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Lol October I thought your previous one was pretty ok xD

Wish me luck: (I'll be using he, no name yet... ugh..)

His hands shook violently. He looked around at the other students and felt more nervous and frantic. Unlike them he had come from a normal farming family and fighting was not in his blood. He had begun training a few years ago when he first came to the academy, most of his comrades could probably focus their chakra before they could even walk properly. He immediately dismissed that thought; he had good qualities, he just needed to remember them. After all he was here with them, getting ready to graduate, just one final extremely difficult test, and he would be able to be the first Shinobi in his family line. And he had gotten here through endless hours of training, hard work, extra lessons with the thankfully patient sensei's and of course the motivation to surpass fate, unlike the others back home, whom never aspired for greater things, who were as rooted as the plants they cared for. Felling inspired he raised both hands over his head, and found himself being the center of attention and hating every second of it. Quickly he put his hands down, a tinge of pink loomed over his cheeks, but he dismissed it and continued focusing solely on the next step after graduation.

~End. Now onto to mastering the D20

Okay, Here I am. Please forgive my spelling since english not my first language. Though you can tell me what is wrong if you want so I know what I need to improve.

RP Example:
~ Lehran just got out of the gennin exams. He seemed a bit sad of the fact he did not do very well. After a few seconds of waiting for the results, a jounin walks up to him and whispers in Lehran's ear "I'm sorry. You did not pass. Please do not come to the academy again. A ninja is not a game" The jounin told Lehran as he walks away.

After having this sad day, holding his tears for what happened, he walks slowly towards his house. A sudden impact went to him as he hears all the members of his family near his house, all thinking he passed the test and are prepared to congratulate him. His tears could not be holded anymore, he runs off to the forest, takes a kunai and stabbed his heart.
(Emo.......heheheheheh)

This is an awsome piece: PASS!

kk

Lehran just got out of the gennin exams. He seemed a bit sad of the fact he did not do very well. After a few seconds of waiting for the results, a jounin walks up to him and whispers in Lehran's ear "I'm sorry. You did not pass. Please do not come to the academy again. A ninja is not a game" The jounin told Lehran as he walks away. Lehrans heart was filled with sadness, no one could understand it, yet that sadness was also surrounded by hatred. How he wished he could stab that Jounin who walked up to him. Though he was filled with hatred, he felt as if he was the wrong one.

After having this sad day, holding his tears for what happened, he walks slowly towards his house. A sudden impact went to him as he hears all the members of his family near his house, all thinking he passed the test and are prepared to congratulate him. His tears could not be holded anymore, his hatred had already passed, all he wanted was to kill everyone. Once he reliced how wrong he was becoming, and how he could not escape from trying to kill all in his path, he would always have a mad mind for traitor ninjas. He could not hold his anger no longer, yet he could not try and stop himself, against his current wishes, he runs off to the forest, takes a kunai and stabbed his heart.

OOC: k ill fix that and try again but im kinda going to keep the same story

IC:walking across the earth village while dragging his feet along glancing at the clouds above him, hating the sound of the birds chirping "its to loud" as he turns the corner to his right, he stays close to the side of the village wall going towards his home for less noise, a man stops him, tsu faces the ground looking at the mans shoes as he notices there ambu's ,hes yet surprise he didnt appear like a ambu should, his father always told him a ambu stays in its shadow and waits for the wind to get heavier so there enemy wont notice them moving closer going in for a attack, and if he was a ambu he would notice his surroundings, and that theres a large rock behind his left foot so tsu swings his right arm at the merchant barely scraping his knuckles against the village wall, he dosnt swing completly his knuckles are 2inches away from the mans face the man steps back of being in shock of getting ready to get punched the man trips over the rock then tsu takes his left arm and aims for the mans stomach but the man covers his face wit his arms in a criss cross form as hes falling backwards tsu gets a direct hit drowning his fist into the mans stomach

OOC:ill finish the rest if you want and how do you want me to write it when hes thinking I just put it slanted I hope I pass

Yumenatsu Raikaka stretched a bit as he slowly sat up in his bed, groaning as he felt his muscles, stiffened by sleep, be forced into new positions. Dropping his arms to his sides, the boy glanced from side to side, raising a brow as he at first didn't recognize his surroundings. Tossing his blanket off to the side, the dark haired genin lifted his legs up and then placed them on the floor area beside the bed. 'Let's see here...I'm not dead, I still have all my clothes....'

Tilting his feet slightly, Yume then brushed his feet underneath the bed, nodding a bit as he felt them brush against something. 'My things are still here. Sensei must've moved me while I was sleeping as a test.'

Smirking a bit, the inexperienced ninja got out of his bed, stretching a bit again by raising his arms above his head and then raising himself up onto the balls of his feet. Yawning as he did so, Raikaka then dropped back down onto the flats of his feet as he saw a note in the corner of the room. Tilting his head to the side, the genin dropped his arms to his sides and walked over to the note, picking it up and unfolding it to read it.

Yume,

Find your way back to the village.

-Sensei

Sighing, Yume slipped the note into his back pocket, shaking his head briefly. 'That's just like Sensei...no explanation of where I'm at, what kind of dangers surround me. Just do it and don't question it. Well, alright....'

Walking back over to the bed he had slept in, the inexperienced ninja bent don and picked up his pack from underneath the bed, slinging it into place over his shoulders. Once it was in place, Raikaka spent a few brief moments making the bed, finally nodding in satisfaction as he saw that it looked like no one had slept in it. Stepping over to the door that blocked the rest of the world from sight, he ran a hand through his hair once to make sure that it wasn't a complete mess. 'Now to see exactly what Sensei has planned for me....'

Opening up the door, the genin sighed in disappointment as he saw a crowd of people look up from tables, not a single person recognizable to the freshly awoken ninja. 'This will be fun....'