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 Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 11:57 am
i found it biggrin lol
RP Sample: It was a hot sunny day as Leon walk into the class room feeling a bit shy and kinda weird. All the other kids seemed like they new each other talk and playing. He went to the back and sat down in a old dusty chair. Leon raised his right hand and started to scratch he's tall spiky hair. He was a bit tried he had no sleep last night because he was wondering how the first day of school would be like.
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Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 11:59 am
Im sorry for the spelling im kinda of tried as well lol
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Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 3:28 pm
Here is my Rp Sample
As Kokaku walk this dirt path, he come upon an odd looking dog with forehead protector over his brow. The dog started to speak and said “hey kid which way is it to the sand”. Kokaku replied “ about 500 miles behind me” he stared at the odd looking dog to see if it would say anything else and it did “ Damn thanks kid, got to go” and in the blink of an eye the strange dog ran off behind me.
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Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 3:36 pm
RP Post Example:
Dylan walked quietlyu through the Hidden Mist. I was late at night, around 3 in the morning and he was on his way home from a mission.
"I'm always up this late." he said "Missions like that alway last forever."
He was confidentn in himself not to wake anyone in the neighborhood. About 50 paces further, he stubbed his toe on a large rock on the road.. "Aww, damnit!" He quickly covered his mouth, but he knew had already woken someone.
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 10:19 pm
Young_Dark_Ninja i found it biggrin lol RP Sample: It was a hot sunny day as Leon walk into the class room feeling a bit shy and kinda weird. All the other kids seemed like they new each other talk and playing. He went to the back and sat down in a old dusty chair. Leon raised his right hand and started to scratch he's tall spiky hair. He was a bit tried he had no sleep last night because he was wondering how the first day of school would be like.
Lots of mistakes! D:
Sometimes it makes it a little hard to understand. Can you do another one and be a little more careful about language?
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 10:20 pm
Maverick Tears. Here is my Rp Sample As Kokaku walk this dirt path, he come upon an odd looking dog with forehead protector over his brow. The dog started to speak and said “hey kid which way is it to the sand”. Kokaku replied “ about 500 miles behind me” he stared at the odd looking dog to see if it would say anything else and it did “ Damn thanks kid, got to go” and in the blink of an eye the strange dog ran off behind me.
This one looks familiar. XDDD
You mix past and present tense, can you do another one? And maybe one with only your character, with a little NPC as possible XD
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 10:21 pm
akirayamabuki RP Post Example:Dylan walked quietlyu through the Hidden Mist. I was late at night, around 3 in the morning and he was on his way home from a mission. "I'm always up this late." he said "Missions like that alway last forever." He was confidentn in himself not to wake anyone in the neighborhood. About 50 paces further, he stubbed his toe on a large rock on the road.. "Aww, damnit!" He quickly covered his mouth, but he knew had already woken someone.
A couple of small mistakes but... nice. I like it. Pass XD Although work on length and mistakes!
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 12:03 am
ok
Rp example
Leon was late for school. He was running as fast as he could,"boy its hot out, i better get moving before sensei has a fit". Leon started to speed up but tripped over a rock. "ow my toe" he yelled. Leon got back up and ran off again. When he finally got to school the teacher yelled. "Leon where have you been" Leon replied " I got lost on the path of life"
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 12:37 pm
Young_Dark_Ninja ok Rp example Leon was late for school. He was running as fast as he could,"boy its hot out, i better get moving before sensei has a fit". Leon started to speed up but tripped over a rock. "ow my toe" he yelled. Leon got back up and ran off again. When he finally got to school the teacher yelled. "Leon where have you been" Leon replied " I got lost on the path of life" It lacks Detail sweatdrop i can make a better one. kouri if you dont mind i would like to make a beteer one
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 12:53 pm
Rp example- Leon was late for school.He was running as fast as he could but the weight of his heavy black pants where slowing him down. He stopped to take a break "man i better get moving at this rate sensei will kill me". With the blazing hot sun above him Leon felt as if he was in the middle of the desert with no water to cool him down. He started to run again he was wondering how long he would have to stay in the blazing hot sun. He tripped over a rock. "ow dammit! my toe" he grabbed his right foot and started to bounce around on his left foot. After that Leon ran to the school hoping he was not too late. When he finally got to school the teacher yelled. "Leon where have you been" Leon replied "I'm sorry I'm late but a black cat crossed my path so i had to take the long way around"."He knew he would end up in detention if his response lined up with the truth, and so he executed one of the base actions of the human mind; he lied through his teeth. 'I had to take the long way, a black cat crossed my path.'" (hope this one is good)
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 4:09 am
Lol you took other people's advice! The one gripe I have with it is that you use he so much. It's like he he he he he he he he he he he... etc.
