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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:02 am
*Hunter returns to the lobby and sees Sora leave* Me: Hi, and um... bye
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:03 am
*sees Hunter... again...*
hi... again...
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:06 am
*Comes back from updating* Me: Sorry about that.
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:13 am
Me: Eh, no problemo *Hunter sends a message on his TADS* Me: Hopefully my friend will be arriving
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:21 am
HunterMetroid64 Me: Eh, no problemo *Hunter sends a message on his TADS* Me: Hopefully my friend will be arriving *Raises an eyebrow* Me: And who would that be?
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:21 am
*Ikarizu comes walking out to the lobby with a small book in his hand, and reading it*
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:23 am
Brian_Link HunterMetroid64 Me: Eh, no problemo *Hunter sends a message on his TADS* Me: Hopefully my friend will be arriving *Raises an eyebrow* Me: And who would that be? Me: You wouldn't know her *Hunter awaits the answer to his question, though it isn't likely to come*
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:26 am
HunterMetroid64 Brian_Link HunterMetroid64 Me: Eh, no problemo *Hunter sends a message on his TADS* Me: Hopefully my friend will be arriving *Raises an eyebrow* Me: And who would that be? Me: You wouldn't know her *Hunter awaits the answer to his question, though it isn't likely to come* Me: OK. *Puts my TADS next to the Compy and types some stuff*
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:32 am
MISSION- Sibling Roundup Go to Altomare and help Bianca (Pokemon Heroes) get safely away from Ann and Oakly! You will battle Ann & Oakly. They have a Ariados and a Espeon.
Pokemon Any basic or first stage Water type
Money- 500-2000
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Sora was in his room watching some TV. He was watching his favorite show. *Beep. Beep* Sora’s TADS beeps rapidly. Sora finally picks it up and reads the message. The message read, “Dear Sora, There is a mission I want you to take. Go to Altomare and find a girl named Bianca. Help her get away from two girls named Ann and Oakly. Your Leader, Brian. Sora immediately grabbed his pokeballs and headed to Altomare. He went out of his room and out of Aqua Base. He released a pokeball and Charizard appears in a red flash. Sora jumped on Charizard and Charizard flew to Altomare.
On there way the saw all kinds of water flowing everywhere. It was amazing. Water flowed in and out. Soon enough Sora saw a girl running. “Chairzard, fly down there.” Charizard flew down and landed in front of the girl. “Umm. Are you Bianca?” “Yes. Who are you?” “Umm. Just call me Sora. ” Bianca and Sora shook hands. “Are you running from two girls?” “Yes. How did you know?” “Never mind. Let’s just run.” “Ok.” Sora returned Charizard and both ran. Two girls following asking each other, “Who is that kid over there?”
Soon enough Sora and Bianca hid in a museum. “Where are we?” “Somewhere.” “So, those two must be Ann and Oakly right?” “How did you know?” “Nothing.” “I was running because umm. Never mind.” “Ok. I am going. Bye.” “Bye.” Sora walks outside and sees one of the girls. “I knew I would find you.” “You found me. How about a battle? I win you leave the girl alone. You win...” “I win, I get something from the girl.” “Ok.” “Call me Ann.” Sora and Ann then grab a pokeball in their pocket. “Let’s go.”
“Go Combusken.” “Go Ariados.” Sora and Ann threw the pokeball and Combusken and Ariados appears. “Combusken, Flamethrower.” “String Shot Ariados.” Combusken fired a Flamethrower when Ariados uses String Shot. String Shot gets destroyed by Flamethrower and hits Ariados. (Ariados 850-350=500) “Ariados, Psychic.” “Double Kick Combusken.” When Combusken used Double Kick, Psychic hurt her with Super Effective. (Combusken 650-400=200) “String Shot now.” “No! Try to use Flamethrower.” Ariados fired a String Shot at Combusken. Combusken got up and used Flamethrower and destroyed the String Shot. (Ariados 500-350=150) “Grr. Last shot. Finish em off with Psychic.” “Use Flamethrower before they can.” Both pokemon used the attack. The attacks hit one another creating a draw. (Ariados 150-150=0)(Combusken 200-200=0) “No!! I shall take this a loss, but I still will return.” Ann returned Ariados and she left.
“Return Combusken.” Combusken returned to her pokeball. “Get a good rest.” Bianca then came out of the museum. “Impressive.” “Huh?” “Your battle with Ann. You are strong.” “Not really. I should get going. Bye.” “Ok. Bye.” Sora walks off.
