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Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 8:00 am
as the day of morning came too i woke up as the sun hit my eye look out the window looking out to the world waiting for what the world have for me. then i got my cloths on then when off to the academy to see what was going on it was just another day at ninja school was going to learn a new move but it takes some time but other learn faster the other but i was good at ninjutsu and taijutsu. genjutsu was never my strong point so i have to try to learn that but just not to day idont have enough time for today i just do it tomorrow i need to be teached. As the day when on everything was quiet, finally some peace in my life for the first time in history they day of terror is over as the battle between us has ended the was a long battle between us but i just don't know why we that a battle. but the nightmare is over school ended and i didn't walk home because something was on my mind and something was bother me too. like something is there but i can see it with my own eye, like someone is watching me out there. a battle was waiting for me somewhere in this world but i didn't think it would be here in my time of peace. The sun glared down upon a cloaked figure walking slowly towards the Academy. The cloak itself seemed to be shredded at the ends, giving him a otherworldly affect, though it did seem to need some washing. It had been long since Dan had decided to show himself to the world, but now it seemed he would need to if he was to become as great a shinobi as his father had wished. As he reached the doors of the Academy, Dan gently pulled back the hood of his cloak, his silver hair catching the rays of the sun as he stode onward through the doorway. It was easily noticed from his solid white eyes that he was of the Hyuuga clan, which seemed odd for he was from the Mist Village. Either way, it didn't matter, he was here to be trained. After a few moments of searching, he found a teacher that seemed to be fit enough to help him. The teacher was a lady, seeming to be around the age of 20, though she didn't look too attractive, though this mattered not to Dan, for he was finally about to start the training that he had waited years for. So, the instructer came about before him, standing upright, "I'll be teaching you the common technique, Henge no Jutsu first. Its a basic level technique and I have no feel for how skilled you are at the moment, so watch closely." Quickly, she brought her hands together, creating a seal. Dan watched closely as she did this, so he'd remember the proper way. To his amusement, she transformed herself into a really fat old guy, which seemed very odd concidering that she was a girl. He chuckled slightly at this, watching as she transformed herself back into the lady instructer he had asked to help him, "Now its your turn.... Watch your stance and make sure that you do the seal correctly. Also, make sure that you are aware of your chakra as you do this technique, because if you aren't you'll not preform it correctly." At her word, Dan brought himself into a similar position to that of what she had been. It was a bit odd having this be his first time making a hand seal, though it seemed familiar in an odd way. Slowly, he brought his hands into the seal, which was perfect, though when he tried, nothing but dust erupted about him, "What did I do wrong?" He glanced at the ground solumnly as he awaited her words of judgement. A light breeze filtered throughout the area as he simply stood, waiting, watching listening. Small things that made a shinobi whom they were. She would make the judgement though, for he knew not what he'd done wrong.The teacher nodded her head slightly, a small grin upon her face as she watched the boys efforts, "You didn't watch your chakra when doing it... try again... this time pay more attention, more concentration...." His face went askew for a moment, his anger with himself building, though he did as she said. His second attempt went just as the first, his hands making the necessary symbols, though this time he was more intune with himself. He transformed into the lady herself. Her eyebrow twirked slightly as she watched herself, though it was the boy in the form of herself, "Okay.... that will be all for this Jutsu... on to the next, since you seem to have some skill." At this Dan withdrew from the form, his own hands coming back. The feeling was a bit weird yet, though soon he would master these as he thought to himself.The lady continued walking til she found what seemed to be a flat enough area for the next skill that she would teach the boy. After what she had seen in the last of his accomplishments, she felt that he learned quite quickly, though he still lacked the skill that was needed. Slowly, she waited for him to stand still and watch her, "Next... you'll be learning Bushin no Jutsu. At this Dan's eyes opened a bit more. This technique he had seen his father use a long time ago, though he didn't quite pay attention to how it had been done all those years ago. He listened to her explanation, though as she preformed the technique, he wondered if he could accomplish this task as easily as the first.Slowly, Dan stepped back, preforming the necessary hand seal with ease yet again, though just as in the first exercise nothing happened. His fist knotted together with anger as he watched the instructer smirk at him. If he were stronger, he'd knock the smirk off of her insolent face, though that wasn't what he was here for. So he listened to her remarks about his posture and that he wasn't concentrating his chakra properly once more. An hour passed as Dan had been made to concentrate his Chakra in this time. It seemed weird at first, though he was slowly catching on. So his instructer informed him that she was ready for him to try again. Dans eyes traced her over, still wishing he could show her who she was messing with if she should smirk again. His hand seal was correctly placed as he preformed the move once again. This time, directly beside him another of himself emerged. It seemed odd staring at himself, though it was rather cool to see ones self standing there. The instructer clapped, as she walked over to the clone, sending her fist through its shadowy form. Damian only stared at her, unable to comprehend what she was trying to make out of that. She only smiled once more, "...well now you can do a couple of the necessary Jutsus, though you still have problems with controlling your chakra.... hmn... We'll have to fix that. Oh and remember, as I just showed you, a shadow can't fight. So make sure you use that jutsu properly...." At this she walked down a dirt path, expecting Dan to follow. Slowly, Dan trod along behind her, his cloak brushing against the dirt path. The instructer was more skilled then he had noticed before, though she didn't show it. He could both see it and feel it about her. It seemed that it was a nice thing that he could withhold himself, though it had been so long since last he took orders from someone. His thoughts were stopped as she herself had stopped walking. A decent sized tree stood before her and she pointed to it. Dan's eyebrows knotted in a slight confusion as he pondered what she ment by it. The instructer liked how Dan didn't talk much, it would get him farther in the world then most, though he seemed to not know much of anything of what he should. So slowly, she made her way to the trunk of the tree, then placed a foot upon it and started walking up, turning only once to look down upon him, "The most difficult place for one to focus their Chakra is in ones own feet. I want you to learn how to use your Chakra, so that when the time comes I can teach you more difficult Jutus, then just the ones you've been doing. You seem to have some hidden talent in that shell you call a brain, so we'll be needing to find it." At this she dropped, further explaining to him how he was to do this task.A few minutes passed by before Dan felt himself able enough to do this task. It would be the last he would try this particular afternoon, though tomorrow he planned on having this instructer explain quite a few more things to him. He removed his cloak, placing it to the side as he readied himself. At a fast pace, he set off kicking his foot off the base of the trunk, trying to run straight up the tree to get to the first branch, but with much humiliation, he fell, landing upon his back, the wind being knocked from his system. The instructer looked to the sky, hoping the boy would be able to accomplish this last task of the day, so that she could further his training tomorrow, though after that spell, she doubted that he'd pass this one today..Dan stood, brushing himself off. It was not often that one could laugh at him and not get a busted nose, but for now he'd stay quiet til he finished his training under her. His jaw clenched as he prepared once more, ignoring the fact that the instructer was trying to explain the ways of doing it again. He set off at a quicker pace then last, running a bit farther then the last, but nonetheless falling upon his back once more, "GAAAAAAAH!" He screamed, it hurt a bit more this time falling upon the same spot, but he deserved it this time he knew. He had allowed his head to get the best of him again. Slowly, he made his way back to the instructer, his head fuming slightly. She put her hand upon his shoulder, staring him in his luminous white eyes, "Keep practicing.... You'll need to learn how to do this and how to be patient with yourself. You've still got alot to learn, but you are one of the more promising students I've had." At this she patted him upon the back, "I have a couple of errands to run, so you can continue this later if you wish, though I'd think alot more about what all I've told you before trying this once more." She smiled, then walked off, leaving him to himself.Dan sat upon his cloak for hours, watching the Tree. It had been a humiliation how he couldn't do this. How was he to become what he wished if he couldn't even do something as simple as this? His mind raced as he stood once more, trying to go slower then he had before. Waiting for a moment, Dan cleared his head, his white pupils looking the tree over. Slowly, he placed his foot against the tree, feeling the Chakra in his legs. He stepped up slowly, holding his place for but a moment, then falling once again, "YOU DUMB TREE!" At this Dan kicked the tree, though regretting it later because it hurt so badly.A bruise began to throb upon Dan's arm as he sat. The tree had defeated him more times then he'd like to admit, though he was still trying. He had gotten tired, so he had taken a rest, though now he was ready again. There were slight bags under his eyes, because he hadn't slept yet and the sun was rising slightly over the horizon. He shook himself off, readying for another try, having gotten closer and closer everytime thus far. Slowly, he brought his weary foot upon the tree once again, pressing with his Chakra against the tree, making his way once more up towards the branch. His concentration wavered slightly and he almost dropped, but he recomposed himself, catching the limb and shouting with a triumphant victory, til he heard clapping. The instructer had came back just in time to watch him complete the chosen task, "Well.. time for your next one... Somewhat of the same thing, but slightly different. so i will go back to the school to see wats going on and so i can heal up on my wounds dan says the the master. she says ok then pause. there a war going on some place in the outer side of the village proceed with care my young ninja....ok i will do my best Dan said and out to the village he when
Rasengan complete Drunken Fist Style complete Leaf Great Whirlwind complete 2700 cp 27 paragraphs
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Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 3:50 pm
"Now than." Komen said as he let the armor disengage around his head, "I need you to bring me to the eader of the ANBU so I can be a full fledged member. I think capturing one of their own should be enough to show that I am good enough." Komen said with a nod as he was thinking how long he had been here. He had gained a lot of friends and amazing powers through his time in this world. he had hoped that he would be able to gain more as he followed the ANBU Agent.
