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Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 10:21 pm
Character: Myurai Verd Technique Name: Fukusū Raikou Bunshin no Jutsu (Multiple Lightning Clone Technique) Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element:Raiton/lightning Description: The user makes the same handsigns as for the normal Raikou Bunshin no Jutsu with the additon of the sign of the tiger and and the dragon. The user may also create as many clones as they wish as long as they pay the D ranked jutsu cost per clone. This technique makes a simple clone of the shinobi however unlike the standard bunshin, which is a genjutsu, this bunshin takes an actual physical form through the use of electrically charged chakra. One can easily touch and hold this clone like it was in fact an actual person, however when it is attacked it quickly disperses into smoky, hot air. It is also able to attack using taijutsu, however it's ability to attack is around 1/10 in perspective to the user, in return for this weakness it's attacks deliver shocks of electricity to the opponent's body.
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Posted: Sat Jan 22, 2011 7:00 am
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Posted: Sat Jan 22, 2011 1:14 pm
Character: Hiyato Hyuuga ((Any Hyuugan Can Learn)) Technique Name: Eight Trigram: 16 Palms Rank: D Rank Type: Taijutsu [Bloodline] ((Have Okay From Shinsua)) Element: Bloodline Description: The user mus be able to do the Gentle Fist style of combat, Byakugan, and be of the Hyuuga clan. The Jutsu is preformed by the user putting chakra in ones hands like other palm skills strikes at the opponents chakra points. It is used more on an opponents arms to slow or temporarily stop chakra flow to prevent them from using jutsu and chakra flow to the hands.
Two strikes to make Two Two more strikes to make Four Four more strikes to make Eight Eight more strikes to make Sixteen
Character: Hiyato Hyuuga ((Anyone Hyuugan Can Learn)) Technique Name: Eight Trigram: Soaring Dragons Palm Rank: B Type: Taijutsu [Bloodline] ((Have Okay For Shinsua)) Element: Bloodline Description: Similar to the Lions Palms, The user flows chakra around his or her hands forming the head of a dragon dragon made of chakra. The user than attacks at his opponent while moving if needed to avoid counters. But once in range. The user strikes the target with both hands at the same time in an attempt to send the chakra into the targets body.
It is called Soaring Dragon Palm because when both hands are together. The chakra heads form together to make one large one just before the strike. Acting as if the where one massive palm.
Character: Hiyato Hyuuga ((Any Hyuugan Can Learn)) Technique Name: Eight Trigram: Six Faithful Palms Rank: C Rank Type: Taijutus [Bloodline] ((Have Okay From Shinsua)) Element: Bloodline Description: Assuming the Gentle Fist stance. The user generates a C-rank amount of chakra in ones hands. Once in range of a target, the user strikes at his or her opponents arms, legs, head, and with a finally strike to the opponents torso. The strikes are made to stun or make the target temp. unable move.
1st Palm, Left Arm 2nd Palm, Right Arm 3rd Palm, Left Leg 4th Palm, Right Leg 5th Palm, Head (upward thrust to chin) 6th Palm, Torso
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Posted: Sat Jan 22, 2011 1:22 pm
Okie dokies. Just make sure you post them in the right log. xP
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Posted: Sat Jan 22, 2011 1:23 pm
LOL thank you I will, OwO
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Posted: Tue Jan 25, 2011 4:59 pm
Character: Aiko Tsuma Technique Name:Form Manipulation Rank: N/A ( B to learn) Type:Bloodline ((density, reform, size, and motion manipulations are all prerequisit to using this)) Description: Douka Users hold their bodies together through chakra, even if the materials they are made out of wouldn't normally form that shape. They use manipulations to change this. Density manipulation can change the distance between particles. Size Manipulations Change the number of partials that exist in total. Motion manipulation and multi-particle manipulation move individual particles, or parts of their body.
Form Manipulation uses these in a new way. First the particles rearrange themselves as if in a Motion manipulation. They reshape themselves until they form a body…but they form a different body than the person naturally would have. They are then rebound that way so they would stay like that as if it's natural, thus allowing the Douka user to mimic the appearance of other people, animals, or creatures. This Is not an illusion, but an actual rebuilding of the douka user's body to look like something else. It takes one post to look like a random person, since there is no specific matching of traits that goes on.
