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 Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 10:05 am
Seaphron Sauvie very good chapter Seaphron, I see a reoccurring pattern in a lot of these stories with who gets attacked XD, I like how you made Koosei and Godstone seem malicious and well just plain mean. Maul finally getting recognition in these as a good guy instead of a moron is a very nice change of pace. one thing that drew in my attention... Maul didn't eat the chefs food, and believe me that is a good Idea, that chef is horrible 3nodding Thanks for the feedback and I am glad you liked it! Maul in my book has checked out as someone I will not make fun of. Congratulations Maul. I didn't think the chefs food was that bad when i was on the train looking for inspiration. Maybe his alter ego was showing? or maybe the morphene to dull the pain of a lost finger helped him?
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 10:37 am
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 10:37 am
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 10:40 am
Koosei and I kicked butt. Yay I am a bad guy ...I mean person .... Loved the chapter
(Sorry not much commenting,got brain freeze) xd
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 11:15 am
O: *hopes for another appearence*
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 8:23 am
This is not the hoooo you are looking for.
ninja
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 8:24 am
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 8:26 am
Diana Godstone Koosei and I kicked butt. Yay I am a bad guy ...I mean person .... Loved the chapter (Sorry not much commenting,got brain freeze) xd I agree. an awesome chapter. 4laugh cool yay for a**-kicking women!!!
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 8:27 am
Koosei Diana Godstone Koosei and I kicked butt. Yay I am a bad guy ...I mean person .... Loved the chapter (Sorry not much commenting,got brain freeze) xd I agree. an awesome chapter. 4laugh cool yay for a**-kicking women!!! yay, for an adequate chef!
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 8:29 am
Who was the guy that Maul was beating up? I keep thinking it is me...
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 8:30 am
Sauvie Koosei Diana Godstone Koosei and I kicked butt. Yay I am a bad guy ...I mean person .... Loved the chapter (Sorry not much commenting,got brain freeze) xd I agree. an awesome chapter. 4laugh cool yay for a**-kicking women!!! yay, for an adequate chef! indeed.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 8:35 am
@Maul - Hell yeah
@Godstone - Yeah and you all will continue kick butt, it's all good not many people post about this story.
@Kirby - :O? You shall get one dont worry.
@Draken -Damn you!
@Romyion - It was.
@Koosei - Glad you liked it. You will be seen again shortly.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 8:37 am
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 8:42 am
Well it started where you killed off Maul in Kirbys story and Maul got angry. Then i remembered he was getting a reprieve in my story. Thusly I changed the character from someone else to you. And Kirby was meant to be there and when I heard you two were friends it just fit.
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