But otherwise, it looks cool. Man I overuse that word. Pass. :]
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Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 4:43 pm
ok i wont use the word he that much lol thats what i said i think i over did the word a little lol. and yea but only to see if it was good and he told me that i should add the he lied thing so i but it in there
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Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 1:39 pm
Still gotta flesh her out some for this guild, but here goes:
Akino frowned staring down at the little garden snake latched to her foot. She didn't scream out or yelp, simply gritted her teeth and knelt down to see what hurt her. And there it was, a small green garden snake latched onto her sandal though it's fangs went right through the fabric. She must have walked too close and startled it. Slowly reaching her hand down she grabbed it's head and taking in a sharp hissing breath, she pulled it off of her foot, tossing it into a bush a yard or two away. "Damnit." She muttered looking down at the small wound. It hurt, sure, but at least it wasn't a poisionous snake. And, it gave her some very valuebal information, she had to train more, at least in sensing people and animals around her.
Brushing back her white-black hair, she pulled some medical supplies from the small pouch at her waist before she sat down. With a solid frown she took off her blue sandal seeing some slight bleeding from the wound. She applied some ointment and bandages so it wouldn't get infected before putting her sandal back on and standing up. Akino looked around and then down at her foot again supposing that she should rest up and let it heal instead of the extra pratice she was planning to do earlier. "Oh well...." She sighed walking back towards her house.
[. . . *is uninspired today*]
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Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 3:43 pm
It finally came, the day Seigan proves he's not a puny waste of tiime.
Seigan forced himself out of bed, exhausted but excited for the first day of the academy. Eager to see what people thought about this puny kid no one knew.
Seigan rolled out of his bed and hastily pulled on his clothes.His parents were still asleep.He yawned as he pushed the door open and headed towards the academy where he had been many times before to remember its location.The practice proved useful as he practically found himself at the academy without hardly looking.He looked up at the doors and with a sigh,he raised his arm up and knocked,very loudly.
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Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 4:12 pm
Okay hear goes this post ivolved a tekegenkai which I am hopeing to get but I dought it.
Conan walked down the street of some little village he didn’t know the name of the town nor did he care. He just decided to walk past this place he saw nothing hear that he felt could help him in his search. The only way threw it was to pass right threw the center of town. So Conan set off. He simply walked without saying a word to anyone. As he walked by people he got stares from almost everyone. After about half way threw the town when a man who was obviously drunk bumped into Conan. Conan stopped as well as the man who stumbled back a bit. The man stared at Conan and said “ hheeeeyy youuu whaaats youur problems eh yaa jecek” as he said this Conan just stood there. After a few more slurred swears the man decided to try and hit Conan. With that Conan unsheathed his sword in front of the man and said “ may you find you peace in the after life… I envy you. I envy all of you ” There was enough time for the man to stare in terror before Conan brought his sword down on the mans neck. After the man fell over dead Conan herd screams from the others around him. And with that Conan put an evil smile on his face. The closest person to him was a women easily thrusting his sword threw her chest he watched as the women died impaled on his sword. Hearing more screaming Conan left the women impaled on his sword as he turned towards a group of men charging him. Putting his hand on the women on his sword. A large number and amount of blood shot out from the women’s back hitting the charging men and impaling them as if they were hit by arrows. After that chaos ensued in the village.
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