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 Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 12:56 pm
where do we enter our poem entry's i will enter a few ideas
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Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 4:53 pm
i have the topic already posted on the page before this one, and u can just post ur poem in this forum by pressing post reply as u posted the message before this! Remember this contest closes in 15 day counting today so if u want to submit a poem i would do it fast knowing u don't post here often!!!!!!! blaugh Anyway i have a feeling u r the only one going to enter. C ya later!
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Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 5:17 pm
This is a poem for the contest!
Snow is my favourite
Never stop snowing!
Over my knees snow is great!
Without snow i would be sad
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Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 5:20 pm
I am putting some posibilities please vote!
Christmas ChristmaAS TIME FOR CHEER
cHRISTMAS HAPPENS EVERY YEAR
presents presents lots of greed
but what about those in need
never wonder never care
you would if you lived there
Christmas christmas not one gift
you know that you would hate it
so why not donate to those in need
It will make you feel beter to do a good deed
but still you turn your head away
say you'll do it some other day
I ask you why? Why not now
give me a reason to allow
that kind of behaviour just should not excist
so just a penny please, for them to live
I wish you could see their smiling faces
when they see those gifts, picture and mazes.
just a penny it's not alot, So I will ask again.
Why Not?[/align ]
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Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 12:55 pm
not bad... if u don't tell me which one u want for the contest before it ends u won't win though!
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Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 7:13 pm
As i sit by the window
waiting for some snow
i think about my parents
how they never have enough for good presents
i get really sad on Christmas
sometimes i get really mad
as i layed my head down on my pillow
i began to think of snow
i thought of all the people
who sleep beside a church steeple
i wonder why im so mad about a good present
when other people doesn't
even have a home to sleep in
they might sleep in a bin
so tomorrow im going to wake up happy
and tell my parents very sappy...
thank you!!!
My entry for the poem contest!!!!!
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 9:00 am
good.... keep them coming everyone!!
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Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 6:29 pm
here is another entry
What a wonderful sight!
snow, and bright lights
walking across the road
so cold i have to stay low
zip up my sweater
you know what is cold? THs weather
even though it is pretty
i still think it is misty
snow snow snow
a car comes.
It's my time to go
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Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 6:32 pm
your second one doesn't make much sense at the end i mean the part that goes like this:
even though it is pretty
i still think it is misty
snow snow snow
a car comes.
It's my time to go
The beginning of your poem is really strong but the part above makes it weak!
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Posted: Thu Dec 04, 2008 6:56 am
keep the poems coming.. doing great!!
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Posted: Thu Dec 04, 2008 7:45 pm
Christmas is coming it's getting really near!
Happy little kids, presents, and trees
Ringing bells, and christmas carols
Inside safe and warm from the cold windy weather
Sitting my the fire keeping warm
Twelve midnight isn't later enough, let's stay up later!!
Many gifts form friends and family
Angels, a common decoration
Silent night of Christ's birth!!
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(i am entering this one!!)
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Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:00 am
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Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 7:57 pm
my first poem is the one i am entering!! Ok new contest!!! (mickydee ad please!)
Song writing contest!!!!
Write a non-cheesy christmas song!!!!
sounds good i'll judge it cuz i suck at song writing!!
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Posted: Sun Dec 14, 2008 1:21 pm
NEW CONTEST!!!!
Write a non cheesy christmas song with a true meaning!! Not all about gifts and stuff! This contest will close on Dec 25th winner gets 30 points for thier team!! all participants get points too!! If no one enters I win all the points!!
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Posted: Tue Dec 16, 2008 7:05 am
POETRY CONTEST CLOSE!!! Winner is.... bucbucLa with Christmas ChristmaAS TIME FOR CHEER!!!!! CONGRADULATIONS!!
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