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Posted: Wed Nov 26, 2008 5:13 am
"Why?" Jake mumbled, watching as Ragdoll driected Chance towards the front door. Good. Now he could shot and no one would try to help him. He raised his hands slowly.
"Good, boy, now stepped forward to us." the other man said darkly. Jake narrowed his eyes, stepping forward and then again and again until he got to them. He was about three feet in front of them. "Closer, idiot."
"No." Jake hissed, "You step closer to me." The men looked at each other, but stepped forward.
"Now, boy, tell us anything you can about the Erasers and your friends." Both men said at the same time. Jake rolled his eyes, lowering his hands into a pockets.
"You mean the Mutts?"
"Mutts?"
"Yeah." Jake smirked, "They're part wolf, designed to attack and kill, trained to capture and kill. There's a school, somewhere, they take kids from their parents and proclaim them dead to the parents. The kid is not an experiment, and their DNA is merged with the DNA of animals."
"Are you one of these...kids?" one man said, his voice softer.
"I'm one of them. Human and Tiger." Jake hissed. The men lowered their guns slowly.
"Your friends?"
Jake hesitated, but decided to tell a lie. "Ragdoll, he is part fox, smart too. Red, he is the bird. He likes the firecrackers. Chance, she's a monkey human and Seth, he's the Panther." he said.
"Interesting." One man said, "you're lying." Jake smirked, removing his hands from his jacket. The man spoke again, raising his gun, "Lets get back to square one."
"Actually," Jake hissed, "Lets get to the last square." He lunged at them. He heard a couple shots, but he killed one man, and the other surrendered, but Jake paid him no mind.
Jake grabbed one of the guns, and ran out of the ally way, to where the front door would be. He ran faster then he did in the village. He turned a corner and saw Chance and Ragdoll. He walked up to them, and shoved Ragdoll the gun, muttering, "I'm never protecting you two again." He looked at Chance and remembered the necklace. He smirked, grabbing the necklace from his pocket, holding it out to her, while grabbing the food as well. "What'd you buy, Ragdoll?" He asked, looking at the bag.
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Posted: Wed Nov 26, 2008 8:04 am
(I am going to presume that the gun was silenced... seen as this appears to be a populated area and having guns going off randomly would be bad...)
"Don't worry, just follow what Jake said. I'll be along in a moment." Red gave what would appear to be a gently, friendly shove pressing him into the alleyway. Behind his back, Red made some motions with his hands at the agents of the school in the car. He made sure his signals could not be seen from the others, Seth or those in the building.
Under his breath, he spoke, "You guys are going to ruin my plans. Stay low and don't be seen. Start operation air lift." With that, he moved the mic he had secreted in the necklace collar he wore into an off position, a simple jerk of his neck in the right direction. Then he followed Seth into the hideout. "We need to move. The Erasers are moving faster than usual. I have a contact in that is willing to help us get to New York. That should throw off the Erasers and we could all settle down and live a life. Plenty of places to hide in a big city like that."
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 5:07 am
(u got it wrong, seth is the bird that likes fire crackers)
seth ran over to the car with the agents in it, pulled out a grocery bag full of bottle rockets and firecracker, lit a firecracker(still in the bag), opened the car door, and threw the fireworks in.
the firecracker ignited the other fireworks and the all went off, killing the agents and setting fire to the car
"we better get out of here, that explosion will have them coming in no time" seth said.
then the fire reached the cars gas tank and the car exploded, severely wounding seth
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:52 am
mathwl1020 (u got it wrong, seth is the bird that likes fire crackers) (He knew that. He was lying to the agents to see who they where. Seen as they seemed unfazed by their being humans infused with animal DNA, he went to see how much they knew of us. Seen as they knew he was lying with names and who was what animal, he figured they must have been from the School. Weather they were or against the School, we will never know now... ninja Hehehehe.) Red ran over to Seth, pulling him away from the explosion, but it was too late. Yelling at the 'brainless' bird, "What are you? Stupid! Not only did you blow up the car, but you also don't seem to understand LOW PROFILE! Also, where did you get those fireworks?!?" While he was yelling at Seth, he was already ripping off pieces of Seth's clothing, creating bandages. Red's ears where ringing, but he ignored it as he set to bindings what wounds he could. All the while thinking, 'Stupid. Did he consider that we can't send him to a hospital without giving away ourselves to everyone? Stupid fool. Stupid stupid fool.'
