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 Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2011 5:50 pm
@Secret: Then it's approved.
@Assassin: Didn't I approve a profile of yours earlier?
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Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2011 6:09 pm
@Assassin: Anyways...I don't see anything wrong with it, other than that creepy spider at the end of it. Approved.
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Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2011 11:49 pm
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Full Name: Saru
Nickname: N/A
Age: 15
Birthdate: June 28th
Gender: Male
Height: 5'5''
Weight: 120lbs
Nindo: "You can try, but by then I'll have torn you t pieces!"
Personality: Saru speaks his mind, regardless of who he speaks to. He doesn't take any crap from anyone and isn't afraid to dirty his hands. However, don't let this lead you to believe he is a fol; his mind is just as keen as his fists.
Village: Yuki
Rank: Gennin
Main Class: Taijutsu
Subclass: Bloodline
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Bloodline: Hakmoto
Chakra Pool: 195
Chakra Element: Katon / Fuuton
Chakra Color: Depends on State used
Chakra Materialization: Dim glow for eyes
Strengths:
• Close Ranged Combat
• Adlibed Thinking
Weaknesses:
• Elemental Ninjutsu
• Fighting Women
Fears:
• Killing Someone
• Claustrophobia
Class Attributes:
• Class Attribute - Upper Body Training: Physical strength slightly increased
• Class Attribute - Weak Blood: Bloodline technique effects slightly increased.
Reductions:
• -1 Taijutsu Posts
• -1 Bloodline Posts
Personal Attributes:
• Hakemoto Prodigy : Forsaking Elemental Ninjutsu use and focusing on Hakemoto States and Techniques, said techniques chakra cost are reduced by one rank and his Trance Points are increased by 2 points per rank. States require four less posts to learn.
• Chakra Presence : While sensors are able to sense him like normal, they cannot tell his chakra level, it is as though he has chakra, though doesn't at the same time. Once in a State, he appears to be within a geyser of chakra.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 03
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: N/A
Weapon Range: N/A
Weapon Weight: N/A
Weapon Location: N/A
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Summoning Type: N/A
Summon Sage: N/A
Pacts: N/A
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• N/A
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
Katon
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Fuuton {Katon, Suiton, Raiton, Doton, Fuuton}
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States and Hakemoto Techniques
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▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Saru... the name of the monk that sacrificed himself to seal a Demon.... his son was expected to follow in his footsteps, or rather his shadow. Saru Jr. never thought that way, nor wanted to. Through his childhood, he was teased for not being able to mold chakra into even the most basic Elemental Ninjutsu, yet respected for his level of chakra control. Within his family, he is looked down upon as a lesser, rather than the skilled fighter he truly is.
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 5:57 pm
Reposted for approval hopping you guys didnt forget lol  ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α l • ∂ α т α|+▬
Full Name: Izuna Hatake
Nickname:
Age: 17
Birthdate: September 11
Gender: Male
Height: 5’ 11”
Weight: 165lbs
Nindo: "Blood will rain as I become stronger."
Personality: Izuna is a blood thirsty war hardened ninja. He is highly aggressive and very violent. Most ninja would turn their eyes from him, while others tend to be drawn to him. He gets his kicks from hurting people and watching people suffer.
Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Bukijutsu
Subclass: Sensor
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|+▬
Bloodline: Hatake Clan
Chakra Pool: 220
Chakra Element: Fire and Lightning
Chakra Color: Crimson Red
Chakra Materialization: It radiates off his body like flames derived from hell
Strengths:
• Weapons fighting
• Mid range combat
Weaknesses:
• His Pride
• Females
Fears:
• Being dragged through all nine dimensions of Hell
• Old Ladies
Class Attributes:
• Arrogant Skill: Able to wield weapons with slightly advanced prowess
• Scout: Able to detect chakra from living sources within a 60 yard radius
Reductions:
• Learns Bukijutsu [ 1 ] Post faster
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Personal Attributes:
• Strong Willed: Can break and identify Genjutsu with slightly increased ease
• Self Abuse: Due to his reckless nature Izuna gets a slight endurance boost then most ninja of his rank
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|+▬
Ryo: 両0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 05
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|+▬
Weapon Type: Hatake Family Katana
Weapon Range: 5 feet
Weapon Weight: 1 ½lbs
Weapon Location: On his hip
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Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|+▬
• Needles x20
• Smoke Pellets x5
• Paper Bombs x5
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|+▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
Katon
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Raiton
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Bloodline
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▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
• {If none, remove section}
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|+▬
Izuna was born as into a family of five siblings, two sister‘s and three brothers in the Village Hidden in the Leaf. Izuna was the oldest of them all and by far the most talented as well. His father had begun to take great pride in him during his years at the academy. After just six months there he graduated at the top of his class and most of the Jounin there had given his father great promise in him. His sibling soon began to resent him and decided on one faithful day that they would kill him. Using the trust of their family they lured him out into the forest and ambushed him with the help of two of Izuna‘s fellow academy mates. The fight was long and very bloody as Izuna came out on top by pure luck as he had slain his brothers and sisters along with the other two ninja. When he returned home his father had asked him what had happened to him and where was his siblings. After a long night of fighting and then explaining it to his father he passed out in his bed and awoke to his father and mother dead in his door way. Angry he left his room in search of his parents killers when he came out and saw the two ninja‘s parents standing their swords drawn. Not wasting time, he returned inside the house taking his father‘s sword and dashed out the back. Izuna wasn‘t use to retreat but he knew he stood no chance against four Konin of his village.
