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 Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 2:26 am
Seaphron It's all good Sauvie, as long as you like the story I don't mind. (I do like the feedback though)
I overestimated myself in writing a short story... I intended to have it a chapter a day (7days = seven chapters) then have the prologue and the resolution chapters and make it a nine chapter story.
Seeing as this is chapter six and day three there is no chance that this will happen now.
I have always been like this. In 7th grade we had to have a twenty page story about anything to turn in. Everyone in my class turned in papers under 15 pages mine was over 40 XD. I guess I should work on limiting myself. [/ramble] I know what you mean, in 8th grade I had to make essentially the same thing as you have just stated, anyway I lost marks for being too meticulous in what was supposed to be a short story with no more that 20 chapters...in the end I had about 37 or so. It was funny though, the first time all year I do a great job on something I loose marks, which was made into many-a-pun.
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 2:29 am
Yep, same thing here XD ~shrugs~ Teacher's what are you gonna to do them?
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 2:30 am
Nice update Seaphron, I wonder who these two new characters will be, and if they are friend or foe (Hopefully friends, Forsaken need love!! scream rofl )
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 2:32 am
Yeah you can't trust teachers but you kind of have to.
FS you could probably guess the identity of the new people, and as for you wanting love...too much info...really...it was unneeded
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 2:35 am
Sauvie Yeah you can't trust teachers but you kind of have to. FS you could probably guess the identity of the new people, and as for you wanting love...too much info...really...it was unneeded Not me personally, my character wink (I noticed that a lot of people refer to their characters as themselves, which is kind of funny).
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 2:35 am
ForsakenSwordsman Sauvie Yeah you can't trust teachers but you kind of have to. FS you could probably guess the identity of the new people, and as for you wanting love...too much info...really...it was unneeded Not me personally, my character wink (I noticed that a lot of people refer to their characters as themselves, which is kind of funny). I tend to do that but I speak in the third person anyway rofl
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 2:37 am
Like Sauvie said you can probably guess who it is. And as for the Forsaken needing loving, I think we all learned something from the Wind Cuff Adventures.
Just saying though when have people jumping in through a window with daggers ever good?
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 2:38 am
Seaphron Like Sauvie said you can probably guess who it is. And as for the Forsaken needing loving, I think we all learned something from the Wind Cuff Adventures.
Just saying though when have people jumping in through a window with daggers ever good? well he liked the cuffs xd
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 2:41 am
Seaphron Like Sauvie said you can probably guess who it is. And as for the Forsaken needing loving, I think we all learned something from the Wind Cuff Adventures.
Just saying though when have people jumping in through a window with daggers ever good? I am not a kinky perv, who said I was?! Don't make me hit you!! xd Well, these two new characters could be members of our team, come to join us. After all, Fish and Trenn didn't exactly look like good guys to start with either.
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 2:45 am
I never said you were, got a little bit of a guilty consciousness there? wink True, Fish did knock you out... Oh well, just go with their bad guys. XD I am going to make a slight change really quickly only difference is there will be a smoke bomb filling the room. Quote: Glass went flying and smoke poured in as a small canister emitting the fumes hit the floor.
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 3:33 am
Seaphron I never said you were, got a little bit of a guilty consciousness there? wink True, Fish did knock you out... Oh well, just go with their bad guys. XD I am going to make a slight change really quickly only difference is there will be a smoke bomb filling the room. Quote: Glass went flying and smoke poured in as a small canister emitting the fumes hit the floor. he showed his cards xd
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 2:34 pm
XD No response from him yet.
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 2:37 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 2:42 pm
I thought there would be white saying you were going to kill me XD
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 2:59 pm
Seaphron I thought there would be white saying you were going to kill me XD Why would I want to kill you Seaphron? You b*****dAfter all we're friends aren't we? I'm gonna kill you!But seriously, I didn't take any offence at anything you said anyways, so I have no reason to slaughter you! But if you ever push me, BAM! xd
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