyo comes from a family of average living. Her mother was a nurse before leaving and her father was a store clerk. Kyo worked with him for awhile but eventually discovered that she had a knack for recognizing people who came to the shop before they even walked in the door. it was then that she realized just how useful she could be if she further developed her abilities.
One thing led to another and eventually she joined the ninja academy after her father passed away. It didn't take her long being there before she ultimately become a genin.

NINJA INFORMATION

Village: Yukigakure
Rank: Genin

Fame/Infamy: None
Ryo: None

Class: Sensor
- Path: [Short-Range Sensor]
Bloodline: None
Clan: None
Demon: None
Summoning(s): None

Element(s): Wind
Chakra Points: 20

Passives:
- Perception: 1/2
Personal Attributes:
- [Hazardous Winds] Wind techniques used by Kyo are reduced by 20% in cost.
- [Sword Dancer] Sword techniques used by Kyo increased by 1/2.
- [Fast Paced] Speed of Kyo increased by 1/2.
- [Windy Experiences] Wind techniques are increased 1/2 rank in power.
- [A Sensor's foreshadowing] Reflexes of Kyo increased by 1/2.

Strengths:
- Knowing the Enemy before a fight.
- Her innocence seems deceiving in a battle.
- Her abilities to blow enemies away.
Weakness:
- Fighting Katon specialist.
- Battling when she hasn't had time to scan an enemy.
- Fighting against multiple enemies.
Fears:
- Being surrounded by fire.
- Getting buried alive.
- Camel Spiders.

Missions:
- D: O
- C: O
- B: O
- A: O
- S: O

Special Items:
- None

Weapons:
- Slightly Elongated Katana - A typical katana that has a slightly increased length of three inches.

JUTSU INFORMATION


Universal Techniques:
- Transformation Technique
- Magic Cloak of Invisibility
- Rope Untying
- Unlocking

- Tree/Wall/Water Walking

- Release

Fuuton:
-
-
-

Genjutsu/Medical/Sealing:
-
-
-

Tai style:
-
-
-

Buki Style:
-
-
-
PostPosted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 6:44 pm


Sorry for the Inconvenience, but I've been asked by the Capt'n to limit the next 4 RPCs to Yukigakure  

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 7:07 pm


Ro Mayvine
Sorry for the Inconvenience, but I've been asked by the Capt'n to limit the next 4 RPCs to Yukigakure
Fixed
PostPosted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 7:26 pm


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You have 5 personal attribute slots with no bloodline or clan.

[Thorough Scanning] Denied.

[Physical Person] In order to have another slot for Taijutsu, you'd have to give up something.

[Wind Walker] This would have to be a jutsu, probably A Rank.

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 7:34 pm


Ro Mayvine
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You have 5 personal attribute slots with no bloodline or clan.

[Thorough Scanning] Denied.

[Physical Person] In order to have another slot for Taijutsu, you'd have to give up something.

[Wind Walker] This would have to be a jutsu, probably A Rank.

Fixed.
PostPosted: Wed Jun 05, 2013 6:53 am


Sleigh Bells Fan

Sorry for the delay, Approved.

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 08, 2013 9:05 am


MAIN INFORMATION
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Name: Fuza
Nickname/Famous Name: N/A

Age: 17
Birthdate: 20th February

Gender: Male
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Ethnicity: Caucasian

Height: 6'4
Weight: 129lbs

Personality: Fuza is a very confident who ninja, he leads by example and enjoys showing his potential to his superiors. Despite this considerable upbeat attitude, most of the Fuza has a straight, almost senseless, face.
Family: Father & Mother are KIA. *No siblings*. Lives with Grandpa who is a former ninja.

Theme Song:
Nindo: "My superiors are there to be impressed, my enemies are there to be destroyed, but my friends are here, by my side, to work harmoniously.
Background: ....