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Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 6:21 pm
I awoke half asleep because to much happend yesterday that I didn't expect. I took a cold shower to wake myself up, didn't work to well. I'm still exahusted. I get dressed, I get my kunai, cause I don't know what will happen, and walk out the door. No one is around so I guess I'm back to walking to school alone, not that I care. The academy is far from normal but I walk to class ignoring confused glances at me. I was into the classrom and sit in the front row with Zoro behind me and Takami to my right. After reading my book with many interuptions over the imposter and other things class begun. Lady Aboshi was subbing, sence she has no classes at the moment. She had a hard time sence she didn't know the topic we were on. I took over, yet again, and she left. After she left there was a huge number of questions about yesterday. Why me? I answer the question, while not letting information they don't need slip, and by the time lunch come around half the questions are answered. I run out of the classroom when the lunch bell rings. I find a quiet spot to eat my lunch, I'm in an older classroom that hasn't been used in years. No one should find me unless they're that determined. They should loss interest soon, hopefully. I eat my lunch slowly so I don't have to sit doing nothing. After I'm done with lunch, twenty minutes tell the bell rings, I begin to sharpen my kunai. Five minutes later some people found me and I had to leave. I snuck out and just started to walk around campus, hoping no one would follow, after a bit most of them leaft but one staied. I stoped and said,"You can com out now, Takami." "You're in a bad mood..." He mumbled. Once I had stoped he jumped into the nearest tree. "Not my fault. Now why are you following me?" "It's fun and we better get closer to the main part of capus. The bell will ring in five minutes...We walked together back to the active academy. The bell rung and we went our seperate ways. I went to my kunochi class and he went to study haul(because they can't have an extra class like the girls do). Lady Aboshi arrives late because she has to get materials. Our assignment is to design a out fit that we will wear on missions(that isn't what we normally wear). She brought many pieces of cloth for us to us on the assisgnment. I us almost all the black cloth she brought, so I can blend in with the shadows. I'll get an A but others won't cause the want nice cloths icon_rolleyes.gif . Why are they so stupid icon_confused.gif ? I make it tight with a spot to place shuriken and some kunai. It has long sleeves, gloves(which are the hardest to make) and a face mask. It took a bit but I finished my project. Some girl(that didn't know me well) asked me if acsessories matched. I simply said they didn't match the topic of our assignment. They left in a scorn but no one bothered me after that. I was reading a copy of the Shinobi Newspaper(Ibiki gave it to me). I was scanning to see what they had put on events that I was involved in. One(to my surprize) had a quote from Ibiki. It said that Ibiki told the press that he would be happy to see me in the Ambu Black Oops when I mature a little...What a load of crap! Ibiki had just said that to qwell questions about me. I don't know why but Ibiki never wanted me to even join the academy. He never gave me a straite anwser so I gave up on asking him. I think it's because we don't know a thing about my past or origens. Nothing at all.After the boring kunochi class I went to my final class of the day(the newspaper tucked between my arm and chest). I sat in front, Takami left last periode for an appointment, with Zoro sitting behind me. He asked about Ibiki's quote and I told him he didn't even want me in the academy. Zoro stopped asking questions and let me read. In another article they had a quote that I said in this class about my past but hey cut out a lot because Ibiki is one of the top editors. I was happy about that at least. Lady Aboshi is subbing until we can find Master Maki. I help, as usual, but she doesn't need as much as before. After class is dismissed the weekend begins. One unexpected thing happens. Takami, after he returns to campus, askes me out on a date and schedules it before I can respond. I walk home in a daze. gonk andI awoke in a daze. Takami wants me to go out on a date with him tomorrow because we have spring break. I don't know what to do. I have to go so he doesn't hate me but I don't like him that much. Whitepaw came to my side. I used the jutsu and asked her what I should do. She simply said let it all play out. I sighed. I took three books off of the shelf. The books are about shinobi history in other nation that they shared with us because they didn't need to hide. it. I walked, with Whiepaw at my side, to the park for a nice leasurely day reading. I brought a notebook for notes. I seem to notice connectrions that pop out and that are hard to find. I find that many villages come from the same ancestor. After a few hours I have all ready finished two of the three books. Some students are practicing in the park, other relax while others even just show off. Some dudes are challenging others to a race. Most keep away for some reason. I decide to take his challenge. He complains but agrees. One of the nicer girls in my class are looking after my books. The finish line is three hundered meters away. Whoever gets there first wins. Simple, right? Wrong. WE can use weapons. I'm not going to. We take our mark, get ready then sprit ahead. The boy is throwing shuriken at me and the others. Sence I'm right next to him I stop all of the, trip him and take the win. The boy is furious but Takami, with great timing, stops him. He tells him it's fare because he was trying to hurt the compitition. Takami walked me home and reminded me of our date, then left.
Genjutsu Release: complete Body Flicker Skill: complete Leaf Shadow Dance:complete 1200 cp 12 Paragraph
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Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 6:34 pm
yori stopped a ways from the village, having heard that there was a great deal of commotion there as some creature had come to attack, mimicking the incidents of the nine tailed fox that took place a long time ago in the village that nearly destroyed it. People were flooding out of the village en mass, and yori got the feeling that whatever it was that he was suppose to be afraid of would definitely end up being something that he regretted seeing, if he did go inwards. Having no particular interest in the truce between their villages now, deciding instead to avoid the combat that was taking place, yori stopped a short distance from the village and began setting his things here or there along the grassy road, the top of the great gates of Konoha barely visible in the distance, leaving the village and anything that might have been inside too far off to even be a blur for the shinobi from th Hidden Cloud to see. But, in case everything wasn't destroyed by the time he got there, yori decided it wouldn't hurt if he drew forth a map and looked at some of the historical spots that were in the Konoha village, since he might as well go sight seeing while he was training to bring about the destruction of their village. It wasn't unusual for someone to want to go and see the five hokage rock faces for example, and he was sure no one would go interrupting him and challenging him to a battle to the death between shinobi while he was there doing what any innocent traveler was. He wasn't someone of particular importance like the raikage, so there was no reason for assassins to be waiting on him and preparing ot kill him. it was just like a family going on vacation to a famous tourist destination, and yori knew that that was exactly how he would act when he wasn't training in order to learn some of the many advanced jutsu that existed in Konoha. Even now he knew that they had an amazingly advanced repertoire of techniques for battle that most other villages didn't, and many people were even willing not to credit that to the fact that they were the original hidden village that began the art of sharing ninjutsu and perfecting the arts that were taught amongst the hidden villages. This was the core of teh world of the shinobi now that yori thought about it, and even he knew that amongst this town the origins of the shinobi world, of the system with one large village to a country and the idea of selling their services to a feudal lord or the like was made and begun. That was why this was the source for everything, the peace and the conflict, the heart of humanity in the world that the shinobi lived in and serviced their masters through. yori was well aware of just what this village meant to most other people, and its special meanings extended to him as well, since he had always thought of it in a special manner like the others. After all, a village that was a source of the failed world, the old one that needed to be washed away was a village that anyone would recognized and respect, and when he crushed it it would be a sign of a new world led by even greater power and balance, one that might rely only on the strong shinobi, rather than the weak idiots who were pumped out of Konoha daily because the village hidden in the leafs had never been able to accept the same basic principles that they originally founded. Their founder, the one who was known as the first great hokage believed that a unified strong shinobi force would have a much better chance at ruling the world than a force that was crafted out of an army of the weaker shinobi, and so he had bound together with the Uchiha clan and brought a great deal of order to the civil war torn countries that were unable to find peace in themselves because of their inadequate means and sources of power. yori intended to bring about an equal and greater revolution in the world of the shinobi, and when the time had come he was sure that he would make those who had watched his ascension proud and thus bring honor to himself, the father who was disgraced by the sacrifices made at the end of the war with Konoha, and the entire Hidden Cloud Village which didn't intend to show him any respect, that had nearly cast him aside after all the work that he and his clan had put into founding, maintaining and empowering both the lightening country and the village that was it's source of life, and its source of protection from other villages which would easily choose to take over if they had to. This was the source of motivation for him, not just to take on missions that were given to the village when they came up, but to ascend ahead of the village's needs and eventually bring about a better place for all shinobi, which was made through his force and his jutsu rather than the techniques that were crafted in this current and failing world of shinobi. It wasn't necessarily right to say that he agreed with shinobi like Orochimaru who believed in sacrificing lives and creating costly, forbidden Justus, but rather yori worked hard in order to forge new jutsus that did not require such large sacrifices and still made an important impact upon the battlefield. He'd learned to craft a special skill using his sword already that allowed him to turn basic close range fighting into a long range battle when needed, and to allow his sword to