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 Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 4:27 am
Mmk I was just makein sure everything was going smoothly
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Posted: Sat May 29, 2010 11:12 pm
Gaia Username:Totomonster
RPC name:Toto
Name of Bijuu you want:Five tails gobi
Why you want it:i would like my first rpc experience to be awesome
What you would do with it:have fun with it
What do you know about it?i know it can control all five elements, it controls time for 3 post, also can use telekinesis but when used it kills your chakra (Don't say everything... spell it out)
Do you accept that if you go inactive for a period of two weeks, without posting in the 'Leave of Absence' thread, you will have your Jinchuuriki character and Bijuu taken away?understood
Give a Demon worthy RP sample:toto enters a village after a mission upon entering the village he's is attacked by a rogue ninja.He quickly dodges the attack, by jumping into the trees as he looks around and sees nothing but a river. then the npc jumps to follow toto, he calls out a fire ball jutsu it hits toto and he falls to the ground. toto quickly recovers then angered toto enter the first stage of his bijuu his skin starts to get a tint of gold and he grows claws and fangs then white and brown fur sprouts again he is attacked by fire but before it connects he says to himself I could use the river to my advantage then he uses his water ability to drag the water from the river and blocks the fire attack, then toto lunges from the water and with one swipe he cuts through the rogue ninjas throat with his claws
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Posted: Sat May 29, 2010 11:14 pm
Wait a minute, doesn't someone already have the gobi?
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Posted: Sat May 29, 2010 11:39 pm
Kage: Nope, it says Martin has it but i know he dosn't the guild is goning threw alot so not everything has been updated and tot is a irl friend of mine so i wont let him do something he isnt supposed to.
But thanks for speaking out so quickly I am glad you will be one of those fast responding Crew members
(not that you always have to lol)
Toto:The fight great! you could stand to be more descriptive for example "Npc" eeds to be changed to rouge ninja or leaf ninja ect ect.
Also throw a bit more into it as far as why ur charater is moving into the village ad what he is thinking.
after you make those few edits and i see it u should be good to go. But good job sticking to the Gobi's fighting style and going for the throat.
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Posted: Sat May 29, 2010 11:40 pm
havik: thanks and fixing up the errors now
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Posted: Sat May 29, 2010 11:41 pm
Umm.... Havick.... This was on the page before Toto's application and you approved it. I know that Lance hasn't posted in two weeks, but he's kind of been waiting for Ultima to respond with his second rpc.... Lance1278
Gaia Username: Lance1278
RPC name: Hiruzen no Oto
Name of Bijuu you want: Gobi
Why you want it: It was what I originally wanted to use for my rpc, but the bijuu wasn't availible at the time. Apparently, it currently is.
What you would do with it: Obviously try to use it as best possible for a jinchuuriki, trying to get lil' Hiru-chan as reasonably powerful as possible(Using the reason "If I'm not strong enough, I might die, and you will too." to the baka-inu).
What do you know about it? It's the Gobi no Inu, the five tailed dog, called Houkou, and despite his use of all five elements, which could easily be classified as ninjutsu, he reigns over illusions.
Do you accept that if you go inactive for a period of two weeks, without posting in the 'Leave of Absence' thread, you will have your Jinchuuriki character and Bijuu taken away? Yes, I do. The bijuu are extremely desirable Rp elements, and it would be mildly insulting to claim one, and then be offline for ages. Especially when the Akatsuki are trying to ound them up. They'd be left with the short end of the stick, when one of their precious demons isn't around to get caught, wouldn't they?
Give a Demon worthy RP sample:Hiruzen was sitting in a dumpster, trying his best to hide from the mob after his blood. He still hadn't figured out why exactly they were after him, whenever he asked, people just scoffed at him, calling him things like "Demon", or "Houkou's b*****d", before throwing him out of the shop he was in, or knocking him down with a punch or kick.
It was the same every August, he'd be hunted every night for the whole month, and beaten within an inch of his life. He hadn't ever done anything wrong had he? Right as he was going to answer himself mentally, he heard a voice outside of the dumpster he was crouched in. He almost jumped out and ran away, but he orced himself to remember that he had bits of filth sticking to his thread-bare clothing, the grime effectively hiding his scent from any hounds after him, and that no one had seen him hide.
He was both suprised and terrified when the lid of his hiding place was being slowly lifted. Hiruzen scrunched his eyes shut, waiting for the in-evitable beating he was sure to recieve. He could've sworn he heard a scoff though. "Eh?" He opened one eye a crack, and saw a hand holding onto the bottom of the dumptser's lid, but it wasn't moving up any. He could see the torches past the small sliver of an opening the lid provided, and they weren't flickering, almost as if time was stilled...
"Feh, stupid pup. Just sitting there and waiting for a predator to find you? How very pathetic my jailor is." Hiruzen gasped, and flinched, blinking his eyes closed. When he opened them slowly again, though he realized that he wasn't were he had been just a second ago.
