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 Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:26 pm
Koosei Sauvie Koosei Sauvie Koosei biggrin very awesome chapters, Seaphron. xd wonder if Maul will ever actually realize that his stalkee has gone with someone else? lol surprised hmmmm, wonder who that brunette is? biggrin I wonder... yes. quite a mystery there, eh? I know, quite a puzzler mhmmm. here's hoping we won't have to wait too long to find out the answer. xp I know, I cant bear the suspense
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:40 pm
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 5:09 am
I loved the chapter yet again , you leave me wanting more. Hmmm wonder who the redhead is.? Who is the boss? Why would he be against them? More questions not a lot of answers. xd .( Oh want a preview of the dragon pic i drew for you guild?Still waiting for Draken to colour it, you may as well see the finished sketch.The one I shew before was a tough one .)
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 5:14 am
Diana Godstone I loved the chapter yet again , you leave me wanting more. Hmmm wonder who the redhead is.? Who is the boss? Why would he be against them? More questions not a lot of answers. xd .( Oh want a preview of the dragon pic i drew for you guild?Still waiting for Draken to colour it, you may as well see the finished sketch.The one I shew before was a tough one .) I can not think of any redheads in this guild... Sorry that was a bit much, Drawing...Dragon, sounds awesome
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 5:30 am
Nami is a red head as well as me blaugh .
Hmmm well if Seaphron says it's ok I will post ot on the gallery so you can see the drawing xd
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 12:11 pm
@Sauvie - XP That's good at least.
@Koosei - You'll see him again short enough, He will have his time icon_rofl.gif Brown haired woman, I have been wondering who she is too.
@Masamune - Yay A new reader! Thanks for reading!
@LF - You have my favorite feedback.
@Godstone - The boss is a mystery. You will know sooner or later. As for the red haired woman you guessed it it's uh.... ~goes to look~ Nami! This whole story is going to be questions. I would love to see how the dragon picture.
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 11:20 am
When I get on next will pm to you.XD. Draken is on Computer all today.
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 12:34 pm
Alright sounds good, chapter seven will be out hopefully tommarow morning.
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 4:27 pm
Good stuff, Seaphers. I just kinda wish that you had a little more description, though...Especially about wtf is going on.
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 4:31 pm
Betman Good stuff, Seaphers. I just kinda wish that you had a little more description, though...Especially about wtf is going on.
I like the WTF factor, it makes you wonder what will happen next, and makes you wonder what happened 5 minutes ago
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 4:35 pm
Yeah I agree with you on the descriptions Betman, we all known I can do better DX Ah well I will work on that in the future. The WTF Factor though was something I was going for so I am glad that is what you were thinking.
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 4:37 pm
Seaphron Yeah I agree with you on the descriptions Betman, we all known I can do better DX Ah well I will work on that in the future. The WTF Factor though was something I was going for so I am glad that is what you were thinking. You could describe things, in the most meticulous, precise and accurate fashion and I would still be like WTF, but thats just me
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 9:40 am
-Chapter Seven Added-
@Sauvie - XD Ah well this story isnt really descriptive and I dont really mind that anymroe.
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 9:50 am
very good chapter Seaphron, I see a reoccurring pattern in a lot of these stories with who gets attacked XD, I like how you made Koosei and Godstone seem malicious and well just plain mean. Maul finally getting recognition in these as a good guy instead of a moron is a very nice change of pace. one thing that drew in my attention... Maul didn't eat the chefs food, and believe me that is a good Idea, that chef is horrible 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 10:03 am
Sauvie very good chapter Seaphron, I see a reoccurring pattern in a lot of these stories with who gets attacked XD, I like how you made Koosei and Godstone seem malicious and well just plain mean. Maul finally getting recognition in these as a good guy instead of a moron is a very nice change of pace. one thing that drew in my attention... Maul didn't eat the chefs food, and believe me that is a good Idea, that chef is horrible 3nodding Thanks for the feedback and I am glad you liked it! Maul in my book has checked out as someone I will not make fun of. Congratulations Maul. I didn't think the chefs food was that bad when i was on the train looking for inspiration. Maybe his alter ego was showing?
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