remain strong even when normally it would crack from his chakra pressure, and eventually he would design more elaborate Justus in order to compensate for the parts of his combat style that he was not prepared for yet. It was true that there were the brillian and then there were the dense, and yori would whole heartedly oppose anyone who thought that he was one of the latter, the fact that he was so quick to think up thorough strategies in battle a sign of his quick working mind, which was often an incredibly dangerous shinobi weapon on the battlefield, more so than most of teh shinobi weapons that were crafted for cutting and piercing. Shikimaru Nara had once defeated a shinobi who was considered nearly Jounin rank as a newly fledged Chuunin, because on the battlefield his strategies were undeniably brilliant in comparison to most other shinobi. That was the sort of fair play that yori ntended to use when fighting, and that was also why learning certain jutsus would come easier to him than most others, who were slower in comprehending the basics of a technique; if you could understand, then you could win and that was one of the most important, no, the most important thing on the battlefield when it came time for push and shove. yori knew exactly how economical it was to use such shinobi on the battlefield rather than those with raw talent, although there was a time and place for both of those groups. Those who had intelligence were amazing field officers but were also required for basic routine things in a Hidden Village, and those who had talent were useful both for teaching others once they understood the premise of a technique, and for their talent on the battlefield in which they could easily decimate a less aware enemy. There was something to be said for hard work as well, but they took a great deal of time and skill to make them as strong as either of the two others, and that wasn't very economical when it came to the well being of the shinobi as a whole. Those who were talented needed very little but what it took to sustain them and a drive to increase their power to become mighty warriors for use on the battlefield, and those who were intelligent would quickly device ways around the weaknesses that they presented in a battle or when they were learning how to use a new jutsu in order to make up for what they didn't have in natural talents. These were the most economical shinobi, and that was why it would be best to provide them with a special place for training, such as a new Hidden Village that did not accept those whose skills were limited, especially if they were in certain areas. The taijutsu user Rock Lee(my Favorite character), a member of the Konoha village he was now so close to that yori had heard about, was apparently a user of a taijutsu only based repertoire, and that made him a weakness on the battlefield, not an exceptional warrior. yori had heard about the way he persevered and through years of extensive training built up his newly found talent, but even so it had taken all of the things that cost money and time that the village didn't have. Even then, he had a weakness and couldn't use ninjutsu or genjutsu, things that made him extremely vulerable on the battlefield. There was no shinobi who could use only taijutsu practically, and that made it so that anyone like that would definitely be a hindrance when the time came to put a group of trained shinobi into battle. If he was in a shinobi unit, then it was likely with a number of skilled shinobi to make up for his weaknesses, exactly as yori continued to remind himself was not the best unit style in the first place. Only the most elite should have been paired with the most elite, and that made the system of the hidden leaf village flawed in that regard. However, when he considered the person he'd heard was teamed with Rock Lee, it only both confirmed his hypothesis and further reminded him of the foolishness of the system that they still implemented in the rival village's home. Neji Hyuuga, he'd heard, was one with born natural talent that surpassed most of their whole clan, even the main branch that had for many years suppressed the lower branch as the weaker ones who were not to be the successors of the Hyuuga clan. He had reached the level of Jounin in incredible amounts of time, and that meant that heh ad a talent that could rarely be found in any village. That was why it was that he had been paired with a foolish taijutsu user like Rock Lee, who could hardly understand the different types of jutsus, let alone perform them. Rock Lee may have had exceptional strong fist style, but with Neji and his soft fist style it was easy to handle ninjutsu and genjutsu much more effectively and deal with the situation as it called for. Thinking about it further, Neji had the Byakugan, one of the most sacred eye techniques which allowed one to see directly through an attack or either the genjutsu or ninjutsu, with an almost non existent blind spot present. That was why he would be able to ascend and take on missions with such ease, completing them as easily as the records said he had, and yori was well aware of the uses of someone whose raw talents was as far ahead as his own. yori intended to prove that as a member of the Maya clan and as a member of the village hidden in the clouds, he had an equal amount of talent and would ascend just as his predecessors from that hidden leaf had. Meanwhile, he thought of Shikimaru nara again. The economical choice; often sold off as a medium level shinobi, but with powers that far surpassed those of a highly elite jounin if one were to focus properly in battle. He'd heard that the man completed countless missions, all using his simple shadow possession jutsus and his mind, which always thought many steps ahead of the game. He was born into a clan with an exceptional ability of course, but yori knew that it was more than that which made them deadly in battle, and it was in their minds where their true power lay since their clan had a tendency to be made of lazy bumbs who rarely learned a vast majority of the jutsus available to them. It was said that a nara could analyze an opponent in two minutes flat if they were an elite jounin level with hundreds of jutsus. It was also said tha anything of a lesser rank didn't even stand a chance against their analytical minds. yori had known that they would be a valuable source of power if they ever made any alliances with outside villages, but they were a clan that seemed to be especially tied to the Hokage and never seemed to think of the possibilities of betraying their village, something that could have rewarded them handsomely. They were often heard of as the most legendary of the Konoha for success rates on missions, even if they weren't assigned the most high class ones, and when they were given the most rare they were often supported by those who had the talent to back them up, their clan having been closely tied to two others for a number of years already. A battle behind mastermind shinobi was a battle that was already won before it ever started, and it wasn't too hard to say that because of the Nara clan, the village hidden in the clouds had suffered a great deal of losses during the last war. More so than even when they fought the Hyuugas, who had ended their attempt to force the villages into war once more, and even more so than deadly forces like the legendary seven swordsmen and those powers which were suppose to be the trump cards of the villages. That was why someone got the most out of their money if they asked for one of the Nara clan, and that was why in a world where yori made the most Elite shinobi band together with the most elite shinobi, they would be included amongst the best, and never pegged as anything less than what true talent they were actually made of. The Nara were the most elite of the elite, and in the future yori could only hope that he would come to be allied with one of them in his struggle against the world to bring a more fair order to things. Even now the village hidden in the clouds was partially kept in check by these outstanding clans that made up the village hidden in the leaf, and if any of them were ever to weaken their faith in the village even a little bit, then the possibilities for war between multiple villages would come again. In that glory naniyori would be capable of rising, and in doing so he would be capable of making himself one whose influence even extended into new villages and those who had long stood against the cloud, causing clans to branch and come to him at long last. The goal of Raikage was far too low for him, but he wished to make his clan proud, and simply by serving in missions that benefited the lightening country would never make him what he wished to be. That was why he needed fuel, fuel to throw on the fire and bring about what it was that would give all shinobi a purpose again. The hidden sand village had once considered it a wise decision, and yori couldn't argue with those whose powers were as exceptional as theirs, whose fame in the last great war was well deserved. yori had heard that they wind country was exceptionally powerful in their shinobi military force before the end, but like in the country of lightening they had become weak after the truces were forged by the hidden leaf. If they could only gain some powers, then they might rise to glory once more, and take back the world that all shinobi eagerly awaited, one in which they could carve their names into the flesh of their enemies, rather than into the stone mountainsides that the village of Konoha was so proud of. And first of all, naniyori needed to practice the jutsus of the village hidden in the leaf, so that he would be able to awaken even greater power and prove that he was beyond what they charged him as, calling him a lowly Genin when his prowess surpassed that of even some of the most elite ninja. It was his duty as a shinobi to make himself strong, and it was his duty as a man to see through his convictions until the end. Fe wshinobi could realize that in the pampered world that they were now living in and that was why it required a large blade, sharp blade to cut through the ignorant peace that resided on the land and stir the fires of war that were still fresh. Even if he had to do it by bringing about a new war, and abandoning his village, something that he loathed the idea of and thus was in no way ready to leap into action to perform, yori would cause the wars to spring forth again, and that required the power to be one of the kages, or even at the level of a kage without the respectful following. yori wished for the respect of being one of the might however, and that meant that going about things the right way would be the only thing for him to do, for now at least. In time he might think of greater goals, but the world did not rally against a villain, and that was the reason that he would have to keep his mind and actions in check, while reminding himself as well that just because people came from different villages, it didn't necessarily mean that they were non respectable scum that should not have been forgiven. Even so a watch had to be put on, because as the terrain and regions changed with the people who lived within them, one could no longer see clearly what lay within the minds of the ones they served. It was best to wait it out while increasing your own strength, at your own pace..