It takes three turns of focus to mimic a specific person. That person must be in the user's view all during each post of focus, but they don't have to all be in a row. Traits that the User cannot see, such as tattoos, birthmarks, or other things covered by cloths cannot be mimiced since the character does not know of them. Though anything that the Form Manipulation user can see, can be mimicked.
Things like DNA, or chakra color are not mimicked however. People who know the mimicked person intimately would know of deviance in personality, or chakra coloration, and thus it is not as perfect as a genjutsu to do the same thing would be. Points in chakra can be spent to mimic chakra feel and coloration, but this requires 3 additional posts of focus for the Douka user to learn to match them, and uses up chakra for every post that the chakra feel is mimicked. Personality is unique, and cannot be mimicked with this technique. The user can only guess at it, and try to act out being the person mimicked as best as possible.
Without absorbing traits of a bloodline ability using the foreign substance manipulation, Aiko cannot mimic bloodline specific traits on more than a superficial level. She would be able to have an oni's horns, for example, but she would not be able to make the aura match because of the variants on the person's chakra caused by their horns. This usually only matters when someone who has knowledge of that other bloodline can sense her chakra in some way. the horns in the previous example would be only as strong as the substance she is made of, and would not be as sharp. She could mimic the white eyes of a byakugan... but not the sight. Nor would she be able to do anything extra that a bloodline would be able to do.
I know that all Douka users can pretty much already manipulate their shapes at will, and could already do most of this... This is designed simply to imply the level of control/finesse necessary to match a specific appearance. Kinda like a more advanced motion/reform manipulation.
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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 10:19 am
Character: Kastiil (Rehkr’s animal) Technique Name: Shroud of Darkness Rank: Varied C – 10 feet in all directions B – 15 feet in all directions A – 20 feet in all directions S – 25 feet in all directions Type: Genjutsu Element: n/a Description: A billowing cloud of black smoke spews from Kastiil’s mouth, obscuring an opponent’s vision and muddling their senses (ex. smell, hearing). This cloud is limited to a maximum of 25 feet in all directions at S-rank, gradually becoming thinner and less effective the further one is from the centre of the cloud.
Character: Rehkr Technique Name: Storm Gear Rank: Varied E – Fingers D – Gloves C – Long Gloves (mid-forearm) B – Long Gloves, Boots A – Long Gloves, Boots, Elbows S – Long Gloves, Boots, Elbows, Knees Type: Ninjutsu Element: Lightning Description: By completing three handsigns, a ‘glove’ of electric energy forms around various parts of the users body. This Strike Enhancing garb releases a shock on contact with another body. The harder the hit, the stronger the shock, though if any part of the Storm Gear breaks, the entire jutsu has to be re-applied.
*This technique allows the user to employ the ‘Shocking Touch’ taijutsu.
Character: Rehkr Technique Name: Earth Gear Rank: Varied E – Gloves D – Long Gloves (mid-forearm) C – Long Gloves, Boots B – Long Gloves, Boots, Elbows A – Long Gloves, Boots, Elbows, Knees S – Multiple, 4-inch spikes of stone adorn the Gear. Type: Ninjutsu Element: Earth Description: By completing three handsigns, a ‘glove’ of rock forms around various parts of the users body. This Strike Enhancing garb doesn’t release any energy on contact with another body, instead just adding the extra weight of the stone to the strength of the blows. Unlike Storm Gear, if a piece of the Earth Gear breaks, the jutsu can remain in effect until re-applied or dismissed.
*This technique allows the user to employ the ‘Earth’s Fury’ taijutsu.
*These taijutsus aren't completed yet and I may just scrag them entirely. We'll have to see.
