| do you think for my first time making an RP i did good? |
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| it is to advanced for my little mind......... |
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| its the best RP eva! |
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 Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 4:56 pm
when no one was looking, a prizoner came stroling by, lucian jumped out from his hiding place, and knocked the inmate out. he took his tag, then retreated into the shadows.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 5:02 pm
Aubry noticed Lucien, but didn't say anything. she walked up to Riane and said.
"the shadows are good hiding spots..." but before Riane turned around to see who had said that, she was already back to where she was.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 5:22 pm
Brychon thought,""I know how to make people owe me,I can hide my tag and then if someone wants it then they will owe me."" Beautiful it was,beautiful.Thats when I walked out of my cell and down to the bottom floor,I scavenged arround to find paper like the tags.Once I got alot I went back to my cell and started to rip the paper into the shape that the tags were in,then with some ash I scribed multiples of peoples names on them.Perfect all set.Since most people were still asleep I went around to every cell and put in everyones pockets one of each tag with a different name on it.It was perfect,there would be fights like crazy.So many punished people.So many............
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 5:25 pm
Aubry was watching Brychon with cold eyes.
"you know... that isn't very nice...." she threw a flying side kick to his face, to knock him out...
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 5:26 pm
Riane looked out the cell door to see Brychon walking past with orange things in his hands. If he comes in here, he's as good as dead. Riane thought. She didn't care about being punished. Most of the guards believed her more than any of the men anyway.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 5:45 pm
unfortunately, there was a guard watching, and caught her attacking. he came over and tried to take her away for punishment, but she got to him first, and knocked him out. she started to pant, satisfied for what she just did. she went over to Riane and said,
"Im going to forgive what i did..." she ran away towards the top of the prison, to talk to the captain.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 5:50 pm
Brychon madas he is,he did no retaliate,he stayed calm and quiet.he finished with what he was doing and then he went back to his cell to relax."Ahhh,it feels great to have a brain."He said to himself."Lets hope this pays off,and now all I have to do is wait another hour."
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 5:57 pm
Aubry kept to the shadows. she was trying not to hurt as many people as she could... but sometimes, she had to.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 6:10 pm
Brychon was restless, he could not stop worring about his plan.If it would work of not. stressed
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 6:13 pm
Riane sat on her cot, as though her thighs were tied to it. One more hour, she thought, Just one more hour.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 6:14 pm
Brychon,was almost going crazy cause his plans never really faild.But this is different. burning_eyes
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 7:17 pm
the captain saw aubry aproach. "what is it this time he asked as she was neering the gates.
its starting in 20 minutes so hurry up!
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 7:51 pm
Riane stood up. She couldn't sit still anymore, she needed to move. If she didn't, she would surely explode. She walked around the boardwalk, keeping very low. She looked around for the other inmates who where all nowhere to be found. She then kept to the shadows, not trusting the other inmates to follow the rules of the game.
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 4:55 am
Aubry didn't say anything. she just stared at the captain, wondering why Leila had married this man. she was sensible, or she thought she was...
"i want... for you to stop..." she was trembling, but it wasn't in fear, but in hate. "the hell hounds are one thing, but to have the inmates go against each other... that is cruel. all of our crimes put together are not as bad as this... what would Leila say if she saw what was happening? what would she do?"
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 6:20 am
xp Ryo he just walking around on the cat walk. Until this other inmate comes up to him and says "I am going to kick your butt." Ryos like "whatever" and starts to walk away. The other guy pulls on ryos shirt and hits him. Then Ryo gets up off the ground and starts beating up the inmate. So they start a fight.
xp The gaurds they don't care what the inmates do because they know that this is the number one big mack prison. The gaurds know that the inmates can't escape. Ryo and the guy are fighting and the other inmates are cheering.
xp The fight goes on until Ryo throws the knockout hit and puts the inamte on the floor and they stop fighting because he knows once he gets a little older he can't win. Ryo starts to walk back to his cell to work out alone.
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