A few years later Izuna was found in the mountains near the Village Hidden in the Sand. He didn’t know how far away he had gotten from his original home but he was cautious on everything that he did so when the Anbu of the Sand brought him to their Kazekage he explained everything starting from when his siblings tried to kill him. The Kazekage found it inside him/herself to let him live in their village as one of their own only if he waited two years to further his life a ninja to earn the trust of the Sand‘s people. That time has finally came when he can finally get stronger once again as he is finally getting over his families betrayal and murder. However, because of that day he has became a blood hungry fighter and could be highly ruthless and aggressive.
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 9:08 am
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Full Name: Sora, Kobayashi
Nickname:
Age: 11
Birthdate: October 27th
Gender: Male
Height: 52inch
Weight: 72 pounds
Nindo: "I believe in fate absolutely, and it is because of that belief that I hate it so much."
Personality: Gentle, Kind, philosophical. His personality is underdeveloped because of his sheltered life.
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Ninjutsu
Subclass: Medical
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Bloodline: Undecided
Chakra Pool: 275
Chakra Element: Raiton, Doton
Chakra Color: Crimson
Chakra Materialization: Swirls around like a mist.
Strengths:
• Quick reflexes
• Form manipulation
Weaknesses:
• Stubborn
• Genjutsu
Fears:
• Yokai
• The Unending Darkness
Class Attributes:
• Class Attribute - Faulty Precision: Accuracy with techniques slightly increased
• • Class Attribute - Secret Drop: Backup reserve of [25] chakra
Reductions:
• Ninjutsu - one post faster
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Personal Attributes:
• Able to learn one Bukijutsu style
• 2 additional custom jutsu slots
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Maruton: 00 / 06
• Raiton: 00 / 06
• Doton: 00/ 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Eiseijutsu: : 00 / 08
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 2 feet 7 inches
Weapon Weight: 2 pounds, 7 ounces
Weapon Location: around his waist, on his left.
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Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• 10 exploding kunai
• 15 shuriken
• 5 kunai
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
Doton
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Raiton
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Eiseijutsusu
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▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
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▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
Style name:
•
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Sora was born in a village under the protection of the Konohagakure. Because of his skin color and eyes, his parents thought him to be sickly and frail. Sora was schooled in his home for many years. As Sora grew older, his parents began to notice how healthy the boy actually was. They began letting him wonder around the village, and play with other children. Sora was embraced warmly by his companions. Before long, Sora came to know an elder of the village. The man taught Sora many things, about the world around them. Sora took up these teachings, and believed in them. Sora dedicated a larger portion of his life to studying. When Sora was 9, his parents decided to ask him if he wanted to be enrolled in the shinobi academy. Sora, torn between his family and the teachings of his master, could not decide his path in life. Sora left his parents, without saying a word, and walked to a small stream not far away. He meditated on his choices. On the second day of his meditation, his master came to the river. After a long discussion, full of tears and joy, Sora decided to enroll in the academy. His parents were overjoyed with his choice, and made absolutely sure that he could back home whenever he wanted.
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 10:28 am
Kotsu: Silly billy. You could have 2 additional ninjutsu as dictated by your classes. And instead of being able to learn 1 genjutsu, you could learn 2. Again, dictated by your classes.
But you can't add one entire bukijutsu style. Your classes have none stated. So you'll have to change that or one of your classes if you still want bukijutsu in there.
One more thing, why is his bloodline undecided?
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 10:40 am
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Sora, Kobayashi
Nickname:
Age: 11
Birthdate: October 27th
Gender: Male
Height: 52inch
Weight: 72 pounds
Nindo: "I believe in fate absolutely, and it is because of that belief that I hate it so much."
Personality: Gentle, Kind, philosophical. His personality is underdeveloped because of his sheltered life.
