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 Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 7:40 pm
Cool, just looked at it. Looks good.
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 7:52 pm
Well I am going to head to bed now I am really tired and I have to work tomorrow, but i am off this weekend YAY, see ya all later.
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 7:54 pm
Later Bestmom, sweet dreams.
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 7:55 pm
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ananda082001 Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 8:01 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 8:18 pm
I'm sorry.
I've been re-reading the posts in Tides. I really like how its going. We've had a couple "post once and the disapear" posts, but hopefully they'll be back soon to continue. And between Lineth, you and myself, we've got a nice flow. I love to read everyone's writing styles. So far, everyone who'sposted has a really nice, detailed, literate style. xd
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ananda082001 Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 8:20 pm
Yeah, I agree. A lot of people haven't posted even once... considering there are eight members thus far. It kind of discourages me, but it's their loss.
As for writing style, I don't like my own... it's too elementary for me I guess. I don't have much variation in how I word things.
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 8:27 pm
I think your writing style is fine. It's not as elaborate as some, but that's ok. I like the way you write Sa'avant's dialog (both spoken and internal). It fits him really well. Dialog has always been the hardest part for me. I can describe a scene pretty well, but when my character actually has to talk....I feel like I tend to be too...flowery or formal or something. It just doesn't always sound natural to me. Yours does.
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ananda082001 Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 8:31 pm
I wish I were more elaborate in my writing, but as for as dialog goes I'm happy with what I've come to create. It's a lot like my own verbal speaking... short and to the point. However... start me writing and I get overly wordy and unnecessarily long-winded... like right now. sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 8:34 pm
Hehe, ah the pain of diarrhea of the word processor. I know it well. xd
Anyway. I should head off to bed. I'll see you tomorrow. Night.
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ananda082001 Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 8:35 pm
Alrighty, g'night ananda. Sweet dreams.
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 1:29 am
letting you know i wont be on much today,im sick crying ,stomache flu ,or something,ill spare you the nasty details...
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 4:56 am
Get better soon Moonlight
Good morning everyone
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 5:45 am
Well I am headed to work now see ya all later
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 7:46 am
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