Blue Impact: complete Leaf Rising Wind: complete Kage Bushin No Jutsu:Complete 1,000 Years of Pain: complete 3200 cp 32 paragraph
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Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2008 11:01 am
Komen stretched his arms a bit as he followed the Anbu member to the training area where all jounin class ANBU members trained. He was glad to have bee n given this honor to train with some of the most elite of the shinobi in hidden leaf. He looked around to see a sparce amount of ANBU training here. Most of them looked new like he was. This somewhat made Komen a bit more relaxed as he was not the only one that was here for the first time. He walked and followed this Anbu Shinobi until they stood before an older man. Komen knew that this man was the master and bowed before him.
2/4 Zodiac Formation: Horse Technique (Koudoutari Kessei: Uma no Jutsu)
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Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2008 11:05 am
Komen rose from his bow as the old man nodded to Komen, "I heard you caught one of the ANBU members in a chase." He said as komen nodded back to the old man, "Yes, that is correct. I gave pursuit to this fellow Anbu and captured him using all of my skills and all my crafts." He said as he stood there waiting to see what the old man would say to Komen at this point in time. The old man smirked as he was somewhat surprised that this happened to someone that just turned into a Jounin not too long ago. "Very well done. Do you know the Jounin level techniques?"
3/4 Zodiac Formation: Horse Technique (Koudoutari Kessei: Uma no Jutsu)
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Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2008 11:09 am
Komen shook his head as he had no real clue. He had only turned into a Jounin only a short time ago. He had no real teacher than who he could convince to teach him. "Hmmm. That is a problem." He said as he looked toward the Anbu shinobi that was captured only moments ago by Komen himself, "Hmmm you shall teach him the basics of the Zodiac techniques. Do this and I shall bestow upon him the marks of the Anbu." He siad as the Anbu Shinobi nodded and bowed to the old man, "Right away Sensei." He said as he rose from his bow and looked toward Komen.
4/4 Zodiac Formation: Horse Technique (Koudoutari Kessei: Uma no Jutsu) learned
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Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2008 9:32 pm
yori turned his head, looking into the woods as he thought for a moment that he had heard something, but shrugged it off when he saw nothing. Apparently the shinobi from the hidden cloud had been far more uneasy around his natural enemies than he thought, and he realized it must have been affecting his work. Turning around again, he breathed deeply and began to shrug off the effects of the cold chill that had run down his spine, from the days that seemed to hold less and less warmth, and began to focus again as he thought about the technique that he would next take into account, it being a formidable one on the battlefield. yori had heard of the effectiveness of the genjutsus of the shinobi of the village hidden in the leaves, when they actually introduced the leaves, the element their village was founded on, but he had never personally used them. Now seemed like the appropriate time, and yori began to form the handseals, opening his eyes with a bloodthirsty look stuck within them. "This is a technique that will be very valuable. Now, Hell Viewing Jutsu!" yori said, forcing the leaves around him to pick up, but only slightly. The shinobi made a sound of disgust at his own failure to use the technique properly, and began to strike the handseals again as he thought about it. "Genjutsu Release" What had went wrong? He decided the best answer was to go throug the basic steps as he began to do the handseals for practice. First was the basic motion of the handseals to build up the energy required, which even now he could feel he was doing right. It took a few, but when done correctly it didn't matter how many times he did them, because they were following the right pattern to build up the chakra in the manner that it needed to be released. Second, yori had to make sure he focused the chakra in the right proportions. To do so, he felt the two energies within his body beginning to build together, forming an innocent form of energy that was channeled through the handseals. Finally was the materialization of the energy he was building up to combine through the handsigns. He struck the final handsign once more, deciding that his practice on this final step had not been thorough enough, and spoke the name of the technique again as he threw his hand upwards. As he did so, the leaves blew around, and yori felt the chakra release in an even flow to create a genjutsu. Satisfied with the technique for now, leaving it as it was as one of the arts that would come in handy against someone whose weakness lay in the leaf shinobi, yori decided to once again advance his training. The next was a quick set of techniques. "Taobidogi!" He said, pulling forth as croll and summoning weapons. Once that was done, he smirked and leaped in the air, practicing the second level. "Rising Twin Dragons!" He said, throwing out a number of weapons with the art. He'd learned a great deal of the arts of the leaf shinobi, but now yori understood why it was so difficult to keep such a large repertoire of ninjutsus and genjutsus, and why even with them it was hard to fight a prolonged battle against the enemies. yori knew now that it took a lot of chakra in order to use so many useful abilities in battle, so if he was going to use a great deal of power in a battle, it might be better to use that power in a focused attack that used a lot of energy at once, rather than wasting it with a number of minor abilities. Deciding that the best course of action lay in mastering a number of skills with such large amounts of chakra in well maintained control, yori ran the handsigns thorugh his head again for one he'd heard of and seen the handsigns for, but that his master had never actually been able to use. It was one that used the sage like ability to draw in natural chakra, and thus it was very hard on the body. Finishing the handseals, although performing them slowly to ensure he hadn't missed a step, yori nodded and slammed his hand into the ground, feeling the chakra send itself out through the area in the exact fashion he had envisioned, steadying itself as he put an immense amount of concentration into keeping the chakra in an even distribution rather than in the greatest amount of power that he could muster. Grinning as it began to materialize, covering the entire area exactly as he had planned, yori shouted. "Now! Toad Mouth Binding!" He shouted, forcing the materialization of the great mountain toad, one of the most used skills of the sages in keeping people for interrogation. yori nodded satisfactorily, viewing the inside of the stomach that many people could never escape from. That trap was now his to use against his opponents, and the shinobi let the release go as he brought his hands together, patting the dirt and bits of slime from the toad off of them as the dust and cloud of smoke from the partial summon was whisked away. With that out of the way, the shinobi laughed and paused, taking some time in order to adjust himself physically to the releasing of chakra that he was performing in the area. Once he was done, yori sighed and sat down. After a moment of drinking and thoughtfully wondering what it was that he was missing, yori began to run a hand through his hair. Then he remembered, that the same sage that had used the toad mouth binding was also known for his ability to turn his long hair into a weapon. yori smirked, realizing that he too had kept his hair long enough for it to be a particularly powerful weapon, and thought about how a jutsu like that might be performed. Thinking about it, the Underworld Guardian Spikes would probably require intense chakra manifested in the hair, but it would have to be solid so that it did not give when it was struck. yori nodded at the thought, feeling his chakra with a good bit of new energy within it as his training reached its natural next step, one that would allow him to use the skills of ninjutsu to defend himself. From the beginning he had been working on learning new ways to destroy his opponent, but if he practiced this art he would have a far more direct way to defend himself with the ninjutsus he'd learned, and that was why the Underworld Guardian Spikes now seemed to be such a useful skill. yori stood, cracking his shoulder and rotating it a few times to allow it to loosen, before he formed simple handseal, more for the focus that it gave him than the actual need to form them with such an ability. "Well then...Underworld Guardian Spikes." yori said, letting his chakra intensify and harden into a highly physical form, his green hair suddenly becoming coarse and tense, before splitting out in a shell that could defend him. Although he did not use his chakra to forcefully grow it to defend from all sides now, yori knew that on the opposite side of him there lay a very deadly defense, which would provide for shelter from back attacks. Letting the chakra go, and losing the stamina it required to maintain, yori nodded and felt his hair return to normal. With it having split his headband, yori quickly grabbed a new ribbon, forcing his hair up into the form that it had been in before, before rapping it tightly and smirking. The techniques of the legendary toad sage might have proven far more valuable to the user of the hidden cloud's jutsus after all, and yori felt that it was an accomplishment if he was able to use more than just the two techniques that he'd just practiced in a real fight, without too much extra training. What would they say if they knew that a Genin from the village hidden in the clouds was capable of using such mighty jutsus in battle? yori only gave a dark smirk in response to the thoughts, and instantly decided that it was time to further the Underworld's skills that he would be able to use if he was going to reach that accomplishment all by himself. Forming the necessary handseals, yori thought about what it was he was going to do next. When he came to a loss, the shinobi's hands suddenly stopped their rapid movements, and in time he shook his head, amazed