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 Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 9:31 pm
I'll handle this for you, since you are in my village. ;] You are accepted. Sorry no one got to you quickly.
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Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 9:57 pm
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Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 8:32 pm
 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Kazu, Hiraki
Nickname: None
Age: 19
Birthdate: 3/28
Gender: Male
Height: 68"
Weight: 144lbs
Nindo: "For those who doubted me, I'll show you just how strong I am."
Personality: Kazu is a try hard and a show off. He was raised with high expectations from his parents. He is always willing to settle a dispute with his fists.
Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Taijutsu
Subclass: Medical
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Chakra Pool: 200
Chakra Element: Raiton
Chakra Color: Orange
Chakra Materialization: Kazu's chakra covers his body like a flame and flickers and moves like one as well.
Strengths:
• Offensive Eseijutsu
• Close Combat
Weaknesses:
• Genjutsu
• Fuuton Ninjutsu
Fears:
• Not Living up to His Parent's expectations
• Rejection
Class Attributes:
• Lower Body Training: Speed slightly increased.
• Faulty Precision: Accuracy with techniques slightly increased
Reductions:
• Learn Taijutsu one [1] post faster.
• (Null until Jounin Rank)
Personal Attributes:
• Innate Ability: Kazu, because being raised by both a Medical Nin and a Fuuinjutsu specialist, he learns both [1] Post faster
• High Physical Endurance: Kazu can take several more hits than most other Ninja of his caliber.
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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Eseijutsu : : 00 / 08
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
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Weapon Type: Gauntlets
Weapon Range: 36"
Weapon Weight: 30lbs each.
Weapon Location: Kazu wears them at all times.
Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:
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• Shuriken x15
• Kunai x10
• Explosive Tag Kunai x5
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
Raiton
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Eseijutsu
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▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
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▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
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Kazu was born inside Sunagakure. His father was a sealing ninja whilst his mother was a medical ninja. Kazu was raised in a contemporary style but with high expectations of him. He was expected to try to master both of his parent's specialties, which naturally meant he'd pursue the path of the Medical Nin while also studying Fuuinjutsu.
Kazu entered the academy at age 8. He was able to easily go through the entire academy and graduate by age 12. He learned all the basics and was pretty proficient in his ability to mold and control his chakra. After graduating the academy Kazu had done small time missions in random teams, but hasn't been assigned any credit for any due to him being a stand in. He has awaited to be assigned to an actual team, but for now he has been a substitute for teams going on missions for nearly seven years now. But he feels that through his hard work, he will one day be recognized for his ability and will be able to rise in his recognition in the village.
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[align=left][b][u][color=red]Name:[/u][/b][/color] Hiraki Kazu
[b][u][color=red]Rank:[/u][/b][/color] Genin
[b][u][color=red]Chakra:[/u][/b][/color] 200
[b][u][color=red]Class:[/u][/b][/color] Tai-Med
[b][u][color=red][url=]Profile[/url][/u][/b][/color]
[b][u][color=red]Ryo:[/u][/color][/b] 両 0
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Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2011 4:56 pm
Get rid of the 1 rank stronger thing and it's approved.
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Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2011 4:57 pm
Alright, fixed, anything else?
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Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2011 4:59 pm
iOath Get rid of the 1 rank stronger thing and it's approved.
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Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2011 5:06 pm
iOath iOath Get rid of the 1 rank stronger thing and it's approved.Was just double checking.
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 5:00 pm
 _____________│║║█║▌[ P e r s o n a l - D a t a ]F u l l N a m e : Lunas Yoinokuchi
N i c k n a m e : Bloody Heaven
B i r t h D a t e : January 1st
A g e : 17
G e n d e r : Male
S u m m o n i n g : None
K e k k e i G e n k a i : N/A
E t h n i c i t y : Asian - Korean
E y e C o l o r : White
H a i r C o l o r : Grey
H e i g h t : 6'2"
W e i g h t : 192 lbs
P e r s o n a l i t y : Lunas is generally kind to all he meets. He is willing to help out with any cause he deems worthy, but opposes all he considers wrong. When angered, he does not show it, but he puts more effort into his attacks.
A t t r i b u t e s :
• Class Attribute - Lower Body Training: Speed slightly increased.
• Class Attribute - Willowy: Reflexes and flexibility slightly increased.
R e d u c t i o n s :
• Learn Taijutsu [2] post's faster
P e r s o n a l A t t r i b u t e s :
• Learn Taijutsu [1] post faster
• [2] Additional Ninjutsu Slots
N i n d o : "The lust for power is what keeps us alive, and what kills us."