He was in what looked like a dead forest, every tree utterly bare of leaves, the vegetation buried under a thick layer of what looked like snow, despite it's lack of frigidness. Suprised beyond belief, the young boy looked around himself, finding that he was indeed in what looked to be a long dead forest. He then heard the voice from before drifting towards him from behind. "Come before me, pup." Hiruzen whirled around, and saw something... Odd.
It looked almost like a rose bud, but much larger, and more sinister, created of large, gnarled tree-trunk sized vines, each sporting massive thorns easily as large as Hiruzen himself. Taking one tentative step after another forward, he eventually found himself right at the bae of the "bulb", staring up at it's five-story self, noting just how very sharp those wicked thorns looked.
It was only after a few moments that he noticed a pair of glowing, azure eyes shifting their piercing gaze onto his small frame. They were staring at him from one of the larger gaps between the vines, the form that they were attached to was shadowed, but quite obviously large, easily ten, if not twenty times his size. He felt, more than heard the next, rumbling words. "Finally, after a decade of hosting me, my jailor has finally come to show himself before me. What do you have to say, pup?" Hiruzen stared unsurely up at the being, his eyes wide. "Erm... H-hi?" There was an akward silence for the entirety of the next five seconds, before the god-like apparition bellowed out in an obviously angered voice, "What?! Who do you think I am? Show the proper respect, boy!" And in a flash of glory, consisting of a large bolt of lightning and a plume of fire, the inside of the bulb was made visible.
The creature looked to be some canine, covered in white and brown fur, gold markings twistingabout it's paws, the long claws easily visble to the awed boy. He could also make out five, swishing tails, each topped with some other substance, one with a mighty wisp of flame, another with a wave of bright water, and one with a whirling mass of visible wind, the one nex to it crackling with condensed lightning, and the last covered in a stone-like mass."You... You're-!" The dog started laughing to itself, as it felt the fear rolling off of this small human infront of him. "Who are you, again?" And it just as briskly stopped it's laughing, staring at the confused boy. After a moment of contemplation, it simpled plopped own on it's belly, it's head resting on it's forepaws as it appraised the youth still openly staring up at him."I suppose you ningens wouldn't know as much about me as some of my more notorious siblings. I am Gobi, the five-tailed wolf." Hiruzen tilted his head curiously, his eyes narrowed contemplatively. "You look more like a dog to me, Gobi-san." The bijuu stared down at him incredulously, before wicked looking grin stretched across his thin lips, his fangs easily being seen. "I like you, pup. You actually seem to have some guts. But," The "wolf" said, one ear flicking oddly. "My name is Houkou, not Gobi. That is merely a title. As for what's happening outside now... I'll deal with it for you." While confused about what the dog meant by "outside", he nodded, before aquestion popped into his head. "But why? I don't see how that would help you." Houkou seemed to merely shrug, as everything seemed to fade out of view. "If you die, so do I, pup."He realized that he was now back in the dumpster, the random villager's hand still on the lid. Before he knew what was happening, Hiru could feel his body throwing open the lid, smacking his pursuir in the face, and hopping out, before kicking every villager that held a torch in the shin, and speeding away. It was only after a few seconds that he could hear them curse in pain and drop their torches in order to rub their sore limbs. He capitalized on this good fortune by running to his small, rundown room in the orphnage he was staying at, and gather his few belongings. He had been preparing to leave this hell-hole of a village for a while, and he now had the reason he needed for leaving. All the while, he could somehow feel someone smiling down on him.
And, with that feeling, he fled his village in the death of night.
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Posted: Sat May 29, 2010 11:54 pm
Hmmm ok well since the guild is going threw is odd fase then I wont hold it agaisnt lance but the four tail is open ty hasnt posted in a long long while and Cobra has had to take over his village (as im sure you know) but thank you kage for bringing this up. Most of the time i dont pay attention to why people dont folllow the rules like i should, im to lazy xD
Toto if may edit for the four tails or try out another clan up to you.
Thanks again Kage heart
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Posted: Sun May 30, 2010 12:13 am
Umm.... No problem sweatdrop . Besides, you really shouldn't be thanking me that much. Lance is a friend of mine so it's only obvious that I'd speak up sweatdrop . (Even though I know that crew needs to be unbiased >_< . Sorry.)
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Posted: Sun May 30, 2010 12:22 am
O know lance has a legit reason for his absent you did great to tll me you prevented two of the same demon host i would give you a cake if i knew u irl give yourself credit girly or ill have to wipe that rpc of yours
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Posted: Sun May 30, 2010 12:25 am
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Posted: Mon May 31, 2010 12:08 pm
Yes, thank you. Sorry for not posting in a while, Havik. I'll just have the kid move on, or something. Kage, thank you for defending... erm, that giant dog sealed in Hiru's gut. 3nodding You deserve a cake. ninja
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