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 9:03 am
(i got the fireworks during the time skip) seth's vision got blurry, and the last thing he heard before he passed out was the sound of someone shouting at him (i did that on purpose, my character has a plan)
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 9:20 am
(What? A plan to get himself killed? rofl )
Red worked on Seth, the flames of the still nearby car burning hot. He was pressing down hard on the wounds, thankfully Seth was out by this point. The bleeding needed to be stopped, and quickly or he would die. He couldn't die yet. Red had his own plans and they involved Seth, and the rest of them. It even involved the School, but at this point the School would probably be the only way to save Seth.
Seth looked heavy to Red, as Red knew he would have to move Seth, before the ambulances and other emergency vehicles arrived. He looked to the sides of himself, and then back at the hideout. If only Jake was here right now, they could move Seth with ease then. Red was too weak to do this on his own.
Red cocked his head. Weather his plans would work or not didn't matter now. He needed to save Seth's life. "Cancel operation Airlift. I need med teams here now. The rest of them are in the building across from the street from me. I am sure they have several ways out, probably a bolt hole in the back. Capture them all, quickly." he tugged on a bandage on one of the smaller wounds from shrapnel, which would have to be removed, but Red had no means to remove it now. He just tired the strip of fabric tightly, as tight as he could with one hand, as the other tried to stop the major bleeds. "Oh, and next time I tell you all to keep your distance, don't sit in a car right next to them. Nothing like getting attention to yourselves. Ever heard of 'low profile' before?" With that, he cocked his head to a side again, turning off the mic again before his agents could respond back.
(By the way, you just like grabbing stuff from mid-air. Admit it! mrgreen )
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 9:26 am
Within moments of the explosion outside, as in moments after Red made his communications, a team of Erasers busted down the back door, and two rather strong brutes of Erasers broke threw the roof and landed inside the safe house. Men were standing just outside the door of the main entrance.
One of the gruff looking Erasers shouted to the escaped School 'children' ,"Give up! Lay on the ground and we wont have to hurt any of you!" He pointed a strange looking gun at Jake, the known troublemaker of the group and just shot. Jake had proven himself to be a strong one, without mercy and known to kill his fellow agents.
The bullet flew out of the gun at a tremendous speed. Jake would have to have the luck of any and all Gods just to dodge it. As the bullet struck (either you or anything else) an electrical shock ran threw it, strong enough to render any of them unconscious for hours easily. Strong enough to kill a human, or restart a heart.
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 9:58 am
(my character's plan involves news crews, and being seriously wounded wasnt part of it, but the explosion was. the plan is the exact opposite of low profile. lol twisted )
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 10:11 am
A few Erasers walked up to Red as he was bandaging more of Seth's injuries, along with a crew of humans as well. The Erasers stood guard for a moment, then turned to Red. Meanwhile, the humans where opening up kits and folding open a stretcher. They were ready to help the erasers, though this was a good thing to capture an escaped mutation as well. They set to work rolling Seth onto the stretcher, keeping the pressure on his wounds as they carted him down the ally and into a nearby ambulance van of the School.
Red turned to the Erasers. "What are you waiting for? Punch me once here hard and then tie me up from the back." He pointed to his midsection. He knew it was going to hurt, but the others wouldn't believe his capture unless he looked roughed up a little. The Eraser hesitated a moment, then Red closed his fist and whacked the Eraser upside the head. To any in the building that might happen to have somehow looked out and saw him, as unlikely as that would be, it would appear that he was arguing with them and then attacked to try and get away. It had the intended affect on the Eraser however, as he retorted with a balled up fist to his midsection, doubling Red over to half. Then another Eraser took handcuffs and bound his hands behind him. "Now lead me to the building and throw me at the group. They need to see me captured and hear about Seth from someone they trust." The Eraser did as he was told, and dragged Red in ruthlessly by the cuffs and threw him hard on the floor in front of the group. Red managed to moan, and wasn't faking it either. He looked beaten and roughed up, as well as a few bruises were already forming.
