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Both have plenty of mistakes, which I'm very tired at the moment to describe in detail. Basically it seems to me that you both made a great effort to write something beyond your skills - or you were simply not focused enough.

Anyways, I see great potential to evolve, and I'm not saying you're bad. I liked what I read. So you're both accepted. Post your profiles for evaluation and welcome aboard!!! xp

P.S.: Oh! And I'm very sorry for taking so long to reply. I've been unable to get on Gaia lately. Sorry. It's taken me so long, that I don't know if you've already found another squad.

@Darkamaru:Not accepted.

Please delete your profile from the profiles thread and move it elsewhere. If you want, you can apply again, but refrain from re-posting the profile and posting on the squad without first being accepted into the Squad by me.

I'll give you some time before I myself delete your profile, since you might want to save it. I won't wait more than a week though.

You're not reading. Anyone can apply for the Squad as many times as he/she wants to. But there is a certain procedure to be followed every time, and that is to post a RP sample. And a RP sample, like the name implies, is a sample of a RP. What you provided was a sample alright, but not RP at all.

I don't know where you're getting this ideas. First you assumed that you were automatically accepted just by posting in here. And now you assume that simply deleting a profile is re-applying, and that by asking please you'll get some kind of special treatment? Politeness is one thing, but this is not a charity service.

I hope that this is all just a misunderstanding, because I don't like being toyed with.

To be honest, it's not that big of a deal. There are a couple of mistakes still, despite being such a short RP sample. And the fact that it's short, doesn't give me much to evaluate.

Nevertheless, the basic requirements have been fulfilled, and you're literate enough. It's unfair to judge someone's skill based on a single RP, so I'll give you the benefit of the doubt. It wasn't bad, far from it, it just could've been much better.

Welcome aboard. Post your profile for evaluation and begin RPing! xp

Ookami Zetsubou

Zetsubou walks into a deserted town surrounded by run down buildings and houses. "Who's here?" He asks as he is blind and uses his reiatsu as a form of sight seeing only the reiatsu of others. Out of one of the buildings comes a hollow shaped like a frog. There was a lot of sand in the air from the building, but Zetsu could still see thanks to his reiatsu. He releases his arms calming himself while the hollow opens his mouth. Three tongues shoot from the hollows mouth with great speed, Zetsu uses shunpo to move out the way and infront of the hollow. The tongues come back around, and Zetsubou turns his head finally placing his hand on the hilt of his zanpaktou. He uses shunpo to dodge the attack but his kosode is ripped. Landing on top of a building he taunts the hollow to attack him while he holds his arm from the attack that he narrowly dodged. The frog releases his tongue this time it is sharp, Zetsu whispers an incantation, "Carriage of Thunder. Bridge of a spinning wheel. With light, divide this into six!"and uses Rikujōkōrō ( Six Rods Prison of Light) It captures the tongue before it hit Zetsu. Zetsu then uses another form of Kido called "Hado" mainly based on destruction, he says "Haien" and a blast of purple spiritual energy blasts from his hand that incinerates its target completely when it makes contact. The hollow was gone, and Zetsu says, "One's spirit is stronger then one's body." Then he laughs heinously and faints.

Slightly newer, really has nothing to do with fighting but here:
Baros acted like a normal human being as the people walked past him and said "Hi." and of course he waved back. But inside he was completely unsure of who these people were and it bothered him, the unknown people in such a familiar place creep-ed him out considering he knew none of them, he always acted outgoing, but he never really formed friends with anyone around him considering that he was such a shy person. From the looks of things that wasn't so but from a inside standpoint that was more than the case, he stayed away from large crowds unless someone directly addressed him then he was in his guise again, being the party lover, the outgoing one in any group. But when he gets home from such activities he goes back to being the sullen shy one in the corner of the room keeping to himself. He saw a few familiar faces go by but not to many and he seemed to ignore them as if there was something more interesting in his backpack then there was going on around him.
Accepted into 2nd

Accepted. Follow the rules for posting your profile on the required forum. Any question can be directed to me or to the VC via PM.

Welcome to the 13th Division!!!