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Rp sample in order to graduate.

"Wha-, What time is it?" Tobiko said as he slowly arose out of his bed to see the morning sun peering in on him. "Uhh, dang sun has to come out now, it couldnt wait for 3 more hours?" Tobiko said as his feet his the floor. "Well I guess this is it. My first day as a real shinobi, but i have to admit the word gennin doesnt roll of the tounge as much as I wanted it to" Tobiko said he made his way to the door. As he swung the door open the glaring sun hit him dead in the face. He took a couple of steps back and put his hands over his eyes as if to adjust them to the light. He let out a quite moan and walked outside slowly. He looked up and around to see the sun was not hiding behind a single cloud and the wind was blowing at a comfortable pace. After he was finished observing the weather he looked at his right palm mouth which was smiling back at him.

"Yea yea, it seems your always happy." Tobiko said as he began walking. He walked up to his favorite spot in the stone village, it was a small hill on the outskirts of town where he went to think. He sat down quietly and began to look at his hand. "Hmph, i guess it is time we do a small bit of training." Tobiko said reaching into his small bag of clay. "Ive got to become a great sculpter like my father, but also I am expected to become a great shinobi of the stone village. Why not both?" He said staring into the bag. "Darn it, I didnt bring all of my clay, I guess this will have to be enough." Tobiko said in a disappointing tone. He grabbed a bit of clay out of the bag and put it into his palm. The palm hand swallowed it up rather quickly and began to chew. "This clay manipulation stuff isn't so hard I dont guess." Tobiko said as he squinched his eyes and began trying to think of a shape to mold the clay. In his mind all he could think about was the kitten he had seen in his garbage can the night before.

zaisuke lays back and enjoys the scenary"wow wat a beautiful setting"zaisuke then rolls over to find a rabbit to pet"hi there little guy"then zaisuke looks at his wrist"HOLY CRAP WAT HAV I BEEN DOING I GOTTA GO"then zaisuke dashes out of the open field and into town"well i guess as long as i can get in before sensei ill still b on time"then as zaisuke jumps off of a building onto the Acadamy building he does hand sign to create a clone"i want u to go knock on the door then run k"the clone nods and slides down the building...as he knocks on the door sensei comes out yelling"now" zaisuke speeds into the room into his chair then sensei walks into the room not even glancing at zaisuke*haha looks like i win*zaisuke thought"ZAISUKE!!!"sensei screamed"wat sensei ive been here the whole time"sensei turns around looking embarrassed"o then never mind back to the lesson"...........


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All righty, I’ll give it a shot.
Note: The fact that it’s raining in my sample has nothing to do with my character’s village. I simply needed a more interesting situation. xD And no, she’s not crazy. She’s simply hyper and talks to herself.

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The sky was practically black, blotting out the noonday sun that typically made its appearance. Opaque clouds wept a bitter torrent, drenching every square inch of land below it. Miniature rivers rushed down the streets as if desperately trying to wipe clean all its impurities. It seemed as if anyone with an ounce of sense had locked themselves inside as protection from the storm’s looming presence.

It just added to the oddity of the lone girl roaming the village.

Rinako looked up, using her hand to shield her large green eyes from the rain. The moisture had turned her usually yellow blonde hair into a muddy color as it clung to her forehead and snaked around the back of her neck. It probably seemed strange enough for a girl to wander the streets all by her lonesome without a group of friends at her side. In the rain, it was just unheard of.

With minimal satisfaction, she dropped her gaze to the empty streets. In a burst of childish frustration, the young girl puffed out her cheeks and brought her pale hands to her mouth. “He-ey! It’s just water, people!” Her voice reverberated through the empty village, unheard by all who dared not brave the weather.

Rinako shook her head as if thoroughly disappointed with every living thing. “Hmph. Silly people. Oh, well, now I can be as loud as I want and those old people won’t make faces at me!” She burst into giggles, thinking of the comically stern expression she usually gained from the elders due to her childishly outgoing personality. It didn’t bother her, though. She thought she was just fine the way she was.

A sudden peal of thunder broke the precarious silence. Rinako jumped, spinning around in place as she lifted her eyes back to the sky. She made a face, planting her fists on her hips. “Oh, fine, Mama. I’ll go home! Hmph…”

With that, the young girl went trotting off down the streets, splashing through the puddles while she hummed to herself.

What a shame no one else enjoyed the rain.

Takashi walked along the crowded bumping into everyone in his way "Ugh" 'God will these annoying people get out my way'. He was walking to room 204 to his first class at the academy. He was nervous so he masked it with rude looks to his new peers. He looked up at his teacher seeing how he was a short 11-year-old "gasp". He walked to his seat after bowing to his teacher with books in his hand. As he walked you noticed he had black hair with large bang in front of his left eye, crimson eyes and smooth cheek bones.

Try not to bold and underline things...it's really hard to read...for me anyway @_@ Oh, and 'walked along the crowded bumping into everyone in his way "ugh" ' isn't understood very well....If he's speaking try to use a capital letter, no matter what he's saying. Refrain from useing (*) in your posts. And when you discribe him, try to separate it into a sentence. That last piece turned it into a run-on. ^_^ Would you like to try again? If you watch those things you should be fine though.

Go to the RP Academy and get passed. Well then this should be a cake walk!!


Zikomo stiffened as a crunch echoed though the quiet night. He sat up slowly. "No! Don't die!" He shouted as he flipped over and began blowing on the embers of the dying fire. "Come on! Come on!" He shouted as he shoved more dead plants into the embers. He blew quickly hoping that they were dry enough to rekindle the fire. "Burn!" He shouted as if he wanted to command the fire. He continued blowing till they eventually relight. He flopped back and let out a sigh. "Why! Why dose this always happen to me?" He grabbed a handful of dirt and flung it in rage. He let out another sigh and looked back up at the once again dying fire. "N-No!" He cried as he went back on his hands and knees blowing on the fire again.

Hehe, entertaining XD Pass