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 3:05 pm
(( Oh Sheet!! I go to the tip of America for three days, and I come back and jake's gettin shot, and Red's back stabbing and everything. Good thing I have an idea of an Orgainization that's against the school. That's what the two guys who were talking to Jake about. Sheesh. Leave you guys alone FOR THREE DAYS! lol Anyways, I'm going to put my little touch into this twisted plot. WARNING :Long long Long long Long long Post and bad language towards the bottom ))
Jake heard the explosion and he almost dropped the bag of food, but he grabbed it sooner or later. Just as he was going to shove Ragdoll and Chance towards the door he had discovered shortly after arriving to the hideout, a group of Erasers entered the small room. His eyes glazed over their faces, but they all wore sunglasses. Before he could blink he heard a gun shot and he felt pain right below his collarbone. He growled, his nail extending to their full length and his eyes narrowing down like a tiger would if it was hunting. Suddenly shocks expanded from the spot, attack his nerves and heart. He gasped, his blood surging through his veins, almost breaking them. He fell back against the wall, his hand over his heart.
As he sank to the ground, he heard the Mutts hustling about. He felt someone being thrown next to him. Jake breathed heavily, his eyes closing as the shocks worsened with each wave. He coughed as the last wave hit. His hand fell from it's place and he slowly opened his eyes. Red was laying next to him, brusied and cut. Seth was no where to be seen. Jake growled, pushing Red to side, since he was half way on top of him. Jake stood again, and he heard some of the Mutts curse. They all froze what they were doing and held their guns toward him.
Jake hissed, stepping forward slowly, tempting them. "If you only wished I was dead. I can take all of you, if you didn't have your firing weapons. I killed your brothers, I killed your best friends. Want your revenage, don't you?" There was silence. Jake snarled, "Don't you!?" They didn't respond right away, but two cornered around Jake, their guns clicking, ready to shoot. "If you want your revenage so much, why don't you let your leader shoot me? Or better yet..." Jake scanned their faces once again, finally finding what he ran from so long, "Or him." He said, his eyes narrowing down. He felt his teeth against his tounge, the Erasers glanced quickly towards who Jake pointed out, before returning their gaze to him.
The man clicked his gun, and pointed it towards Jake. Jake's nails were fully out, and his hands gripped the sides of his pants. No one was moving, but then Jake unzipped his jacket, moving furiously; he threw his jacket at the ground in front of the man. Jake lifted his shirt of his chest and threw it at the jacket. His skin rippled with anger, as his fingers poked and jabbed the area where the bullet entered. He hissed, hitting the nerves that were right next to the bullet. Slowly, Jake felt the bullet towards the surface of his skin. Everyone was watching (sorry for this next part. i know it's powerplaying, but it's the only way this will work.), even Ragdoll stood still watching his friend. Suddenly, Jake extended his claws and ripped the skin away from the bullet, and removed the bullet. Blood poured from his wound, but he took no notice, but for a small hiss. He held up the bullet, examaning it before he threw it at the man. It hit the chest of the man, but fell to the floor like it didn't effect him.
Jake now started emptying his jean pockets. He threw down car keys, a pocket knife, a small key chain, and an old charmed braclet that was his sisters. Finally, Jake stood still. He slowly removed his wallet. He opened it, and he flicked out random credit cards, and libaray cards that were out of date. He dropped coins and money from the countries he ran from. He stopped. He removed one picture, his eyes watering up. He turned it around to show the man the picture. "My sister...remember her? Rebecca Laurn Jenna Johnson. She was so ******** innocant, she was killed." He dropped the picture and got another one. He turned it towards the man again, one tear drop falling from his right eye. "My brother. Jason Ivan Nicklas Johnson. He was pretty damn smart, wasn't he? Too smart..." he said, looking towards Red, saying this. He dropped the picture and reached into his wallet one last time. The tears blinked down, but slowed as he turned the picture. "My mother. She was too protective? Wasn't she?" No answer. He dropped that one, and finally, pulled out the last one. His tears faded, and his sadness was replaced with hate and anger. He turned the picture and showed the image of a well dressed man...in the suit that the Erasers were in now. "A hit and run, a ******** jack a**, and a murderer. He shot his wife repeatedly, and stole his own kids. He demanded a Mutation to a wolf and he was enlisted to become an Eraser. Shortly after, he tried to kill his only daugther...and suceeded. a year or so after that, I was mutated with a tiger's DNA. Something he didn't want. No, not at all. His daughter was a wolf, his other son was a coyote, and now..." Jake paused, swallowing, "And now his third son was a tiger. A thing about Coyote's. They're smart...too smart. Killing. That's all you ever did! Was kill!" Jake yelled suddenly. "You killed off your wife and two of your kids. I was able to get away! I was able to run. But you still wanted me dead, didn't you? DIDN'T YOU?" Jake screamed, advancing onto the man. The others stood still. Jake stood in front of the man's gun's barrel, where it pointed between his eyes. "so why don't you shoot?" Jake asked, taking the picture, and ripping it in half, then in half again. He held the peices in his hand and said darkly, "Jacob Allen Jared Johnson. The man I was named after." He said, dropping the pieces. There was no movement.
