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 Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 10:41 am
Her ship not far behind Ren and Tenari, she has her Quartermaster steer the ship. As she gaze over the port horizon, she can see her city slowly drift away out of sight. She looks back over the bow of her ship and gives a big sigh.
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 12:36 pm
As Damion steard the ship to Egypt he thought about James and the lies he was told,"Lieing rat......."
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 1:45 pm
Lord_cloud_strife3600 As Damion steard the ship to Eygept he thought about James and the lies he was told,"Lieing rat......."
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 10:38 pm
PharoahsXxXBride Lord_cloud_strife3600 As Damion steard the ship to Eygept he thought about James and the lies he was told,"Lieing rat......."     OoC: And I don't get why he thinks people are lying rats! You need to explain your posts a bit more, so you avoid confusion.
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 4:44 am
ooc: And maybe improve a little bit on your spelling and grammer usage. It's hard to read posts when the author doesn't use proper spelling and grammer.
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 11:09 pm
PharoahsXxXBride ooc: And maybe improve a little bit on your spelling and grammar usage. It's hard to read posts when the author doesn't use proper spelling and grammar. OoC: That definitely would help a lot, then everyone can make this run smoothly. I'm just asking you to post more than 3-4 lines, maybe 5 or 6 that are detailed. It's not too hard to ask. And if you get stuck, describe the sea or the outside a bit. It does help.
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Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 4:09 am
And which way are we going first: To Egypt, or to Sicily?... I'm so confused....
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Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 12:31 pm
As he sailed he got out the partchment and read over it,"If you want to be a Royel Gauerd you must foerwarn the dock gauerds of Pirecy Frinch, and English in the docks. Once all 10 names have bean aprehanded or delt away with report back to me. But untill they are all crossed out, keep away."Damion looked over the glimmering sea and thought,"I cant belive you hade my fater killed James......"(First, only following captins orders, second, I was rushing on that one becaues my littel bro was trying to kick me off,third I suck at spelling and grammer.)
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Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 4:22 am
Lord_cloud_strife3600 As he sailed he got out the partchment and read over it,"If you want to be a Royel Gauerd you must foerwarn the dock gauerds of Pirecy Frinch, and English in the docks. Once all 10 names have bean aprehanded or delt away with report back to me. But untill they are all crossed out, keep away."Damion looked over the glimmering sea and thought,"I cant belive you hade my fater killed James......"(First, only following captins orders, second, I was rushing on that one becaues my littel bro was trying to kick me off,third I suck at spelling and grammer.) OoC: The French and British are heading to EGYPT- the Pirates are heading to SICILY.
@Lord: I still don't understand what this parchment thing is about. What about captains and everything. You still need to explain. And find a spell checker....
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Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 7:55 am
Lord_cloud_strife3600 As he sailed he got out the partchment and read over it,"If you want to be a Royel Gauerd you must foerwarn the dock gauerds of Pirecy Frinch, and English in the docks. Once all 10 names have bean aprehanded or delt away with report back to me. But untill they are all crossed out, keep away."Damion looked over the glimmering sea and thought,"I cant belive you hade my fater killed James......"(First, only following captins orders, second, I was rushing on that one becaues my littel bro was trying to kick me off,third I suck at spelling and grammer.) Write everything down in Microsoft Word, then copy and paste.
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Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 3:01 pm
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Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 9:52 pm
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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 3:24 am
It's the cheat sheet for every writer. I do it all the time when I have a dyslexic moment.
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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 7:09 am
Lord I just wanted to say that they may sound like they are picking on you but they are really not. We still love you as a character and as a person too. So just try a little harder and practice a lot on that program Microsoft word.
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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 12:30 pm
((Latly a bunch or crape is going on here so I realy dont caere about spelling and grammer all that mutch.
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