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 Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 9:41 pm
Lifeless-Fox THE PLOT THICKENS
Had too say it.
Great story, Seaphers. The Plot thickens! That's one of my lines. gonk Good story, Seaphron. Great
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 6:08 am
A few words were misspelled but I am again, sitting in the edge of my seat wanting more of the story. biggrin
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 7:51 am
=O watch out there, Maul. Skull's flirting with your girl. wink silly Skull, going after her and the stone. She doesn't even know what it is.
biggrin very awesome, Seaphron. biggrin can't wait to see where you're going with this.
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 10:04 am
Awesome. I'll definately read it.
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 9:39 am
-Chapter Four Added-
@LF - XD Thanks LF
@Aku -Thank you.
@Godstone - Really my spell check didn't register anything as wrong.
@Koosei - Who knows what Maul will do when he sees? Thanks
@Tatsu - Woot
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 1:25 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 1:28 pm
I like it. There really isn't much else I can say. I wonder about the orbs, and I wonder about this tablet, the boss and so on.
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 1:44 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 2:09 pm
I hate you.You have given me more questions and no answers. ~sulks~ blaugh Loved the chapter a lot,can't wait for the next chapter.
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 3:36 pm
xd I agree, Godstone. more questions but no answers at all. sad
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 5:35 pm
@Fish - Glad you do, thanks for the feedback earlier, finally someone wonders about thet boss. I was wondering how long that would take
@LF - Thanks
@Godstone - XD I am curious to yalls questions, I dont think of them cause I already know what happens.
@Koosei - XD Did you like the chapter at least?
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 5:36 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 10:52 pm
Thanks Forsaken
-Chapter Six Added-
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 11:36 pm
nice new chapters, sorry that I have been a bit absent on the reading of this story. In all seriousness though, you are gonna have this done in a small amount of chapters?, that seems a bit difficult to believe, this sounds like a pretty fair sized adventure.
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 12:11 am
It's all good Sauvie, as long as you like the story I don't mind. (I do like the feedback though)
I overestimated myself in writing a short story... I intended to have it a chapter a day (7days = seven chapters) then have the prologue and the resolution chapters and make it a nine chapter story.
Seeing as this is chapter six and day three there is no chance that this will happen now.
I have always been like this. In 7th grade we had to have a twenty page story about anything to turn in. Everyone in my class turned in papers under 15 pages mine was over 40 XD. I guess I should work on limiting myself. [/ramble]
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