As he turns the corner he meets the other girl. “Hello. I am Oakly. Battle. Same rules apply like when you battled Ann.” “So she told you.” Sora and Oakly grab a pokeball.
“Go Espeon.” “Go Flaffy.” Sora and Oakly throw a pokeball and Flaffy and Espeon appear. “Thunder.” “Use Psychic.” Flaffy used Thunder while Espeon used Psychic. Both attacks hit each other created an explosion. (Flaffy 550-250=300)(Espeon 750-250=500) “Flash.” “No.” Flaffy used Flash blinding Espeon. “Now Thunder Punch.” Flaffy then ran up and used Thunder Punch at Espeon. (Espeon 500-250=250) Espeon regained strength and got back up. “Quick Attack.” “Thunder Bolt.” Espeon used Quick Attack. It was so fast it dodged the Thunder Bolt and hit Flaffy with what it had. (Flaffy 300-100=200) “Grr. Thunder.” “Psychic. This should create an explosion making sure your pokemon will get hurt also.” “No.” Both pokemon used their attacks. It created an explosion and both pokemon got knocked out. (Flaffy 200-200=0)(Espeon 250-250=0) “I know I lost, but you lost also. I will return stronger.” Oakly then left. Bianca came running.
“Return Flaffy.” Flaffy returned to her pokeball. “Wow. You are great.” “Huh?” Sora turns around and sees Bianca. “Thanks for helping me out.” “Your welcome.” “I think you have to go. Bye.” “Bye.” Sora then releases a pokeball and Charizard appears. He jumps on Charizard and flies back to Hoenn. When he saw Aqua Base, Charizard swoops down and lands. Sora returns Charizard. He then walks to his room. He placed his pokeball in a container. The two pokemon that fainted were taken to the Pokemon Center. Sora then rested on his couch. “Today was a hard day.” Sora turned on the TV and watched some of his favorite shows. ____________________________________________________
PASS
Rewards: PDs = 700
You did what you were 'sposed to, and thats great. But your dialogue needs working on. wink Try making the story a little more deeper, and you'll be great!
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:33 am
Ike: *Walks over to Hunter* Hey. We expecting a new member or just a visiter?
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:35 am
NikoXIII Ike: *Walks over to Hunter* Hey. We expecting a new member or just a visiter? Me: I'm thinking she'd become a member *Hunter's TADS beeps and he reads the message* Me: She says she's not sure...
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:37 am
HunterMetroid64 NikoXIII Ike: *Walks over to Hunter* Hey. We expecting a new member or just a visiter? Me: I'm thinking she'd become a member *Hunter's TADS beeps and he reads the message* Me: She says she's not sure... Ike: Thats cool *Walks over to a wall and bangs his fist on it to check something out* Ike: Hmm...Did we ever get this HQ "fire-proofed"?
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:40 am
HunterMetroid64 NikoXIII Ike: *Walks over to Hunter* Hey. We expecting a new member or just a visiter? Me: I'm thinking she'd become a member *Hunter's TADS beeps and he reads the message* Me: She says she's not sure... *Gets slightly annoyed* Me: I hate when people do that. They should at least come and try us out. If they don't like us, then they never visit again, but at least they gave us a shot.
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:42 am
Brian_Link HunterMetroid64 NikoXIII Ike: *Walks over to Hunter* Hey. We expecting a new member or just a visiter? Me: I'm thinking she'd become a member *Hunter's TADS beeps and he reads the message* Me: She says she's not sure... *Gets slightly annoyed* Me: I hate when people do that. They should at least come and try us out. If they don't like us, then they never visit again, but at least they gave us a shot. Ike: *sighs and looks down, his arm up against the wall* People are just like that, y'know Brian?
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:51 am
NikoXIII Brian_Link HunterMetroid64 NikoXIII Ike: *Walks over to Hunter* Hey. We expecting a new member or just a visiter? Me: I'm thinking she'd become a member *Hunter's TADS beeps and he reads the message* Me: She says she's not sure... *Gets slightly annoyed* Me: I hate when people do that. They should at least come and try us out. If they don't like us, then they never visit again, but at least they gave us a shot. Ike: *sighs and looks down, his arm up against the wall* People are just like that, y'know Brian? *Starts pulling up screens on my Computer* Me: Unfortunately.
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