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 Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 1:36 am
After a long while of simply sitting there, with no real reason to still be here. He pulls the book he was handed to by the man who had recruted him as a hunter nin, from the package's contents. Reading the title he raises an eyebrow slightly. "Hmm.." He says, as he opens the book and begins reading. Oddly enough there was nothing that interesting to be told. All it really went through was a job description, and things like that. Zaman slowly shakes his head, taking the book and placing it back into the package, which was really just one bag. As his hand blindly shifts through the bag, he comes across a series of pieces of paper, and a scroll. Seeing that the paper he found, was a mix between plain pieces of paper, and exploding tags. He smiles slightly, his mask copying the smile, as it always does. "The art of Dendou..." He says, reading the beginning of the scroll out loud. With a smirk, he puts away the exploding tags he has, then returns to look at the scroll. After a small while of reading, he begins to make his own exploding tag, with the help of the scroll, and the blank piece of paper. After a good deal of work. Zaman finally manages to create his own and then walks over to a wall. Placing it there, before slowly heading away from where he was. For now, he was done with this place. And thanks to the book, he could continue learning what he needed to, without having to worry about staying in one place for too long. Zaman shrugs, taking the book with him, as he begins walking to his next destination. Behind him, an explosion engulfs the ally where he left the exploding tag, proving someone had found the tag on the wall, and used enough force to make it explode. Zaman shakes his head slowly, though he chuckles darkly all the same. Some people were such fools, though actions like these, were not exactly Hunter Nin's actions were they? Zaman shrugs that thought off, as he picks up his pace, eager to make his way out of this village now, and head to better places, with better jutsu that could be at his disposal. While walking, Zaman realized the reason why he had not been given anything of importance. He was not of the correct rank to get anywhere. He was given a sort of information packet, in case a nin was still interested when they became the correct skill level. Zaman sighs, and begins running towards the docks. Boarding the boat, he instantly heads for his next destination, though unsure of exactly where it may be.
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Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 7:53 pm
Hyuuga Devoker came running out the academy student with another group of students. He was so happy. He was now a Genin and he didn't know what to do for the rest of the day. He wasn't sure if he should start a spar with another one of his friends or if he should train by himself. Hyuuga Devoker looked around and saw a lot of shops that he never noticed that surrounded the academy. The shops were mostly shops for kids probably because the academy was right there and a lot of kids came from the academy and went to the shops. He then began walking around not knowing at all. He decided that he will make his own little obstacle. "This is what I am going to do. I have going to run all around town throwing kunais at every circle, square, and triangle and then I will have to run up ten different walls, jump into the lake, touch the bottom, come back up, run to the edge of the lake and come back, then come back and do the same thing." Devoker nodded and knew that this would a good way to get lines for the person who was typing this long paragraph. (Lol. No one will notice.) Devoker then began his obstacle course by running up the side of the building getting his first run up a wall objective done. He pulled out two kunais because he saw two eyes on a billboard and threw the both in one hand. Each of the kunais hit the middle of the circle and Devoker jumped over to them and grabbed them. He landed on the wall so he continued to run up the wall so that he got his second wall. When he got to the roof of that building, he saw another higher building right in front of him. He ran up to the edge of the building and jumped he landed on the wall of the other building and began sliding down. He had lost his concentration in his feet which is why he was sliding. He regained his chakra control and then began running right back up. He got to the top and saw a triangular shaped piece of wood lying on the ground and a flock of birds pelting poop on the people walking on the ground went flying into the air migrating to a new position because they got scared. Devoker continued running and pulled his kunai out of the piece of wood and then jumped off the building. He landed on the ground and then jumped on a wall running on it and jumped to the other side so he was racing forward and getting higher gradually at the same time. Devoker kept bouncing from one side to another till he go to the top making four houses and then he went higher by going up another wall. He was pretty high again and he could see that he was almost to the lake and thought that it would take to long to come back and it would already be sundown. He would soon pass his house on the way there and didn't realize that his house was actually pretty far away from the academy. Devoker ran as fast as he could and then he jumped off the roof and went right back up another one which made six walls in total. Devoker was really dirty and sweaty by now. He bad picked up a lot of dirt from behind him and a lot of it