F a v o r i t e F o o d : Miso Ramen
F a v o r i t e A n i m a l : Wolves
F a v o r i t e C o l o r : White
F a v o r i t e N u m b e r : Six
S t r e n g t h s : Speed, Ninjutsu
W e a k n e s s e s : Fuuton, Raiton
F e a r s : Allowing his comrades to die, drowning
_____________│║║█║▌[ C o m b a t - D a t a ] N i n j a C l a s s : Taijutsu
S u b - C l a s s : Brawler
R a n k : Genin
V i l l a g e : Yukigakure
B l o o d l i n e : N/A
A d v a n c e m e n t - C r e d i t : 0
C h a k r a E l e m e n t s :
• Suiton [ Water ]
• Raiton [ Lightning ]
_____________│║║█║▌[ S t a t i s t i c a l - D a t a ]
• Chakra Reserves | 200
- C o m p l e t e d - M i s s i o n s -
S Rank -- 0
A Rank -- 0
B Rank -- 0
C Rank -- 0
D Rank -- 0
L i m i t a t i o n s :
• N i n j u t s u : : 00 / 01
• G e n j u t s u : : 00 / 00
• T a i j u t s u S t y l es : : 00 / 03
• B u k i j u t s u S t y l e s : : 00 / 00 _____________│║║█║▌[ E q u i p - D a t a ] M a s k: Hidden
H e a d b a n d L o c a t i o n : Neck
H e a d b a n d S t y l e : N/A
H e a d b a n d C o l o r : Snow White
C l o t h i n g S t y l e : ANBU Armor/ Snow White Clothing
A c c e s s o r i e s : Black Leather Gloves, silver bracelet
W e a p o n s : Shuriken x15, Kunai x10, Senbon x5, Wakazashi x7
T o o l s : Smoke Bombs x8, Soldier Pills x2, Exploding Tags x5 , Wire x2
_____________│║║█║▌[ T e c h n i q u e - D a t a ] [ ! ] - B l o o d l i n e - [ ! ][ ! ] - N i n j u t s u - [ ! ][ M a r o u t o n [ N o n - E l e m e n t a l ]
[ E Rank ] Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Jutsu ]
[ E Rank ] Bunshin no Jutsu [ Clone Jutsu ]
[ E Rank ] Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
[ E Rank ] Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
[ D Rank ] Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Jutsu ]
[ D Rank ] Kai [ Release ]
[ ? Rank ]
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[ ? Rank ][ S u i t o n [ W a t e r ]
[ ? Rank ][ R a i t o n [ L i g h t n i n g ]
[ ? Rank ]
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[ S a z a n a m i [ T a i j u t s u ]
[ ? Rank ] Stage One
[ ? Rank ]
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[ K o n o h a - S t y l e [ T a i j u t s u ]
[ ? Rank ] Stage One
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_____________│║║█║▌[ H i s t o r y - D a t a ] F a m i l y :
• Father: Deceased
• Mother: Deceased
• Brother: Deceased
D e f e a t e d N i n j a :
B a c k g r o u n d H i s t o r y :
Lunas Yoinokuchi was born to his parents, Fiona Yoinokuchi and Yashoshi Karamui in the village of Yukigakure. He lived a happy childhood and only trained in the basics of the ways of the shinobi until he was ten years old. His father pushed him heavily in the physical area, making them wear weights at all times. When it seemed that they were getting accustomed to their weights, he would simply add more weight. By the time of his death, he was wearing at least one hundred pounds of weight. Their mother, on the other hand, focused on the area of Taijutsu, chakra control, and control of his emotions. When his parents died and brother, he kept up their parents' traditions. Lunas still wears weights on his wrists and ankles to this day and continues both his physical and non-physical training.
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[color=black][size=10]Ninjutsu Class[/size][/color] [color=gray][size=9][b]||[/b][/size][/color] [color=steelblue][size=10]Lunas Yoinokuchi[/size][/color] [color=gray][size=9][b]||[/b][/size][/color] [color=steelblue]ᴄʜᴀᴋʀᴀ ʀᴇsᴇʀᴠᴇs: [size=9]200[/size][/color][/align]
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[color=gray][size=14]╚══════════[b]OOC[/b]═══════════╝[/size][/color][/align]
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 5:15 pm
Monsieur, I'm afraid I'll have to deny your 'statistics' section.
Having 'chuunin' in any part of your statistics would be unreasonable if you are starting out as a gennin. It's fine if you add additional information such as favorite colors and numbers, it's interesting, but please follow through with the guild's format also.
Suggestion: For the last sentence in your personality, I'd rather have you say "He puts more effort into his attacks" or "His attacks become more concentrated" than "becomes more powerful". Basically, we don't really know the parameters of that last statement and it's best to avoid any mixups.
And if you would add a bio, that would be super.
--- Note: There's a member's workbox area where you can work on your profile before posting it complete here. : p
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 5:34 pm
S'il vous plaît pardonnez-moi, I had not thought of that, and again forgive me, I was meaning to add the Bio, but blanked out while making it and got so into everything else I forgot to add that, but I have changed it now. If that seems different, as he's wearing weights I will remove that part, but for now that's the best I can come up with. Merci Beaucoup.
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 6:04 pm
Pfft, who am I kidding, I speak no French ! DX Hoppla!
* By the way, as slow as I can be sometimes, I just realized that you already have two taijutsu styles out of three. How is that so?
* D'oh. I almost forgot. You don't need to have a stat section for speed, strength and basically the rest of that. It's best not to because ranks alone can't dictate how high or low you can go. Which is why we have classes that better define our abilities. So if you could take that out, that would also be wonderful.
Nein, danke!
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 6:11 pm
Lol, technically I'm just putting the styles I'm going to learn there, seeing as I will learn them for sure. And I put the three stats because I was bored, and decided to just put it in, but I'll change it.
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 6:16 pm
>.> Ah..well, once you make those changes and is set, I'll approve! :
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 6:28 pm
Well I've done all you said, unless I need to remove the styles, I'm pretty set.
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 6:35 pm
I meant to say this more clearly at the beginning.. Sorry.
Set the Taijutsu limitations to : 00/03 and I approve. Just that and you're done and outta here!~
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