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 Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:02 pm
Hinote Tosatsu The problem I'm finding is that there was no emotional breakdown. She just randomly started destroying stuff with no reason given. Then she's a terrorist. Away with her!
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Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:03 pm
Metaphorically Insane Hinote Tosatsu You know, they haven't been gone hardly any time at all. Not nearly long enough for you to even notice, much less go insane. Oh, and insanity doesn't just happen all at once. It slowly moves in, showing growing signs all the while. Psh, lies. She could be mentally unstable, and no one knew, and then out of nowhere had an emotional breakdown that led to rage. Whooo... is THAT b***h MAKING OUT WITH MY FIANCE!??! HAHAHAAHAHA /runs around waving twin war axes ...like that?
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Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:03 pm
Metaphorically Insane Hinote Tosatsu The problem I'm finding is that there was no emotional breakdown. She just randomly started destroying stuff with no reason given. Then she's a terrorist. Away with her! Exactly! The way she's acting doesn't show an insane person, it shows a traitor.
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Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:06 pm
Hinote Tosatsu The problem I'm finding is that there was no emotional breakdown. She just randomly started destroying stuff with no reason given. do i need a reason for not having sanity? still can't link the burning of the library to me....-runs off to burn something else- ARSON BWAHAHAHA! she snapped when she first talked to the new sannin girl and kaze was tooken from being her student and put with new ones without a opinion on why she couldn't choose her own students but i think i made her a bit unstable when jade was first tsuchikage....
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Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:07 pm
little mintchan Hinote Tosatsu The problem I'm finding is that there was no emotional breakdown. She just randomly started destroying stuff with no reason given. do i need a reason for not having sanity? still can't link the burning of the library to me....-runs off to burn something else- ARSON BWAHAHAHA! she snapped when she first talked to the new sannin girl and kaze was tooken taken from being her student and put with new ones without a opinion on why she couldn't choose her own students but i think i made her a bit unstable when jade was first tsuchikage....
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Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:10 pm
little mintchan Hinote Tosatsu The problem I'm finding is that there was no emotional breakdown. She just randomly started destroying stuff with no reason given. do i need a reason for not having sanity? still can't link the burning of the library to me....-runs off to burn something else- ARSON BWAHAHAHA! she snapped when she first talked to the new sannin girl and kaze was tooken from being her student and put with new ones without a opinion on why she couldn't choose her own students but i think i made her a bit unstable when jade was first tsuchikage.... There are several ways to link you to it actually. #1. The librarian would know everyone who had been there. #2. You left blood behind. #3. Everyone else was elsewhere at the time. #4. It's a ninja library, I would think there would be systems in place to catch people messing with it. As far as your going insane, you could at the very least have shown it happen instead of just all of a sudden destroying stuff. You haven't shown your character go insane, you've just shown her commit crimes with no reason.
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Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:15 pm
He has a few good points!
How will Mints retaliate?!
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Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:20 pm
Hinote Tosatsu little mintchan Hinote Tosatsu The problem I'm finding is that there was no emotional breakdown. She just randomly started destroying stuff with no reason given. do i need a reason for not having sanity? still can't link the burning of the library to me....-runs off to burn something else- ARSON BWAHAHAHA! she snapped when she first talked to the new sannin girl and kaze was tooken from being her student and put with new ones without a opinion on why she couldn't choose her own students but i think i made her a bit unstable when jade was first tsuchikage.... There are several ways to link you to it actually. #1. The librarian would know everyone who had been there. #2. You left blood behind. #3. Everyone else was elsewhere at the time. #4. It's a ninja library, I would think there would be systems in place to catch people messing with it. As far as your going insane, you could at the very least have shown it happen instead of just all of a sudden destroying stuff. You haven't shown your character go insane, you've just shown her commit crimes with no reason. 1. the librarian was killed within the fire since fire heats up metal and when the librarian entered to get something the door heated up from the metal doorknob and se couldn't get ou ect 2. you need more then two drops of blood to catch someone 3. you and the sannin don't know where everyone is at the time of burning so it could be anyone and kai could of been anywhere else 4.just a librarian...the good scrolls[forbidden/sealing] are kept in the kage's office :3
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Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:22 pm
little mintchan Hinote Tosatsu The problem I'm finding is that there was no emotional breakdown. She just randomly started destroying stuff with no reason given. do i need a reason for not having sanity? still can't link the burning of the library to me....-runs off to burn something else- ARSON BWAHAHAHA! she snapped when she first talked to the new sannin girl and kaze was tooken from being her student and put with new ones without a opinion on why she couldn't choose her own students but i think i made her a bit unstable when jade was first tsuchikage.... The teams will be rearranged as soon as everyone is back to the village, if aeden doesnt wish to keep a student with him, you will have your team back and Kaze will be in it since you two get along. Eh...two drops? Your arm and leg were cut werent they? I think more than two drops would be left behind.
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Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:27 pm
Eh, if Aeden helps me master the Yonbi's power, I'd be like,"See you around, Iwagakure" Kaze becomes a traveler regardless of rank. This was my plan all along.
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Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:27 pm
#1. The fire was put out long before a human would be dead. See #4.
#2. You left a lot more than two drops.
#3. It is easy to learn where everyone was, especially seeing as myself and Kiyoko were everyone else.
#4. Being a ninja library in a ninja village containing ninja scrolls, I have to assume they also have a ninja librarian, and most likely ninja guards.
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Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:30 pm
take someone with you then kaze >.>
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Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:33 pm
twod rops was a example :/ i have cut my self before on glass on my foot it aint that much blood so it would be even hard for you to FIND such little blood and we DO have normal people as npcs here stare ninja library itis not called it is a normal library for both cilivans and ninjas or as towns call them PUBLIC libraries...
anyway good night
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Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:36 pm
Orly? You wana come with me Toasty? G'nite Mint
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Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:42 pm
Silly Kaze, if I did that I'd miss out on the slaughter. Er. Chuunin exams!
If a library contains ninja techniques, it's not going to be left in the hands of a civilian.
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