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 Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 8:17 pm
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 8:18 pm
AND????? spit it out man how did i do? what did you think??
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 8:20 pm
HArsh as ever, but it was comical. Try coloring it though..but other than that I wil not reveal anything...and i goto go for the night...good night all...well i might be on in like 3 hours
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 8:27 pm
i thought about throwing a rock at him to get him down but then though "nah that harsh xD"
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 8:41 pm
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 8:43 pm
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 8:49 pm
Toan i need help with my bio in my tamer profile can u help me
read Tiger's post to get a better idea of what i need help with
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 8:57 pm
i dont know try adding more detail like your personality, how you social life, stuff like that. add stuff about when you first met your digimon. when you get more experince add details of your adventures ito it
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 8:58 pm
ok ill let u know when some changes have been made
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 9:33 pm
ok let me know how it is now.
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 9:39 pm
.......well it something. you just talk to you digimon, it like you didnt even have a body you just talk to it. try something like this
Toan woke up to find himself in a strange land with a lot of strange creatures crawling around. Toan turned his head to the right to see a Dracomon eating his food. Toan smash his fist on the Dracomon head and the Dracomon yelled in pain and turned to look at Toan "What was that for!?" Toan took a step back a bit shock that this thing spoke but his anger return "Your eating my food, how is an overgrown lizard gonna eat my food and talk back to me when i give the punishment for it?!"
Try writing like that instead of
where am i? "In my world" How do i go to my world? "What world would that be"
read a book and used that for refrence
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 9:41 pm
lol kk. if u don't mind could i use that but change the names
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 9:46 pm
i actually prefer if you use your own creativity but do what you want
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 9:48 pm
lol ill try to come up with my own
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 10:10 pm
Whoa Toan might not be all bad...o wo HURRAY FOR THE SECRET GOODNESS INSIDE OF EVERYONE! :'D
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