Then the Man dropped the gun. It shot, but luckly didn't hit anyone. As the man removed his sunglasses and put them into his jacket, he grunted. "Get the others." The man glared at Jake, before tackling him. They rolled, fighting, and biting. Jake got a few seconds, his naiils digging into his father's neck. "Chance, get Ragdoll out of here. Don't worry about Red! AND PROTECT THAT NECKLACE WITH YOUR LIFE!" he yelled, before being pushed over and wrestling with his father again, only this time, it wasn't play.
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 3:29 pm
((That was a Long Long Long post, lol ))
Get Ragdoll and run.. That was about the only thought that could get into Chances mind, after watching everything that has happened so far, many things became such a blur to her. "J-Jake!!" She then forced herself to stop crying things out and actually do something. She grabbed Ragdoll but once she did she hesitated. Once again you're going to run away from this and hope nothing else will happen! Now wasn't the time for such thoughts. She held onto the necklace tight and started to run out, forcing Ragdoll to go along with her. She soon just ended up running on her own lost in thoughts, she was scared and unsure of what to do. And she never realized how far she was actually running. Once again you're going to run away from this and hope nothing else will happen... when did you actually fight for yourself? This whole time you have been protected. "Why?! Why such things in my mind now?!" I should be going far from here..protecting this necklace..with Ragdoll..but.. She paused and looked back. It was so easy to just leave Jake behind wasn't it?
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 4:37 pm
(( know what I've noticed? Jake has a crush on Chance! I didn't realize until now. Sheesh, I'm a blonde. lol))
Jake thought he got his father, finally, but his father got him. Forcing his son down, he grabbed Jake's hair and slammed his head into the floor, over and over again. Jake stopped trying to get away, and that's when his father stopped. Jake's wounds had stopped bleeding, but now his head bled and his shoulder bled. Jake hissed, and finding all of his strength, he ludged. His father wasn't expecting it either. Jake ripped his father's face apart before he was flung away. He landed next to where his father's gun laid on the ground. He stared at it, and looked back towards where his father was. Most of the Eraser's had gone, trying to stop Chance and Ragdoll from escaping the city. Too bad they split up. Jake looked back at the gun, then back towards his father, who was now ready to attack him. As his father was running towards Jake, Jake grabbed the gun, and pointed. He shot it right before his father attacked.
His father landed on him, and Jake shoved him off. Jake's eyes got wide, like they did when he was a child. Was he still a child? He had practically become his brother, killing for protection. His brother was a follower of the Erasers...until he saw the true evil. Jake watched as the unneeded shocks moved through his father's dead brain. There was a perfect circle, right between the eyes. Jake swallowed his distaste and stood, hand on the gun. He glared at the remaining few Mutts, who were already pointing their guns at him. He kicked his fathers body, before firing off the Mutts. He looked towards Red after the remaining Mutts were killed.
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 5:26 pm
(( hehe, you bleped out a**, but not f**k... btw, dont say f**k)) Ragdoll stood still for a moment, thinking 2 minutes there was peace and that was all changed in seconds. Ragdoll jumped up to a pipe and swung off it and out the back door ( we are in the room right). then, turning around, he jumped and climbed the fire escape 1 story then remembering Chance he turned around and said, "go that way!! I'll trail them this way!" Ragdoll shouted. then he resumed climbing up while shouting curses at the Erasers coming out the door. As he watched, they split up, one group climbing the fire escape, one group following Chance.Dang it..
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 5:36 pm
((Sorry. But Jake was sorta...in a emocational spot.))
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 10:16 pm
"Let's look back at all the wonderful thing's that's happened!" What wonderful things?! "Exactly!!!" Chance was running as fast as she could, she has no clue where she'll end up but anywhere seems better than staying there. Great, I'm talking to myself and...I have a feeling I'm being followed.. Chance looked back. Erasers. Perfect. She tried to run faster only causing her to not notice the ground and end up tripping. She quickly got up and resumed to run but then she remembered something. "I dropped that necklace didn't I..." She stopped and ran back to where she fell, only to see the Erasers coming closer and closer. "Dang it!!" Jake told me to protect that necklace with my life, and that's what I'm going to do! Chance soon found it and started to turn and run but she feared she might have spent too much time looking for it.
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