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 Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2005 2:19 pm
ok... I give you... an F! It doesn't look like you've actually tried to come up with something of a high standard.
You need to spend a lot more time on your edits, try to make it look a little more professional. Add shading, higlights, shadows and texture. Your perspective is also pretty wrong.
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2005 2:50 pm
Vorty ok... I give you... an F! It doesn't look like you've actually tried to come up with something of a high standard. You need to spend a lot more time on your edits, try to make it look a little more professional. Add shading, higlights, shadows and texture. Your perspective is also pretty wrong. Perspective wise the far arm shouldnt be that small, and it seems to be bending a little... unnaturally, the close ear shouldnt be smaller than the far one, the fingers need to be a little more defined, and the far thumb looks a little... dislocated The hands and the belt already have shading on them, use them as a guide for the rest of the body
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2005 3:43 pm
ahh shut up everybody! the only reason im horrible is because this guild doesnt help me at all! if you can find me a guild that will help me improve, then i might get better! and if anyone wants to help me so people stop bitchin at me then that would be great!
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2005 4:24 pm
we WERE helping, Vorty gave you general advice, i just kind of expanded on what he said so you might know exactly what he meant.
No one is going to hold your hand, we'll make suggestions (and we did) but we cant edit for you
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2005 4:39 pm
but where the hell should i shade and what color? IF YOU PEOPLE WOULD MAKE A BASIC TUTORIAL FOR PSP THEN IT WOULD HELP!!!!
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2005 4:42 pm
psp is hard. just open it in paint and work on it there
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2005 4:57 pm
hell no im not using paint!
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2005 5:19 pm
I use paint. xP!!
It rocks, dammit. Especially if you can't do PSP. Nice and simple and pixely.
And don't get mad at them, they were giving you criticism to help you become better! If you can't get the basics though... then no hope, sorry. And I'm sure there are lots of tutorials out there... somewhere... >>!!
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Assimilated Businesswoman
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2005 5:28 pm
mae you rock my socks, well said
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2005 5:52 pm
well said mae... If anything, he should be looking up to you for your paint work, not slandering you.
Go and practice, bam. It's the only way you'll get better, we've given you hints, now it's time to act on them. :3
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2005 6:33 pm
Mae! I heart you even harder than before! I started in Paint as well!! I was pretty happy with the later stuff I cranked out! I would use it if it worked on my home computer. (This thing won't let me defrag it!)
*Once again takes up the flag for MS Paint*
"Don't blame the program, blame yourself!"
God I love that slogan. heart
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2005 6:40 pm
ok first off on my beast boy edit, where should i shade and in what color? and im sorry for yelling before! but can somebody maybe find me a psp editing tutorial?
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2005 7:10 pm
the far side of the edit (your left) should be darker, make the transition smooth though, dont just go directly from one colour to a much darker one, use your base colour and make each move slightly darker
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2005 7:47 pm
Yu-utsu the far side of the edit (your left) should be darker, make the transition smooth though, dont just go directly from one colour to a much darker one, use your base colour and make each move slightly darker ?? i didnt get a word u said!
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2005 8:27 pm
just pick a direction for the light to come from
closer to the light = lighter
further from th light = darker
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