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Ninjutsu
Subclass: Medical
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Bloodline: Kaguya
Chakra Pool: 275
Chakra Element: Raiton, Doton
Chakra Color: Crimson
Chakra Materialization: Swirls around like a mist.
Strengths:
• Quick reflexes
• Form manipulation
Weaknesses:
• Stubborn
• Genjutsu
Fears:
• Yokai
• The Unending Darkness
Class Attributes:
• Class Attribute - Faulty Precision: Accuracy with techniques slightly increased
• • Class Attribute - Secret Drop: Backup reserve of [25] chakra
Reductions:
• Ninjutsu - one post faster
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Personal Attributes:
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• 2 additional custom jutsu slots
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Maruton: 00 / 06
• Raiton: 00 / 06
• Doton: 00/ 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Eiseijutsu: : 00 / 08
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 2 feet 7 inches
Weapon Weight: 2 pounds, 7 ounces
Weapon Location: around his waist, on his left.
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Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• 10 exploding kunai
• 15 shuriken
• 5 kunai
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
Doton
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Raiton
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Eiseijutsusu
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▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
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▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
Style name:
•
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Sora was born in a village under the protection of the Konohagakure. Because of his skin color and eyes, his parents thought him to be sickly and frail. Sora was schooled in his home for many years. As Sora grew older, his parents began to notice how healthy the boy actually was. They began letting him wonder around the village, and play with other children. Sora was embraced warmly by his companions. Before long, Sora came to know an elder of the village. The man taught Sora many things, about the world around them. Sora took up these teachings, and believed in them. Sora dedicated a larger portion of his life to studying. When Sora was 9, his parents decided to ask him if he wanted to be enrolled in the shinobi academy. Sora, torn between his family and the teachings of his master, could not decide his path in life. Sora left his parents, without saying a word, and walked to a small stream not far away. He meditated on his choices. On the second day of his meditation, his master came to the river. After a long discussion, full of tears and joy, Sora decided to enroll in the academy. His parents were overjoyed with his choice, and made absolutely sure that he could back home whenever he wanted.
(Sure I can't use one of my personal attribute for learning buikijutsu? I was undecided when i posted this earlier, didn't get around to changing it.) (Edit: Also I did not know if those two extra ninjutsu were for each element or if i was supposed to spread the 2 jutsu among my elements.
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 12:59 pm
[[You're right, now that I think about it, it is your personal attribute. So, I approve of you learning an additional style. Sorry, not in the best state of mind.
No, they don't get divided or spread among your elements. They're just two additional ninjutsu slots. You were correct on the extra part.
Approved.]]
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 1:04 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 2:09 pm
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Full Name: Ataru Kaki Omoi
Nickname: N/A
Age: Eleven [ 11 ]
Birthdate: April Twenty Fourth [24]
Gender: Male
Height: Five Feet Six Inches [ 5' 6" ]
Weight: Hundred Twenty [ 120 ]
Nindo: "I'd Say Sorry, But I Honestly Am Not."
Personality: Dark, Withdrawn, Loyal, Easily Annoyed, Thinks himself a God.
Village: Kohonakagure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Ninjutsu
Subclass: Bloodline
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Bloodline: Jiongu
Chakra Pool: 275
Chakra Element: Katon
Chakra Color: Dark Red | Black
Chakra Materialization: Tends to take on the appearance of Fire, red as the core and black around the edges, tends to move like fire also.
Strengths:
• Ninjutsu
• Katon
Weaknesses:
• Suiton
• Genjutsu
Fears:
• Weakness
• Large bodies of water
Class Attributes:
• Secret Drop: Backup reserve of [25] chakra.
• Weak Blood: Bloodline technique effects slightly increased.
Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
• Learn bloodline techniques one [1] post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• 2 Additional Ninjutsu Slots
• Learns Ninjutsu One [1] Post Faster.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両 Zero
AC: Zero
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06+2
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Weight:
Weapon Location:
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Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• x15 Shuriken
• x 10 Senbon
• x 5 Kunai
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
Katon
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Jiongu
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▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Ataru grew up hard, he lost his mother young, his father abandoned him and sense then he's been on his own in the leaf village with no care for others and no fear that he leads on, he's a hard young person and seemingly hates everyone.
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 4:10 pm
is my profile approved????
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 4:24 pm
Jashin: Yes, I see no problems with it. I'm sorry for the wait, and thank you for your patience.
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 4:33 pm
Aerin: As dictated by your bloodline class, you can learn at least 1 taijutsu style, 1 bukijutsu style.
In all, it should say: Ninjutsu [6 ninjutsu for each element + two additional ninjutsu slots, < -- note: They don't spread in with it and make it 8 ninjutsu for each element. ]
Genjutsu: 00/02
Taijutsu: 00/01
Bukijutsu: 00/01
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