that he could begin and stop it all so suddenly as he forget, ignorantly what it was he was going to use. After a few moments of acting like a bumbling fool he nodded, remembering, not needing to voice his displeasure with his stupid behavior when there was no one around. Forming the handseals quickly once more, yori smirked and slammed his hand into the ground, shouting. "Swamp of the Underworld!" He shouted, the ground in the large vicinity of cut down trees instantly turning into a treacherous muck that he knew even he wouldn't be able to pass through. yori was willing to bet that the muck was also chakra infused and would thus making the abilities like water walking useless, making it an extremely deadly trap to anyone who fell in. It was a technique that befited that toad sage that had come from the village hidden in the leaves, whose skills had made him a legendary Sannin. But someone who didn't possess such a unique title had now performed it, and he was sure that he could apply it easily as well. There was very little that he accepted he couldn't do, as a ninja of the Hidden Cloud and as one of the proudest warriors in the world. yori still had no use for basic battle summons, however, he had never used them and he was beginning to believe that he might not be able to unlock the abilities of a summon if he didn't at least verse himself in some basic practice. There was a very simple one, and biting the tip of his thumb gently to cause blood flow, yori slammed his hand into the ground. "Toad Summoning Jutsu!" He shouted, causing a large toad, although not one of enormous size as he'd heard legends tell of, to appear before him. yori nodded and smirked again, before letting the toad be dismissed. It hadn't asked questions, and as long as it didn't speak he wasn't willing to answer it in return. Their relationship would be one in which the weapon was used for war, and that was all that it required when summoning something like the toad. Now that he was out of the techniques that the toad sage had crafted on his own, or learned from some other great descendant of carnage however, yori sighed and raised a thumb to his chin, thinking. There was only the next technique that had been designed and perfected by the toad's sages students for him to try, and beyond it was a number of variations that he would be able to use if he was capable of mastering the technique. he'd heard it was an A rank skill because of it's size manipulation, so yori had to be careful when learning it. Extending his hand, yori began to focus deeply upon the palm of his hand. He'd once heard to focus on popping a water balloon when learning to use the technique, but he had no novelty items around. Then he was told that, if successful in getting the chakra to rotate in different directions, one could possibly pop a ball by compressing it even further. These two steps were ones that any trained shinobi knew how to do, but the students of the toad sage had not had that common sense of a shinobi already apparently. Even so, yori did and that left only the third stage, forming a constant sphere to keep the spacial compression while increasing the chakra inside of it in order to create a new attack with incredible power. yori began to focus on his palm, the ball forming quickly enough, but the chakra quickly burst into different directions. yori cursed, and extended his hand agian. "Well then, I'll get this to work if it's the last thing I do. Come on...Rasengan!" yori shouted, forming the energy into the ball and forcing the chakra down onto it, keeping the circle a constant sphere that he refused to allow to burst. fter a moment, it stayed and Naniyori smirked, running his other thumb across his nose snidely. "Well then, that's that for the legendary technique." He said, holding the Rasengan that stayed constant. There was another form of the technique however, three to be exact, and yori had intentions of using all three of them if he was capable of. That said, yori began to focus on the Rasengan in his hand further, but even so he couldn't manage to form the technique any larger than it had been before. yori considered the method that they had used before to improve it, but from what he'd heard there was nothing. Cursing as he decided to focus on the Rasengan was used by the old one, and what skills he used most commonly, yori continued to ponder for a moment before smirking, and snapping his finger. Raising his other hand, yori focus a small portion of chakra. "Kage Bushin no jutsu" he stated calmly, forming another clone that would take care of the rest. It was the most common tactic of the last student of the toad sage, to combine shadow clones with nearly everything he did. A moment later the clone began to strike his palm above the rasengan in hand, and yori focused his chakra increasingly until the two efforts became one, and he felt the compilation of their efforts bound together by the technique that he was about to use. The rasengan in his hand began to increase in size so much so that it had a whole new power level, and when he felt that it was time yori smirked, raising it above his head. "Now try this! Oodama Rasengan!" yori shouted, slamming the technique into the ground and sending a wave of energy into the atmosphere as the crater below him formed from thei mpact of his technique, its size a huge hole in comparison to what he might have done before. yori grinned in satisfaction, having reached a third of his goal as he prepared to increase the power of his attack, or at least the effectiveness of the Rasengan by learning it's versatility in battle. What was primarily a close range attack could be turned into a mid range attack with the right other means, and yori knew exactly what it took for the other one. Sitting down at a tree and popping a cork out of a bottle of saki, yori smirked and took a drink, something he was usually opposed to. Once the drink was done, yori lifted his hand, beginning to create another rasengan that would be far different than the previous one. Raising his head, yori suddenly seemed to remember the shadow clone, and waved his other hand a bit apologetically. "Um, be a dear and disappear now. Ehe..." yori said, causing the shadow clone to nod and disappear. Picking up the saki with his now free hand, yori looked at the rasengan, and paused for a moment. "Well this should work then...Gouen Rasengan!" He shouted, throwing his fist forward with the Rasengan, and throwing the bottle of saki at it as well. When the spiraling attack and the saki meshed together, a whirlwind formed that sent forth a number of flames that would burn down any opponent in his way. yori grinned, letting the ball of chakra fade from his grasp. yori stood, sighing as he did so. he'd used too much compressed chakra now, and needed a better skill to use. Raising his hand as he bit the same place as before, he decided to practice the summoning jutsu so that he would be ready when the time cme. "Summoning jutsu!" He shouted, slamming his hand into the ground as he did so. A moment later a puff of smoke appeared, followed by nothing. yori sweat dropped, raising his hand. "W-what is this...apparently I need to make a pack before I use this technique." yori said, laughing a bit nervously at his own fault. Once he was done with the practice of his summoning jutsu though, yori knew he'd be at a loss once more and require the use of some more interesting abilities to sustain his trainign while he was at it. The best thing to do now was to search out the answer to the final rasengan, and he had very little aid in that one. It was said tha by combining the rasengan, a spacial technique with an elemental technique, the Rasen-shuriken could be formed. But it was an extremely difficult technique, that few people had used before. yori grinned imposingly once more, knowing that it was the exact form of technique that he could use with ease, if an idiotic like the one who had always run around claiming to be hokage was any indication of what the technique took to become perfection. yori stood, focusing his chakra into the point on his hand once more, and felt the energy increasing readily. yori let out a loud shout as the rasengan formed and his other hand raised, forming a shadow clone. With the rasengan compelte, the shadow clone began to focus the elemental chakra, a tactic that would work perfectly he assumed. The only way to do two exact opposite things at the same time, was to form two entirely different people, and the shadow clones allowed for such an oddity to exist. "Now, wind release: Spiraling Shuriken!" yori shouted, turning and slamming the release into the tree behind him. As he did so, ti was enveloped in a storm so mighty that it literally seemed to disintegrate. yori was thrown back by the unexpected rush of power, and clutched his arm, cursing at the strain. Still, he had done something that was so impossible, and now he would be able to use a powerful jutsu at the times of greatest need. yori's clone quickly ran to his side, checking to ensure the health of the first. yori looked up at the one who seemed so worried, and smirked as if it was a humorous sight to him. "Don't worry...I'm everything I need to be." He said. Even so, he was quickly assisted over to a new resting point, where Naniyori grit his teeth as he felt a shooting pain run through his arm when it was jossled by him resting against the tree. yori's cloen quickly pulled forth the bandages that it needed and started work on his arm, and Naniyori gazed into the sky where the eagle he had seen earlier now flew from. it was obviously a messenger bird, and he paused, thinking mutely what it would be like to be such a creature, that soared above the clouds and ignored the screams of men and their lives, the ones that were so pointless as a whole. The second yori finished rapping the tape around his arm and began to put it in a sling, but yori simply stared off into the distance still, before looking down at his clone. "So I wonder what it is a clone has to think about while it's in existence. Why is it you don't care about being desummoned anymore, huh?" yori asked, but the other one looked at him as it slipped the strap of the cast over his neck, allowing him to hold his arm safely for now. Then it replied, grinning as it realized the time to vanish again was coming pretty quickly. "Well after all, I'm just you. When I disappear, I'm doing nothing more than stopping being a severed piece, and returning to my body. But