got on his face but most of it on his pants. Devoker continued running despite the dirt on his pants and his tiredness. Devoker was almost at the lake and he continued running and going up walls. He finally got to the lake and he ended up going up thirteen walls instead of ten because how far the lake was from the academy. Devoker got on the highest house closest to the lake and then jumped. He landed right in the lake and then went pretty deep into the water. He had never gone into water with his clothes on and it made it easier to swim down. He touched the rocks and sand at the bottom of the lake and continued to swim forward on the floor like a crab and then began coming back up and it took longer than he expected. He almost lost his breath. Devoker pushed his hands off the water and then he reached his feat over like he just climbed over some cliff. He was about in the middle of the the lake and he wasn't sweating anymore, he was just really wet. Devoker then began running to the other side of the lake. He finally got there and then he ran back so that he was on the original side. Devoker began huffing and puffing off of that kind of training. Devoker thought on the bright side though. He wasn't dirty anymore and his parents would only be mad that he was soaked. He then remembered that he wouldn't be seeing his parents that much anymore. Devoker thought that he was going to collapse or faint. Quote: 1st Post: 30 Lines 2nd Post: 25 Lines 3rd Post: 30 Lines Total: 85 Lines (17 Posts - 1700 SP) Cashed In: 80 Lines (16 Posts - 1600 SP)
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Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 8:44 pm
Hyuuga Devoker got up from his rest and yawned. He looked around and looked at the sky and smirked. The sky was perfectly blue except for a flock of birds flying in the sky probably migrating. Devoker got up and said, "This village is getting bored. Nothing to do, nothing to see." Hyuuga Devoker got up and thought about what he should do. "Maybe I can go to a different village! Yes!" Devoker then bursted off to the docks. [13 Lines]
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Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:52 am
Drago payed for his ramen and he simply got up. He looked to his left and to his right as he cracked his fingers and cracked his neck. He started to walk down the road. As he smiled again. This village while it was huge was the right size. The people were friendly and they were nice. Something that Drago had forgot with his path of bitterness. Drago simply yawned as he was starting to enjoy his day. He scratched his eyes as he started to see that there was no fighting today.
"It's a good day."
Drago said as he manged to calm himself down. His eyes calm he was at serenity right now. Something that he hadn't had for a while. He was at peace as he saw his kanji mark reappear back on his arm. At least that was a good sign. He hadn't saw that for awhile. HE still hadn't held up hope for a long time. He probably wouldn't either. Hope was something he lost in the fire. Drago put his arms on his head and he decided to tdo some training. At least that would get him out of his funk...for now at least.
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Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:30 pm
Akou Rose and Reina Rose As soon as the doctor calls for a stretcher, Reina's eyes burst open and her heart jumps then beats normally. She inhales roughly once then her breathing stabilizes. The doctor stands upward and motions away from her as Akou begins coughing. Reina flashes to her feet then flickers over to a chair at Akou's bedside. She rubs his forehead then pulls her hand away. "He's got a fever." The doctor blinks a few times then shuts his mouth that hung wide open, composing himself. "A-are you all right?" "I'm fine. I just didn't expect that I guess. You said... something's eating away at him?" The doctor paces a bit then takes a deep breath. Reina had freaked him out to the point where HE felt faint. "Um, yes. There is no sign of what it is exactly but something is eating away at him at a rapid pace.” Reina looks at Akou and then at the doctor. “I think I know what it is.” Akou’s pale red eyes turn to Reina and grow a little wider as he smiles weakly. He touches her hand gently which makes her smile a little. “Yes, I do always know things. I wish this wasn’t true though…” “What do you believe it is then, um-” “Reina. There are these powers called Orochi Powers. There are different kinds with different effects. The one he has, I had. Mine was very controlling though it didn’t cause this.” Akou squeezes her hand then loosens it. “So, your body can’t accept the Orochi Power?” Akou shakes his head slowly and weakly. At first Reina’s face was going to flush red with anger but instead her cheeks became wet. “I… I…” she starts as the tears fall from her face and onto Akou’s bed. “I never should have allowed myself to be killed. Now this Power is destroying you…” Akou pats her hand gently but she continues to cry. She wanted to disappear so he couldn’t see her cry but she didn’t want to leave his side. She was ashamed to cry in front of him but the thought of him dying… it was torture. She never wanted anything to happen to him. Not even for him to catch a cold. Now she was the reason he was practically dying. She hated herself. “Doctor,” Reina murmurs. The doctor, confused, looks at her. “Isn’t there anything you can do?” “I don’t even know what you two are talking about, to be honest.” Reina’s eyes become bright and the stars that had shrunk to make it seem as if her eyes were completely black grow larger as