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His World-The user sucks his opponent into his own world without restriction while user is in this world.This takes 99% of chakra to perform when leaveing the world the user must die in "His world" or he dispels it.After returning to the world the user will resume with 1% chakra.Meaning he can barely walk and will probably die without medical attention.

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(Ok i like this passive skill idea i got from hedoro)

GenHaru-This is a passive skill that allows all the user genjutsus to affect people stronger then the user.By focussing the user chakra into his brain and powering his genjutsus up.It is said that genjutsu are as strong as the mind and so nara have a tendacy of haveing IQ are high.Makingn this passive skill in effect.

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Absolution-This skill speed the user's heart up giveing him time to react faster and move faster and faster regeration rate.Though this skill has a great callback if used too.long the user heart fails.The longest the user can go with this skill is how much stamina he has sense this drains stamina and when he has no more he heart will fail if not called off.Due to your heart and you lngs are connected

Its good but you don't have enough skill points to make a second made up technique. You get one every 15000 skill points. Now go finish your academy training! *glomps* :3

Orly? I didn't know that....and i still have two unused made up slots domokun

I've been bugging artanus for weeks to join xD

Frozen Soul

Seki creates a genjutsu which only lasts for a brief second, but takes some time before it activates. The opponent feels as if he is being stabbed, chopped up, and minced with thoasands of swords, the period of time being from 2 days (People slightly above Seki's Level) to 7 Days (Fresh out of the Academy people). Remember the technique only lasts for a second.

good look Tek, it is.


Aze, you cant keep tryin to make uchia like genjutsu... just think of something else.

Um, I'm sorry, but think about it. The Uchihas have everything.

Amatseus (Sun Goddess Technique thing) is strong enough to burn what every it touches, even the the person is fire proof.

Tsukiyumi (Moon Goddess Technique Thing) can ware an opponent out to the point of exhaustion, and cause them to reach their breaking point in a second.

The Mangekyou used by Itachi can paralyze his opponents.

Also, they can copy techniques with just a bit of training which most people in here do in a week or two.

They also have a variety of fire attacks.

Chidori and Mangekyou Implosion can be used for an instant kill and also to take away the opponents arms.

I sortof want a similar technique to one that can be used to a bit lesser extent.

I'm sorry for saying this, so please don't critize me.

gaia name:the demon919
rp name: hyuuga nezi

Hyugga clan super attack- this attack is taijutsu. This attack is when a person who has the byakugan charges at his enemy and throws blows with his fists or weapons at there chakra points not actually hitting the person there attack charges at the chakra point. If the attack actually hits it can cause alot on the opponents chakra central.

Hmm... some new made ups I think, though the first and last one probably won't get approved.

Black Alchemy- Fist of the 7 Dragons.
Shiro's most powerful technique, even more powerful his God's Retribution skill. This skill ties in to the dragon tattoos that twist all the way from his heart up to his shoulder and down his left arm. Just like the tattoos that spread across the rest of his body these markings aren't made with simple dyes and inks, but with a substance much more sinister. Each different tattoo is made from the blood of a different dragon. A century ago beasts like dragons still roamed the land and in those times their powers could be bound to human bodies by killing the beast and tattooing the blood into a person’s skin. In total before Shiro was sealed away he managed to complete the process the maximum 7 times. This skill was always considered a Kinjutsu do to the danger it posed on the human body. Even unleashing a single of the beast’s powers could cause massive damage to the limb they were sealed in. Using the ultimate attack of this style was almost always fatal for both the user and the opponent, causing massive heart attack and organ failure in the user. When releasing a single dragon the user will stand a chance 30% of shattering their arm in several places. If the user releases the full power of the attack they only stand a 50% chance of surviving.

The Dragons Separately.

Dragon of the Withering Flame.
This dragon when released on it's own is almost completely white in color and like the rest of the Dragons is mostly see through attesting to their ghost like state. The Dragon of flame being one of the wilder dragons it is only accurate at close ranges, but when it strikes an opponent it doesn't do any outward physical damage, but the havoc it wreaks inside of them is just as bad as any burn. Instead of burning from the outside the opponent who is struck with this attack is burned from the inside by a dry heat causing their internal organs to slowly wither up and die. The afflicted will at first feel no outward effects, but they will quickly be overcome by a fever like state that will worsen continually until they die of dehydration. This attacks effect only worsens when an opponent has a technique like inner fire active.

Dragon of the Lightning Emperor.
This dragon when released on its own is almost completely yellow in color and like the rest of the Dragons is mostly see through attesting to their ghost like state. The dragon of lightning is the fastest of the 7 and only travels in a straight line once released. Once this dragon comes in contact with an opponent it doesn't attack, but simply tries to bind the opponent by creating a cage of lightning around the opponent by constantly twisting in a spiral around the opponent. If an opponent tries to escape the barrier by simply moving through it will only result in them being shocked and thrown backwards back into another coil of the dragon and so on until they're dead. The only way to escape the spiraling dragons grip is either to go under, which in case the dragon attempts to follow causing a large explosion or over by rising vertically in which case the dragon simply disappears.