NI NJA INFORMATION

Village: Yukigakure
Rank: Genin

Fame/Infamy: 0
Ryo: 500

Class: Taijutsu
- Path: Speed
Bloodline:
- Stage:
Clan:
Summoning(s):


Element(s): Raiton,
Chakra Points: 20

Passives:
- Speed: 1/2
- Melee Master: 1
- Tough: 1/2
- Strength: 1/2
- Perception: 1/2

Personal Attributes:
[Body Builder] - Fuza gets 1/2 strength.
[Concentration] - Fuza gets 1/2 Perception


Strengths:
- Kekkei Genkai
- Taijutsu
- Intelligent
Weakness:
- Injury Prone
- Long Range
- Low Endurance

Fears:
- Losing his Grandad
- Seeing his parent's dead bodies.
- Breaking his bones

Missions:
- D: 5
- C: 1
- B: 0
- A: 0
- S: 0

Special Items:
-
-
-

Weapons:
- Kunai
- Shuriken
- Kusarigama
- Nuchaku
- Exploding Notes

JU TSU INFORMATION

Bloodline Techniques:


Universal Techniques:
- Transformation Technique
- Magic Cloak of Invisibility
- Rope Untying
- Unlocking

- Tree/Wall/Water Walking

- Release

Raiton:
-

-
-

Tai style: Lightning Kickboxing
-
-
-

Buki Style:
-
-
-

CUSTOM INFORMATION

Weapon Name:
Length:
Ability:
PostPosted: Sat Jun 08, 2013 9:29 am


Uchiha Zakoichi

sweatdrop So there are a lot of things wrong with this profile.

You need some kind of a background

Melee Master isn't a path, it's the basic class bonus, the path is either the speed or the strength passive.

Kaguya is not a clan in this guild, that slot is meant for one of the clans listed in the Character Add-on sub-forum. You do not have to have a clan, but it does potentially add to your RPC.

The only passives your character should have are:
Melee Master [1/2 Rank in Melee Combat increase]
Melee Combat Passive [1/2 Rank Better]
Tough Passive [1/2 Rank Tougher]
[Speed Passive] The user gains 1/2 a rank in speed. Or [Strength Passive] The user gains 1/2 a rank in strength

Personal Attributes are unique modifiers for your RPC, and are not generic statements, I recommend looking over past approved profiles for getting an idea of what is acceptable as a personal attribute. Also if you choose to have no clan, you will have 3 personal attribute slots.

Total number of ninja tools needs to be listed, and kept within reason

Although you do auto-learn bloodline jutsu, you're RPC can only know up to C-Rank Jutsu

Custom Jutsu are applied for in the Custom Jutsu thread located in the Custom Items/Techniques/Styles sub-forum.

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 08, 2013 10:22 am



Sorry, kinda new to this kind of Naruto RP.

How is it now?

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 08, 2013 11:16 am


Uchiha Zakoichi
Still unacceptable;

Need to pick a path for your class

Passives are wrong, should be (not including any personal attributes):

Speed or Strength 1/2
Melee Master: 1
Tough: 1/2


Personal attributes can only increase 1 stat by a 1/2 rank at the most, and you still have another 2 slots with no clan.

sweatdrop Also noticed you have some non bloodline related jutsu, remove them.

Edits:
I almost forgot that you need to apply for the bloodline, and unfortunately your RPC has to go to Yukigakure sweatdrop

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 08, 2013 2:46 pm



Where do I find the paths?

And I'll apply in a minute.

How's that now?
PostPosted: Sat Jun 08, 2013 2:52 pm


Ro Mayvine


Can I be an Uzumaki, and have the Kaguya Kekkei Genkai?

Uchiha Zakoichi

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 08, 2013 3:04 pm


Uchiha Zakoichi
This is not meant to be a thread for questions, so this is the only time I'll answer anymore here;

"Where do I find the paths?"
I've told you already that the paths for Taijutsu are Speed Passive and Strength Passive, basically you choose between starting with +1/2 to speed or strength.

"Can I be an Uzumaki, and have the Kaguya Kekkei Genkai?"
Yes.

I've also noticed that you have a summon listed, you do not start with a summon, and have to apply for it. Additionally you can only have a single summon from a contract.

Ultimately I ask that you please read over the rules and systems, as it seems haven't really done that yet.
PostPosted: Sat Jun 08, 2013 3:42 pm


Ro Mayvine
Uchiha Zakoichi
This is not meant to be a thread for questions, so this is the only time I'll answer anymore here;

"Where do I find the paths?"
I've told you already that the paths for Taijutsu are Speed Passive and Strength Passive, basically you choose between starting with +1/2 to speed or strength.

"Can I be an Uzumaki, and have the Kaguya Kekkei Genkai?"
Yes.

I've also noticed that you have a summon listed, you do not start with a summon, and have to apply for it. Additionally you can only have a single summon from a contract.

Ultimately I ask that you please read over the rules and systems, as it seems haven't really done that yet.

Fixed

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