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 Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 8:41 pm
"---the Great Breakthrough technique," Orchimaru finished.
"... What's that?" Gatz asked, having never heard of the technique before. Orchimaru smiled thinly and turned towards a stretch of forest nearby. After a few swift hand seals the pale, snaky man blew a steady stream air across his palm. The small puff of air transformed itself into a gale-force wind that swept through the forest, stripping leaves off trees and sending loose branches and debris flying about. It also kicked up a large amount of dust from the surrounding area.
"... Whoa..." murmered Gatz, impressed by the range and the force of the blast. "That's got to be a good sixty feet..."
(Great Breakthrough posts 5/9)
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 8:57 pm
"Now, shall we begin your instruction?" Orchimaru prompted.
"Sure," Gatz answered, interested in learning. Ochimaru demostrated again the necessary hand seals for the technique, which Gatz copied in turn. He repeated them several times in order to make sure that he had them correct and to commit them to memory. Gatz was pretty sure that he wouldn't have the luxery of time to think of the proper seals during a fight with an opponent of any skill, so like all his moves he had to be able to recall this technique almost instantly. Delay in a fight had cost more than one person his life in the history of mankind.
(Great Breakthrough posts 6/9)
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 9:06 pm
Gatz flicked through the hand seals one more time to make sure he had them down. and nodded to his instructor.
"Okay, I'm ready," he said, taking a deep breath. He exhaled forcefully and blew---and not much happened. "... Okay, if at first you don't suceed---!" Gatz took another deep breath, performed the seals, and blew outwards. But all he managed to do was disturb a few leaves.
"... I know I'm forgetting something here..." he said to himself, rubbing his head.
(Great Breakthrough posts 7/9)
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 9:14 pm
Orchi soon supplied the answer.
"You're not holding your hand near your mouth," he told Gatz. "When you blow out, the air's natural tendency is to disprise. Because of this, it goes everywhere and the range of the technique is greatly limited. You have to hold your hand near your mouth and use the chakra flowing through it as a focus for the air, funneling and projecting it into a cone shape. This concentrates the blast, making it much more effective than it would be otherwise."
(Great Breakthrough posts 8/9)
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 9:25 pm
"Oh. I get it now."
Gatz breathed deeply and preformed the seals again. Then he blew out again, this time holding his hand near his mouth and using his chakra to shape the air he blew out. A strong wind blew through the area in front of him, whipping up debris and leafs in a brief gale of force. Small branches snapped off and were also picked up in the wind before Gatz ended the technique.
"Well, that's done with," Gatz said, straighting up and drawing in a normal breath.
(Great Breakthrough posts 9/9 - complete!)
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 9:27 pm
Jin quickly preformed the symbols once more, he payed close attention to the thirds former words and poured all of his chakra into the technique... within he felt a gate way open and as soon as he had diverted the remaining stream of chakra towards controlling whatever was coming through the gateway.
A large puff of smoke filled the air, the exact same way it had when the third had summoned Enma.... Jin looked forward smirking... it had worked, the great Enma stood before him... successfully summoned... yet as Enma turned Jin realized something was wrong.
The thrid smirked and called out to Jin "Now... you must gain his respect through battle or you will never be able to truly control him."
((Post 20/30: Learning King Enma Summon Technique))
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 9:33 pm
Jin stared down Enma, a stern look on his face attempting to mask the truth of how he felt about fighting the monstrously powerfull beast... He had to fight Enma... hopefully even if he lost Enma would respect his courage for at least giving it his all as he had against the third himself.
Enma was in front of Jin before he knew it, suddenly lodging his fist in Jin's gut as all of the air rushed out of his lungs. Enma gave a swift kick to the stunned Jin sending him fling far backwards throug several trees, a large cloud of dust rising as he skidded along the ground leaving a large path of destruction in his wake.
((Post 21/30: Learning King Enma Summon Technique))
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 9:35 pm
Jin spat up a small amount of blood... his body felt dazed and disorented... the hit had caused some serious damage and apparantly Enma wasn't done yet. He looked up a shadow coming out of the dust in the air as a large monkey foot landed on Jins chest, then picked him up and tossed him aside, smacking him hard against a rock wall.
Jin had to act... he was getting pummeled and couldn't even move... it felt as though every bone in his body where crushed... his mind began to drift yet he attempted with all his will to keep conciousness as the blackness of lulling sleep appealed to his every tempation... attempting to lull him into failure... he couldn't, not after all that training... not after every hope and aspiration he had was crushed by his murderor... he couldn't...