Dragon of the Aquatic Chorus.
This dragon when released on its own is almost completely dark blue in color and like the rest of the Dragons is mostly see through attesting to their ghost like state. The Dragon water is considered by most the craftiest of beasts and is the most versatile in movement. Once released this beast is incredibly hard to stop considering it's hydra like abilities. Slice this dragon and it simply replicates into two dragons. This dragon's main objective at first seems to be to overwhelm the opponent with the huge torrent of ghostly water that comprises it, but in reality the beast is simply seeking entrance into the opponent’s body. The dragon can fit into the body through almost any opening be it the mouth, nose or any open wound. Once some of its tainted substance enters an opponent the rest of the dragon disappears. The tiny core dragon circulates through the body and after 2 hours (40 posts) the tiny beast makes it to the afflicted’s heart and devours it. Every ten minutes is marked off by 12 small stars that appear on the opponent’s chest once ingested. This dreadful little beast can only be removed by someone with high level medic training (No npc's) or the user himself.

Dragon of the Earthen Slumber
This dragon when released on its own is almost completely Green in color and like the rest of the Dragons is mostly see through attesting to their ghost like state. Easily the longest of the 7 the dragon of earth is rarely ever seen above ground and specializes in subterranean attacks. This dragon's movement is only limited by the space of the earth around it. As it travels under to earth it creates no disturbance, sound, motion or otherwise. All except for some strange reason its shadow is always cast above ground. Being the longest of the 7, this beast can literally stretch for miles under the earth without getting to its full length. When dragon attacks which it rarely will it will usually spring from the earth like a fish from water with one exception in that it usually springs from under the opponent maw wide open ready to engulf the opponent. Strangely enough though this dragon's teeth are not sharp, but soft closing the opponent in an earthy embrace usually from the waist down, not the type of thing that can be body flickered out of. Once entrapped in the spongy earth it becomes rather hard to escape with most attacks bouncing off of it. This dragon's skill is not that it entraps an opponent, but that once trapped the beast begins to suck the chakra straight out of the opponent’s body.

Dragon of the Aerial Legacy.
This dragon when released on its own is almost completely Silver in color and like the rest of the Dragons is mostly see through attesting to their ghost like state. While the Earth dragon may be the longest of the 7 the dragon of Air most definitely has the largest
Girth. Once released the dragon of air can expand to almost any size given that there’s air to be absorbed which makes it’s method of killing it’s prey that much deadlier. Out of all of the dragon’s though this one is the hardest to see only simply seeming like a gust of wind or a heavy breeze, but once you are in it’s clutches you know it’s their. This beast is known for killing its prey through suffocation, but not in the conventional way this ghostly dragon incapacitates its opponents by pulling all of the air around the opponent away and absorbing it into it’s body. With no air to breath the opponent has only two choice both of them potentially deadly. They can either stay where they are and have all the air pulled out of their lungs until there dead or they can try and pass through the dragon. The dragon of the Aerial legacy doesn’t have much substance to it, but trying to move through it’s form is similar to slogging through a marsh or heavy snow and trying to breath while in the dragon’s form is just as dangerous for a single breath contains enough tainted air to kill an elephant in 30 seconds flat.

Dragon of the Phantom Snowstorm.
This dragon when released on its own is almost completely Purple in color and like the rest of the Dragons is mostly see through attesting to their ghost like state. This dragon is relatively calm mostly just wishing to be left alone. It is neither very large or small or long or short, he is the most ordinary of the dragons, but still a dangerous foe. This beast always seems to carry a heavy snow storm with it wherever it is you’ll find heavy snow conditions. This blizzard of snow causes such visibility and movement problems that not even the sun can be seen through the thick fall. The snow fall is so thick that it could be considered white out conditions by most.

Dragon of the Eternal Star.
This dragon when released on its own is almost completely clear in color and unlike the rest of the Dragons is almost completely see through attesting to their ghost like state. This dragon is most commonly reffered to as the phantom dragon due to it’s short life span, a single day. In it’s one day on earth this beast is born, reproduces, and collects sunlight. Then when sundown comes the dragon releases all of the light it absorbed creating a huge blinding flash. When released from Shiro’s hold the effect of the beast demise is replicate creating a flash more powerful then any light bomb. No matter where the opponent is standing in a one mile radius of the blast, whether their eyes or closed or not are rendered blind for at least 10 minutes including the user. (7 posts each)

Divine 7 (Together)
When all 7 are released anything in the immediate vicinity of the blast is completely torn apart making it one of the most dangerous close range attacks in the land which is part of the reason it’s regarded as a Kinjutsu. If not loosed at a close range the 7 beasts gain a semi sold form and began rampaging across the battlefield destroying anything in their path each by their own element. If an opponent tries to destroy a dragon, unless they strike the head any type of body blow will just sink into the semi solid flesh. If Shiro keeps the jutsu up for too long the strain on his heart increases until he collapses. If the 7 are destroyed separately Shiro’s heart will go into cardiac arrest. If the 7 are destroyed simultaneously then the dragons will rise again for one last combined assault becoming one immense dragon and attacking the opponent and then the dragon will try to reenter Shiro’s body which it won’t be able to handle and will explode in a huge elemental explosion.

Blah blah I know it's probably too strong, to varied and probably needs be split into 8 different attacks, but I thought I'd try and submit it. So tell me what you think? Advice, criticism more penalties for using it?