she glares at him. She tells herself that it isn't his fault and sighs. "Listen carefully to me old man." He was going to state how he wasn't old but as soon as he starts to her eyes alter again and he says nothing. "You find a way to keep my son alive or I'll destroy you." Reina hardly ever gives empty threats. She may let you live for a time but she will eventually do as she promised. The man swallows hard as Reina stands from Akou's beside. He grips her arm but she shakes her head. "I have to leave you so they can perform the necessary tests. Please, let go Akou." The frail boy whimpers once then releases Reina's wrist as she leaves. She wanders around in the hall for a time before she senses something. She touches the engagement Drago had bestowed upon her then looks back at the room Akou lay in. Reina wondered why she trusted those doctors with his life. Did they help her with Naomi? Did they help her with Haylo? Had they ever helped? Akou was capable of diagnosing himself and finding out what's wrong, yet that old coot can't? She glares at the room, her glare growing deeper with each passing moment. Without a word, a thought, a sound, Akou was in her arms one instant and then them both gone the next. Lines = 68 (DP)
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Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:24 pm
"Go back?" he scoffed. "I could never go back, I would just be a tool... 6,793." Koujin looked down his extended right arm. "That's how many souls I bear now, that is my curse for killing gods. Two men both who thought they could transcend fate, I killed both of them and now they have their revenge. Through my own mistakes the life of Shisui's child is now in danger, I never expected the hunted to become the hunter, but no... even if they weren't dragged into this, my village... you have no idea what they had planned... The shinobi wars would begin anew. Now, we begin." Koujin flipped the blade in his hand up in his air and moved into a set of hand seals catching the blade in his hand reverse to how it was before. Adonis reached forward tapping the blade with a knuckle. Koujin seemed to grow several inches, or maybe he was just standing straighter, his overall killing intent rose, this was no tired and lazy ninja, this was a manslayer, one of the killers of legend. "Kōka hirameke, Nijigasumi!" Koujin wavered and then vanished, a wave of sand rising from where he was standing and streaming towards Kyoshou looking to ensnare his torso.
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Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 8:56 pm
Hyuuga Devoker came running from the docks. He had just came from the docks and he was happy after he had just had his small little skirmish with Raiken, from the cloud. He knew he was from the cloud village because of his techniques that he was using but he never did figure out that guy's name. Hyuuga Devoker then began walking around and saw somebody on the tree. "Hello." [3 Lines][53 Lines]
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Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 9:11 pm
Hido grimaced when someone approached where he was sitting under the shade of a large tree and barely cracked one eye. He noticed someone of moderate power standing near him and sighed closing his eye again. He placed both of his hands together and immediately his shadow stretched becoming a thin line and wrapping around the person, making sure not to touch their shadow. The shadow rolled along the ground seamlessly, not impeded by any of the stones or even leaving a mark in the dirt on the ground. Hido leaned up opening both eyes slowly rubbing them and looking up at the man in front of him. "Hmm hello there, and you are?" He asked lazily leaning back against the tree. He kept his eyes trained on the man and wiped sweat from his brow, feeling his light brown hair wave gently with every movement of his head. He put his hands back together this time just resting them atop one another so as to keep them occupied while he waited for the mans response.
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Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 9:26 pm
Devoker had to noticed the guy on the tree with one eye open. When he opened his one eye it made him chuckle a little bit because it looked sot of funny. Devoker looked at Mythic and he suggested to himself that he was probably at least Chunnin rank. Devoker also suggested that there were many Genin in his village and thought that maybe this man was a Genin too. Devoker looked at Hido's shadow very close and then automatically noticed that he was from the Nara clan. "It shows a sign of respect if you tell your name first, you know? It's okay though at since I saw you first. My name is Hyuuga Devoker. I am from the main house family of my clan and I am going to be a future medical nin." Devoker smirked a little bit as dimples formed on his cheeks. "I have noticed that you are from the Nara clan." [6 Lines][59 Lines]
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Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 11:17 pm
I let you see what I want you to see..other than that..it's all fake..
Drago looked and he decided to perform a trick or two for the villages children. only seemed to open his hands and a stage appeared infront of him as he did this he slowly changed form his aburame form to his regular appearance. He looked and he held up a hand full of cards at first as he started to shoot them high in the air they froze in the air. He looked and he pointed to each card and they started to dance individually. Drago looked and he bowed with the first trick.