((Post 22/30: Learning King Enma Summon Technique))
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 9:39 pm
Enma approached now, large amounts of chakra seeping off his body as he powered his next strike which he thought would end this pointless fight and send him home, giving him no knew master to answer to.
Jin looked at the approaching form... if he didn't do something now... how would he ever answer to himself... "no" he thought, thinking of his lonley childhood... he would never give up. Then he suddenly remebered what the fourth had told him "this is the after life... we are not subject to mortal bonds here... the fatigue is merly in your mind."
Enma pulled back his fist, a large amount of energy becoming visible around it as he prepped his final blow and swung, a large explosion filling the air with dust from the now dissentegrated rock wall.
..."MISUKA!"
((Post 23/30: Learning King Enma Summon Technique))
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 9:44 pm
Enma felt the force of his own blow triggered back at him sending him flying backwards. He had been reading Jins mind one second ago and knew he had been thinking he could overcome his fatigue... but even with that in mind the blow he had just delivered should have struck before the much weaker ninja could have responded. He then saw it... it had been a trap... the Jin on the wall was a dopple ganger... the real Jin stood atop the cliff side.
The fourth grinned... "Ingenious... he knew he couldn't harm Enma with his own strikes... so he used his own strike against him... not only that but he let a solid clone take all of the punishment leaving him with only a tiny loss of chakra from a rather weak clone."
((Post 24/30: Learning King Enma Summon Technique))
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 9:47 pm
Jin peered out over the cliffside down at Enma "Ha, I controlled those thoughts so you'd think I'd given up and wish to finish me off as you obviously seem like a rather proud creature Enma... you underestimated me..."
Enma stood up, a bit bruised but for the most part unharmed "...That strategy was impressive... maybe I could respect one that substitutes there lack in pure strength with stragtegy... show me what else you have." said the mighty Enma in a rather jovielle voice.
Jin smirked and preformed Kage Bushin no Jutsu as several hundred clones appeared near him. He'd need the distraction or he'd never get close to harming Enma, especially now that he was on his guard.
((Post 25/30: Learning King Enma Summon Technique))
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 9:50 pm
The clones ran in all differant directions. Several transorming into shurikens which other clones picked up and threw as hard as they could in differant directions after which the clones that through them would run off in there own path.
Enma looked around, trying to keep track of all of the clones yet still having a difficult time... what was he up to now?
The clones that turned into shurikens hit there marks and each make several quick symbols in differant areas, some even raising large rock walls and writing symbols onto them. Each of the symbols where only there for a moment then disappeared.
((Post 26/30: Learning King Enma Summon Technique))
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 9:54 pm
The fourth smirked, he had figured out Jins plan, for he had fallen for a similar yet much less broad and complex tactic when fighting him earlier. He began to laugh, this boy was definatly something different, the way he thought made him much deadlier than most ninjas o fhis chakra amounts.
Suddenly the real Jin showed himself as Enma's gaze suddenly turned to him. "READY?" yelled Jin allowed as all of the clones cheered up in response. "NOOOWWW!!!"
Enmas eyes opened wide as he relized what was happening, ever single clones fingers glew bright blue, the signs of gentle touch, all of them suddenly dissapearing in yellow flashes.
((Post 27/30: Learning King Enma Summon Technique))
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 9:57 pm
Enma tried to leap high and out of the path between any circle and a clone... but there where hundreds of them and it was impossible. Suddenly he could fell it hundreds of clones touching his body with the gentle fist, closing off Tetsu points and sending searing pain running through him... all though each clone did little harm the amount of them stacked and stacked causing the attack to be far more effective than he had thought possible.
"I'm not done yet Enma, say goodbye" yelled the original Jin. He clenched his fist as every single one of the several hundred clones now touching Enma in a mass ball of Jins clones exploded creating a huge booming sound that sent trees flying through the air and dust high into the sky creating clouds of destruction.
((Post 28/30: Learning King Enma Summon Technique))
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 10:00 pm
As the clouds slowly settled and things became Visible, Enma stood still on his feet, although he was far from in good shape as his fur looked scraggely and charred and a pained look crossed his lips drawing attention toward his left swollen eye that he could no longer see out of.
The fourth looked on in amazment... he was suprised Jin could even still stand, let alone look down on Enma with a smile upon his face... he had grown greatly in power since he had arrived here, he just hoped the boy used his skills for good and fell not into the dar presence of Orichinimaru that stalked the after life.
((Post 29/30: Learning King Enma Summon Technique))
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