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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 11:27 am
Both of you look good to go. Senko, if you're not sure you wanna keep em, you can just remove your nin/taijutsu things later. Just don't forget to post them in your logs, and don't forget that custom techniques have their own training numbers. ( First post of this thread. )
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Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 8:14 am
Character: Lucas Miyamoto Technique Name: scortch release: heat orb creation Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Scortch release (Wind, Fire) Description: by combining the elements of wind and fire at the same time Lucas is able to create the scortch release. scortch release utilizes the extream heat generated by fire chakra mixed with wind chakra to create a dry hot orb of chakra. the orb simply looks like a ball of heat distorting light. he can create up to 3 orbs with one use of this jutsu to a total of 9 orbs. orbs will heat up and dry out anything within a 10 meter radious. fire jutsu are slightly stronger within the radious and E ranked water jutsu will evaporate immediately within the radious. D ranked water Jutsu will be created with half already evaporated and the rest will evaporate within one post. C ranked water jutsu will evaporate half within one post and the rest in the next post. any water jutsu B ranked or higher simply has it's power slightly reduced. if a person touches an orb they will suffer from burns according to the number of posts they remained within the orb. (for each post the degree of the burn gets worse.)
Character: Lucas Miyamoto Technique Name: Scortch release: orb manipulation Rank: E (must know heat orb creation before obtaining this) Type: ninjutsu Element: scortch release (wind/fire) Description: this jutsu uses the orbs created by the scortch release: heat orb creation. by using chakra Lucas is able to shape the orb into an object and moanouver it. if an orb strikes a person it will stick to them and can only be removed by hydrating themselves for 9 posts. once an orb has attached itself to a person it will start to dehydrate them over time eventually killing them. this takes a total of 15 posts to kill but they will pass out from dehydration after 10. the effects are not immediately noticable although the orb may be noticable if it strikes a position visible by the oponent. the orb having no physical manifestation other than heat can only be felt as a very hot spot on the body. even if the person is able to avoid the negative effects of this jutsu they will still suffer 2nd degree burns where the orb touched them.
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Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 8:33 am
[ Orb Creation ] 10 meters is a bit much, as that's roughly 32 feet. Try something along the lines of 5 yards- as I'm assuming this is per orb.
[ Orb Manipulation ] Have it say that if someone is stuck by the orb, they just have to have the area where the orb makes contact covered in water to remove it. Adjust the effects like this- 5 posts till they enter a dry-mouthed stage. 8 posts till they enter a dehydrated stage. 10 posts till they blackout. 13 posts till they die. Also, I'd suggest you get rid of it dealing 2nd degree burns, as that would be highly noticeable... or, just get rid of it being labeled as "nearly unnoticeable". P:
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Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 8:41 am
dreadno Character: Lucas Miyamoto Technique Name: scortch release: heat orb creation Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Scortch release (Wind, Fire) Description: by combining the elements of wind and fire at the same time Lucas is able to create the scortch release. scortch release utilizes the extream heat generated by fire chakra mixed with wind chakra to create a dry hot orb of chakra. the orb simply looks like a ball of heat distorting light. he can create up to 3 orbs with one use of this jutsu to a total of 9 orbs. orbs will heat up and dry out anything within a 10 foot radious. fire jutsu are slightly stronger within the radious and E ranked water jutsu will evaporate immediately within the radious. D ranked water Jutsu will be created with half already evaporated and the rest will evaporate within one post. C ranked water jutsu will evaporate half within one post and the rest in the next post. any water jutsu B ranked or higher simply has it's power slightly reduced. if a person touches an orb they will suffer from burns according to the number of posts they remained within the orb. (for each post the degree of the burn gets worse.)
Character: Lucas Miyamoto Technique Name: Scortch release: orb manipulation Rank: E (must know heat orb creation before obtaining this) Type: ninjutsu Element: scortch release (wind/fire) Description: this jutsu uses the orbs created by the scortch release: heat orb creation. by using chakra Lucas is able to shape the orb into an object and moanouver it. if an orb strikes a person it will stick to them and can only be removed by hydrating themselves for 9 posts. once an orb has attached itself to a person it will start to dehydrate them over time eventually killing them. after 5 posts the opponent will start to feel that their mouth is dry. 8 posts they will suffer from dehydration effects. 10 posts the victime will black out and 13 posts they will die. the effects are not immediately noticable although the orb may be noticable if it strikes a position visible by the oponent. the orb having no physical manifestation other than heat can only be felt as a very hot spot on the body.
made teh 10 meters to 10 feet. that should be good. but let me know. i'll change it if you want. and yes that is per orb. lol. i'm so used to imperial right now due to my drafting class. i much perfer metric but i get confused when trying to imagin the distance in metric when i see it more in imperial. and i changed in the stages for the orb manipulation and just took out the 2nd degree burns. this is more of an assassination jutsu as the orbs are reduced to more of a drying effect. so. it makes more sense to not really notice it till it's to late than to cause burns.