then even so, whether you or I are only a part of a soul, wouldn't you like to think I'm going to come out one more time? And then I'll destroy your enemies." It said, confident in it's words. yori nearly laughed at the pompous nature of the clone, which in turn reflected himself. Thinking back on the technique that damaged his arm, he didn't find it a hard concept to understand. A technique that fused two things that were exactly opposite and meant to never come together, a rasen-shuriken had to take a heavy toll when it was used. yori was going to restrict his use of it in the future, but for now he felt confident in the power he had earned from the technique. Looking towards teh city, he wondered what it was that was making such a ruckus that it had been unsafe for so long, but now things seemed to be in a constant state of hesitation, and he was sure that he didn't want to find out what the power that drew everyone towards it was. It wasn't as much a feeling like any other, as it might have been closest to the wind shuriken he had just used that was made up of the rasengan. The fact was, when used it felt like you were being sucked into the attack, it's unnatural existence wanting to draw something unique in to make it it's own existence, but that was why ti hit so hard. It was a technique of practically non-existence and that was how it disintegrated the enemy or whatever it taught. Whatever was ahead was obviously a beast that sought to destroy, and in turn that destruction would be a source of non-existence, making tehm similar. It wasn't like some of the techniques he'd just learned though, and Naniyori laughed at the antitheses that existed in all of his new techniques. For one, the technique to summon a toad, or a creature in general actually summoned into existence, rather than annihilated like the one that he had used before. Realizing such an anti-existence could occur, yori smirked and wonder just how far up the chain of ascension a summon in turn could go, just as the techniques and ninjutsus of such power could end up being further and further close to the weapons of hell. Perhaps the thing he couldn't understand about the ninjutsus were the things that made them oppposite, and only teh sages were probably capable of experiencing the ultimate life bringing jutsus in the same way that there was a jutsu that was capable of utterly destroying life. It was only hoped that such powers could not bring about absolute destruction and upset the balance of power the world always held. The world liked to keep itself balanced, but it never seemed to account for the tools known as shinobi who broke the rules preset for man and ascended above what they were born for. If there was a god, his hate must have been brimming at these constant insults, the ones that said that no man could be bound by that which was greater than him, and shinobi were the very existence of this contradiction...the weak, overcoming the strong... yori knew that beyond the balance of life and death that the skills of a shinobi constantly walked, teh skills that were capable of doing amazing things, there were other contradictions that existed that even he would have a chance at trying to overcome, to make attacks like the one he'd just learned for himself. The most prominent of these was the well known skill of genjutsu as the hell viewing technique that he'd recently learned to use. A genjutsu was normally meant to make the opponent see nothing but what the user meant for them to, but there were skills that combined a genjutsu with basic ninjutsu elements, and it became a deadly weapon that he would see on the battlefield, very likely, and hopefully on his enemies rather than himself. One of these was the skill of the Yamagana clan that involved crushing the minds of the user, a basic genjutsu element, and then the ability to turn them against themself, soemthing that was equivalent to the shadow possessing jutsu that was very common, and used the basic elements of ninjutsu. yori knew that these combined styles were thins that made techniques vicious, and they would be close to, if not necessarily at the level of the combined spacial and elemental attacks. yori had also practiced the illusionary attacks of harming a person throug htheir worst fears, in the bug element jutsu that he had recently learned, and if something like that was used with the hell viewing jutsu then it would make an attack of amplified pain for the viewer, which made genjutsu even fiercer weapons that only the most experienced needed. yori sighed, standing and stretching as he prepared to test his body once more. yori threw a few punches with his good hand, before swing around and hitting a few kicks against the tree he'd been using for a brace while sitting to rest. Once he was sure that htey were good, he pulled the cast he'd placed on himself off, and threw a punch or two with his hurt arm. It hurt he noted, but it was something that he could get over, considering he had an important amount of training and such to get to if he wanted to stay at the lead of his village. He was born to be the head of the Mayanari clan, and he had to be the strongest of all of them if he was to live up to the role he had been given at his birth. he'd already been cast aside as a failure, but yori had no intentions of never giving up, and proving that he was more than worthy of the title of the head of their clan, and of being one of the mighty kage that ruled the villages that the shinobi often emerged from. He was one of the proudest shinobi out there, and he'd taken this time to master a number of skills that no one would ever be able to doubt. He smirked , leaping up to a tree where he would finally be able to get a view of the village within the walls. Once he noticed the sight of Sin however, all of yoir's bravado changed. "Um, perhaps I should leave." yori said loudly, reminding himself of the last time they'd met. The last time he had seen the beast Sin, he had been on the hunt for his missing friend. He had journeyed into the damnable Omega Ruins in the search for the monster that he'd heard his friend was trying to slay. When he'd arrived however, there was a vicious beast trying to stop them, so they had put an end to it together. After that, it had faded and the true one was found, after an incredible search through the massive caverns. He had found Omega, a chanting man who had turned into a demon of malice, and although he didn't know the story behind Omega it had instantly engaged them in battle. But before he could do anything further against the beast, it had joined itself to the monster that he now saw inside the city, making a powerful fusion that was said to be an immortal god of death. yori wasn't one to be foolish, and casting his blade against the hide of a creature that was nearly the size of a village was something that he couldnt' do at this time. Even if he was a kage or wanted to prove himself capable of felling the nine tails fox and the like, it wasn't time for him to do something like that yet. He still had much more to accomplish, and it was entirely within his mind to escape now, and come back when the beast had been felled. He was still no elite after all...merely someone whose rate of growth would not be limited. 72 paragraph 7200 cp
Mass Replication:complete Oodama Rasengan: complete Uzumaki Naruto 2000 Hit Combo:complete Exploding Shadow Clones:complete Sleep Fighting Skill:complete Leaf Thunder Fist:complete Forward Lotus Technique:complete Action:complete
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Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2008 1:18 pm
Name: Zodiac Formation: Bird Technique (Koudoutari Kessei: Tori no Jutsu) 400 Skill Points: Genjutsu (Hand to Hand-Long Range) (ANBU/HUNTER/MEDIC ONLY) Using the hand seal (Tori), the user makes the opponent feel 2 reactions: if the technique is successful, a calming breeze is felt slipping through the opponents mind, it will lull them to sleep (the weaker in rank or closer to death the opponent is, the better this side works) The sleep lasts for 10 turns unless the Opponent uses Kai (lessens sleep to 1 turn, any motion to the body will awaken it regardless, unless MEDIC is working on them). If the attack is unsuccessful in putting the opponent to sleep, it feels like 1000 birds are chirping in their ears, disorienting the opponent for 2 turns. LEARNED
Komen was walking through the ANBU headquarters as he was looking about. He was glad to have been accepted so willingly in the arms of the ANBu headquarters. He had thought that he would have to do more rigiorious training to get into ANBU. He was somewhat glad and somewhat disappointed about this little event. Komen looked over to see more people training i the art of the sword. Komen was very intrigued as he really wanted to learn the art of the sword. At first, he wanted to learn the speed arts of the Hunter Nin, but the Anbu seemed to be a better organization to go under. They had the skills, the swords, the prestiges training and of course one of the many masks. Komen hoped to find some better techniques here than ot in the world,but he knew that all techniques had their own strength and that everyone of them were weak and powerful in their own right and regard. Komen looked toward the Anbu member he was following and stretched his arms a bit, "So What is the next technique i need to learn?" He asked as he was curious as well as extremely excited. The Anbu was looking back as he was almost their to the location he was ordered to bring Komen Usai to. "The technique is called Zodiac Formation: Bird Technique or Koudoutari Kessei: Tori no Jutsu. Komen was listening as it sounded like a very interesting and cool Technique. "What does the technique do?" Komen asked as they stopped. "The way I will be teaching you, is that you must experience the technique first hand and develop it on your own. This is the best way for you to experience and learn techniques from me." The ANBU said with all seriousness. Komen wasn't afraid as he was ready to learn from this ANBU member whenever he was ready. Komen nodded to the ANBU member, "I understand, I am ready whenever you are ready ANBU Sensei." Komen said with a respectful bow. Komen rose as the ANBU trainer was beginning his lesson of this technique. Komen was bracing himself for anything as he was watching the ANBU's hands closely. The ANBU trainer was doing the Handseals slowly at first so Komen could get the gist of the needed handsigns.