"Ha.."
Drago said as he brought all the cards around him and they made a giant diamond. Crowd went crazy as they saw him do this. Drago bowed once again and he decided to go out with a bang. As he stood there he picked up all the cards once again showed them all to the audience. As he did this he waved his hands twice and all the cards were gone. Drago simply made them disappear into thin air. As he did this he started to walk away. Drago felt the hollow claps. The shallow love. It meant nothing as he pulled the cards back from behind his back and he threw all the cards into a tree infront of him cutting it down. He looked and he just sat there for a moment. Dead a bit on the inside. Missing a piece.
I let you see what I want you to see..other than that..it's all fake..
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Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 7:49 am
In the middle of talking to the member of the Nara clan he heard a loud ruckus. He looked over at the magician guy who was playing with his stupid cards. Hyuuga Devoker looked at Drago like he was retarded especially at the crowd as they were amazed by something so stupid. Hyuuga Devoker thought he just totally wasted his time doing that trick. Hyuuga Devoker looked at he sliced the tree. He mumbled, "Maybe it wasn't that stupid." He was kind of amazed of how he sliced a tree with just a card. Devoker knew it was probably some kind of jutsu that he had never seen before. Devoker then turned back around to the guy on the tree and said, "What do you think about his card trick?" [5 Lines][64 Lines]
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Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 8:18 am
 Kyoshou Kinuta...As Koujin flung the blade into the air, breaking off into a string of hand signs, Kyoshou himself did the same. Out of thin air appeared a huge murder of jet-black crows just above where the group was. The cawed wildly filling the valley with the echos of their cacophony as they surrounded the five ninja. Kyoshou vanished among them in the confusion retrieving a black cloak from within his jacket to mask himself within the veil of black feathers. Kyoshou never was one to launch a direct attack. The black birds were so clustered together it would be near impossible to not have them brush up against oneself. As the birds hid his presence, Kyoshou silently ran through a second string of hand signs. This caused small plumes of smoke to appear in various places along the beach but were soon dispersed by the wild beating of wings. Kyoushou could have attacked any of the other two cloaked men but decided against it. This battle was between him and Koujin. No one else. ...of the Twilight Sonata
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Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 9:44 am
Zodiac Formation: Dragon Technique (Koudoutari Kessei: Tatsu no Jutsu) 600 Skill Points: (ANBU/HUNTER/MEDIC ONLY) Using one hand seal (Dragon), the user seems like nothing happens initially, but the opponent starts to picture and sense the user as a near god like enemy which lowers their Taijutsu and Ninjutsu attacks. One of the best intimidation styles out there because the opponent never realizes that they are placed under the spell unless they know the attack. Jutsu Shou and Koudoutari Kessei: Tatsu no Jutsu are the only techniques capable of canceling this technique.
Komen watched as the Anbu tactitician was beginning to lull to sleep. In the Anbu Tacticians mind, he was listening to a calm breeze flow past his mind and his ears. THe Anbu tactician was sleeping standing up as Komen was simply looking at him for a few moments. "Ummm Anbu Trainer?" He asked as he was wondering what was going on. A few moments later, the Anbu Tactician was beginning to move and stir. "Unnnn...." He said as he stretched his arms a bit, "THat was a perfect execution. I should try and teach you more as soon as possible. We need more anbu people, but they need to learn all the Jounin level techniques." He said with a yawn as he was ready to teach Komen Usai some more techniques. He was trying to aim to teach Komen Usai all the techniques needed so he could be an ANBU member and bolster the ranks of the ANBU. The ANBU tactician was already impressed that Komen was such a hihg Level Shinobi, and that he had the powers of the armors within him. Not one, but two in fact. Making Komen Usai a powerful SHinobi, not inculding his own techniques he learned from other teachers while journeying through the lands. He had yet to learn from many other masters, but he was going to try and learn all the techniques he could. As Long as Komen was alive, he was going to keep learning more and more so could fight with anybody and protect his land. "This next technique is a powerful technique that not many have been taught before." He said as he didn't want to bog down Komen by making this technique seem that it was god like in any way shape or form. Though it was a powerful intimidation technique, it was no where close to being an unbeatable technique. Any technique in this world could be manipulated to be nullified, even the power of the magenkyou Sharingan. Thought it still needed time for such a powerful technique to be over powered by another, it was going to happen sooner or later. Even Komen Usai's divine Byakugan would one day find it's limits against an opponent. Though powerful it was in Komens case since he was able to push the eye technique or doujutsu to higher levels by not making it a simple observation increase device, but a weapon in it's own right that can peer through the darkest of deceptions.