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Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 8:52 am
Okie dokies... You're all set to go, just note that -S-C-O-R-C-H- doesn't have a 'T' in it. xP
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Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 11:42 am
Character: Lucas Miyamoto Technique Name: Plasma release: contained spire Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Plasma (Wind, Ligntning, Fire) Description: 1/3 of the chakra cost is taken from lightning chakra for all plasma jutsu. by combining wind and lightning and fire Lucas is able to generate a much more deadly version of lightning jutsu. this is called Plasma release. this is the base jutsu with which all other Plasma jutsu rely on. a 7' pillare with a radious of 3' is created within 10' of the user. these pillars can be used to bounce lightning jutsu from one location to another. also any lightning jutsu that comes into contact with a plasma pillar becomes slightly stronger. plasma pillars can not be destroyed by physical means and require a hyouton jutsu B ranked or higher to cool the plasma down enough for it do become grounded and disperse. the pillars glow a light blue.
Character: Lucas Miyamoto Technique Name: Plasma release: electromagnetic generation Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Wind, Lightning, Fire Description: by placing three pillars in a triangular shape where each is 5' away from eachother Lucas can magnitize the ground around the pillars, in a 4' radious from each, using the properties of the plasma. due to the magnitized ground around the three pillars they will begin to arc chakra charged electricity between them. by standing in the middle of the triangle Lucas is able to absorb 25 Lightning chakra per post. also the arcing around him acts as a barrier against most attacks as most attacks will either be struck by the arc or dragged to the ground by the magnetism in the gronud.
Character: Lucas Miyamoto Technique Name: Plasma Release: Devious Sprite Rank: S Type: Ninjutsu Element: Wind, Lightning, Fire Description: by overcharging a plasma pillar in one area (thread) Lucas can cause an explosion large enough to flatten buildings. the pillar takes one post to charge then one more post to reach overcharged state. the pillar will explode in the third post. the explosion covers one thread but this jutsu can cause multiple pillars to explode but only one in each thread. adding pillars to the use of this jutsu increases the chakra cost as if this jutsu were used multiple times. the explosion occurrs 1' off the ground and does not go lower. this leaves a 1' safety zone under the explosion. although the explosion does not go down below 1' above the ground it gives off a shock to anything below it stunning it for one post and causing disorientation. anything in the blast however will be half vaporized.
Character: Lucas Miyamoto Technique Name: seal of portals Rank: A Type: Fuuinjutsu Description: this jutsu requires a flat surface 7' tall and 4' wide. Lucas will draw on the seal onto the flat surface to place the seal. no seal can leave the thread it was created in. the chakra cost is ensued when the seal is activated and not when it is created. the portal allows for the transfer of up to 5 objects or people. it will remain open for 7 posts or until Lucas cancels the seal. closing a portal prematurely will cost the same amount of chakra as it did to open it. portals are long term and the only way to destroy one is to destroy the object it is placed on.
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Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 12:29 pm
[ Contained Spire ] 7 feet high and 3 wide? That's... not really a pillar... more like a cylinder. =/ Make the cooling method anything from suiton to hyouton.
[ Electro Generation ] Er... you might wanna better describe those ranged. Try 6 foot distance from each other in order to activate and then I don't understand that 4 foot radius thing.
[ Devious Sprite ] Mmm... I don't know what to say... I hate it when "thread" is given as a distance... If you don't plan on using it in any village or populated area, I can give it to you as it is. If not, I'd have to ask you to give a range to it... like... one mile...
[ Seal ] Aheh... I really can't let something like this go through. ' ';
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Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 12:33 pm
Well, if Aoe disapproves of the Scorch and Plasma releases, as they are bloodline in the Naruto universe, I unfortunately have to revoke my earlier approvals. Dx
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