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Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2008 1:38 pm
Zodiac Formation: Rat Technique (Koudoutari Kessei: Ne no Jutsu) 500 Skill Points: (ANBU/HUNTER/MEDIC ONLY) After a three series of hand seals (Dragon, Boar, Rat) the user can expel a cloud of gray haze from their mouth, which serves several functions. One is it obscures the battlefield for 8 turns, making it difficult for both opponents to see. In the first 2 turns, if not guarded or healed, the gray haze is actually a poison that can kill the opponent (need to throw 1 die, 10 sided, on 8th post, if 1 or 10, the person lives)
Once the ANBU trainer was finished with his set of Handseals, a sound was beginning to reverberate in his ears. His innate techniques of genjutsu deflection was a bit too powerful for him to be stuck in it. But the technique itself was powerful enough to disorient Komen. Komen couldn't hear anything except the chirping of a thousand birds in his ears. It was almost deafening as his eye was twitching. He was trying to keep it together as this sound was reverberating within his head. It only aided to piss Komen off in a way since this was very annoying. Komen had memorized the handseals as the effects were beginning to fade away. He was glad as the sound had finally stopped. he breathed a sigh of relief as he shook his head a bit as the sound gave him a small yet pounding head ache. "I thinkI got it. I will try it on you now ANBU sensei." He said as the ANBU trainer nodded. The Anbu trainer was bracing himself as Komen was beginning to accomplish the technique. With each moment that passed, Komen was performing a quick set of handseals. This technique required little handseals, but it did require a good deal of concentration to be performed accurately. A few moments later, Komen was performing the technique. The Anbu, not being as powerful as Komen was struck with the base portion of the technique. Komen watched as the Anbu tactician was getting struck with the base technique as he was groaning in pain.
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Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2008 3:25 pm
[...A Far Off Memory Is Like A Scattered Dream...] They had arrived, she had lead him here against her wishes, but knowing she would be the only one able to complete this part of their mission. "You can wake-up now Kyoshou-chan. You should never forgive someone like me," The words felt like they were whispered in his ear and her hand was running across his cheek. Kyoshou would find that his eyes had been closed and that their journey had been different then what he had imagined it had been. They stood here on the border of his homeland and the fire country. Shisui had brought Kyoshou to the Valley of the End, the huge statues towered above, speaking of legends long past. Rain fell from the sky, as if the heavens weeped too for those three hearts that would never be whole again. His voice sounded so exhausted, like he was a man who had seen too much in his short lifespan. "I told you once Kyoshou-kun. I needed you to be the hero of this generation... I could never be that person." Kyoshou would find three people standing behind them, all dressed in cloaks of onyx and crimson, the clouds like deep red blood on the fabric. The man standing at their head was the man he had trusted, maybe even called friend, Koujin. Standing at his back stood Shisui who had her face buried in the shoulder of the third wearing the same mask as always it was clear that this was Adonis. Shisui's body was wracked by sobs as she refused to look on at the confrontation. Koujin looked back for a moment at them before continuing. "It's partly my fault, I should have never left their side. It's not fair that you have to pay the price for our sins, but there is no other choice... in the end isn't that the penultimate purpose of each generation's hero? To sacrifice their everything for the sake of the new generation?" Koujin drew a blade from his hip, it glowed with what seemed to be an inner light even here in the overcast valley. Koujin stared at Kyoshou with eyes that flashed with so many emotions that finally quelled simply showing regret for the things that had yet to pass.
"If you ever cared for Shisui... surrender now and save her the pain of us forcing you..."
Koujin leveled the blade at Kyoshou, his feet sliding into a fighting stance in the sand of the beach, there was no turning back now, no old friends, no last words, no memories...only a sad emptiness that would haunt him till the end of his days.
[...I Want To Line The Pieces Up Yours And Mine...]
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Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2008 4:18 pm
Kyoushou wearily opened his eyes. The sound of waves lapping up against his shoes soothed Kyoshou like a lullaby. He turned to follow Shisui as she fled behind three strangers. Kyoshou was frozen in his tracks as his eyes moved up the cloaks recognizing the pattern of scarlet clouds. Then a familiar voice spoke. A voice Kyoshou had not heard in two whole years. For a moment, his heart lurched with delight. That is until he realized that voice came from one of the figures cloaked in the epitome of betrayal. The old conch apparently glued to Kyoshou's back shuddered as it too recognized the voice from so long ago. His eyes darted to two of the figures before resting on Koujin's sickly profile. The Gekkou had made it very clear words wouldn't resolve this. With one swift motion, Kyoshou pulled back one of his long sleeves revealing the Charon's Claw gauntlet forged into his melody arm. "Before we start I want to give you one last shot: Go back to the village now. This isn't the path you have to take" His voice was void of anger or sadness. Not concerned or regretful. Kyoshou didn't need a tone to convey his message. If his 'friend' had even the tinyest glimmer of memory of the last words he spoke to Kyoshou 'I'll bring her back to you' he would realize he wasn't locked into a corner of bad decisions. Sadly for Kyoshou, Koujin had clouded his mind of all ties they once had. Kyoshou really didn't want to fight who he considered a 'best friend'. The silvery pendant hidden underneath Kyoshou's numerous layers felt warm against his chest in a sort of resonance to Koujin's own pendant. This only sent waves of painful memories flooding over Kyoushou as he remembered his brief but heartfelt partnership with Koujin in an Alliance that had long been forgotten.
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Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2008 4:50 pm
Akou Rose, Ella, Reina Rose Reina stands outside of the Hidden Leaf Hospital just staring. "Reina?" Reina turns her head to the left slightly to see Hinata staring at her with concerned eyes. "Hello Hinata." "A woman named Ella brought in your son. She had black hair and wore a dreary black dress and-" "I know her. Where is he?" "Well, we had to run a few tests on him but he's resting in his hospital room now. I can take you." Reina looks at Hinata as she strokes the stone in her left hand. Hinata was wearing her medical ninja uniform: an all white attire with a short sleeved white button up shirt, baggy white pants, and dickeys. She was carrying a small hand bag and a tray full of coffee. She had a sun cap on and she was facing Reina, having come from the side door. She must be on her lunch break and just went out for coffee. "No. I can find him." "I'm sure you can." "What's wrong with him?" "I'm not sure just yet. The doctor is in the room with him right about now." She looks at her watch. "If you hurry then you can catch him before he leaves in two minutes." "Time isn't important when it comes to getting somewhere, Hinata. Anyway, so what was he doing when he first came?" "He was throwing up a lot. And groaning. He kept mumbling something about worms but I couldn't make it out. He kept throwing up. Ella said he had been eating a lot of sandwiches really quickly. Ham sandwiches. He seemed perfectly fine until she mentioned taking him to the hospital. That was when she said he first started moaning. There's something wrong with his stomach, that's all that I can tell you." "He's stopped throwing up?" "Not completely. His vomiting has lessened some and he isn't moaning as loudly as before. But..." she trails off. "But what?" "I just think he's suppressing his pain. That, and I believe he's fatiguing. That could be why he isn't moaning as loudly. And not t mention his body lacks nutrition." "I'm going to head up there now. You can go back to your break." Her eyes bulge. "Th-thanks." With that, Reina disappears. A man with white hair begins to exit a patients room when Reina appears in their path. "I have some questions for you, Doc," Reina states pushing the doctor back into the room. She removes her hand from his chest and begins to speak when she hears moaning. "Akou," she whispers turning her head to her right to see Akou laying in a hospital bed. She grimaces noticing the array of wires and machines hooked up to Akou. There was a mask on his face and his eyes were slits. He could barely see her but he smiled weakly. Reina's faces flushes red a moment before Reina clenches her fists a few times and breaths in and out slowly. "Mam-" "Don't say anything for a moment," she growls. Despite her being freed of Naomi, Reina still had an issue with her temper especially when it came to Akou. In the Afterlife she learned how to channel her anger though now was different. She couldn't take her anger out on anyone present in the room. Reina's eyes narrow as she stops clenching her fists and reaches behind her back. She pulls Anthro, in the form of a rock still, from behind her and tosses it to Ella who sat by the window across from her. Ella, her head down, extends a hand and catches the rock. Without a word she flickers out of the open window on the sixth floor. The doctor gazes around confused and a bit frightened; yet he did not call for help. "One would usually call for help in such a scenario." "Never helped anyone to tattle." Reina smirks a little and turns her gaze on him. "That's my son. I want to know why he's here and what you plan on doing to get him out." His white eyebrows shoot upwards as he stares at Reina. He paces away from her and seemed to be trying to gather his thoughts to create an explanation. He wore the exact same outfit as Hinata though he had a doctors cloak and she didn't. He was young but had naturally white hair that made him appear old. He had silver eyes that seemed to be quite wise and resembled that of a Hyuuga's eyes. "Something it eating away at him." Reina's heart stops suddenly and her vision goes blank. Lines = 39