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Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 10:08 am
Zodiac Formation: Monkey Technique (Koudoutari Kessei: Saru no Jutsu) 600 Skill Points: (ANBU/HUNTER/MEDIC ONLY) Upon using the sign of the monkey, moisture collects in the air to form 4 floating monkey palms. They are malleable to temperature but have the ability to grab, pin and render an opponent or technique useless. The water concentrated in each palm is strong enough where they can cancel water and earth style techniques.
The Anbu Tactian was showing him the technique. Komen was wondering if it was going to be a ridiculously long strong of freaking hand seals, like most techniques were, but to his surprise, this technique was only one hand seal long. Komen raised an eyebrow as he was quite confused. "Wait this technique is only one seal long? What the hell are you up to Anbu Trainer?" He asked as the Anbu trainer was only focusing on the technique. After a few moments, Komen could feel his heart beating faster, as fear was beginning to take him, "Wait....I...I know this technique." He said as he was sure that it was the same technique he had faced in a tournament not too long ago. Komen understood the machanics of this technique as he was not letting up. He performed the same technique and cancelled out this one. He breathed a bit hard as this was a handy technique to use against someone that wasn't expecting a intimidation technique to be used against them. The Anbu tactician was amazed that Komen Usai had already gotten the technique. But it wasn't surprising since he experienced the technique already. Shinobi that have experienced the brunt force of a technique can usually learn the technique twice as fast because they know how powerful the technique is and can guage how much chakra they must put into it so they can accomplish the technique. "So than Anbu Trainer, what technique shall we learn next?" He asked as the Anbu trainer was smirking behind his mask. He was amazed that Komen Usai had a lot of stamina to keep training more and more like he was doing. The last person he had seen with this much stamina was the nine tailed fox user Naruto. But Komen Usai was not like Naruto at all as he was grown up and built his stamina from the ground up, while Naruto was gifted with his strength and stamina.
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Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 10:42 am
Zodiac Formation: Dog Technique (Koudoutari Kessei: Inu no Jutsu) 700 Skill Points: (ANBU/HUNTER/MEDIC ONLY) After apllying four hand seals (Rabbit, Tiger, Snake, Dog). Somewhat similar to the Inuzuka Clan’s Dynamic Marking, ZF: DT is used for tracking purposes. It’s incredibly accurate and can increase the sense of smell to pin point anything on an opponent. In battle ZF: DT allows the user to tell the difference in clones and spot their opponent in hidden areas, canceling out any ambush attacks. The downside is the nose is hyper sensitive and while in the duration of the attack, the other senses are dulled in half. Any irritant can cancel this technique as well.
The Anbu trainer was thinking as his arms were crossed, and a hand was supporting his head a bit as he was still in deep thought of what technique he should be teaching Komen Usai. "Hmmm...." He said with a long pause as he thought it would be good to teach him the next one, "Ok the next technique I'm going to teach you is called Zodiac Formation: Monkey Technique." The Anbu Trainer said as he was holding the hand sign that represented and meant monkey. Komen Usai was raising an eyebrow as he knew that it was yet another one hand seal technique. This was rather interesting as most of these technique were strong and required very little strings of handseals. This meant that it could be used with other techniques quite easily. Komen was watching intently as his byakugan eyes were tracing the way his chakra was circulating as he was creating a technique before his eyes. The Anbu trainer had finished his focus of his chakra and then started to prduce four small formless groups of water. The water started to take shape as fingers were beginning to form. Komen was looking with a curious raise of his eyebrow as this technique seemed very strange. One after the other, the once formless groups of water were beginning to take the form of a strange looking monkey palm. "So what can these things do?" He asked as the ANBU tactician sent the water fists against a nearby dummy and destroyed it with a powerful punch. "These monkey palms are like extensions of your hands as they can attack opponents and grip them. Holding them in place or making them useless in a fight." He said as Komen was listening and thought that this was quite a useful ninjitsu technique. "Hmmm...I get the feeling they can do more." The ANBU tactician was smirking as he saw that Komen was much more observant than most other SHinobi. "You are correct, this technique can do much more."
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