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Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 12:29 pm
~I don't Like myself much right now...and the world has to pay Drago's walk had lead him here for some reason. He decided to eat here. TO grab a cup of ramen and be along on his way. There was another creature stirring and he could feel it in his bones. His claws tooked in but his sword in hand. He didn't feel like being bothered. So he formed a simple handseal. He changed his appearance to his original Aburame look. Red glasses and all. He looked at leaf and it felt good to be here again. He remembered all the things this village had did for him. He remembered all the bad things too. He remembered dieing for this village. He remembered protecting this village. He remembered Killing for this village. He remember this village labeling his a Missing Nin. He remembered all of this but still he didn't mind being here. He missed it sometimes. He held up no hope for big villages like this though. They always ended up killing themselves. "I am home." He wlaked to ramen stand and ordered a bowl of vegetable Ramen. He ate it slowly and only looked out. Resting for now. ~I don't Like Myself anymore..and the world must pay.~
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Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 7:08 pm
As Zaman's boat passes into Hidden Leaf Village, he raises an eyebrow, looking around at the odd place around him. "Hidden Leaf? Well.. I guess this will be a little interesting." He says to himself, as he stands, grabbing his bladed staff and walking off the boat and onto the docks. Frowning slightly, he leans the black shaft of his bladed staff against his shoulder and begins walking away from the docks and into Hidden Leaf. His hooded black haori's hood was once again resting over his head, so hardly any of his gray-yellow hair was shown. His olive colored eyes slowly searched the street before him as he walks down the street. Though he had not seen many shinobi so far, but he was sure some would show up eventually. His unseen headband was around his neck like a collar, so as to make it hard for people to guess his origin, never mind his clan. After a little while, he notices a place where it seemed to be a long line of people were waiting. Zaman raises an eyebrow, looking at it before walking towards the front of the line, to see what they were waiting for. A signup list? Odd, but what for? He wonders as he reads the information that was across the stall. "AMBU Signups?" He raises an eyebrow slightly, and then turns turns to walk away, mumbling something along the lines of. "How pathetic... No training required, I bet." He says, before chuckling lightly. "Hey you! Yeah, you! Wnat to say that to our faces!?" A man says from the line, as he points to Zaman. Raising an eyebrow, as his white mask copies the movement, Zaman turns and casts his olive eyes on the man, and then the rest in the line before speaking. "Sure.. It's pathetic, how Leaf Village needs untrained civilians to sign up, with no training, and no real skill aside form the occasional bar fight." Zaman says, as the men and woman in the line grow outraged, they couldn't stand people, who made fun of them or their village, come to find out. Zaman laughs, as they run at him, there must be at least ten of them and all charging in a drunk brawl fashion. Ducking around the first strike, he presses three fingers into one man, causing them to drop to the ground, holding their side in pain as the muscle tightens and inhibits their overall movement. Turning and blocking the next attack, he smirks and kicks, hitting this woman in the side, and forcing them away. Though she was dropped only by force, not the skill itself that he was using. Standing again, he spins his bladed staff, careful not to do more then scratches on those that were around him, as he smashed the hardened black steel shaft into the heads of a couple civilians swiftly. And then uses the shaft to deflect a man and his knife, from a well aimed thrust that could have killed Zaman, if not for his swift speed. Smirking, with his white mask gaining it's red markings. With one hand, he dropped the man with the knife to his knees, with the same style as before, causing him to spasm in pain. He spins and slams the blunt edge of the bladed staff into the stomach of one of the men, pushing them away and onto their backs in a huddled mass of agony "Come on.. Two left, can you even land a hit?" He asks in a taunting fashion, as he then rushes forward, spinning the staff then slamming it into the second to last man's knees. A sharp crack proving that at least one was broken. Sighing, Zaman looks down at this man, as he catches and flips the last charging attacker, a female at that. "Sorry.. That was an unexpected injury.. I'm sure someone can get that fixed." Zaman says with a sudden shrug, before turning and walking away down the street. "Well... That was an unneeded fight..." Zaman says as he looks at another line of people, who had just watched the first. "Are you planning to attack me too? I'm not in the mood to fight all of you as well...." Zaman says, as he looks at the group. A few might have been thinking about joining the fight before, but now by looking at the wounded mass of people laying sprawled across the ground behind Zaman, they all must have decided not to do anything. Smirking, Zaman glances at what they were waiting for. "Police? Alright.. Have fun with that.." He says, before he shrugs slightly, raising a hand to dismiss the small line of about eight people before him. "None of you are trying to attack me, so you're not going to make good police..." He says with yet another roll of his shoulders signifying a shrug. Zaman walks past the line, though he notices one male who was reaching for a weapon and thinking about attacking him. Before he even waited for the attack, Zaman swung the staff knocking the man from his feet, and then swinging it down to knock the man out. "Next?" He asks, looking at the rest of the line, who all turn around and face where they should be. Zaman half expected to hear a bunch of people whistling as if they had seen and heard nothing. Zaman shakes his head, turning again as he rests his bladed staff on his shoulder and begins walking away, and down the street again. Raman shop.. Clothing.. Homes.. This was not much different from his own village, aside from the amount of people, and that annoying grouping of heads, against the cliffside behind the village. Frowning, he continues walking again. Once again, seeing a line in the distance, though it only consisted of a few people. "More useless jobs?" He asks, as he walks up to the line of three people. They were all slim males, a fourth was standing in front of the stand, and retrieving a package from a masked man behind the counter. "Hmm... Hunter Nin?" He says, raising an eyebrow and reading over the banner and the like. His Range finder zoomed on the package that they were being held. Interesting... He says with a slight smile that his plain white mask known as Jikokumen. "This... Should be interesting..." He says, as he walks forward and stands in the line. After a long while of waiting, it finally became his turn to stand in line. The man behind the counter's eyebrow rose as he turns to look upon Zaman. "You're willing to join our ranks, even though it seems you should already be a part. Because of your mask?" The man asks, as he looks Zaman over, trying to find out what village he was from. "If you wish to join, fill this out, and then we will look it over, if accepted, you will be given the supplies that you will need to continue." The man says, handing a paper and a writing utensil to Zaman. Leaning forward, Zaman begins answering the questions, and filling out the information. After about twenty minutes, he had everything filled out, and pushed it across the counter to the man. "Done..." Zaman says, as the man then turns and lifts the paper. Suddenly, another man was standing behind the first, also bearing a mask. They both read over the information, nodding to themselves and mumbling things about what Zaman had written, after a couple more minutes, the man that had appeared, vanished again, paper in hand. "Welcome to our little family.." The man says as he reaches under the counter and hands Zaman a package. But before handing it over completely, he pulls a mask away from it, and places it back under the counter. "Yeah, I didn't think I needed that.." Zaman says with a shrug, as the man before him nods. "Everything you need is in there... Along with a book, telling you anyone you may need to hunt." The man says, before looking past Zaman for the next person, though there was none. The man sighs, as he mumbles to himself. "Slow day..." The man says, before dissapearing into the shadows of the stall. Zaman rolls his shoulders in a shrug, as he turns and walks away, heading for a bench of which he could proceed to go through this package he was given. Though all it was, was a little black book, and a second book that was like an instruction manual. Zaman frowns, and slowly shakes his head. What a pathetic organization. He thinks as he sighs and rises to his feet again. He slowly stands and begins walking away. He'll go complain at a later date, perhaps when he decided to leave. For now, he planned to go find a good place that would teach him a few decent amount of jutsu. Smirking slightly, he begins moving at a swift pace, keeping a close watch to what was around him, as he chuckles slightly. He turned on his heel, heading back towards the lines from before, and attacking one, first he took down the closest man with a crack in the back of the head with the black shaft of his bladed staff. Smirking, he cuts into the back of the next in line, all before they could even react. Spinning and knocking that one down as well. Of course, he was not aiming to kill, only to defeat all of them. Settle a bit of annoyance and rage from this circumstance. Spinning the staff, he knocks one of the attackers away, and then the next with ease. He was not playing with them, just attacking almost blindly and taking them down. There was one left, and even he did not stand much of a chance against Zaman's speed and strength. After a few moments of attacking, Zaman turned and leaped, landing on a roof top and flickering away from the area. He was done with this street, all together. He stopped within a large open area, as he turns and drops down, landing on a bench and then sitting down. His masked face looking up at the sky. [75 lines]
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